SwaSan SS - Forever Yours! Part10 Pg47 04.01.16 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
will do😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Nice story Manshi.. Curious to know the past.. You created the mistry so well.. Continue soon and do PM me.

Thank you so much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice update yaar. I loved the past cockroach scene. Then their honeymoon plan. Present lucky he got his Bro n friend back in his life. Wow here raglak is positive. What happened y she was even rude towards her mother. Continue soon. Please

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Awesome update Manasi 👏
Woho Sanskar is finally going to meet his daughter 😳 Laksh is not bad here haan 😆
The cockroach moment was super cute Aww ❤️ LOL Pari bhabhi 😆 Kuch aur hi samajh liya 😛
I was quite shocked to see Swara's cold behaviour towards her mom but the she kinda deserved that because she didn't accept her and her unborn daughter at that time 😕
Update soon 😳


Thank you soo much for the comment Preet yes the situations in her past has hardened her soul😳
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I have replied to everyone individually this time... Thanks for your supports guys.. hope you all like this part... I think most of you will guess what the next part is going to be... Not taking much of your time... here's the update

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Forever Yours!

Part 5


Flashback

At Mumbai

"Sanskaar kya hum please kahi ghumne chal sakte hai?" "Swara I have a meeting in 15 minutes but after the meeting be ready I'll take you out for dinner, Okay?" Swara pouted sulkingly but nodded and Sanskaar left for his meeting. Swara had three hours to kill before Sanskaar would return so she started choosing a saree and jewellery to wear.


Sanskaar had just returned from his meeting and was hell tired. So many people had objected that him being so young should not lead them but then finally he had convinced them but he was so drained physically. Just then Swara came out of the washroom donning a pretty white net saree with gold border and matching gold jewellery. Sanskaar could not take his eyes off her his eyes burning with an intensity that made Swara blush and look down. Sanskaar went upto her putting his finger under her chin he made her face him her round pretty eyes staring at him with the same intensity. Sanskaar was the first one to snap out of it.


"Swara can you wait here for me, I'll just freshen up and be back" Swara smiled and nodded.


Sanskaar had worn the clothes Swara had selected for him which matched her outfit which made Swara immensely happy to which Sanskaar thought I hope this smile always remains on her face'


"Chale?" Sanskaar asked putting his hand forward as if asking for permission and bowed his head. Swara giggled and nodding she put her delicate hand in his firm one and they left for their first outing as man & wife.


The restaurant at which Sanskaar had made booking was an elegant one in a totally classic style. Swara was beaming with excitement. They were seated in the private section of the hotel and were handed the menu.


"Errr.. tumhe chahiye toh tum Non-Veg order kar sakti ho" Sanskaar told her but his nose scrunched up.


Swara smiled at that and thought his gesture to be cute "Nahi hum veg hi khate hai, vaise bhi I like vegetarian food more than non-vegetarian, Dida humesha kehti thi ki mujhe ek Vegetarian ke ghar paida hona chahiye tha" thinking about her family made her eyes numb with water. Sanskaar gently wiped of the tears that were beginning to form in her eyes and stroking her cheeks said, "Don't worry Swara sab theek ho jayega let's just give it some time" Swara leaned on his palm and smiling she nodded at him.


They were non-stop chatting till their food arrived using the opportunity to get to know each other better. They ate their food in silence and complete contentment. After the dinner on their way back to the hotel they were staying in Swara noticed a beach.


"Sanskaar look a beach, please let's go I love beaches" she said pointing towards the beach. Sanskaar asked the driver to stop the car. Swara went running towards the water opening her arms to the sea water enjoying the wave of water and air mixing together. Sanskaar smiled at her since their wedding this was the first time he had seen her smile without any restrictions and her happiness brought a smile to his face too.


Kya isko pyaar kehte hai uski khushi mein khush hone, uske dard par dard hona, but itni jaldi.. nahi mujhe thoda aur time chahiye' shaking his head Sanskaar just let go of his thoughts and went upto Swara. Swara just hugged him tightly


"Thank you, thank you sooo much Sanskaar I know you dint have to bring me here with you could have given some bahana but you din't thank you" Sanskaar wanted to stay in that bliss forever but as luck would have it, it started raining hard and they both had to run for shelter. Seeing Swara shiver he removed his jacket and made her wear it over her saree Swara being grateful for that thanked him.


After the rain stopped they returned back to the hotel.


"Swara tum room mein jao I'll just be back in a while"


Sanskaar was heading towards the manager to tell him arrange for some surprise for Swara but he banged with someone on his way, he bent to pick up the phone and noticed the person who ruined him in front of him.


"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"


Kavita looked at him passionately stroking his face. "Baby main tumhare liye hi toh yaha aayi hoon, Room no. 606" she winked and left.


Sanskaar was super angry at seeing that woman again so instead of going to his room he went to the bar.


In the Room


"Yeh Sanskaar abhi tak aaya kyu nahi yeh?! Main change karke unhe dhundhne jaati hoon" she was about to go into the washroom when someone knocked at the door. Swara quickly rushed to see who was knocking. When she opened the door a very drunk Sanskaar stumbled into the room.


"Sanskaar, are you drunk? Tum theek ho na?" but instead of responding he stroked her face gently making Swara sigh in pleasure.


"Swara main iss rishte ko aage badhana chata hoon, kya tum bhi isse ek mauka dogi?"


Present


"Chachu aap yaha, where is Ragini Masi" Sanskriti ran and hugged Lakshya, Sanskaar felt a tinge of jealousy, his daughter does not even know him where as she was so comfortable with his brother.


"Beta Masi has gone to doctor na, so I came to pick up my princess from her school today" and kissed her cheek. "Beta you remember that day you asked me to bring your father and I promised you that I will " when Sanskriti nodded Lakshya continued "I have brought him with me" And the expression on her face was of pure joy.


She faced Sanskaar and hugged is knees "I missed you sooo much Pappa, where were you didn't you miss me?!" Tears started flowing from Sanskaar's eyeshe picked her up and gently wiped off her tears


"Beta Pappa loves you sooo much but he had go somewhere but now I am back na I will never ever leave you, I promise."


"Pinky promise?" she stretched forwards her pinky finger Smiled and nodded "Pinky Promise beta" and placed a soft kiss on the top of her.


Sanskaar took Sanskriti home with him, they played for hours Sanskriti told him about his letters she receives on her each birthday


hmmm letters, so Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheswari enough of this suspense it's time we meet I want my answers' Sanskaar thought.


"Pappa next week is my annual day function, I am going to sing will you come?" she asked hopefully.


"Sanskaar placed a kiss on her forehead, "Ofcourse I will beta but beta promise me you won't tell your mother about our meeting"


"Pinky promise papa" Sanskriti promised.


Sanskaar dropped her off to Lakshya's place promising a happy Sanskriti to meet her everyday after school.


I know some you might feel that this update was rushed if you feel so I apologize... this part was I dont know why but very difficult for me to write..

Please do leave your valuable feedbacks

Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Manasi 😊. Nice update. It was so good seeing the slow development of feelings between SwaSan in the past. But I think you have given a hint of the seeds of their future seperation in this chapter huh? Would Kavita now claim Sanskaar consummated with Swara only coz he was drunk? Or that he spent some time with her before...😡
Sanskaar's interaction with Sanskriti was heartwarming. Waiting for your next chapter. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Manasi 😊. Nice update. It was so good seeing the slow development of feelings between SwaSan in the past. But I think you have given a hint of the seeds of their future seperation in this chapter huh? Would Kavita now claim Sanskaar consummated with Swara only coz he was drunk? Or that he spent some time with her before...😡

Sanskaar's interaction with Sanskriti was heartwarming. Waiting for your next chapter. 😊


Thank you Viji! I had a feeling that this might come off as a rushed one but then because this is a short story I had to move a little fast with this one😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey manasi...nice ud dear..waiting for day when swara and sanskar meet...wonderfull story..love swasan scene..👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hey manasi...nice ud dear..waiting for day when swara and sanskar meet...wonderfull story..love swasan scene..👏👏


Thank you Hon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Your story is brewing like filter coffee Manasie, slow but the aroma of love and suspense it is spreading. Come on give me the next update, I am sooo waiting for the confrontation of SwaSan and how the discussion about this love child will happen.

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