Nibir ff : Miracle Happens\\\\\\ (part 19 on page 117) 18/02 - Page 75

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naucfan

Yaar plz kabir ko thik kar de jaldi se n luved the bonding of both nirav's friendship n nibir's luv...

thanchu so much anushka😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naucfan

Yaar plz kabir ko thik kar de jaldi se n luved the bonding of both nirav's friendship n nibir's luv...

thanchu so much anushka😊..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sam_premc

Nimiii...kya kiya mere k ko...??hospital me leta diyaa...???dekhleee k ko kuch hua na plastic surgery ur coco keliye ready hojaaiyoo...!!

**jokes apart**

Awesome update...emotional update...lovely, loved it...can understand nisha's feelings, hope kabir gets well soon!

Do continue soon! Lub u nimi baba!

awwee thanchu so much ABM😊 spcl thanks for double typing😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ye kia ho gaya nimmi 😭😭
Tu be hamarey kabir ko hospital phncha dia 😭😭
Nishu kitna to ri ha
Plz unhe jaldi milaa dooo 😭😭
Abi to unki storey shuru honi thee
Awesome emotional update nimbuu 😭
Thnx for pm 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Ye kia ho gaya nimmi😭😭

Tu be hamarey kabir ko hospital phncha dia😭😭
Nishu kitna to ri ha
Plz unhe jaldi milaa dooo😭😭
Abi to unki storey shuru honi thee
Awesome emotional update nimbuu😭
Thnx for pm😳

aweee thanchu so much aimzzz😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Pikachu Kabir ko kuch nahi hoga right, because miracles happen.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guyzz...😊 thanx aloot...for yr amazing support n for yr tons of love❤️ a magical hug to uh...all🤗...so here is d next part...

HAPPY READING

PART 17


MIRACLE HAPPENS



After giving papers to saurav...she closed her eyes...to feel him again...n dis time she was feeling him inside..her...while his words were continuously ringing in her ears n giving her a new strength...a ray of hope dat he will come back soon...dat he belongs to her...yes he belongs to her...her mojo...taking a deep breathe she opened her eyes slowly ...now her eyes were filled wid bundles of courage n hope... N his love for her becomes her strength...saurav who juzz came der after submitting dose papers...seeing her like dis he weakly smiles n took a sigh of relief... N den sat beside her...saying...

Saurav - don't worry nishu all will be fine...on hearing dis she juzz nodded...widout saying anything...

After some moments dey saw kabir who was lying unconscious on stretcher n doctors n nurse were taking him to operation theatre...seeing her kabir... her Jojo like dis her heart ached...while she immediately ran towards him like a mad person...n helded his hand tightly...as soon as she held his hand...all d best moments dey spended wid each other Started playing in front of her eyes...d way he made her comfortable in der first night...d way he understand her better den her family der first hug...though it was accidental...der emotional convo...about his father...bloha...bbj...der about to kiss wala moment...his guilt...n last but not least...der romantic dance...which made both of dem aware of each other's feelings...though how much she was trying to be courageous... But her tears ...her tears were not listening to her mind...as it became d slave of her heart...n again started rolling down her cheeks...she was pleading to doctor to make her life her kabira all right...n jaise Hi doctors kabir ko andar le gaye...her hand slipped from his...looking towards her slipped hand she said painfully in her mind "come back soon Jojo ur mojo is waiting for u"... While her tears were continuously rolling down...

Saurav den held her shoulder...n said...

Saurav - nishu sambhal apne aap ko kuch nhi hoga kabir ko...plz aise ro mat yr...kabir k liye chup hoja plz...

Nisha on hearing dis remembers kabir's words..." Jab bhi tu khud ko takleef deti h na tu mujhe yha dard hota h" on remembering his painful words she immediately wiped her tears n said in her mind *kabir Tere pyaar ko mai apni kamzori nhi balki apni taaqat bnaungi n I promise ki meri wajah se ab tujhe mai koi takleef nhi hone dungi*

Saurav den made her sit on chair...n as soon as she sat der widout blinking her eyes she was continuously looking at d red light which was outside d operation theatre...while her feets...her feets were continuously trembling due to her nervousness...saurav who was continuously watching her ...said...

Saurav - nishu chal mere sath...

Nisha (in painful voice) - nhi saurav...mujhe yhi rehna h apne kabir k paas...she said still looking at dat red light...

Saurav - ha...nishu to mai kaun sa tujhe tere kabir se dur leja rha hu...bas 2 min. Mere sath chal...

Den wo nisha ko ek chhote se mandir me legaya...us mandir me Lord Mahavira ki murti thi... wo mandir whi hospital me Hi tha...

Saurav - nishu dekh ye sab thk kr denge...he said pointing towards d statue of Lord Mahavira den he again continued...tu dekhna hmara kabir jaldi thk ho jayega...n den dey both Sat on floor n folded der hands...in front of God...suddenly saurav's phn started ringing so he excused himself to attend dat call...while nisha was still sitting der...

Nisha (still folding her hand in innocent voice) - Bhagwan ji...aap to sab thk kr dete ho na...sab ki problem solve kr dete ho na...plz aap jaldi se mere kabir ko thk kr dijiye na...I can't see him in dose pains...plz plz Bhagwanji uske badle na...ha iske badle aap mujhe iska 1000 times pain de dijiye...mai sab seh lungi...uff bhi nhi krungi...aap agar chahe tu mujhe pillani incident se bhi bda wala pain de dijiye I promise mai aapse kbhi complain nhi krungi...but plz...mere...mere kabir ko pehle jaisa thk kr dijiye...I promise mai roungi bhi nhi pakka promise while saying dis her eyes were filled wid tears n she anyhow holded her tears in her eyes so dat it may not flow down...plz Bhagwanji she said n closed her eyes...n wo sacche man se *NAVKAAR MANTRA* ka jaap krne lag gyi...carrying herself wid a hope dat God will soon return her ...her cheerful kabira...her life...

Saurav phn me ramesh se baat krra tha...wo yha aa gye h n he went outside d hospital...to bring dem inside...Ramesh laxmi n all d cousins who are d strength of nisha came der to become her strength...

Ramesh - saurav nishu kaha h???
Den sarav took dem to D place where nisha was...where nisha was fully drowned in doing prayer...

On seeing nisha...ramesh painfully yet softly murmured her name...on hearing d soft voice of her father who is d most imp. Person of her life...she immediately stand up n ran towards her father n she threw herself in her safe embrace...saying "papa" while ramesh said nothing... being emotional he was juz caressing her hair n patting her back...to make her calm...seeing her daughter's condition ramesh wanted to break down...but he cant becoz he verry well knew dat he is d strength of her...n if he will breakdown in front of her den who will console nisha...remesha den break d hug...n as he break d hug he saw a different nisha ...he saw his old nishu...yes his old nishu...who was full of courage n confidence...d nisha who can deal wid all difficult situations without loosing her hope seeing her old nishu back his heart filled wid happiness... He den cupped her face wid his palm n said...

Ramesh - nishu beta my happy wala gana ...I know ki tu is mushkil se bhi khud ko n kabir ko jaldi ...bahr nikal legi...haina????...she nodded her head like kid...den he again continued...aur waise bhi aisi koi mushkil hi nhi bni jo meri nishu...ko uske vishwaas ko hra sake...dekhna tere kabir ko kuch nhi hoga wo jaldi thk ho jayega...n den he caressed her cheeks lovingly...

Nisha (lost in her own thought) - ha papa aap shi keh re h...mere kabir ko kuch nhi hoga...mai use acche se janti hu wo mujhe kabhi dard de Hi nhi sakta...aap dekhna wo jaldi mere paas wapis aa jayega...jaise mai uske bagair nhi reh sakti na waise wo duffer bhi mere bagair nhi...reh sakta...

Jwalu (while hugging nisha) - ha nishu bro...aap shi keh re ho...

Sukku(to make d situation light) - captain jugadu kabhi halat ho sakti h kya???n he patted her cheeks...

Den ramesh eyes falls on laxmi...who was crying continuously...he den took laxmi to another side n said...

Ramesh - laxmi relaxme...

Laxmi - kaise relax kru ramesh...hmari nishu k sath Hi hmesha AisA kyu hota h...n she again started panicking n crying...

Ramesh - ssshhh laxmi...wo dekh n he points his index finger towards nisha n said...dekh nishu ko is condition me bhi wo kinni himmat se kaam le rhi h hmari bacchi...usme sirf khud ko Hi nhi balki hum sab ko b sambhal h...agar tum uske samne rogi to uske dil pe kya bitegi...hum yha uski taaqat bnne aaye h na ki kamzori...
Haina???


Hearing dis laxmi nodded n immediately wiped her tears den dey all sat outside d operation theatre...umesh brought coffee n some snacks for nisha but she clearly refused it...den after an hour...jaise Hi red light off hui...dey all stand together n waited for doctor to come...

As soon as d door opens nisha ran towards d doctor...n asked him about kabir...

Nisha - doctor mera kabir kaisa h...wo thk ho gya na??? She said wid hope...

Doctor - operation is successful...but...

Ramesh - but kya doctor...

Doctor - but yeh 12 hrs unke liye bahut critical h...agar in 12 hrs me inhe hosh aa gya to acchi baat h wrna...

Nisha - wrna kya doctor...kuch nhi hoga...kuch nhi hoga mere kabir ko samjhe aap wo bilkul thk ho jayega dekhna aap she said wid loud fearless voice...

Ramesh - ha beta kuch nhi hoga kabir ko n he patted her back den he asked to doctor *kya hum usse mil sakte h*...

Doctor - hum patient ko ICU me shift kree h ...fir koi ek member andar ja sakta h unke paas saying dis he left from der...

Inside ICU

Nisha entered inside...seeing him lying on bed unconscious ...wid many wires connected to her body...n wid oxygen mask...her heart cries out while she herself dies ...dies thousand deaths...gaining courage she started walking towards his bed...she den sat beside her on stool...n holded his hand...tightly...

Nisha - kabir tu AisA kyu krra h???? Tune kaha tha na ki tu mujhe dard me nhi dekh sakta fir...fir...kyu mujhe tu itna dard de rha...uth ja na...tune to kaha tha na...ki wo paper master key h Teri mere paas wapis aane k liye...to maine to wo paper sign kr diye na...ab tu us master key ka use kr k aaja na mere paas...dekh kabir maine Teri baat Mani thi na...dekh mujhe mai bilkul nhi ro rhi hu...ab tubhi apna promise pura krna... Krna pura kabir...dekh tu cheating nhi kr sakta ab...tu jaldi aa mere paas...agar ...agar tune cheating ki na...to...to mai bhi cheating krungi...aur khud ko...itna dard dungi na...ki dard bhi dard ka naam sun ke dard se kaap uthega...I m warning uh...kabir jaldi wapis aaja tu...saying dis she broke down n let her tears to roll down jisko wo kab se apni aankho me chhipa k rakhi thi...while crying she doesn't realize wen sleep came to her n took her to a beautiful dreamland...where only dis two love souls were der...nisha n kabir...

Nisha's Dream

It was a beautiful place...d surroundings were full of greenery...d place was full of fragrance of colourful flowers...der in far standing a girl...seems dat she was waiting for some one...den a boy slowly comes behind her...feeling his presence she said...*aa gya tu* ...hearing dis he replied...*kaise nhi aata vada kia tha tujhse tere vaade se badhkar kuch h kya* he said dis wid his million dollar smile...she den turns to see him...n started...singing...

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki


She encircled her arms around him n hugg him tightly...

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke
Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke Bas Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki


Both started dancing holding each other...she den looks towards him n said through her expression dat she has given her heart to him...she is waiting for his positive response

Kaun Sa Mod Aaya Zindagi Ke Safar Mein
Bas Gaya Tu Hi Tu Ab To Meri Nazar Mein


while dancing she remembers about der marriage day...dat how he came in her n den he became her life

Dil Ki Har Ek Dhadkan Tujhko Pehchaanti Hai
Meri Chaahat Hai Ab Kya Tu Nahin Jaanti Hai


he sang pointed towards his finger towards his heart while looking at her eyes...

Main Tuhje Jaan Gayi Tujhko Pehchaan Gayi
Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki


she was remembering dat while dancing wid him at hotel how she get to know about his feelings for her...n den she again said wid her expression dat after dat also his response his yes is necessary for her

Aaj Yeh Kya Hua Hai Dil Nahin Mera Bas Mein
Is Liye Sochti Hoon Tod Doon Sari Rasme


her heart was now not in her control...she wants to break all d walls dat were between dem n she want to be his...

Umr Bhar Ke Liye Tu Aa Mera Saath De De
Tera Ho Jaaonga Main Haathon Mein Haath De De


he den sat on his knees n extended his hand towards her...so dat she can hold n become his...only his...

Haathon me Haath Sahi Tu Mere Saath Hi Sahi
Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki


she holded her hand ...n was pleading him to come wid her...becoz...abhi thoda pyaar hua h n thoda pyaar krna abhi baki h

She was sleeping peacefully keeping her head on his chest...n enjoying her dream den a weak grip on her hand brought her back in reality...she opened her eyes n said happily...

*KABIR*...

Precap - nisha taking care of kabir while kabir was trying to propose her...

To know about dis stay tuned wid dis story

Waiting for yr likes n comments...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res
sorry niju 3rd res h na mera
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice yaar superb..update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update 👏
Very emotional one 😭
Please update next part soon

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