Hum aapke hain kaun version2 last part pg120 Maaneet Samud SS - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update 😊
Saras and Kumud moment's were lovely, Kumud really worried Saras by pretending to be angry, loved their mehendi and sangeet, Geet jealous of Pari... and then maneet's dance 😉❤️
Edited by christi002 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update so maaneet decided to give the couple some romantic time alone they had their own fun of romance alone while sasras and kumud where enjoying their time alone maaneet had dinner at a dhaba and had a woderful time of their own kumuds mehnedi fuction maan dancing with pari making geet jealous which maan seemed to enjoy a lot he did dance with her a sizzlng dance they made kumud saras dance and thus the mehendi sangeet fuction ended with a bang
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome characteristics dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 1
Was awesome dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful
Maan eat raw green chilli

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hum aapke hain kaun Part 4


Thank u so much 4 the awesome response

Saras and Kumud had a grand wedding.

Rano:Our daughter looks beautiful.Right?
Mohindar:Yes,she looks more beautiful now as she is holding the hands of the person she loves the most.
They smiled.



Saras and Maan realized that their shoes are missing,
Saras:Where are the shoes?
Maan:Bhabhi...definitely it's stolen by your sister Geet.
Kumud was embarrassed.
Saras:Take it easy Maan.It's a part of the ceremony.
M:I will come now.
Maan went away.




Geet bumped into Maan.
M:Did you take our shoes?
Geet smirked:Yes.
M:Return them.

G:Ok.But in return give us money.
Geet's friends laughed watching it.
M: No way.
G:Then don't think you will get the shoes back.
M:For your kind information,my shoes are with me only.

G:Don't lie.I had taken your shoes too.
M:You had taken my shoes also.But I got inside the store room and took it back.
G:What?
M:If you have any doubt you check.
Geet went to the store room and checked the places where she kept the shoes.
G:These shoes are here only.
She checked the other place where she kept shoes.It was empty.
G:One set is missing.How did it disappear?
She moved out of her room.Maan was smirking standing outside the room.
G:Don't smile too much.One set is still with me.Must be Saras jeejaji's.
M:Return those shoes.
G:First you return the shoes you took.

Their argument was supported by each one's group of friends.

M: Dulhe kee saliyo o hare dupatte valiyo
Jute de do paise lelo... (2)

G:Dulhan ke devar tum dikhalao naa yuun tevar
Paise dedo jute lelo... (2)

They danced and argued with the support of their group.


Ajee note gino jee jute lao, jid chhodho jee jute lao
Fraud hain kya ham tum hee jano
Akadu ho tum jo bhee mano, jo bhi mano, jo bhi mano
Ajee bat badhegee badh jane do, mang chadhegee chadh jane do
Adho naa aise pehle jute, pehle jute pehle jute
Jute liye hain nahee churaya koyee jevar
Dulhan ke devar tum dikhlao naa yuun tevar
Paise dedo jute lelo, jute dedo paise lelo



Finally Geet followed Maan secretly and found the place where he hid the shoes.She went there silently and was about to take them.Suddenly she was stunned to see Maan taking .the shoes back.
G:You?

M:I knew that you will come to steal them.
G:I will get the shoes back.
Maan started running.Geet chased him.Geet slipped and fell upon Maan.They rolled over each each other and Maan was on top of Geet.They shared an eye lock.Coming back to senses they broke their eye lock.
Geet found it difficult to face him after their intimate moment.She moved away to go out of the room.Suddenly he held her hand and pulled her closer.To get balance she held him tight.
M:How can you go like that accepting the defeat so easily?It does'nt suit you.You are a Mirchi,

He gave her the shoes back:I accept my defeat.
She smiled and took it from him.
G:I also accept my defeat.
M:What?
G:Sometimes we need to accept our defeat.
She returned him the shoes smiling.
M:You are not angry?
G:No.I did it for fun and I had fun.
He smiled and took the shoes back from him.

Geet returned the shoes to Saras:Sorry jeejaji.I just did it for fun.
Saras:Why sorry?It's for fun only.Anyways I am giving you money.
He took a note from his pocket and gave her:I gave you money.Now I can take my shoes back courageously.
Geet giggled:Nothing like that jeejaji.I just threatened for a joke to give money to get the shoes back.
S:But this is for my happiness and joy.
G:No jeejaji.Please.I can't take this money.
Saras and Kumud smiled.

Pari:Now I have to leave.Otherwise I will miss the flight.
Avantika:Ok Pari.Have a nice journey.And thank you so much for sparing time to come here?
P:Why thanks aunty?I am also a part of this family.Why should you thank me for attending my own family function?
Geet got restlessness.She thought:Pari a part of the Khurana family?Does that mean she is engaged to Maan?
Maan:I will miss you Pari.
P:Me too Maan.
Geet felt jealousy.
M:When is your next visit?
P:When you get married I will definitely come to attend your wedding.Promise.


Bye.
M:Bye.
Pari left.
Geet's face glittered with relief.She thought:That means Pari and Maan are just friends.

Departure time came and Kumud hugged Mohindar,Rano and Geet and wept.

Babul jo tumne sikhaya jo tum se paya
Sajan ghar le chalee... (2)
Sajan ghar mai chalee
Yado ke lekar saye chalee ghar paraye
Tumharee ladlee...

Harish:Mohindar...Rano...Don't worry about Kumud.She is the Lakshmi of our house and we will shower all our love and affection on her.
Avantika:Yes.Now onwards Kumud is our daughter.God has given us a daughter later.So she is very much special for us.

Mohindar:We know that very well.That's why we are sending our daughter there.
Rano:But we will miss her.
Avan:Rano...when ever you feel like seeing Kumud you just come to our house.
Mohindar and Rano smiled through tears in their eyes.

They all bid bye and got inside the car.
Maan whispered to Geet:Whatever I did was a part of wedding fun.Please don't take it seriously.Sorry if I hurt you in between.

G:No Maan.I was not at all hurt.I really enjoyed it.
They smiled.
M:Bye.
G:Bye.
Maan got inside the car and it left.

Saras Kumud had a nice grah pravesh.
Maan whispered in Saras' ears:Have a nice first night.Hope after the date Geet and I arranged you both have become little more bolder.
Saras blushed.Saras Kumud walked to their room.
When Saras and Kumud reached their decorated bedroom they were blushing.
She looked down due to shyness.
S:Kumud!
Kum:Saras...

His hand passed from her palm to her face.

Ang Laga De Re
Mohe Rang Laga De Re





He lifted up her chin softly.

Ang Laga De Re
Mohe Rang Laga De Re



They both shared a passionate eye lock.


Saras carried her in his arms to the bed.

Main To Teri Joganiya
Tu Jog Laga De Re



He placed her on the bed and sat close to her.
He kept looking at her.
Kum:Why are you looking at me like this Saras as if my face changed?

S:Your face has not changed.But I am admiring your beauty which I always craved to look at like this.Now you are near me and pamper you any time.
She blushed.
Ram Ratan Dhan
Lagan Magan Man
Tan Mora Chandan Re
Ujli Kori Preet Pyaasat
Rang Laga De Re
Slowly he removed her ornaments one by one and showered love on her.

Raat Banjar Si Hai
Kaale Khanjar Si Hai
Tere Seene Ki Lau
Mere Andar Bhi Hai
Tu Hawa De Ise
To Mera Tan Jale

Their bare bodies got tied to each other in eternal passionate love.
Ram Ratan Dhan
Lagan Magan Man
Tan Mora Chandan Re
Ram Ratan Dhan
Lagan Magan Man
Tan Mora Chandan Re
(Ram Leela).


Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear kummud and saras completed and there found that there shoes are missing Mann caught geet and asked she stolen they shows she says yes and there argue to get back and fun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update 👏
Thank you beforehand for the pm you will be sending 😃
Eager for the next part

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