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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Nice update. We got back to back awesome updates. Even in dream rk dropped madhu, looks like their story is gonna be fire and fireball.
Do continue the story. Will be waiting for next part. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Lovely story!
Superb updates! Right Kameena & Jungli billi are nicely described!
Please continue...Waiting for the update!
Please pm me!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wow...read all the chapters in one go.
This feels like I'm watching mb all over again.
The same RK n the same Madhu. 😛
I'm loving this story. Plz do continue.
Waiting for the nxt update.
Thanks!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nice updates.
RK and Madhu dream about each other.
now RK wants Madhu to work for him.
do continue.
looking forward to read how you take it forward.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Thank you everyone for your wonderful responses...i'll give my best to entertain you guys...do keep reading...xoxo

PART-5

RK sits on his chair and says "Miss.Malik i never repeat myself"

Madhu starts doing his makeup...RK smirks and looks at her

Madhu: What?

RK: Well i was thinking that for my next shot my hair will look good messy and spiked up...what do you think Miss.Malik?

Madhu: As you say sir.(and she starts styling his hair).

RK: (after 2 3 minutes he again says) No no i think it will look better when falling down on my forehead.

Madhu: Ok sir i'll do that.

RK: (after 2 minutes he smiles and again says) No Miss.Malik it's not working...i think first hairstyle was looking much better.

Madhu: (she gets irritated...she new that he was doing this purposefully only to tease her but she controls herself...and gives him a fake smile) Sure sir.😆😆

RK: (when she is almost done he said) Wait...i think.(Madhu cuts him in between)

Madhu:I think sir this hairstyle suits you the best...in this hairstyle you look smart and handsss(and she stops and realises what did she just say)

RK: Ahaaan!! (he stands up and looks at her for few seconds..and suddenly Bittuji enters)😳😳

Bittuji: Cheif they are saying that the shot is ready.

RK nods and both Rk and Bittuji leave

Madhu:Oh God!!This man is getting on my nerves (and she too leaves from there)

She is busy watching Maya and R.K giving their shot when suddenly Vicky comes and stands besides her

Vicky: Hey Madhubala

Madhu: Hello sir

R.K sees them talking and getting comfortable with each other...he knows that Vicky's intentions are not good...but how can he say this to Madhubala...he infact made Madhu his makeup artist only because then Vicky will not dare to mess up with his make up artist...but this didn't help.

[BUT WAIT WHY IS HE BOTHERED...HE IS A SUPERSTAR AND SHE IS JUST AN ORDINARY GIRL...AND TOP OF THAT THEY JUST MET 2 DAYS BACK...THEN WHAT IS IT THAT IS MAKING HIM ATRRACTED TOWARDS HER...AND UNLIKE OTHER GIRLS SHE IS NOT FAKE SHE SAYS WHAT SHE FEELS...AND THIS WAS MAKING HIM FEEL NOTHING BUT MORE ATTRACTED TOWARDS HER...BUT HE NEVER SHOWED HER AS HE HIMSELF IS UNAWARE OF THE FACT THAT HE IS GETTING ATTRACTED TOWARDS HER.]

Rk gets furious while looking at them and says "Pack up" and starts walking towards his vanity

Bittuji: Cheif cheif what happend??

Everyone gets shocked as everything was going fine then what made him say that. Madhu too is shocked and thinks that what happened to him suddenly...everyone starts wrapping up...suddenly RK stops and look towards Vicky and calls him..Vicky quickly goes to him...and Madhu leaves from there.

Vicky: Yes sir?

RK: Kutte ki dum hamesha tedhi ki tedhi rehti hai(A dog's tail is crooked forever)

Vicky: Sir?

RK: what do you think you will be successful in fulfilling your desires?

Vicky: sir..i didn't get you

RK: This is the first and last time i am saying this to you...stay away from that girl...or else you know what i can do.

Vicky gets shocked and nervous and says

Vicky: AA...aa..I am very sorry sir...this won't happen again.

RK leaves from there and Bittuji follows him.Vicky gets confused as why is he so much bothered about her.and he shruggs off and he too leaves from there.

Madhu: (while waiting for an auto) what kind of human being is he...has he ever thought of anyone else other than his own self...everyone gets up early and reaches on the set on time so that the film doesn't suffer...but he...he is least bothered about that...or should i say he is not even bothered...well leave it Madhu.(She sees an auto and sits in it and goes home.

At Madhu's house.

The Phone rings and Padmini picks up the Phone

Padimini: Hello

Lady: Hello Padminiji...i am Madhuri speaking (Boy's mother)

Padmini: Oh Namaste Madhuri ji..How are you?

Madhuri: I am fine Padminiji how are you?

Paddo: i am fine too Madhuri ji

Madhuri: Actually I wanted to ask that how will it be if we people meet today?

Paddo: Today?

Madhuri: Yes actually the thing is that Mukund's father is going to Bhopal tomorrow for some work and we don't know when he will come back...so i thought atleast once the boy and girl and our family should meet...what do you say Padminiji?

Padmini: Actually Madhuriji

suddenly the door bell rings and Malik opens the door and Madhu enters in.

Madhuri: What happend Padminiji...can we meet today?

Padmini: Okay Madhuriji we'll meet today.

Madhuri: Okay then We'll be there by 4 o'clock...is it fine with you?

Padmini: Ya ya...it's perfectly fine

Madhuri: Ok then Bye

Padmini: Bye Madhuriji

Malik: Madhu beta...you came so early what happened?

Roma and Trishna come from inside...and Padmini joins them too

Roma: What happened Glycerin...it's just 1 pm and you came back...is everything ok?

Madhu starts narrating that how she is now RK's make up artist...and how he simply does what he wants...and how the shoot stopped in the middle.

Trishna: (jumps in excitement) Wow Glycerin..you are RK's makeup artist...this such a good thing.

Madhu: what is good in this...i went there as Maya's MA...and now in 1 day i became his makeup artist...and on top of that i have to handle his stupid tantrums...there is nothing good in this didu.

Padmini: Accha stop it you both...i have a good news for you all.

Malik: And what is that Padminiji?

Paddo: Actually...the boy's family is coming today at 4pm to see Madhu.

Roma: See Madhu...everything happens for a reason...if you were still on the sets...how could you have met the boy...right?

Madhu gives Roma a fake smile

Trishna: Oho Glycerin forget it and come have lunch...and then I and Roma will help you get ready..ok?

Madhu nods her head and they have lunch

At RK Mansion.

RK: Bittuji cancel all my meetings for today...my head is paining...i need some rest

Bittuji: But Cheif what happend.

RK: Bittuji just do as i say...i am going to my room.

And he leaves Radhaji was listening to their conversation...when Bittuji was about leave Radhaji called Bittuji

Bittuji: Yes Aunty Ji

Radhaji: Bittuji what happend...is Rishu fine...he came so early from the shooting.

Bittuji: Aunty ji even i don't know he is not telling me either...even on sets...everything was going fine and suddenly he said pack up.

Radhaji: God knows what is going on

Radhaji and bittuji left

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RK's room

He was punching his punchbag while remembering Madhu and Vicky talking.(He was looking damn hot in just a trouser and his hair and upperbody was wet because of sweat...which made him more hotter...suddenly their was a sound of someone coming inside his room...he stops in between)

Deepali: What happened hero why did you stop...you know that you were looking so hot while doing that.

RK turns his back towards her and she comes forwards

Deepali: See i brought balm for you...you were having a headache na so i thought that will massage it on your forehead so that you feel better.(she says it in mischeivous tone and touches his bare back with her finger)

Rk moves forward and makes a disgusted face

RK: What do you want Deepali?

Deepali: Uff!!..RK..there is nothing hidden from you...you know i want you.

RK: Deepali you will go by yourself or should i throw you out with respect?🤣

Deepali: RK but you know how much i love...how can you treat me like this...please don't do this to..i have realised my mistake.

RK: There should be an award for the Best Flop Actress...and i would have given that to you with my own hands...now leave.

she leaves from there and RK again starts punching the bag.

At Madhu's House

Padmini: It's 4:15 they must be arriving at any time.

suddenly the bell rings... and Malik opens the door.

Malik: welcome...welcome everyone...please come in.

Everyone greets eachother and sit on the sofa.

Trishna gives water to everyone.

Madhuri: This is my son Mukund (He was a simple sweet well mannered person...he was continously looking around)

Padmini: Beta what happened...you need something?

Mukund: Nn..nothing Aunty( he smiles)

Trishna: I know what are you looking for...but have patience she will also come(she teases him)

Everyone laughs and Mukund gets embarresed. Trishna goes to take Madhu

Malik: So Mukund Beta tell me something about your self

Mukund: Actually uncle i am a salesman...i have completed my trial session just know.

Malik: Ok

and they continue talking...


Trishna: Madhu they are here...come let's go

Madhu: Didu...what if he's also??

Trishna cuts her in the middle

Trishna: Oho Madhu this is not the time to think Negative...just stay positive okay...just talk to him...and get to know him...you can't sit here and decide that he is not the right one...come on know they are waiting for you...and they head towards the living room.

Everyone was laughing and suddenly Mukund feels someone coming he turn towards her...he smiles looking at her...her head was facing downwards...she was wearing a pink saree in which she was looking like an angel.

Madhuri: Mukund stop staring at her

Mukund comes back to his senses

Padmini: She is my daughter Madhubala

Madhu greets everyone

Madhuri: She is so pretty

Madhu smiles

Mr.Dixit: So shall we send them somewhere so that they can talk and get to know each other?

Malik: Yes yes why not...trishna beta take them to that room.

Trishna: Yes Malik

They head towards Madhu's and Trsihna's room

Trishna: Okay then you guys talk...good luck...bye

The end
how was it ??
please like and comment..Thank you😊😊
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
liked the update,
loved the way RK teasing/irritating madhu ,
within 2 meets he got so much attracted to madhu,
eager to know what will RK do after knowing madhu's marriage proposal with mukund
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Awesome update!
Loved RK's protective side for Madhu. 😳
Seems Madhu n Mukund r gonna get engaged...wanna see RK's reaction on knowing that...
Waiting for d next part...
Update soon...
Thanks!
Edited by rishbala4eva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Good update.
Jealous rk is always yummy so is his "pack up". Hehe but I hate that mukund and loathe dipali. Hope that mukund part gets wrapped up quickly. I can't stand that clown with madhubala. Looking forward to rk's reaction to their rishta.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Loved the update.
The way he was irritating Madhu with his hair was so cute. The guy can't tolerate if guy is talking to Madhu, how is he gonna to react when he comes to know about mukku n madhu's proposal. He's gonna create a racket.im sure.😛
Plz wrap up mukku character fast in this story. Can't tolerate him😡

Waiting for the nxt part.
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Really nice start please do continue...

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