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Prologue

Lalit Juneja staggered out of the banquet hall of his Luxury hotel in Delhi, holding a bottle of expensive champagne in his hand. A smile was plastered on his face.

"Dhyan se (becareful) Lalit!" His wife Gaytri cried, as she caught up to him. She took his arm and put it around her shoulders to stabilize his swaying footsteps, and led him towards their car. "You might fall and hurt yourself."

"Hurt myself?" laughed Lalit. "Sweetheart, I just made the biggest deal of my life! Our company stocks are soaring through the roof! My photo is on the cover of every business magazine in this country! I'm a shoo in for business man of the year! Nothing can stop me now! In fact, nothing can hurt me!"

Gaytri got a whiff of the strong scent of alcohol on his breath. She frowned and turned her face away. "I wish you wouldn't drink so much," she grumbled.

"It's called celebrating Gaytri," laughed Lalit. "Didn't you see all the other business men inside congratulating me? Didn't you hear the words of praise, as one after the other raised their glass in a toast in my honor? Their wives were drinking too. You should have joined us."

"No thanks," sighed Gaytri.

"Don't you worry though," continued Lalit. "I saved the best for last." He raised the bottle he was holding in the air. "This is the best champagne money can buy. You and I are going to go home and continue the celebration."

As they reached their car, Lalit fumbled around in his pockets for the keys.

"I wish you hadn't given the driver the night off," sighed Gaytri. "Are you sure you'll be able to drive?"

"Of course I can drive!" exclaimed Lalit.

"Maybe we should call Prem or take a cab," suggested Gaytri.

Lalit shook his head. "You're forgetting Gaytri, Prem is up in Kasauli having his own little celebration with his new wife," he chuckled. He held the passenger side door of the car open and gave Gaytri an exaggerated bow. "Don't worry my lady, if I can run a company worth millions, surely I can drive this car and get you home safely."

Gaytri hesitated for a moment, then got into the car. Lalit laughed as she put her seatbelt on, and pulled out of the hotel.

A short while later...

Surrounded by plenty of big cushions to provide them comfort, Prem and Heer sat sprawled on the lush carpet, in front of the fireplace in the family log house in Kasauli.

Heer pulled the front of her robe close together and stretched her feet out to let the fire warm her toes. "It's so peaceful up here," she said, "I wish we could stay here like this forever." She let her head rest on Prem's chest and snuggled up to him.

"Yeah, that would be nice," sighed Prem. He put his arm around Heer and pulled her closer to him. "But Bauji expects me to be back to work on Monday. And since we have a good 6 hour drive to Delhi from here, we should leave first thing tomorrow morning."

"Tomorrow morning!" Heer sat up and pouted.

"Oookay...how about tomorrow afternoon?" chuckled Prem.

"Whatever," Heer shrugged her shoulders. "I suppose I should get used to it...being married to a Juneja and all. Business is bound to come first."

"Is that what you really think?" asked Prem. He pulled her forward until she straddled his lap.

"Maybe," said Heer.

"Well then I guess I'm going to have to spend all night proving to you otherwise," Prem said with a mischievous glint in his eyes.

Heer smiled shyly and was about to pull back but he held her firmly by the waist. She shivered as his hands reached up inside her robe and grazed her skin as they let the fabric slip slightly off her shoulders. Prem twined one hand in her hair and pulled her head back slightly to expose her slender neck. He was about to kiss her, when the phone rang, startling both of them.

"Hold that thought," Heer giggled. She gave Prem a chaste kiss on his lips then ran to answer the phone. "I wonder who it could be?" she said.

"If it's Preet again, you better tell that wise guy, I'm going to beat the crap out of him when I get back," grumbled Prem.

Heer laughed, then picked up the phone. "Hello? Kulraj Didi?" Heer checked the time on the wall clock. It was late. Why was Kulraj calling them? "Yes, Prem is here? Is everything alright?" Heer motioned to Prem to come to her, then listened quietly to Kulraj's frantic voice on the other end of the line.

Prem saw the color drain from Heer's face and was by her side in an instant. "What happened? What's wrong?" he asked.

"It's Ma and Bauji...," sobbed Heer. "There's been an accident."

Chapter 1 - A Family in Trouble

10 Years Later...

"What is this?!" Roared Lalit, as he picked up a plastic container from a box being prepared for shipment. "The lid on this container doesn't sit properly. If the lid doesn't sit properly, it won't provide a proper seal. Is this the kind of product quality worthy of the Juneja name?" He glared angrily at the manager. "What if I hadn't come by for a surprise inspection? You would have shipped out defective goods! What are you trying to do...run my business into the ground? Is this what I pay you for?!"

"I'm so sorry sir," stammered the manager, as he quickly checked the other containers. "I assure you this is the only defective piece. I don't know how..."

"One rotten apple can spoil the entire barrel!" cried Lalit. "Reputation carries a lot of weight in business! Find out how this got through quality control, and fire the person responsible!"

"Yes sir. Right away sir," said the manager. He hurried away to carry out his boss' order, lest his own job be put in jeopardy.

Just then Lalit spotted his sons Prem and Herman walking towards him. "Ah! Thank God you both are here," Lalit sighed in relief.

Prem watched with concern as his father wiped the beads of perspiration from his forehead. "What's wrong Bauji?" He asked.

"Everything!" cried Lalit. "I've been here all afternoon checking up on things. Machinery has been breaking down, we're short on supplies, the workers are demanding more pay...and that is the 2ndshipment that failed inspection. We'll have to call the buyer and tell them we won't be able to meet our delivery deadline. Unfortunately, that's the 3rd time in a row we'll be explaining ourselves to this particular buyer."

"That's not good," frowned Prem.

"Tell me about it," sighed Lalit. "Sometimes I think our employees are working for the competition. How about you? Please say that you've got some good news for me."

"I wish I could," said Prem. "But...we didn't win the contract to host the Business Entrepreneurs of India conference."

"Damn!" cried Lalit. "I was so sure we had the winning bid. Who won?"

"Rishap Rampal," said Prem.

"Uff, not again!" cried Lalit. He passed his hand over his face in frustration. "That's the 2ndcontract we've lost out to him."

"I'm afraid there's more," sighed Herman. "My meeting with the bank didn't go as well as expected. They've refused to loan us any additional money."

"But we needed that money!" cried Lalit. "We're strapped for cash right now. We have to upgrade our equipment and be able to pay our suppliers and employees if we're to keep this company afloat."

"I know," said Herman. "But the bank officials don't care. They claim the Juneja Group of Companies just isn't what it used to be 10 years ago. They say we've expanded into more avenues and ventures than we can handle, and site consecutive losses for the last several quarters as proof. They had an entire list of strikes against us...falling share prices, bids lost to the competition, nervous investors and associates, even rumors that we may be heading for bankruptcy. Our hotel line is the only thing turning a profit, but the margin is not large enough to soothe away the chinks in our company's armor, so the bank is not willing to take the risk of lending us any more money. We have some funds in reserve. Enough to make partial payments to some of our creditor and keep them quiet for the time being. But if something doesn't happen fast, we may have to sell additional shares or look into liquidating some of our company's assets."

"30 years!" cried Lalit. "I've been doing business with that God-forsaken bank for 30 years...and now when I need them most..."

"Bauji relax," said Prem, as he placed a reassuring hand on his father's shoulder. "We've been through many ups and downs and have always come through stronger than before. We'll get through this too."

"But how Prem?" asked Lalit. "Things have never been this bad before."

"I know," said Prem. "But making yourself sick with worry is not going to help things." Now come on, I suggest we wrap up thing here and then go home and think things over a well cooked meal and a mean dessert."

Later...

The Juneja family was sitting down for dinner.

"Veera put the phone away," ordered Lalit. "I don't want to see that thing glued to your ear at the dinner table."

"Hmph," Maya muttered under her breath as she checked her manicure. "I'm sure the spoiled brat is having a more interesting conversation than the one we'll be facing at the dinner table tonight."

"But Bauji...", protested Veera.

"Now Veera", said Lalit.

Veera shrugged her shoulders, and switched to texting on her cell phone.

"Veera please," sighed Lalit. "You can chat with your friends later." He shook his head as his daughter finally complied with his wishes. "Kids these days I tell you, they have too much of everything at their fingertips. Prem, what's the progress on our hotel in Ludhiana?"

"The contractor tells us that the renovations are almost complete. It's a good time to start interviews to hire staff and personnel," said Prem. "I have to leave for a meeting in Toronto in a few days, so I was thinking perhaps we could send Preet to supervise and start up things."

"Preet?" scoffed Maya. "Are you serious? The only thing he's good at is goofing off."

"Maya!" cried Herman. He shot his wife a peevish glance.

"Well it's true," said Maya. "Look, I know he's your brother, but have you ever seen him do anything useful around here? It's been months since he graduated and he's never even been to the office once. You on the other hand could have had a very successful independent law practice, which by the way, my father offered to set up. But no...you wanted to pitch in and help the family business".

"Actually, I think it's a great idea to send Preet," said Herman. "I'm sure it's something he can handle and it'll be a great way for him to get his feet wet and join the company. And considering our hotels are the only thing that are churning out money, the sooner we get this one up and running, the better."

"Uff ho!" said Heer, as she and Kulraj placed serving bowls of food on the table. "What should we do with the Juneja men Kulraj Didi?" She frowned at her husband and then her father-in-law, before taking a seat. "You know the rules. No talking business while you're at the table. This is family time. Time for us to catch up with one another."

"That's right," agreed Kulraj. "So...does anyone have anything to say?" There was only silence in response. "How about you Veera? You seem to have plenty to say to your friends."

"Well yeah," said Veera. "That's because they're my friends. You guys are just like...family."

"Thanks Veera," chuckled Heer.

"Speaking of family," said Lalit. "Where's Preet?"

Meanwhile...

Preet flashed the bouncer his ID then entered the dimly lit nightclub. The place was packed tonight, but he knew just where to find his friend. As his eyes adjusted to the ever changing colored lights, he maneuvered himself through the mass of hot bodies jumping around in synch with the music blaring overhead, until he reached the bar.

"Shall I get you a beer?" offered the bartender.

"Nah...never touch the stuff, just give me a coke," grinned Preet. After collecting his drink, he surveyed the premises. Sure enough, his best friend was there, seated in his usual place.

"Hey Gaurav...," said Preet, as he sat down next to him.

"Shhh...," said Gaurav. His eyes were fixed on the pretty girl sitting across from him at the bar. "You see that girl?" he whispered to Preet. "Pichle 10 minute se mujhe line de rahi hai (She's been flirting with me for the last 10 minutes)."

"Really? What are you waiting for then, go talk to her, offer to buy her a drink or something," said Preet.

"You think?" said Gaurav.

"Definitely," said Preet.

Gaurav took a deep breath and made his way over to the girl, then slipped onto the empty bar stool next to her. He looked back at Preet, who flashed both thumbs-up for encouragement. Gaurav cleared his throat, exchanged a smile with the girl, then ordered himself a beer. He then smiled at her some more.

Come on Gaurav, say something, sighed Preet. Say anything.

"Hi, I'm Gaurav," said Gaurav.

"Hi...Jasmine," the girl smiled back.

"Jasmine...like the flower? Nice name," said Gaurav.

Jasmine smiled and nodded as if she already knew that.

"Um...The DJ's playing some really great music tonight," said Gaurav.

"Yeah," smiled Jasmine.

"That's a real nice dress," said Gaurav, looking over her appreciatively.

"Thanks, that's why I wore it," said Jasmine. "Well...that and because it goes with my favorite pair of shoes."

"Right...So...Uh...What can I get the woman who has everything?" said Gaurav in between sips of his drink. "How about my number for starters?"

Before the girl could say anything, Gaurav choked on his drink and began to cough loudly, accidentally knocking over his glass in the process. Jasmine immediately checked her dress for splatter stains, stared at Gaurav blankly for a few minutes then rolled her eyes and walked away.

Preet rushed to his friend's side, cupped his hand and gave him several comforting pats on the back with it. "Are you alright?" He asked.

"Yeah...," gasped Gaurav. "I can't believe it, I almost died and she just sat there smirking at me like some cruel model from a clothing advertisement. I could swear she was interested in me. I mean, she was smiling at me non-stop".

"Hmm, maybe she's just a really happy person. But perhaps next time you should try drinking instead of inhaling your beer," chuckled Preet.

"Ha Ha! Very funny!" cried Gaurav. "What are you doing here anyway? I thought you had a date with Naina."

"Don't remind me," sighed Preet.

"Why? What happened?" asked Gaurav.

"She said she felt it was time we gave our relationship an official label of girlfriend and boyfriend,"explained Preet.

"So?" said Gaurav, shrugging his shoulders.

"It was only our third date," said Preet.

"That still doesn't sound so bad, besides she's totally hot," said Gaurav.

"In addition to the label, she wanted me to hand over my phone so she could check who I've been talking to other than her," said Preet.

"Oh," said Gaurav.

"She's also psychotic! She wanted us to wear little matching vials around our neck filled with each other's blood. When I refused, she bit me!" Preet pointed to a small red mark on his neck. "She said it was her only other way of marking her territory."

"Yikes," laughed Gaurav.

"Yeah," said Preet. "It's definitely time to let this one go."

"That's too bad," said Gaurav. "You guys looked cute together."

"Cute? Gaurav, puppies are cute," said Preet. "The girl is overbearing and possessive. Not exactly the true love, soul-mate, I'll eat your horrible cooking because I love you types, you know?"

"So you dumped her?" asked Gaurav.

"Not yet. I mean, we were at a restaurant and I didn't want her to get loud or emotional, so I told her I have an early meeting at work tomorrow and called it a night," explained Preet.

"You know that's the 3rd girl you're planning to get rid of in only 2 weeks," said Gaurav. "Just exactly what kind of girl are you looking for?"

"I don't know," said Preet shrugging his shoulders. "Someone who appreciates me for who I am rather than the family I belong to. Someone around who I can feel free to be myself. Someone...you know...jise dekh ke (who when I see)..."

"Kuch kuch hota hai (something happens)?" said Gaurav.

"No...", Preet said rolling his eyes.

"Violins bajte hai (violins begin to play)?" tried Gaurav.

Preet shook his head.

"Lal rang bhi acha lagne lage (Red becomes your favorite color)?" asked Gaurav.

"No man...just a nice, sweet, simple, honest girl...," said Preet. "The kind I would bring home to meet my mother..." His mood grew dark. "If she was still alive that is." Just then his phone rang. "Well well, speak of the devil," he remarked. "Naina is calling me." He answered his phone, covering the mouthpiece with his hand in order to keep the surrounding sounds out as much as possible.

"Hi honey, what are you doing?" asked the voice on the other end.

"Oh...nothing much. Just listening to some music before I head over to bed," lied Preet. "How about you?"

"I'm standing at the bar right behind you," said the voice.

Preet turned around in surprise. "Naina!"

"I thought you had to get to work early tomorrow," hissed Naina.

"Um...yeah...I uh...," stammered Preet.

"You liar!" screamed Naina. "You're cheating on me aren't you?"

"No...I was just...," Preet tried to explain, but Naina wasn't listening. She tried to slap him but he ducked and she caught poor Gaurav squarely across the face instead. Next, she grabbed someone's drink and threw it at Preet, but he ducked again and some innocent passerby got splashed in the face with it instead. Needless to say, neither the person whose drink Naina took, nor the person she accidentally hit was pleased.

A short while later...

Preet and Gaurav walked into the Juneja Mansion in Delhi.

"I still can't believe we got thrown out of the club," sighed Preet. "We didn't even start that fight."

"And I can't believe I got slapped by a girl, when I didn't even do anything," said Gaurav.

"Are you sure you're alright?" chuckled Preet.

"Yeah," said Gaurav, as he rubbed the side of his face. "Just don't ever say I never did anything for you."

"Right," smiled Preet, as he led Gaurav to the dining room. "Well on a positive note, I don't have to worry about breaking up with Naina. She doesn't want anything to do with me any more".

Heer and Maya were in the dining room overseeing the servants clear up the dinner dishes. Heer was giving the cook some instructions. She looked up surprised to see Preet home so early.

"Hey Heer Bhabi...Maya Bhabi...," smiled Preet. "What's up?"

"Oh...the same old stuff...arguing with the cook over the menu for tomorrow," sighed Heer. "What about you? I thought you had a date tonight. Did you decide not to keep it?"

"Actually, I thought I'd have dinner with the family for a change," said Preet. "But it looks like I'm a little late."

"Having you home for dinner would have been nice. You know Kulraj Didi and Kiran Jiju stopped by," smiled Heer.

"Along with their 3 little monster," added Maya.

"Maya!" cried Heer.

"Well that's what they are," said Maya. "They're messy, never sit still, and their visit is never complete unless they've broken something."

"Well, Chahat enjoyed having her cousins over," said Heer.

"Whatever," Maya said rolling her eyes. "I'm going to head upstairs. And you..." She pointed an accusing finger at the cook. "Stop dumping so much ghee in the food!"

Heer shook her head as she watched Maya walk away, then turned to Preet and smiled. "Kulraj Didi and Kiran Jiju were asking about you. Did you guys eat?"

Both Preet and Gaurav shook their heads.

"Okay then. Grab a seat, and I'll have something warmed up for you in no time," said Heer. "Hai Preet! What's that thing on your neck?"

"Oh that...uh...it's nothing," lied Preet, as he pulled up his shirt's collar. "It's just a mosquito bite. I forgot to shut the window before I fell asleep last night, and a mosquito got in and made a beeline straight for my neck. It still itches something awful."

"That must have been some mosquito," Heer remarked with a raised brow.

"Yeah and its name was Naina," chuckled Gaurav.

"Who's Naina?" smiled Heer.

"Nobody", Preet said quickly, as he frowned at his friend.

"Oh come on Preet, you can tell me," teased Heer. "Is this the girl you've been seeing? Why don't you bring her home for dinner next time?"

"I'm afraid there won't be a next time for her," said Preet.

"What? Why not?" asked Heer.

"Because...it didn't work out between us," Preet said shrugging his shoulders.

"Just like that?" said Heer.

"Just like that," said Preet.

"I don't know what's wrong with you Preet," sighed Heer. "You're smart, handsome, funny and so so sweet..." She reached out and tweaked his cheeks.

"Ow! Bhabi please don't do that," complained Preet, as he rubbed his cheek.

"...but any girl you start seeing is history by the 2nd week," continued Heer. "It's like you're allergic to women..."

"I am not allergic to women," said Preet.

"...at this rate...how are you ever going to settle down?" frowned Heer.

Oh no, thought Preet as he rolled his eyes. Here we go again. If there was one thing his Bhabi loved, it was weddings. Three months ago, she had attended the wedding of another prominent Delhi businessman's son. For days afterwards, she continued to talk about the ceremony, the clothes, the music, and how happy the bride and groom were. And since then she seemed to be on a mission to bring a wedding into the Juneja household. He and Veera had been repeatedly urged to "settle down". Looks like tonight was his turn again.

"Preet?" said Heer. "Are you even payng attention to what I'm saying?"

"Yes Bhabi," sighed Preet. "And the answer to your question is...I'm never going to get married."

From her expression, it was clear that his response hadn't been the one Heer had wanted to hear.

"I mean...," said Preet. "Not in the immediate future. I...uh...haven't met the right girl yet. But when I do, I promise you'll be the first to know."

"Well," said Heer. "I could always set you up with someone I know. She lives in..."

"Aw jeez Heer Bhabi, not again!" cried Preet. "I thought we agreed you wouldn't get on my case about this."

"I'm not trying to get on your case," said Heer. "I'm just trying to be helpful."

"Thanks, but I'm not interested in being tied down right now," said Preet in an irritated tone of voice.

"But...," tried Heer.

"No buts," insisted Preet. "My love life is off limits, even to you."

Heer watched as he headed up the stairs to his room. "Hey, what about dinner?" she called after him.

"I just lost my appetite," frowned Preet.

"Don't worry about Preet Heer Bhabi," offered Gaurav. "He's been in quite a mood for the last couple of days."

Heer shook her head. "He's been in that mood since Ma died."

So there you have it. Another Meet adventure begins. Hope you all liked the update. Please remember to hit the like button and leave your feedback. 🤗

No promises, but I will try to update weekly. 😆

Credit: The Juneja factory scene is inspired from Dil Dhadhakne Do.

Chapter 2: Preview: Preet encounters 2 girls that will change his life forever.

Link to next chapter: Chapter 2

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Fatima_Q2015-12-09 19:48:22

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hi fatima,

Thanks for the pm and welcome back.

Thank you Bhagyashree 🤗

So finally our new journey on meet begins here and I must tell you I just loved the start.

Yay!!

Its really different from what you have done in your earlier work but hey are u on a killing spree in jab we met you had killed lalit and now in this you killed gaytri and in both cases preet was affected by their deaths.

Personally I'm totally non-violent...but killing off Gaytri was a demand of the script, shall we say 😳

Though I know loss of a mother is going to play a much difficult part in this preet because we can feel that in the very first chapter of the story.

Yeah...his mother's death haunts him and he obviously will blame his father for it.

Now coming to the update it was a superb start to a new story the tragic part in the start and gaytri being dead was very emotional and I will miss her in the story. So the juneja's are in trouble with their business that's pretty interesting to see. Oh I loved this Herman who is unlike the serial is actually dedicated to the family.

Well...Herman wasn't really a bad character in the show...just selfish at times. Let's see what he does here.

Coming to preet he have just completed his graduation that means he was very young when gaytri died oh god he must be so much depressed about it. So he is changing girlfriends in every 2 weeks that's fast lol and yay we will get the famous preet and gaurav friendship over here as well.

Preet is a recent MBA grad, you'll find out more in the next update. So yeah he was in his early teens when his mother died.

Oh that breakup part with naina and poor gaurav getting hit by her was hilarious lol gaurav and his badluck never leaves his side at all. So heer in this story is up with a mission to get veera and preet settled and was lecturing preet about it. But in every story preet will always wait for his meher to come and the description of his miss perfect perfectly matches with Meher.

Heer and Preet are very close. You'll see as the story progresses. And of course...Preet's perfect match is always going to be Meher 😆

Maya is as usual in this story and preet is still being the most underestimated juneja in terms of business but if I am guessing correct this preet has a bit or more of hatred towards his father for snatching away her mother.

Yeah...Preet does not like his father for obvious reasons.

I am looking forward for Meher entry and how their life changes from their because this is some really interesting start plus I am hoping with meher's entry preet will be more of himself and I am sure he will be able to manage the hotel properly.

Let's see. 😆

So now I end here with a wait for your next pm pls update soon because this wait is the toughest think to do when u start updating

Originally posted by: lazychick.maria

Fatima! 😲
Yes I'm here! 😆Surpised? 😛
I just got your pm and then i thought was high time for me to check your stories😆 kyunki saab jo tumhari tareef kar rahe hain😆

I love the concept of this FF! the beginning starting with Bauji and Gayatri scene was epic! But they met with an accident and Gayatri died! oh no! 😲
Loved the 1st chapter!
especially Preet & Heer convo! so Heer wants Preet to get married but he denies how sweet 😆
hope the situation gets better for the family! Bauji is totally lost 😲

can't wait for the next part!
🤗

Originally posted by: Chit15

Thanks for Pm

It is great to read new FF of Meet on their anniversary

Loved the way you started tragic accident of Gayatri and then leap and the way relationships are shown is superb

Preet as usual is great and now waiting for entry of Meher.

Nice concept👍🏼

Originally posted by: AASUS

Yay Fatima Congratz on new creation 🥳 don't remeber how many you have so far. This is another feather on your cap! 👍🏼

I've written so many I've forgotten the count too 😆

Pg 67 well not sure about meaning of title. It sounds cool. Cute and pretty banner by Kiran.⭐️

Ishq Bulava means The Invitation of Love

So I read epilogue + ch 1

This is the 2nd story I like from your creations. 1st is Kis Desh gang as kids. Probably cz more of the characters included and I could easily relate. Not sure y . 🤔

I'm excited for this one already. Narration is good so far.

Yay!! Thank you 😛

Wow Bauji being drunk 😆 I was trying to picture in my head hmm

Even if Prem is not home there is Harman or any number of ppl could drive. As stubborn as Bauji is and brainless at this moment G3 should have said "drive if u want but I'm not coming with you" lol

Everyone was really young you know like Veera was 11, Preet was 14, Herman was probably 16 or 17...Prem 21.

So we learn from Heer's statement G3 passed away 10 yrs ago.

Truth b told I won't miss her cz never my fav.

Well then I'm glad I killed her off 😆

Bauji all flustered is nothing new - he never stays cool. Same in your story too.

Oh I forgot :P PH bit romance 😲 I wondered if it was Meet story for a second 😳

That was well done 👍🏼 they looked cute - the description.

Well it is a Meet story, but the entire family will play an important role...especially Heer. So we will see family scenes.

Based on story so far, Preet a recent graduate and Veera still studying(assuming from her behaviour) Prem married 10 yrs ago means huge gap of age in between brothers. Wonder if Harman is close to Prem or Preet's age.

In present day Preet is like 24, Veera about to turn 21, Herman is 27, Prem 31.

Maya's sarcasm add spice.

Yeah...Maya is a bit vampish...let's see which way she goes.

Kul Di seem nice. She is in her own home. That's different.

Veera is so in her element 😆 I should tell u, dunno if I did before - Veera , Maya characters you write so well. Very close to how they were in show.

Yeah they're typically easy to write.

Preet was too smart and Gaurav too slow and got beaten up by Naina huh. And he's still nice to Preet 😲 will see later what happens.

They're chaddi buddies...they'll take one for each other...😆

Woah Heer is a chatterbox 😲 wow and Preet is running from her 😆 aw sad.

She should give him space if he doesn't like. Heer in show was good to Preet but post leap gave lectures to Meher which I found totally unnecessary.

In this story...Preet is very close to Heer, because she literally had to step in and take the place of his mother. They were close in the show before the leap..and I wanted to work that angle in this story.

Let's see how rest of characters shape up.

Gaurav seem close to the J house from how he talks to Heer.

Yeah, he and Preet are best friends.

Harman standing up for Preet is nice.

I assume during the trip Preet will meet Meher. Only guessing :P

Let's see...😆

Dialogues are interesting.