AR FF- NORTH SOUTH KI KHATEE MEETHI LOVE STORIES (pg10-16/1/16) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
amazing part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
awesome part
as usual the part is fabulous loved it
I loved ae moment
love u little busy so is baar short comments se kaam chalana padega tujhe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

AFTER 2 MONTHS
IN MUMBAI

LETS peep into someones bedroom
waha ek ladka sofe apr ek taang upar aur ek taang neeche kar kai so raha hai aur dusri taraf ek ladki khilki kai paas single bed cum sofe par bethe bethe so rahi haiwith tears stricken face. fir dhoop ki kiran aati hai aur dono ki sukoon ki sleep barbaad kar rahi hai par kya sach mai yeh sukoon ki sleep hai yaa unki neend barbaad hi hai vi dhang sai soo hi nahi rahe.

the boy wakes up early (well for a change) hebyawns and after seeing teh angle sleepin like this with tears stricken face he felt a sudden pang in his heart bt he brushed off this feel.

he goes for a jog. when he comes back he is stunned to see her in asmaani rang salvaar suit with green mix(well fr a change noo red suit) after matriage he had not seen her in suit only in saree or casuals bt he was again frowened to think this...why she is doin this? well thay hv to go to mandir for some puja and all? why she is doin such drama? she dont need to go to this puja. he thought today as she told that today she has got letter for applying in hospital for work. why she is compromising her life for hus family and doin ehsaan. with this thought he frowned.
he said- why r udoin this
girk- no need to ans u and i wanna do this ..
boy- dont do a ehsaan to my family
girl- ur family r u crazy humari shasdi ho chuki hai aur ab meri bhi family hai so shut ur mouth and go fr a bath we need to go


IN A PLACE FAR FROM MUMBAI

LADY- kyun humaru zindagi main vapas aye ho
man- tum aaj jo bhi zinda ho meri vajah sai nhai toh vo bhi nhai hoti tab in sab ko kaun sambhalta
lady- kya chahiye tumhe
man- kuch nahi bas main vapas ghar a agaya huu
lady- itna toh mainbhi jaanti hoon tum kaise ho
man- itne ache sqi jaanti ho toh yeh bhi jaanto ho padma ki mujhe sirf apne ko tumhari zindagi mai vapaas dekhna hai
padma- tum...


AT SANJEEVNI MUMBAI
NIKKI- yaar jo hua nahi hona chahiye tha
RAHUL- Hmm bilkul bhi nahi sab ko kya ho gay ahai
RAJ- Hmm sab kuch jaise bikhar rah ahai
NIKKI- Yaa! bt tumhe nahi pata mai to dono taraf sai hoo
ATUL- Yar yeh hua kyon?
RAHUL- yeh toh unn logo kai aane kak baaata chalega
raj- haaa vaise bas kuch der baad sab yahin honge

In mandir
dono ladka aur ladki jaate hai puri family hotunhai vahan
pandit- beta kya naam hai tum dono ka
boy and girl- ARMAAN MALLIK , RIDHIMA ARMAAN MALLIK , respectively
OMG SHOCKED!!
pandit- aap dono ki jodi humesha salamat rahegi aur aapnek dusre sai bohut pyaar karte hai tabhi dekhiye aapne apne naam bhi ek saath bole
AR dono smile karte aur phir ek dusre ki taraf dekh jar daggers pass karte hai
pooja jo jati hai ab garib ko khaane kai liye de rahe hai.
armaan ridhima kai kaan mai bolta hai- aaj tumhari vajah sia mere ko inn puja vagarah sai pura vishwas hat gaya hai... agar yeh jo pandit kehte hai vo sach hota hai toh vonkya tha jo unhone aaj kaha
ridhima- tumhara kya matlab hai aur yaha logo ko kapde dene aye hai vo do aur baad mai baat karna
armaan- mujhe baat karni hai haaa mai kya keh raha tha...haan.. ki padit ji nai kaha ki hum dono ek dusre sai pyaar karte hai right bt yeh toh jhoot hai toh ab pakka yakin ki jo voh kehte hai vo sab sach nahin hota...
ridhima- tumhe jo karan hai, kehna hia karo mujhe kuch nahi sunna mere ki aaj apna mood theek rakhna hia..yeh keh kar ridhima chali jaati hai.

AT MALLIK MANSION

everyone in their room. ridhima kitchen sai saaf safai kar ke kamre aati hai jaise hi ati hai armaan closes the door and pinned her to the door and said - tum kyun kar rahi ho paise chahiye lai lo..
ridhima struggles- maine kaha mera mood mat kharab karo samjhe
armaan- meri baaton sai tumhara mood kharab jota hai? huuh!! tum jao...

vo chali jaati hai tayyar hoke apne hospital mai milne

armaan yeh dekh kar vahi usseke jaane kai baad darwaja band karta hai aur apna haath diwaar mai marta hai aur kehta hai- kyuun? aakhir kyun? he shouts in room kyuun? and goes to washroom and then to sanjeevni.

to be continued

hey guys pretty much shocked armaan ridhima ki marriage... dheere dheere sab pata chal jayega...next part sai flashback higa jisse pata chalega ki pichle do mahino mai kya hua...
With loads of love
Sanju ^_^

P.s. This part was penned down almost a year ago. I was very new to writing if u feel my writing a lil childish so do understand and critisize. ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the pm.
It was a nice and shocking part..
AR married...
Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Abe ar ki shaadi kab ho gyi??? 😲
shocking part awesome part loved it
so two months leap but aisa kya hua 2 months mein or ye padma ke saath kon tha
so much confusion
or ar yaar yeh ek dusre ka murder karne ko tayyar h shaadi
itni guess or nafrat kyn
jaldi jaldi update de confusion due kar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nice story...pm me fr ur future works
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 7 : AR FF North South ki khatee meethi love stories



sanjeevni, mumbai

armaan and ridhima in ridhima... ridhima auto sai utarti hai aur armaan bike sai ata hai
ridhima jaa hi rhai hoti hai ki armaan tez speed mai bike chala raha hota hia

ridhima- dekh kar nahi chal sakte andhe ho kya?

armaan apne helmet utarta hai and his eyes were bloodshot red.

ridhiam- ohh tum!! tum sia yehi expect kr sakte hai... while sayin this her eyes were lowered as her eyes were swollen and bloodshot red.



armaan pushed her behind the ambulence where no one can see her and pinned her- couldn't u speak slowly duniya kau saamne we r husband wife...

ridhima couldn'd control so straighten her face- saare ladke ek jaise hote hai... sab ko sirf jhoote rishte nibhane aate hai.

armaan was shocked to see her eyes as it shows how much she cried recently bt as he listened her sentence his anger again came and hands turned into fists...

armaan- tum!! tum mere baare mai aisa kaise... ; ( ... tumm samajhti kya ho... sab tumhari vajah sai hua meri vajah sai nahi...

ridhima zor sai- maine kissi ko blame nahi kiya...tum yeh baat mujhe bata rahe ho yaa khud ko samjha rahe ho..huuhh?

aur phir dono normal behave karte hue sanjeevni enter hote hai...

tabhi armaan ka frnd ata hai- yaar tune shaadi kar li aur bataya bhi nahi...
armaan- yaar tuuu tu yaha kaise i mean OMG tu sanjeevni mai...
person- haa bhai

armaan- sujal yaar tu aya aurmujhe bataya bhi nahi...

*****GUYS SUJAL IS RAJEEN KHANDELWAL YES YEH VOH KASHISH SUJAL VALA SUJAL I COULDN'T THINK OF SOMEONE EXCEPT HIM SOO... HE WILL BE CHARACTERIZEDIN THE STORY ..HOW!, U WILL CM TO KNOW... I CANT SAY I WILL BE ABLE TO CHARACTERIZE KASHISH BT AS PER THE COMMENTS IF YES THEN I'LL DEFENITELY TRY...SOO STORY KAI NAYE CHARACTERS EK TOH YEH HAI AUR DUSRA...HMMM U'LL GET TO KNOW AS STORY MOVES FURTHER .*****


now story cont...
sujal- tuyaha hota tabhi batata lekin tu toh dosto kai liye busy ho gaya...
armaan- yaar...
then announcement was made soo sujal went...

AR DECIDED TO GO TO CANTEEN

as they were going to canteen dono jaise hi canteen ke darwaje pai rukte hai ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur ek smile plasticise a smile...
vo andar jaate hai or nikita aakar ridzi ho hug kar leti hai ...armaan ko bohut bura lagta hai
ki nikki nai usse nahi ridz ko hug kiya...
nikki- ridzi..kaisi hai...aur yeh sab kaise gua sab kuch...yaaar
ridz- nikki jo hua so ho gya..honi ko koi nahi taal sakta...
rahul- hugs armaan...yaar yeh sab kaise, kab ,kahaa...kuch time pehle tak toh sab theek tha...
armaan- shaanti rakho sab bataenge...

ridz- hmmm bilkul sahi kaha chalo araam sai beth kar baatate hai
armaan- thank god ki abhi toh meri baat sahi lagi...vaise agar saare
adke ek jaise hai toh main

ridz- shut up!! armaan..bohut ho gqya jab bhi mai normal hone ki koshish karti hu toh tum!...
armaan - he cuts haaan meri hi galti hai...main bolta hu toh humesha galat hota hoo...vaise agar saare ladke ek jaise hote hai toh abhi bhi toh ladka hai...atul, raj, rahul hhi toh hai...tumhara vhai bhi toh ladka hai...vaise yeh saare ladke ek jaise sai kya ki sab tumhare paapa jaise nahi hai sab unse different hai yeh uss line ka matlab ki saare

adke ek jaise hote hai... hearing this she rushed out to the fire escape...
hearing all this nikki knows everything sooo she and abhi u hvjust entered the canteen of sanjeevni, mumbai as he xame directly from airport..,...both shouted
nikki and abhi- armaan!! stop it!

atul sees the canteen crowd soo he askedthem all to mv out to the outside of sanjeevni...
abhi comes and hold armaans collar and said teri himmat kaise hui riddhu ko itna sab kehne ki...seeingvthis atul, rahul, and raj rushed to abhi and pulling him off armaan bt he pushed them all
abhi- chodo mujhe...teri toh aur tum sab pointing towards atu, rahul,raj duur raho nahi tph aaj mera haath sab par uth jayega

nikki saw all this ruckuss and pulled abhi- paagal ho gaye ho kya...tum log sirf apne frnds apne life apne baare main soch rahe ho kya kabhi kisi nai ridz kai point of view sai socha? balki kya kissi ko sab kuch pata hai abt ridz behavior lije this amd armaan kya tumhe kuch pata hai why she says this line...huh!! jab kuch naa pata ho toh dont sai any thing...ridz kabhi bhi diperession mai jaa sakti hai iff u guys dont stop this all non sense...

armaan- sachsachsach...kaisa sach aaj mujhe sab sach batao..
nikki- ridhu ko kuch vaqt do and when she will start believing u she will tell by herself...
vaise vo hai kaha...
nikki thinks and then a flash back comes and she shouts
nikki- ohhh! nooo! shit! W*F**K...

TO BE CONT...
Prms Update Tom.
heyaa guys
m again back with this part...
plss like and cmnt
I know its boring ...i prms to make it more interesting
love
sanju
#MaiCo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PM SENT

GUYS NOTE THAT THIS ALL WAS WRITTEN LONG BACK AND I WAS AMATURE WRITER.
AS THE TIME PASSES YOU WILL GET UPDATED IN BETTER WRITING STYLE. ^_^

HOPE U WILL LIKE IT

CMNT, LIKE PLSS...!!!

WITH LOVE
SANJU

PS: THIS UPDATE IS SPECIALLY DEDICATED TO PS.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Read till here now
awesome plot
and gud going sanju
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
new part finally
hmm it was nice
I hate armaan behavior
he is behaving like a jerk
I don't know ki kya hua y they got married but ridhz me saath jis tarah se behave kar rha use taunt kar rha h it's wrong idiot
or ye last me kya hua?
yaar I confused abt this track
jaldi jaldi post kar taki kuch clear ho

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