HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
😉 nice update but felt short 😃 pl...can u give a long update with morw rkbala...lovely writing


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Awesome update.As expected rk ruined madhu-mukund date.Really enjoyed it. Continue dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update,
loved it rk ruined their date plan now waiting to see what will happen when he knows that they are getting engaged
hope whatever vicky plans to do it will bring rk-madhu close
Edited by harini_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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gr8 one... Oh thatzz d plan to emerge madhu in work... Devil rk[{:)]... Their massaging scene.. Bck & shouldr massage, reminds me of the real scene of meiej.. Thatzz hottest massaging scene ever...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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FIRST OF ALL I AM REALLY SORRY GUYS...ACTUALLY I MISSED THE END IN PART-7 BUT I HAVE UPDATED IT NOW...SORRY GUYS PLEASE READ IT ITS ON PAGE 6...AND LIKE AND COMMENT 😊😊
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome update! 😃
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
As expected, RK purposely kept Madhu busy, so that she couldn't meet Mukund.😉 I really love it when he gets annoyed hearing abt Mukku! 😆 Jealous RK is a treat to watch! 😉
Eager to read more of it...
Plz update soon...
Thanks!
Edited by rishbala4eva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Well written part.
Naughty rk is always welcome.
I guess that sicko Vicky is going to do something creating problems for rishbala.
Will be looking forward to next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART- 8

After 2 days...

At the studio...

Director: Okay everyone tomorrow we are going to Panchghani for shooting it is a 2 day trip...The crew will be going by bus which has been

booked...everyone please gather here by 5 in the morning.

everyone departs.

Madhu: Oh God out door...but how can i go out door for the shoot...all arrangements are going on...how can i leave like this...and what will Mukund

and his parents think...i will say no to them...i must talk to Vicky sir.

Vicky was talking to someone when Madhu came.

Madhu: Sir

Vicky: Yes Madhubala?

Madhu: Sir actually i wanted to say that i can't come to Panchghani...actually there is some function at my home so i won't be able to come.

Vicky: I am sorry Madhubala RK sir has kept you as his MA so you have to come with him wherever he goes...i can't help you in that.

Madhu: and i know he will say no as well (she murmurs)

Vicky: Did you say something Madhubala?

Madhu: Ummm no sir(and she leaves)

Vicky gives a Mischievous look as if he is planning something.

At Madhu's house

Padimini: Oho Madhu...You don't worry you are going for only two days...it's fine beta...you go we will handle everythig here.

Madhu: But Ma how will you manage alone?

Padmini: Madhu i am not alone...There is Malik Trishna Roma...we will handle everything.

Trishna: Yes Madhu...i know i am a bit lazy...but hey it's your engagement how can i just sit and watch others doing their work...you don't worry

about that.

Madhu: But what about Mukund and Madhuri aunty...they will feel bad i know.

Padmini: I'll talk to Madhuriji i am sure she will understand...but Mukund you can only convince him...just call him.

Madhu: Ok Ma...i'll call him after sometime.

At night after having dinner Madhu called Mukund and told him that she is going to Panchghani...at first he refused but then he allowed her to go...Madhu was happy that everything went fine even Mukund's parents were fine with it...she went to sleep as she had to leave early in the morning.

Next Morning.

Madhu reached the studio everyone was busy waiting for the bus to arrive...after some time bus came...everyone got into the bus and they headed towards Panchghani...Bittuji and RK were coming by his own car...obviously he is a superstar how can he travel in a bus with the Crew...after 5 hours journey they arrived at the Hotel where the whole Cast and Crew were supposed to stay...after freshening up they headed towards the Location.

After scene was cut RK called for Make up Madhu came hurriedly...and started doing his touch up.

RK: So Madhubala..How's your fiance?

Madhu: He is fine sir.

Suddenly Madhu phone starts ringing...Madhu doesn't pick up the Phone as she was busy doing RK's makeup and hair

RK: What does he do?

Madhu: Sir he is a salesman.

Madhu's Phone rings again...this time RK gets a bit irritated

RK: Hmm salesman...as the one who go door to door to sell their products...right?

Madhu: Yes sir (Madhu says feeling irritated)

RK: Great choice Madhubala. (he says it in a teasing way)

Madhu: Now may i ask you something sir?

RK: Yes sure Miss.Malik.

Madhu: Why do you want to know that what is going in my life?

Madhu's phone rings again...and RK who was already irritated with Madhu's question got angry with the phone call.

RK: Pick it up Madhubala or else your fiance will come here searching you. (and he leaves to give his shot)

Madhu picks up the phone.

Madhu: Yes Mukund?

Mukund: Madhu what is it where are you...i am trying your number from the last 15 minutes...but God knows where are you busy.

Madhu: Mukund the shot is going on i can't talk to you in between OK...I'll call you when i get free.

Mukund cuts his phone in anger without even saying bye to...after some time the shooting gets over RK who is still angry on Madhubala leaves immediately from there towards the hotel...and soon all the crew gets back to the hotel...and after having dinner Madhu calls Mukund.

Mukund: Hello

Madhu: Hi Mukund i am sorry i couldn't call you actually you know na that (Mukund cuts her in between)

Mukund Its ok Madhu in fact i am sorry for what i did today i shouldn't have cut the line like that...please forgive me.

Madhu: Appologies accepted Mr.Dixit

Mukund: Haha what...what did you just say...Mr.Dixit...but Madhu you never call me like that...how come today you said my name that way?

Madhu starts recollecting that how RK calls her Miss.Malik.

Mukund: hello Madhu are you there?

Madhu: A yes Mukund...actually i said it like that only.

Mukund: It's okay Madhu.

And after some goodie goodie talks they go to sleep Where as RK is still awake and is thinking about Madhu and Mukund

RK: That girl she is nothing for me...in fact what she asked me was right...why do i need to know everything about her...why did i appointed her as my make up artist...and why her relationship with Mukund is affecting me...no that can't happen i am a superstar...and i can't let anyone affect
me...and after few minutes he also goes to sleep.

RK is on his knees with a ring in his hand and Madhu is watching him as if she doesn't know how to react "Madhubala...from the day when i first saw...i can't think of anything else but you...i don't know what is it but i know there is something between us...and i know that even you think the
same way...Am i right Madhubala" She smiled and noded her head in yes while tears were flowing down her cheeks "SO MISS.MADHUBALA SHAMSHER MALIK...WILL YOU MARRY ME?" She was so happy that she thought she got everything and there is nothing left that she wants.RK stood up he was about to put the ring on her finger😳❤️...when suddenly the ring fell down...and suddenly Madhu woke up...she felt thirsty...her heart was beating so fast and loud that she herself could listen the sound of her heart...she drank water and made her self calm down.

Madhu: Oh God!...Again?...what has happened to me...why that RK is coming in my dreams...and Mukund what about him..i feel so guilty...this is not right...i am going to get engaged in few days...no no Madhu it's fine its just that you are working with him day and night and there was an
engagement sequence 2 3 days back may be that is the reasom...nothing else..(she tries to convince herself by this...and goes to sleep again)

Next Day..at the Location.

Both of them try to ignore each other

Director: Cut it!!.

Madhu comes towards RK to give him a touch up.

RK: Did i call you?

Madhu: No sir

RK: Then why are you here?

Madhu: Sir because after every shot you call me for a touch up so i thought.

RK: No i don't need a touch up

Madhu: No sir you need a touch...i can see some patches on you forehead because of sweat...it will not look nice on the camera.

RK: Fine do it fast.

Madhu: Yes sir...(what has happened to him why he is not talking to me today...I think he is angry about what i asked him yesterday...so what..i was right...and this what it should be like...now everything's gonna be okay...she thinks in her mind).

She finishes off with his touch up...when suddenly her phone rings again...and it's none other than Mukund...RK gets angry but he tries to control his feelings.

Madhu: Sorry sir actually..

RK: It's okay Madhubala you can pick it up.(He leaves to give his shot)

Madhu doesn't pick up the phone.

While RK was giving his shot her phone rang again and again...though it was on silent mode but he could see her cutting the call now and then...he started boiling due to his anger but he couldn't show...and again her phone rang...Madhu thought that she must talk to him and tell him that she will call him back after the shoot...she picked up the phone and was about to go from there...when suddenly RK bursted out in anger

RK: MISS.MALIK!!😡

Madhu turned towards him in shock..RK came towards her..he snatched the phone from her hand and threw it on the floor..everyone was shocked...Madhu couldn't believe her eyes...and suddenly her shock turned into anger.

Madhu: Mr.Rishabh Kundra what do you think you are...do you have any sense or not...so what if you are a superstar you think that you can control everyone's life...ha?...tell me i am asking something (RK still was in anger but he kept quite because somewhere he also knew that what he did was wrong..suddenly Bittuji interrupts)

Bittuji: Miss.Malik how can you talk to my Chief like that...you know that he can fire you?

Madhu: What else he can do Bittuji...he can only terrify everyone nothing else( she turns towards RK who was still watching her in anger) Tell me one thing Mr.Rishabh Kundra how does your family tolerates you?

Bittuji: Miss.Malik..just stop it

RK: One minute Bittuji let her speak...so what were you saying Miss.Malik?

Madhu: I asked how does your family tolerate your stupid tantrums...didn't your Father and mother tought you that you should respect everyone?😲

Listening to this RK gets very angry and he picks up a chair kept on the side and bangs it on the floor.😡

Madhu gets terrified on seeing this...Everyone is shocked but no one had the guts to say anything...suddenly RK says.

RK: Leave everyone(everyone starts packing there stuff..Madhu was still standing there in shock...trying to understand that what just happened)

Bittuji: Chief...I think

RK: Bittuji you also leave...i want to talk to this girl alone

Bittuji: Yes chief( and Bittuji also leaves from there)

RK holds Madhu's hand and starts walking and stops after few minutes...there was no one who could listen to them over there..There was a complete silence for few minutes...suddenly Madhu realises that she shouldn't have said about his parents..

Madhu: S...s...sir...I am..(RK cuts her in the middle)

RK: Just shut up Madhubala...you have said a lot...now you will listen and i will talk.

Madhu feels guilty of what she said to him.

RK:(He takes out his wallet and opens it...there was his childhood Photo with his father...and shows it to Madhu) Do you know who they are?

Madhu looks at the photo and turns her head in a "No".

RK: That's me Madhubala...and the person with me is my father who is no more.(His anger starts turning into sadness)

Madhu looks towards him in shock and realises that what she has done...and tears starts flowing from her eyes.😭😭

RK: You are right Madhubala today what i am is because of him...he left...and after that i was never the same...and my mother she instead of healing my wound gave me another shock by marrying someone else...and today what i am is only because them...i don't know Madhubala why am i telling you this...i have never in my life shared this thing with anyone

There was a silence for few seconds.

Madhu: I am really very sorry sir...i am feeling very guilty right now...but trust me sir i didn't say it intentionally...it was just said in anger 😭sir...i really didn't mean it.

He Turns towards her and they look at each other for a while...suddenly another tear rolled down to her cheeks...RK's hand automatically came up and he wiped out the tears from her cheeks...although she had hurt him but he couldn't see her crying...they again started staring into each other's eyes...and suddenly RK came forward and caressed Madhu's face with both the hands...they were still looking at each other...for sometime both of them forget about everything...he came even more closer...they both closed their eyes...they were about to kiss😳😳❤️...but suddenly there was a sound of crackers bursting in the sky...they came back to the real world...both were feeling embarrassed about what happened few seconds before...but Rk

broke the ice.

RK: I think aa...today was quite hectic we must leave for the hotel...come lets go.

Madhu only noded her head.

They sat in RK's car and headed towards the hotel...Madhu was feeling very uncomfortable sitting alone with him...he too was very embarrassed...but he didn't wanted to make it more awkward.

RK: Madhu it's fine it happens.

Madhu: (Madhu's cheeks got red upon listening to that) What sir?

RK: I know you were angry that's why you said what you shouldn't have.

Madhu: (she felt relieved on realising that he was talking about something else and not the kiss) Yes sir..and i am sorry.

RK: I said it's okay Madhubala

Both of them smiled at each other...and after sometime they arrive at the hotel...both of them come out of the car RK gives his car keys to the guard for parking and they start proceeding towards the entrance.

RK: Madhu

Madhu: (She felt that she got shivers in her body on listening her name for the first time from RK...infact when Mukund said her name for the first time she didn't felt anything) Yes Sir.

RK: You won't share anything with anyone,will you?

Madhu: No sir...i won't.

RK: Not even with your fiance.

Madhu: No sir not even with him.

RK: Good.

Both go to there respective rooms...and get ready to leave for Mumbai again...in the bus every one asks Madhu what happened she fakes a story and gets out of the situation...and suddenly she remembers that Mukund must be trying her number...and she asks one of the girls to give her the phone as she has to drop a message to someone..she texts Mukund that she is really sorry for today and tells him that she will call him tomorrow.

Bittuji: Chief are you okay?

RK: yes bittuji...what has happened...i am totally fit and fine.

Bittuji: But chief that girl.

RK: everything is sorted Bittuji...stop worrying now.

Bittuji: Okay chief.

Both of them reach Mumbai late at night...and because of so much drama they were very tired and went to sleep.

THE END...SO TELL ME GUYS HOW WAS IT...EAGERLY WAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSES..PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT...THANK YOU😊😊
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update,
thoroughly enjoyed it,
the dream sequence was nice but when he was about to put the ring it fell down so it signifies sth in future
but hope the story has happy ending
felt bad for rk but happy that he shared his past with madhu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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V good update.its really going well. Add me for PM too dear

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