SwaSan SS - Forever Yours! Part10 Pg47 04.01.16 - Page 9

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Forever Yours!

Part 4


FLASHBACK

Since it was already night time the Maheshwari's stayed back in their family cottage after dinner all had settled down in their rooms. Sanskaar was laying on the bed his hand under his head and was lost in his thoughts. Swara had changed into her night wear and washed off all the makeup and had just stepped out of the washroom when she spotted a cockroach on the side table "aaahhh" she screamed and jumped on the bed this jerked Sanskaar out of his thoughts.


Swara by mistake stepped on his fingers and fell over him with a oommpphh. Swara was lost in his eyes she could just not move her eyes off him their faces just inches apart, Sanskaar's lips parted ever so slightly which involuntarily made Swara lick her lips seeing this Sanskaar could not control his raging hormones anymore. Their lips brushed so lightly that even they could not understand if there had been any kiss at all or not. A sudden knock on the door knocked them back into their senses.
"Swara..." "Ji bhabhi aayi..." Swara quickly got up and went to open the door.
"Swara tum theek ho na? Tumhare chillane ki awaz aayi toh..."


"Woh bhabhi... bhabhi wooh main" still reeling with the fact that she had almost kissed her husband she could answer. Pari looked at the state of their bed and started blushing "Rehne do Swara main samaj gayi... continue continue" "Aare bhabhi aisa kuch nai..." but before she could complete the sentence a laughing Pari left the room.


"Kya kar kya rahi thi tum aise giri mujhe pe" "voh me cockroach..." suddenly she remember the cockroach and again screaming she jumped on the bed. Sanskaar just looked at his crazy wife confused at her behaviour 'women' he muttered.


"Sanskaar voh waha cockroach please usse bhagao" she pointed at the cockroach and Sanskaar started laughing at Swara. 'Achha bachu tum mujhpe hass rahe ho.. ruko tume abhi mazza chakhati hoon' "aaahhh Sanskaar tumhare pichhe chua aaahhh" Sanskaar's eyes widened and quicjly tried to climb on the bed but his leg got stuck and he fell on Swara but this time instead of being awkward they both bursted with laughter, the cockroach forgotten.


After all the lughter subsided Sanskaar got up from that position and laid besides Swara both lost in their thoughts "Sanskaar" Swara called out. "Hmmm" came his reply. "Friends?" She extended her hand towards him Sanskaar smiled at her and caught her hand and stated "friends"

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"Tumhe unn dono ko kuch bhi katne alag karna hoga"
"Isme mera kya faayda?!" The other person said feigning disinterest. "Tumhe paisa bohot pasand hai! Tumhe tumari muh maangi kimat milegi" the other person smiled at this "Done" ab dono kabhi ek nahi ho payenge." Both smiled and left.

Next morning at the dining table there was a lot of chit chat going on when Durga Prasad Maheshwari interrupted them "Sanskaar beta do din baad tumhe Mumbai jana hai investors se meeting ke liye" "Bhaisaa kyu na iske saath Swara bahu ko bhi bheej de taki inn dono ka honeymoon bhi ho jave" Sujata interjected. Swara and Sanskaar started blushing. "Haa theek hai parso tum dono Mumbai jao meeting sirf 2-3 ghante ki hai par dono 4-5 din waha rukk jao" Durga Prasad stated with finality there was no declining his decision. "Okay Bade Papa" Sanskaar said. They all finished their breakfast and left for home.
"Swara voh muje office mein kuch kaam hai mujhe aane mein late hoga tum sab properly pack karlo hum raat ko flat mein shift karenge" Sanskaar informed her. "Woh.. woh.. kya hum yaha nai reh sakte?" Swara pleaded it was already becoming difficult for hee to control her new growing affections for her husband and she and her big mouth she had already promised him that she would file for divorce after 6 months but she didn't know how would she stop her feelings from growing if she had to stay with him alone.
"voh flat hi mera ghar hai Swara aur meri patni hone ke rishtey se ab voh tumhara ghar bhi hai" he stated. "Par..." but Sanskaar continued "kya tum meri koi baat bina behas ke nai maan sakti?" He said a little to loudly and harshly. Swara lowered her head and mumbled an Okay but as soon as he saw her face fall he was already feeling too bad for shouting at her but he wanted to put some distance in between them he could not understand the attraction between them so he just left from there without acknowledging her apology or her hurt feelings.


PRESENT


Swara and Sansksriti were coming back home from school. Sanskriti was unanimatedly talking about her day at school and Swara was listenig to her with a smile playing in her lips. "Beta we need to go to the bazaar first, lets go" Sanskriti smiled wildly at her and both went towards the market place. The market place was filled with so much crowd, Swara's hold on her daughter's hand tightened. "Baby stay close to mamma okay?! And don't leave mamma's hand" when Sanskriti nodded they went ahead for some grocery shopping.


After almost 45 minutes Swara was finally done with her grocery shopping they were about to leave the market place when she banged with someone. "Umm...sorr..." she bit back her apology when she saw who was the person standing opposite to her.


"Swara beta kaisi ho tum?! Kaha thi? 5 saalo se na koi phone, email kuch nai" Sharmishtha Garodia asked her daughter not being able to control her bubbling happiness at seeing her daughter after so long. She stepped ahead to embrace her daughter in her motherly warmth but shocking her Swara took a step back and a look of coldness spread on her face.

"Kaun hai aap, Madam? Kya main apko janti hoon?" she asked coolly. Sharmistha was shocked to receive such coldness from her dear daughter she had missed so much. "Beta please main janti hoon ki maine tumhare saath bahot bura kiya hai lekin main tumhari maa hoon aur..." but Swara quickly interrupted her.

"Excuse me Mrs. Sharmishtha Garodia but you are no mother of mine my died the day she refused to accept me and my unborn child into her house" "Its no more Mrs.Garodia now I am Ms. Sharmishtha Bose, the day I had to behave so coldly with you I decided enough is enough and I left your Baba for good" she quickly mumbled she silently pleaded with her eyes for her daughter to understand her helplessness at that time.

"Sorry for your lose Ms. Bose but now I more need you in my life and my daughter is my only world and don't worry I'll be a better mother to her than you ever were for me your daughters for you were only your pawns to diversify your business. I can only hope you have learned your lesson well Goodbye." And she left from there along with her daughter both of them had tears in their eyes.

Outside Maheshwari Office

"Acha suniye Mr. Bakshi main important kaam se jaa raha hoon ab office siddha kal aaunga" Sanskaar informed his manager and left the office premises. Just as he reached the parking lot he saw a familiar person standing next to his car, he rushed towards that person and hugged him tightly "Lucky..." was the only thing he said. It was reunion for both the brothers they had been the best of friends since forever but since the day Lucky ran away from his wedding they hadn't seen each other's face.

"Tu yaha kya kar raha hai Lucky?" Sanskaar was curious. "Bhai main tujhe teri beti ke paas leke jaane aaya hoon" Lakshya said now grinning widely. "Tujhe... tujhe bhi pata hai iske bare mein?"

Lakshya looked down he couldn't meet his brothers eyes "Sorry voh bhai Swara ko New York main hi leke gaya tha maine use pucha bhi tha kya hua lekin she just said ki please mujhe yaha se jana hai main uski halat nahi dekh paya aur usse New York bhej diya aur use settle karra ke main aur Ragini waapis India aa gaye"

"Lekin tu kabhi ghar kyu nahi aaya Lucky?" "Main aaya tha bhai tap aap aur Swara Mumbai gaye the. Papa ne mujhe aur Ragini ko apnane se mana kar diya aur hum chup chap vaha se chale gaye doobara kabhi mud ke nahi dekh vaise bhai bahot ho gayi sad baate, excited to meet your daughter?" Lucky asked with a goofy smile on his face.


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Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Manasi😊
I don't know about Sanskar but I am super excited to see him meeting his daughter and wife. It will be explosive I guess. I like your Ragya...wait...I'm kind of starting to ship them too😳
That cockroach was god sent, it had almost got its job done😉 but Pari bhabhi had to come...well never mind...it initiated the friendship...maybe we'll have a rat next time😆
I seriously love the way you mix dark with light, the gloomy present and the sparkling past. It has a unique charm there. Can't wait to read further...please update sooon.
PS: thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting update, Manasi..😊 So Shomi had been forced to turn away Swara when she landed up back at her parental home. But why she felt compelled to leave when she was pregnant...and who are these 2 people plotting to separate Swara and Sanskaar...very mysterious! 😉

You have paced this story very well, with a healthy dose of suspense, and your flow from past to the present, explaining both, is very smooth. It never seems jarring.

Waiting for your next update.

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Manasi😊

I don't know about Sanskar but I am super excited to see him meeting his daughter and wife. It will be explosive I guess. I like your Ragya...wait...I'm kind of starting to ship them too😳
That cockroach was god sent, it had almost got its job done😉 but Pari bhabhi had to come...well never mind...it initiated the friendship...maybe we'll have a rat next time😆
I seriously love the way you mix dark with light, the gloomy present and the sparkling past. It has a unique charm there. Can't wait to read further...please update sooon.
PS: thanks for the PM😊


Thank you soo much Sakura.. your comment made my day!! yes the present right now is too much sad but no worries dono ko milne do there will sparks flying everywhere... next time there will be something hot☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very interesting update, Manasi..😊 So Shomi had been forced to turn away Swara when she landed up back at her parental home. But why she felt compelled to leave when she was pregnant...and who are these 2 people plotting to separate Swara and Sanskaar...very mysterious! 😉

You have paced this story very well, with a healthy dose of suspense, and your flow from past to the present, explaining both, is very smooth. It never seems jarring.

Waiting for your next update.

---Viji


Thank you soo much Viji! one of the two people plotting against them is quite obvious and for the other person I have been dropping hints here and there.. thank you for your lovely comments😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Mannu
ye cockroaches humesha hero heroine ko paas late hai 😆
Wonder who were those two who separated SwaSan
one seems Kavita other?
SanLak reunion 👏
hope SwaSan comes face to face 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

Awesome update Mannu
ye cockroaches humesha hero heroine ko paas late hai 😆
Wonder who were those two who separated SwaSan
one seems Kavita other?
SanLak reunion 👏
hope SwaSan comes face to face 😳


Thanks Mish😳 I think they might come face to face in part 6 or maybe part 5 only mood aya toh😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you😳
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Mannu aaj login Karne ke baad read ur update only first .. Lovely update .. U r an amazing story writer .

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