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Posted: 10 years ago
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bohot acche update the but these anties don't they hve ny work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely lovely... Haash... Marriage rituals are awesome

These society people :| :/

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N a big wala congratulations for the new thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimty1230

bohot acche update thebut these anties don't they hve ny work



Thanks a lot kimty
Glad u liked it
Thanks for commenting...
keep reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukanksha

N a big wala congratulations for the new thread



Thanks 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 13


Ishita- No I won't come down

Simmi- Bhabhi What are you saying

Ishita - I am not coming. Simmi Please go

She started crying

Simmi- Ishita what happened. Why are you crying? Please open the door.

She didn't reply this time. Simmi could only hear her cry from outside.

She immediately went down and informed Mr and Mrs Bhalla about her. Mrs Bhalla looked at Raman, who was sitting in Mandap. Sensing something wrong he stood up and came near them.

Raman- Maa what happened. What wrong

He then looked at Simmi- Kya hua hai. Say something.

Simmi- Bhai woh

She fumbled- Ishita is not coming down. She has locked herself and crying bitterly inside.

Raman- Maa you handle here. Let me talk to her. Don't worry

He kept his hand on her shoulder assuringly. Saying this he moved towards her room.

Raman- Ishita

Hearing his voice, she stood up and looked at the closed door.

Ishita sobbing- Raman please go. I am not coming out.

Raman- Ishita. Kya hua jaan. Why are you crying? Open the door

Ishita- No Raman I won't come down.

Raman- Okay fine. Don't come down. But open the door. Please Ishita for me. You are scaring me.

Ishita- Raman This marriage will not happen. Please go

Raman- Jaan Open the door. Don't come down but at least talk to me. You can do this much for me, for our love.

She closed her eyes, took a deep breath and opened the door. He entered the room and bolted it from inside. He was moving towards her when she stopped him.

Ishita - Raman please don't come near me.

Raman ignored her and cupped her face- Ishita Bacha. Why are you crying?

She was sobbing looking down and moved her head negatively.

He said nothing, just took her hand and kept it on his head.

Raman- Ishita

Ishita raised her eyes and saw him looking at her warmly. They shared a brief eye lock. She hugged him and started crying louder.

Ishita- Raman you don't deserve this.

Raman caressed her hairs- Jaan what are you saying.

She told him everything about conversation she heard few minutes back. Raman gritted his teeth in anger but calm himself down looking at her.


Raman- Ishita whom are you listening to. Why are you worried? I am with you

Ishita- Raman I am not worried for myself but for you. Throughout my life I have heard this. But now it's about you and your family. They accepted me with full heart. And what am I giving them in return - indignity, humiliation. No Raman

Raman- Shh. Chup. You really wanna know what you have given them. Wait a minute.

He called Mr and Mrs Bhalla upstairs.

Toshiji- Puttar kya hua (Son What happened)

Raman- Maa She thinks she is humiliation to our family.

Mr Bhalla- Raman what are you saying.

He narrated them everything.

Toshiji went near her and hit her slightly on her cheek- Tu Pagal hai (Are you mad)Ishita. How can you think this? You want know what you have given us. You have given me my children back. Simmi We lost all hopes. But it was you who brought her back. And Raman I have never seen him this happy before in his life. You are the reason of all this. You are the only reason of this happiness.

And whom are you listening to. This society! Where were they when you needed them, When your relatives blamed you? Beta They just need some topic to gossip. Today it's you tomorrow it will be someone else.

Mrs Bhalla caressed her cheeks. She cried hugging her.


Toshiji - Bas puttar.

Mr Bhalla- Promise us you will not think about this in future.

When she didnt replied Toshiji spoke again- Puttar I am becoming your mother in law. Think once again don't force me to be strict with you.

Ishita nodded her head smiling.

Mr Bhalla- Raman we are going. You also come.

Mr and Mrs Bhalla left, leaving them alone. She was still sobbing, having hiccups. Raman closed the door, went near her and made her drink some water.

Raman - Are you okay

Ishita hugged him- I am sorry Raman.

Raman- Why are you sorry. Jaan now leave this. Mahurat nikal raha hai.

He wiped her smudged maskara. I can't wait for another 6 months.

She smiled hugging him.

Simmi knocked the door- Bhai

Raman kissed her cheeks - Come soon jaan I am waiting

He opened the door - Simmi She is okay.

Chori Chori Chupke Se Aayega Woh

Aake Mujhe Le Jaayega Haan

Minutes later Simmi did her final touch up and brought her down. She was moving down from stairs and Raman was looking at her lovingly.

Yehi Jeevan Hai Apna Yehi To Woh Sapna

Main Ne Dekha Tune Dekha

Hum Sab Ne Dekha

Yeh Sapna Na Toote Na Roothe Mera Raanjhna


Chori Chori Chupke Se Aayega Woh

Aake Mujhe Le Jaayega Haan

He forwarded her his hand and made her sit in mandap. Panditji started chanting matra.

Ang Se Ang Lag Jaaye To Pyaar Ka Rang Lag Jaaye To


Ang Se Ang Lag Jaaye To Pyaar Ka Rang Lag Jaaye To

Rang Phir Na Yeh Chute, Na Roothe Mera Raanjhna

They stood up for Phere. Throughtout, he was holding her hand.

Chori Chori Chupke Se Aayega Woh

Aake Mujhe Le Jaayega Haan

Kitne Janmon Ka Yeh Mel Hai

Shaadi Kismat Ka Ek Khel Hai


He filled her partition with vermillion. She closed her eyes to absorb that moment inside her. A lone tear came out of her eyes. He wiped it and looked at her affectionately. Next he tied Mangalsutra around her neck. Dr Batra did her kanyadaan.

Kitne Janmon Ka Yeh Mel Hai

Shaadi Kismat Ka Ek Khel Hai

Aisi Kismat Na Phoote

Na Roothe Mera Raanjhna

Finally their marriage completed. Panditji announced them husband wife. They took blessing from elders.

Chori Chori Chupke Se Aayega Woh

Aake Mujhe Le jayega Haan

BHALLA HOUSE

After marriage, Raman and Ishita arrive at Bhalla house.

Toshiji greeted them with aarti and Ishita toss a vessel of rice with her right foot to enter the house.

After this, the entire family sat and made them play games.

One of them was Kangna Kholna. They had to untie each other's scared thread in the presence of all the relatives. Ishita had to untie Raman thread first. Raman was teasing her continuously, making her blush in front of all.

Next they played Fish the ring. It's a simple game in which a ring is placed in a pot filled with rose petals and plate of milk. Then they were asked to fish for it. The person who finds the fish first will have upper hand in relationship. In this, Ishita won.

Soon all rituals completed and they moved to their room.

Ishra Room

Their room was beautifully decorated with flower petals, flower vines and flower curtains.

Raman entered his room and saw her sitting in her centre of bed. Her face was covered by veil. He sat near her and lifted her veil. She was looking breathe taking. He was lost in her beauty. She raised her eyes and looked at him while he was staring her without blinking his eyes.

Ishita - Aise kya dekh rahe ho.

Raman- Ishita You want to kill me tonight.

She put her hand on his mouth-Don't say that.

He smiled and kissed her fingers.

Raman -How can I be so lucky to have such a beautiful wife? Still can't believe my destiny.

She blushed and lowered her eyelids.

Ishita- Raman Are you angry on me.

Raman looked at her confusingly-Angry! Why

Ishita- Because I denied to come down.

Raman kissed her forehead- Jaan I can never be angry on you. But yes I was hurt.

Ishita- I am sorry Raman

Raman- Ishita don't you believe me. I love you. Nothing matters to me other than this.
Whatever happened in your past was not in your control. But our present and future is in your hand. Get this clear Ishita. You can never humiliate me or my family. You can only bring prosperity in our life. Promise me you will never think about it again.

Ishita replied with teary eyes- I promise

She hugged him. They remained in that position for some time. Raman broke the silence first.

Raman- Ishita

Ishita - Hmm

Raman - You didn't hear my first night plan yesterday. I think I should give practical demonstration of it. What say?

Ishita blushed hard and hugged him tighter hiding herself in him.


He held her face in his hands and kissed her eyes. Then moved to her ears, removed her earrings and kissed her ears. Slowly he freed her from jewels. His one hand moved to her dupatta and with other he turn off lights. He removed it while she hugged him anticipation.

Raman pulled her more closer, was caresseing her back and playing with her blouse dori. In one swift motion he opened it. Her eyes widened in shock while he nuzzled his head in crook of her neck and made her lie down.

He kissed her eyes, nose and next captured her lips. He bit her lower lip and entered her mouth while she moaned in pleasure. They were lost in their own world of raw passion. Their tongues entwine as his tongue searches deeply into the warm soft heat of her mouth. Both part away in the need of oxygen.

She was losing her sanity as he dropped wet kisses on her neckline. He was passionate yet gentle with her.

Soon their clothes were on floor and room was filled with the sound of their moans in pleasure. Both were busy exploring each other, drowning in the pool of passion.

They hit height of ecstasy together and become one in all senses. A single tear dropped from her eyes.

Raman saw it and asked her with concern in his eyes - Jaan Did I hurt you

Ishita pecked his lips - No Raman.. You can never hurt me. You completed me.


He kissed her eyes, sucking her tear while she closed her eyes and fell into a deep slumber. They slept cuddling each other with contented smile on their faces.



Precap - Reception

Once in a while right in the middle of ordinary life, Love gives us fairytale.

Fairy tales comes true; you just need to believe in them.


NEXT PART

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So friends, This was the probable end of this story.
I started this story keeping this in my mind. I am a believer of fairy tales. We all in our childhood read stories of Cinderella, Snow white. They always allured me. May be because fairy tales have a happy ending, you just need to believe in them.

"Fairy tales are more than true - not because they tell us dragons exist, but because they tell us dragons can be beaten"

I just love this Quote.
Guys don't worry as I promised I am continuing with this story.

Please it's a request please give your precious 2 minutes in commenting.

Edited by ruhi_ishra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Fr a sec VN I read that u r ending it
My breath stopped
I muttered oh no
But VN I read further
I sighed in relief
Abhi tau starting hai don't end soon plish
A request
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Urghh dese women
But raman did make her understand how imp she is fr him
N bhalla family are so supportive
Good
Finally day got married
But u didn't tyl hu won da games
N day became one
Yippe
Luv it
Superb job
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Nice update. It would be great if you continue, you can continue in your fairy tale way. Life without hurdles
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Super duper update... U write v well waiting for ur next update..

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