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Posted: 8 years ago









  Part  # 58



Veer placed angel on the couch - main dekhta hoon... hume bhi hospital jana hai... Veer supported his hand to get up and he felt something.. he looked for it... it was a phone...tucked between the handrest and the seating palce.. he took it and looked at it... Its naina's...

 

Veer -  Naina tumhara phone yaha...

Naina -  pata nahi.. maine kal se nahi dkha... angel ki tension mein thi.. toh dhyaan nahi diya...

 

Veer stood up and  opened and screen lock and saw so many messages... from Geet... he checked them and he saw her messages...

 

Geet - Naina.. main angel ko apne saath lejarahi hoon... woh bohut ro rahi hai... phone bhi nahi karne derahi hai.. maine bahana kiya ki apne friends ko msg karr rahi hoon... bohut gussa hai... maine plan change karliya.. apne dostonse kisi aur din mil loongi... aaj maine angel ko ghumake le aati hoon... usse bhi acha lagega... bura mat manna.. maine tumhe pehle bataya nahi...

 

That message was sent even before naina noticed Angel is missing...

 

There was another message...

 

Geet - Naina... maine kuch pics post kiye hain..whatapp pe.. dekho...

 

And Veer opened whatsapp messages and saw no of pics of angel and some with geet... Angel was completely enjoying.. they went on different rides... Geet took pics with her fav cartoon characters...and posted them for naina

 

Geet sent many pics of angel and her... to the group.. Anu.. Naina and Geet ... he saw many messages from anu also...

 

He showed the phone to Naina ... Dekho ... Geet ne message kiya.. par tumne dekha hi nahi.. aur unhe  kitna kuch sunna pada... aaj kal dhyan kaha rehta hain tumhara naina... ab kya jawab doonga main bhabhi ko...  sab log kal unse jawab maang rahe the... aur aaj khud hamare paas koi jawab nahi hai..unke aasuonke ... main kaise theek karoon sab...

 

Naina - I am sorry veer... maine dekha hi nahi... phone par dhyaan nahi tha mera... mujhe angel ki fikar horahi thi...

 

Veer didnt nother to listen to her explanantion  -  mujhe pehle bhai ko batana haii... main tum se baad mein baat karta hoon...

 

Veer went to maan's room... but it was empty... and ran down to the Gym.. he knew Maan would be there only... and he saw Maan sleeping there...

 

Veer woke up Maan... Bhai... he called him again and again.. Maan slowly opened his eyes and saw Veer there.. veer was looking tensed... he got up at once and said...

 

Maan - haa.. veer...

 

Veer - jaldi chaliye hume hospital jana hai...

 

Maan -  hospital .. kyun... angel theek haina..

 

Veer - haa.. Angel theek hai.. aap jaldi jaayiye... kapde badal ke aayiye main gadi nikal ta hoon...

 

Maan - Dadi.. Dai theek haina...

Veer -Haa .. bhai Dadi bhi theek hai... aap jaldi kijiye...

 

Maan couldn't understand anything but he went to his room to change... He saw Geet's room open and went inside... and the view of the Bed terrified him... his heart sank seeing the blood ...

 

Maan ST - kahi kal ki baat ke liye usne kuch...  His heart screamed... Nahi maan aise mat socho... woh itni kamzor nahi hai... Maan started to sweat...

 

Veer came for Maan... He saw him in Geet's room and Bhai ... jaldi chaliye...

 

Maan - yeh.. khoon...ge... geet ko kya hua...

 

Veer pulled maan and they started walking...

 

Veer - Geet ko kal chot lagi thi bhai.. aur humne sab ne unse... jab ki unki koi galti hi nahi hai...

 

Maan - Galati nahi.. usne angel ko bina bataye...

 

Veer - haa bataya nahi tha.. kyun ki angel usse phone karne nahi derahi thi.. gussa jo thi... but unhone message kiya... naina ne dekha nahi...

 

Maan closed his eyes... his eyes watered and he blinked a couple of times...

 

Veer is driving and he sat silently... He knew he was harsh on Geet.. he didn't even give her a chance to say her word... she was injured and he didn't even notice it... But she was normal.. she didnt show any sign of pain...

 

Veer stooped the car and Maan jumped of the car and ran inside... He asked for Geet and they showed him the way to emergency unit... He ran there...

 

He saw Anu and others waiting outside the unit...

 

Anu rushed to maan  - bhai kaha the aap... kyun nahi dekha aapne geet ko.. Mujhe pata hai aap Site visit pe gaye.. par aane ke baad kyun nahi dekha

 

Maan didn't know what to answer... The Doc came saving him for the time being... he rushed to the doc

 

SD - Doc... Hamari Geet kaisi hai...

 

Doc - Savirti ji.. Chot toh bohut zyada nahi hai but itna kam bhi nahi hai ki ignore kar sake.. agar chot kal lagi toh aapne ignore kyun kiya...

 

SD didn't answer.. Ab kaisi hai Geet...

 

Doc - unhone ne first aid toh kiya... par kuch glass pieces andar rehgaye.. unhe humne nikal diya... bohut chote chote the.. humne poore nikal paaye.. stitches lagadiye hain... unhone toh koi bhi dawayi nahi li.. isliye fever bhi hogaya hai..

 

SD - Doc  chot kaha kaha pe lagi

 

Doc looked at the for few seconds and said  - unke neck pe.. aur right elbow pe... neck toh clear tha... waha stitches nahi lage...bas scratches the ...  magar elbow ka ghav zyada hai.. wahi pe glass pieces rehgaye.. thode deep cuts bhi hai.. thode din unhe takleef hogi.. unko apne right hand se kaam bohut kam karna hoga... stitches pull hojayenge toh .. takleef hogi...

 

Anu - zyada problem nahi hogi.. woh leftie hai.. Maan looked at her seriously... Anu made a sorry face...

 

The doc lect from there after giving instructions to the nurse...

 

Dadi gave a serious look to Maan and sat there...

 

Veer came inside and Anu told him what the doc said...

 

Veer went to Dadi and said... Dadi.. App, anu aur RB ghar jaayiye... Main aur bhai yaha pe rahenge...

 

SD - nahi hum nahi jaayenge... aap sab jayiye...

 

SD was adamant that she will not leave geet...

 

Veer convinved Anu and RB to go home.. as they are still in their night wear... SD has the habbit of fresing up in the morning it self...she was al ready for the day...So she refused to go home...

 

Veer and Maan talked for few minutes with the Doc  and they sat there waiting for geet to gain conscious...

 

Jasmeet called KM to know about SD reaching Delhi as she didn't call them last night... and she came to know about geet's condition... courtesy.. Meera ...

 

She called Maan right away...

 

Maan saw the caller and he for the first time felt scared... what will he answer them...

 

Veer  - bhai phone uthayiye aur baat kijiye... woh pareshaan horahe honge...

 

Maan attended the call and said Maa in a meak voice...

 

JM in a desperate voice  - Maan... kya hua Geet ko... Woh hospital mein kyun hai... ab kaisi hai...Meera bata rahi thi woh beshosh hai.. usse hosh aaya ki nahi...

 

Maan - Maa... hum abhi bhi hospital mein hai.. ge.. geet abhi bhi behosh hain...

 

JM - kya... abhi tak hosh nahi aaya... kya hua usse.. aur tum kaha the ... kyun nahi the uske saath Maan...

 

Maan - Main... Maan don't know what to answer...

 

JM - Main aarahi hoon... mujhe geet ko dekhna hai...mera dil bohut ghabra raha hai...  mere aane tak uska khayal rakhna plz... Maan... JM said in pleading tone...

 

Maan couldn't even answer... he cut the call and got up from there and left to the washroom...

 

Maan ST -  Main kya jawab doonga Maa ko aur papaji ko... unhone mujpe itna bharosa kiya aur maine...

 

 He remembered how much trust Inder had in him that he even didn't ask about geet when they met in Mumbai...

 

Maan was still in his self talk... His mobile again rang ... and it was veer... He panicked .. what if something has gone wrong...

 

He ran out while attending Veer's call...

 

Veer -  bhai.. aap kaha ho...mujhe aap se baat karna hai...

 

Maan - main aaraha hoon... geet ko hosh aaya?

 

Veer - nahi.. abhi nahi...

 

Maan cut the call as he saw veer...

 

Maan reached .. Veer kya hua?







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Posted: 8 years ago
Me 1st to comment.
Thanks for update.
Nice update.
Just hope geet will fine.
Geet inform naina bt she didn't see her mobile.
Geets mom coming to see her since she gt to know geet is hospitalized. Thanks to meera
Finally maan gt to know he is wrong this time.
He need to rectify his mistakes nw.
Wat veer want to talk with maan. I hope nothing is serious.
Edited by SONU_29 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
You again updated. I want to see how maan is going to face Geet & all others. Pls update soon with lots of maaneet moments.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear Mann reached hospital to see his geet and dr informed that she is fine but still unconscious veer told Mann that geet message to naina about baby with her
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Posted: 8 years ago


     😊  Awesome Part 
   
   Love it 😊
 Geet was not at fault nd this truth come out ..
 now all r feeling guilty sply Veer, nd Maan...
 waiting how they will face geet nd GM..
 

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Posted: 8 years ago
very painful
maan is feeling guilty what ever he done with geet after knowing truth
hope geet will become fine soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
the story is turning very interesting and exciting

maan feeling very guilty for shouting on geet

hope maan is able to manaofy geet wen she gains her consciousness
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Posted: 8 years ago
Veer finds Naina's mobile and sees Geet's message and the photos she had send
he also tells this to Naina and further goes to get Maan and they leave for hospital
Maan is now tensed and scared at the same time and realizes that he did not even
give Geet a chance to talk instead he was very harsh on her .
Meera does seem like a trouble maker if Geet mum phoned she should have just said
that she'll get her to call back but it seems like she wants tension around all the time
Maan is extremely worried about Geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part. Now that the truth is out, Maan and all are feeling guilty. Waiting to see how Geet reacts now. She will be fine with everyone except Maan, I think. He didn't trust her and that would hurt Geet the most.
Thanks for pm.