HUMSAAYA # 5 Updated Pt-72 / Pg 129 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
God, Geet is hurt and nobody bothered to know. Maan will never be able to forgive himself. But will Geet be able to trust him again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Congrats on new thread
Loved the update
Half truth has come out
I think naina forgot her phone and geet might hv called her to inform about angel
Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
O ho Geet in hospital. I am really feeling sorry for Geet. Only dadima is the one who supported Geet . Now I want to know maan's reaction after knowing Geet's condition & how he going to handle the situation. Waiting for next update with lots of maaneet moments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
hi indu
i am very big fan of yours and i love your story.
i am really sorry for not able to comment on your stories because of error in my ipad and now with great difficulty i m able to comment but i can always comment on blog . so i really request you to pls help me and provide me with blog link and password . pls pls .
your story humsaaya is awesome loved reading it
waiting to see how maan will react after knowing the situation and reaction of geet also .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Omg. .. Geet had got hurt. .
N when she came home.. she was like nothing had happened. ..
not even a slightest of flinch of wounds pain...
but now she is deeply hurt .. Due to maan not supporting her n believing her...
but maan did not do the right thing. .
He in his anger. . Said geet is no one to him n his family. .. use iss ghar par haq nahi...
tats truly a painful words for any wife..
now will repent for his these words...
As geet is very sensitive girl...
He is gonna have hard time...
hopefully will b alrite soon. .
Continue soon.. :-D
waiting for next part :-)





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part # 58



Veer placed angel on the couch - main dekhta hoon... hume bhi hospital jana hai... Veer supported his hand to get up and he felt something.. he looked for it... it was a phone...tucked between the handrest and the seating palce.. he took it and looked at it... Its naina's...

Veer - Naina tumhara phone yaha...

Naina - pata nahi.. maine kal se nahi dkha... angel ki tension mein thi.. toh dhyaan nahi diya...

Veer stood up and opened and screen lock and saw so many messages... from Geet... he checked them and he saw her messages...

Geet - Naina.. main angel ko apne saath lejarahi hoon... woh bohut ro rahi hai... phone bhi nahi karne derahi hai.. maine bahana kiya ki apne friends ko msg karr rahi hoon... bohut gussa hai... maine plan change karliya.. apne dostonse kisi aur din mil loongi... aaj maine angel ko ghumake le aati hoon... usse bhi acha lagega... bura mat manna.. maine tumhe pehle bataya nahi...

That message was sent even before naina noticed Angel is missing...

There was another message...

Geet - Naina... maine kuch pics post kiye hain..whatapp pe.. dekho...

And Veer opened whatsapp messages and saw no of pics of angel and some with geet... Angel was completely enjoying.. they went on different rides... Geet took pics with her fav cartoon characters...and posted them for naina

Geet sent many pics of angel and her... to the group.. Anu.. Naina and Geet ... he saw many messages from anu also...

He showed the phone to Naina ... Dekho ... Geet ne message kiya.. par tumne dekha hi nahi.. aur unhe kitna kuch sunna pada... aaj kal dhyan kaha rehta hain tumhara naina... ab kya jawab doonga main bhabhi ko... sab log kal unse jawab maang rahe the... aur aaj khud hamare paas koi jawab nahi hai..unke aasuonke ... main kaise theek karoon sab...

Naina - I am sorry veer... maine dekha hi nahi... phone par dhyaan nahi tha mera... mujhe angel ki fikar horahi thi...

Veer didnt nother to listen to her explanantion - mujhe pehle bhai ko batana haii... main tum se baad mein baat karta hoon...

Veer went to maan's room... but it was empty... and ran down to the Gym.. he knew Maan would be there only... and he saw Maan sleeping there...

Veer woke up Maan... Bhai... he called him again and again.. Maan slowly opened his eyes and saw Veer there.. veer was looking tensed... he got up at once and said...

Maan - haa.. veer...

Veer - jaldi chaliye hume hospital jana hai...

Maan - hospital .. kyun... angel theek haina..

Veer - haa.. Angel theek hai.. aap jaldi jaayiye... kapde badal ke aayiye main gadi nikal ta hoon...

Maan - Dadi.. Dai theek haina...

Veer -Haa .. bhai Dadi bhi theek hai... aap jaldi kijiye...

Maan couldn't understand anything but he went to his room to change... He saw Geet's room open and went inside... and the view of the Bed terrified him... his heart sank seeing the blood ...

Maan ST - kahi kal ki baat ke liye usne kuch... His heart screamed... Nahi maan aise mat socho... woh itni kamzor nahi hai... Maan started to sweat...

Veer came for Maan... He saw him in Geet's room and Bhai ... jaldi chaliye...

Maan - yeh.. khoon...ge... geet ko kya hua...

Veer pulled maan and they started walking...

Veer - Geet ko kal chot lagi thi bhai.. aur humne sab ne unse... jab ki unki koi galti hi nahi hai...

Maan - Galati nahi.. usne angel ko bina bataye...

Veer - haa bataya nahi tha.. kyun ki angel usse phone karne nahi derahi thi.. gussa jo thi... but unhone message kiya... naina ne dekha nahi...

Maan closed his eyes... his eyes watered and he blinked a couple of times...

Veer is driving and he sat silently... He knew he was harsh on Geet.. he didn't even give her a chance to say her word... she was injured and he didn't even notice it... But she was normal.. she didnt show any sign of pain...

Veer stooped the car and Maan jumped of the car and ran inside... He asked for Geet and they showed him the way to emergency unit... He ran there...

He saw Anu and others waiting outside the unit...

Anu rushed to maan - bhai kaha the aap... kyun nahi dekha aapne geet ko.. Mujhe pata hai aap Site visit pe gaye.. par aane ke baad kyun nahi dekha

Maan didn't know what to answer... The Doc came saving him for the time being... he rushed to the doc

SD - Doc... Hamari Geet kaisi hai...

Doc - Savirti ji.. Chot toh bohut zyada nahi hai but itna kam bhi nahi hai ki ignore kar sake.. agar chot kal lagi toh aapne ignore kyun kiya...

SD didn't answer.. Ab kaisi hai Geet...

Doc - unhone ne first aid toh kiya... par kuch glass pieces andar rehgaye.. unhe humne nikal diya... bohut chote chote the.. humne poore nikal paaye.. stitches lagadiye hain... unhone toh koi bhi dawayi nahi li.. isliye fever bhi hogaya hai..

SD - Doc chot kaha kaha pe lagi

Doc looked at the for few seconds and said - unke neck pe.. aur right elbow pe... neck toh clear tha... waha stitches nahi lage...bas scratches the ... magar elbow ka ghav zyada hai.. wahi pe glass pieces rehgaye.. thode deep cuts bhi hai.. thode din unhe takleef hogi.. unko apne right hand se kaam bohut kam karna hoga... stitches pull hojayenge toh .. takleef hogi...

Anu - zyada problem nahi hogi.. woh leftie hai.. Maan looked at her seriously... Anu made a sorry face...

The doc lect from there after giving instructions to the nurse...

Dadi gave a serious look to Maan and sat there...

Veer came inside and Anu told him what the doc said...

Veer went to Dadi and said... Dadi.. App, anu aur RB ghar jaayiye... Main aur bhai yaha pe rahenge...

SD - nahi hum nahi jaayenge... aap sab jayiye...

SD was adamant that she will not leave geet...

Veer convinved Anu and RB to go home.. as they are still in their night wear... SD has the habbit of fresing up in the morning it self...she was al ready for the day...So she refused to go home...

Veer and Maan talked for few minutes with the Doc and they sat there waiting for geet to gain conscious...

Jasmeet called KM to know about SD reaching Delhi as she didn't call them last night... and she came to know about geet's condition... courtesy.. Meera ...

She called Maan right away...

Maan saw the caller and he for the first time felt scared... what will he answer them...

Veer - bhai phone uthayiye aur baat kijiye... woh pareshaan horahe honge...

Maan attended the call and said Maa in a meak voice...

JM in a desperate voice - Maan... kya hua Geet ko... Woh hospital mein kyun hai... ab kaisi hai...Meera bata rahi thi woh beshosh hai.. usse hosh aaya ki nahi...

Maan - Maa... hum abhi bhi hospital mein hai.. ge.. geet abhi bhi behosh hain...

JM - kya... abhi tak hosh nahi aaya... kya hua usse.. aur tum kaha the ... kyun nahi the uske saath Maan...

Maan - Main... Maan don't know what to answer...

JM - Main aarahi hoon... mujhe geet ko dekhna hai...mera dil bohut ghabra raha hai... mere aane tak uska khayal rakhna plz... Maan... JM said in pleading tone...

Maan couldn't even answer... he cut the call and got up from there and left to the washroom...

Maan ST - Main kya jawab doonga Maa ko aur papaji ko... unhone mujpe itna bharosa kiya aur maine...

He remembered how much trust Inder had in him that he even didn't ask about geet when they met in Mumbai...

Maan was still in his self talk... His mobile again rang ... and it was veer... He panicked .. what if something has gone wrong...

He ran out while attending Veer's call...

Veer - bhai.. aap kaha ho...mujhe aap se baat karna hai...

Maan - main aaraha hoon... geet ko hosh aaya?

Veer - nahi.. abhi nahi...

Maan cut the call as he saw veer...

Maan reached .. Veer kya hua?







Thanks for all the likes and comments...❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Me 1st to comment.
Thanks for update.
Nice update.
Just hope geet will fine.
Geet inform naina bt she didn't see her mobile.
Geets mom coming to see her since she gt to know geet is hospitalized. Thanks to meera
Finally maan gt to know he is wrong this time.
He need to rectify his mistakes nw.
Wat veer want to talk with maan. I hope nothing is serious.
Edited by SONU_29 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
You again updated. I want to see how maan is going to face Geet & all others. Pls update soon with lots of maaneet moments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear Mann reached hospital to see his geet and dr informed that she is fine but still unconscious veer told Mann that geet message to naina about baby with her

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