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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-6

Mukund: Madhu

Madhu: Yes

Mukund: Your number

Madhu: Oh yes

They exchange their numbers.

It's 9:30 in the evening...they have dinner and Madhu finishes her work in the kitchen and comes out and sits on the stairs...she thinks that what happened to RK today...is he like this only or it was something else that made him do that...then she remembers how RK irritated while she was styling his hair...and gets angry...after few seconds her phone rings...and it's Mukund.

Madhu: Hello!

Mukund: Hi Madhu

Madhu: Hi Mukund...what happened is everything fine...you called up at this time?

Mukund: I thought that this is the correct time that we can talk with eachother...and we will know each other by this...and by the way Madhu we are going to get engaged in a couple of days...so you should not have a problem with that...am i right?

Madhu: No no Mukund it's completely fine...i just got tensed that you called at this time.

Mukund: It's ok Madhu...so tell what were you doing...wait let me guess you were thinking about me right.

Madhu: (She suddenly realised that she was thinking about RK and not him) Actually Mukund.

Mukund: Ya ya i know you won't admit it

and they talk for a while and go to sleep.

Next Morning on the sets

Madhu was talking on the phone with Mukund while she was walking towards the vanity.

Madhu: Ok bye Mukund (And without knocking the door she enters the vanity and sees RK struggling with the Dhoti that he has to wear for his next shot...he was wearing nothing on his upper body...He look towards Madhu who got really nervous looking his bare chest...and she was staring at him in a shock)

Madhu: (she comes back to her senses and she wanted to say sorry but she was really struggling in that) Sss...sss.

RK: What...stop making the sound of a snake...and come hear and help me.

Madhu: (she again widen's up her eyes in shock) What...me?

RK: no i have a bad habit of talking to the walls (he lift up his hands while saying that...and his dhoti is about to fall..but he grabs it on time) See Madhubala i am struggling in this...please help...or else i will have to give my shot in myyy...(suddenly Madhu cut's him in between)

Madhu: But where is your costume designer tell him to fix this...and why didn't he made a pull up dhoti

RK: Wow now Madhubala will tell me what to do...just shut your mouth and come here and help me.

(Madhu makes a disgusted face and come towards him and helps him out in wearing dhoti...and then he wears his Kurta which again gets stuck in his hair)

Madhu: wait sir the hook got stuck in your hair...let me help you

(she fixes it and pulls his kurta down wards...their eyes meet...both look at eachother for few minutes...and suddenly RK only with his eyes tries to tell her that the make up is there...Madhu gets confused as what is he trying to say..and she nods her head as if questioning him..that what is he saying)

RK: Makeup Miss.Malik

Madhu: (comes out of her trance) Yes sir.

And she does his makeup...and he gets up..and starts to leave but stops at the door...and turns towards her

RK: Miss.Malik (Madhu turns around) I know i look handsome with bare chest but next don't stare at me like that...actually i am too hot to handle...so be careful that your eyes don't get burnt.(and he leaves)

Madhu: (she jerk his head) Such a self obsessed person he is...and whenever he talks he only talks nonsense...he is such a (and she hears a sound and sees RK standing on the stairs of the vanity and she gets shocked and gulps in)

RK: (with a smirk) Thanks Madhubala (he winks at her and leaves).

Madhu follows him.

It's an engagement sequence...RK puts the ring on the heroine and Madhu suddenly realise that she had to Mukund...and she goes in in the corner...and calls Mukund...she tries 2 3 times but he doesn't pick up...RK even while giving his shot he looks around for her but he can't find...he thinks that where she has gone)

Madhu: May be he must be busy i will talk to him later.

RK sees Madhu coming from a corner with mobile in her hand...suddenly her phone rings and she quickly goes to the corner...and director cuts the shot...RK gets confused that what is she doing.

Mukund: Hello Madhu...i am sorry Madhu actually i was busy with something.

Madhu: It's ok Mukund...tell me why did you ask me to call you.

Mukund: i will Madhu...first you tell can you meet me at 5 in the evening?

Madhu: Mukund actually i am not free...you know na

Mukund: yes Madhu but please come on it's our first date.

Madhu: Date?

Mukund: Yes our first coffee date...now please don't say no i'll be waiting for you at the coffee shop...please come soon...ok bye ttyl.

Madhu: But but Mukund...Hello...hello??(and the call gets disconnected)

Madhu turns around and sees RK standing behind her and giving her very angry look...his fists got tighten and by looking at him Madhu got little bit scared.

The End

Sorry guys for the small update...actually i was busy with something...so i could update this much only...anyway guys...did you like it...please like and comment😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Me first...😛
Lovely update.
She helped him with the dhoti.😛 Show like in our show.

Her first date with mukku😡 but I'm sure RK is gonna follow her to the coffee shop.😉
Let's see how the date turns out.

Enjoyed it.
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Fab update!
Loved d dhoti scene...it reminded me of d sequence from d show itself, in which Madhu helped RK wear his dhoti...
And...I got what I was waiting for...RK coming to know about Mukund's presence in Madhu's life...Loved his angry reactions...It shows he's possessive of Madhu, from now itself... 😳
Waiting for d next part...
Update soon...
Thanks!
Edited by rishbala4eva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Hey...nice story...& Congozz as its ur first story !
Liked the story line & enjoyed reading it... 😃

Continue soon !


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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
😉 nice ff just now read the part 6 now to read the previous parts liking n fallingvin possessive rk...great n pl do continue


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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
1st of all thanks dear 2 continue this lovely story...both d updates simply awesome loved it sooo much...love this jealous, possessive, protective rk very much...that dhoti scene😆😆 its remembered me in shows scene in village...curious 2 know about what happen next, what vl he does n m sure RK is gonna follow her to the coffee shop n ruin her 1st date or he keep her busy unnecessary so she cant go 😉Let's see how the date turns out...pls cntn soon waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
It was really nice updet...please next updet soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Good update.
That dhoti scene was fun.
I hope rk spoils their date and breaks that mukund's face.
Hehe
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Superb updates..I feel lyk MEIEJ days..cut to cut dialogues frm RK..Tnxx fr writting dis story dear..Rk made madhu his MA..Madhu started getting affectd by him,his closeness..Hair setting up & dhoti scene r awesome..luvd it..Rk got 2 knw abt mukku-madhu :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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On my God...i am glad that you guys liked my story...this is the 7th part...hope you guys like it please keep reading😳


Part-7


Madhu: I am sorry sir i...

RK: Miss.Malik if you want if you want you can leave this job...and you can carry on this nonsense at your home...understood?

Madhu: But sir i was just talking to my...

RK: Boyfriend?...listen Miss.Madhubala Malik...because of you i can't make my film suffer alright...i don't want any phone calls on the sets...or else your phone will not remain alive to take anycall...got it...now come on i need a touch up.

Madhu followed him she gave him a touch up and he started shooting again.

Madhu was standing and while looking at RK she thought " i just made a call what's the big deal in that...yesterday he stopped the shoot in the middle for no reason what about that...what a Devil he is...or may be he has not been taught what is wrong and what is right...wonder how his family tollerates him" and after sometime shoot gets over...and RK comes to Madhu.

RK:(in an angry tone) Miss.Malik i want you in my vanity right now.

Madhu looks at her wristwatch it's 5 and thinks that she had to meet Mukund at 5

Madhu: But sir(suddenly Bittuji comes in between)

Bittuji: But chief shoot is over and you have a meeting with...

RK: Bittuji have i asked you...you just postpone it and Miss.Malik...i will not repeat again...come right now...and bittuji you wait outside

Bittuji: Yes chief

Madhu follows him to the vanity

Madhu: Sir i have to go...i have some work

RK: ya Madhubala i will let you go but first of all i need some head massage.See it was very hectic day today...i hate these wedding sequences...see now my head is paining...come give me a massage.

Madhu thinks that there no point of arguing with this man...i will do my work quickly and will leave...or else my half n hour will go in listening to his nonsense...and she starts massaging his head.

RK: Wow Madhubala you look expert in it..

Madhu doesn't say anything.

RK: So Madhubala?

Madhu: So... what?

RK: Who is he?

Madhu: Who?(she asks in a confusing tone).

RK: Come on Madhubala don't act like you didn't understand whom i am talking about.

Madhu: Sir if i would have understood than i would not have asked you.

RK: Hmmm...beauty with..."guts"..i like it.

Madhu sighs in frustration and looks away while still massaging his head.

RK: Mukund...who is he?

Madhu: It's none of your business sir (she says in an angry tone and suddenly realises what she has said and apologizes to him.

RK: Now give me the answer Miss.Malik

Madhu: Sir he is my fiance

RK gets shocked upon listening to it and asks her to stop...he thought that Mukund must be his boyfriend or something but he is her fiance..he was feeling that something got pinched in his heart.

Madhu: What happened sir...is everything fine?

RK: (he controls himself and tries to hide his anger) Yes...now give me back massage.

Madhu: (in shock) What?

RK: Are you deaf...or you have a problem in hearing...can't you get me in one go?

Madhu: But sir i told you that i have some work.

RK: And even i told you Mss.Malik that i will let you go when my work is done.

Madhu looks at her watch it's 5:20 and get's tensed

RK stands up removes his shirt and lies on the sofa and says "i will leave you soon Miss.Malik actually the thing is you massage very good so i couldn't stop myself from.."Madhu suddenly turns around in anger takes the massage cream and again turns towards RK...and sees RK smiling at her

Madhu: What?

RK: Nothing...now come fast i have many more work to do other than this.

Madhu starts massaging his bare shoulders...she feels uncomfortable.

RK: Madhubala my back will not eat you massage it properly.

Madhu purposely massages his back forcefully.

RK: Ouch...watch it Miss.Malik

Madhu: sir you only asked me to massage it properly.

RK: Exactly but instead of that you are scratching your nails on my shoulder...now please be careful.

Madhu: Yes sir.

RK sees his watch it's 5:45...Madhu is still massaging his back.

RK: Ok Madhubala now you can leave.

Madhu sighs...and starts packing up his stuff...she sees her phone there are 15 missed calls from Mukund.

Madhu: Oh no Mukund must be very angry with me...i must call him( and she starts leaving and suddenly RK again calls out her name)

RK: Miss.Malik.

Madhu: Now what sir?

RK: Nothing just wanted to say...Bye.(He says while smirking and waving his hand.)

Madhu: Bye sir.(and she leaves and she finds an auto and sits in it and calls Mukund...Mukund pics up the call)

Madhu: Hello...hello Mukund.

Mukund: Madhu what is this if you didn't wanted to meet me you could have said it...why did you do this Madhu?

Madhu: Mukund i am really very sorry...actually RK sir.

Mukund: RK RK RK...Madhu this was our first date...and i wanted to share something with you.

Madhu: Mukund please listen to me RK sir kept me busy in work...i couldn't make it up...i told him that i have some work...but he didn't listen...i am genuinely very sorry Mukund...please forgive me please.(she says in a crying tone)

Mukund: Ok Madhu...apologies accepted.

Madhu:(Madhu felt relieved) Thank you Mukund.

Mukund: You are most welcome Madhu.

Madhu: But Mukund what was it that you wanted to share with me.

Mukund: Oh yess...ok you tell me what can it be?

Madhu: I really can't guess it Mukund...tell me na what is it?

Mukund: Madhubala we are going to get engaged...after 1 week.(he says it happily)

Madhu: What?(she was more shocked than being happy...she couldn't understand how to react...she was neither happy nor sad)

Mukund: What happened Madhu...aren't you happy?

Madhu: No no Mukund it's not like that...i..i am happy.

Mukund: Madhu i am really happy...we are finally getting engaged.

Madhu: Yes Mukund me too.(the auto stops near her house)...Aa Mukund i have reached home shall we talk at night?

Mukund: Sure Madhu...bye.

Madhu: Bye.

After 2 days...

At the studio...

Director: Okay everyone tomorrow we are going to Panchghani for shooting it is a 2 day trip...The crew will be going by bus which has been booked...everyone please gather here by 5 in the morning.

everyone departs.

Madhu: Oh God out door...but how can i go out door for the shoot...all arrangements are going on...how can i leave like this...and what will Mukund and his parents think...i will say no to them...i must talk to Vicky sir.

Vicky was talking to someone when Madhu came.

Madhu: Sir

Vicky: Yes Madhubala?

Madhu: Sir actually i wanted to say that i can't come to Panchghani...actually there is some function at my home so i won't be able to come.

Vicky: I am sorry Madhubala RK sir has kept you as his MA so you have to come with him wherever he goes...i can't help you in that.

Madhu: and i know he will say no as well (she murmurs)

Vicky: Did you say something Madhubala?

Madhu: Ummm no sir(and she leaves)

Vicky gives a Mischievous look as if he is planning something.

WHAT IS HE PLANNING WE WILL GET TO KNOW IN THE NEXT PART...BUT I CAN PROMISE YOU GUYS THAT IT WILL TURN THE LIVES OF MADHU AND RK UPSIDE DOWN.

The end
So guys did you like it...please comment below Thank you😊😊
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago

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