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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Rishaal


Dont make me nervous talking about the results ๐Ÿ˜†
Ok karo force mein force honay wali nahi

I saw ur thread rishu..
Its awesome. .๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Wow interesting prologue
Can't wait it to read further

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
wowww what a concept yar do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
awesome... ..i know it been a long tine since i comment...but no worries im back on track...so ill b reading n commenting regularly...n thank u for the pm...this story will b awesome for sure...but the prologue ...its the perfect one which can make ne feel that yes this is a dark ff...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Interesting can't wait for more of it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
please update soon.. it is an interesting prologue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Sneak Peek of Part 1

" Khushi, will you do something for the welfare of our family? The earnings which we both get for working in call centers are not suffice to support our family, you see." Manipulator that he was, Shyam was having his desired effect on Khushi with his words and tone, while Khushi expressed her regret of not being able to help,

" I know Bhaiyya. Tell me what I can do more to support of family in a better manner."

" This might sound a bit weird to you, so I request you to think with an open mind with our priorities in mind. I got a proposition from the famous business family of Raizadas for a girl who can..." Shyam paused to see if he had garnered enough interest from Khushi, whose face lit up listening to Raizadas, who were extremely influential.

" Who can?" Khushi requested Shyam to continue while he mentally smirked as he continued,

" Who can carry the heir of their empire in her womb, without any strings attached;as a surrogate mother."

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Kya Hoga Khushi Ka Jawaab?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Do update this awesome,intriguing story dear.eagerly waiting to read the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Eager for the chapter, loved the teaser ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Very interesting concept waiting for the chapter

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