Char Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai (Part 6 on Pg 38) 28th Nov - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kras

O di

I so so so loved it
Superb update



thnx reetika😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Lol, these two are so cute!!

Love their little roothna manana techniques. The way they forced an I love You out of each other was really adorable😆
Must say this is a really unique way to carry this story forward! Rushing to read the IKNMP now😊



Thnx a lot Neeti! Its good to see that readers r liking this concept😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnx mayraa😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

Maanvir you always disappear and come after a very long time. Yaar I'm waiting for the update ... come back soon!


Ooops...sorry...bt id tym i am back early...

An updt waiting fr u below😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: riYa09guPta

Hiii...

Awesome and lovely story...
Actually maine aap sab ki saari stories
ek silent reader k taur pr padhi hai pr kabhi bhi
comment nhi kiya..."nd i'm really sorry for that "
abse try krngi har update pr comment karne ki
Coming to update
IHSRA awww... they are damn cute...
loved their whatsapp nok-jhok and romance...
it was so funny ...i just can't stop laughing

"Ab tum maza lo .Raat ko aake saza dunga"
(hum bhi isi intezar me hai )

aapki jitni bhi tareef karo kam hai ...

Waiting for the next part... update soon
and also update TMKSJNS...PLZZZ

CHAAR KADAM" SAFAR ABHI JAARI HAI"
bhagwan kare ye safar unhi chalta rahe...





Hey Riya!

Welcome to the gang dear...

Thnk u so much fr breaking ur silence n cmntng on the story...
Stay blessed

Hope to c u regularly on my threads...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Passengers!
I see that u all are enjoying the ride and so I am back early dis tym. Pankhuriji ki kripa se🤗

Now time for a confession😉

Shayad duniya me ye pehli baar ho raha hai ke write khud apni writing ki tareef kare. U see k yahan pe ishita Raman k novel ki tareef karti hai but real me to mai khud apni hi story ki tareef kar rahi hun.
And believe me ye mere liye sabse mushkil chunauti hai.
Isliye maine decide kiya hai ke mai IKNMP pe aap logon ke cmnts ko churaungi aur unhe yahan chipka dungi...
I hope u ppl dnt mind...U dnt hv an option either😆

That's it!

Now gear up to explore the IshRa land.

PS: Part dedicated to all those who commented on IKNMP
PSS: CC stands for Comment Credit



Part 3



Ishita's POV


Awww...So so beautiful! Such a stress buster absolutely marvellous.
(CC: Umeirah)


Mihika Ishita convo was the most relatable thing in this update and i loved every bit of it...totally real and original types
(CC: Pankhuri)


ishita ko laga ki raman ne nahin pehchana. .Han!
Aaisa kabhi hosakta hai koi RKB ko thappad mare aur
usse uss ka chehra bhi yaad na rahe. ...
...par shukar hai phir se jhagda nahin kiya. ..
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The way he kept rubbing his left cheek!
Ishu ne toh chief guest ko thappad maara.. lol! Hope we get a scene in the future where usi cheek pe Ishu usko kissy de de, as compensation😉
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Ab dono partners to ban hi gaye hai...jald hi friends bhi ban jayenge...
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Ishu tu bhi na...ab khud hi gun gaati rahegi ya Raman ko bhi batayegi ke chapter kaisa laga...I smacked my head n reached for my phone.



Ummm...Message karun ya call karun?
Chalo call hi kar deti hoon...


Raavan Kumar ko bahut sataya hai aaj...Abhi thoda khush bhi kar doon...

'Bin pooche mera naam aur pata...Rasmon ko rakh kar pare' I heard Raman's phone singing inside the room.


'Raman ka phone yahan kaise baj raha hai? Phone to wo apne sath le gaye the'

A surprise awaited for me in the form of man himself who was supporting his on the dresser by his elbow and watching me intently with a lop-sided smile.


Strange that it sent shivers down my spine even today. I blushed and then squirmed and then composed myself and then interroagted him

"Aap kab aye?"



"Tabhi jab tum novel ke Raman aur Ishita me khoyi hui thi"



"To mujhe bataya kyun nahi?" I accused.



"Kyunki mai apni Ishita me khoya hua tha" he smiled dreamily.



"Kuchh bhi"



"Is kucch bhi keliye kuch bhi" he winked admitting that he could do anything to hear a kuchh bhi from me.


I blushed gloriously.



"Kasam Khuda ki qayamat lage tera ye sharmana" he quoted the lines of his shayri that he had sung in my praise on my Mission Payback date.



"Ab bas bhi karo" I said not being able to handle his overtly romantic antics.


"Dosh mera nahi hai. Biwi itni lajwab mili hai to jazbaat khud hi umad kar bahar aa jate hain" he said coming closer and kissing my cheek.


"Itna Karo Naa Mujhe Pyaar" I said returning the favour.


"Kaisa laga?" he asked.


"Kya Raman? Kaisa laga hoga? Apko jaisa laga waisa hi laga" I said.


"Oh Madrasan. Mai kiss ki nahi Novel ki baat kar raha hun"


"Hawww Ravan Kumar. Khud romance pe break lagate ho aur mujhe kehte rehte ho ke mai Romance ko samajhti hi nahi" I folded my hands around the chest in mock anger. Well that was my trick to escape the embarrassment of misunderstanding his question.😉



"Drama Queen! Janta hun tumhari chaal. Ab nautanki band karo aur batao ke chapter kaisa laga?"


Mai ser to mere pati sava ser. Ek jhatke me meri trick pehchan li.
Koi nahi...Aap sava ser to mai dhai (2 and a half) ser...
Mai b itni jaldi haar nahi maanungi...


"Theek hi tha bas...Kuch khaas nahi" I said trying my very best to sound genuine.


"Oh really?" he said his face loosing the colour.



"Ab kya bolun? Waise to mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi aya. Bas apka dil rakhne keliye keh diya ke theek tha" I exaggerated.



"Oh...I see" he looked very upset.


It was getting difficult to put on a straight face. But I was not giving up so easily.


"Koi baat nahi Raman. Itna upset mat ho. Ho jata hai kabhi kabhi. Zaruri nahi ke har baar apki writing achhi hi ho. Koi baat nahi. Seekh jaoge aap" I fake comforted him.


"You are right Ishita. I have to learn so many things just like I am learning from you now to put a straight face" he said with a smirk.


"Kya bol rahe ho Raman? Mai samjhi nahi" I feigned ignorance.


"Achhha? Nahi samjhi? Koi baat nahi. Abhi samjhata hun" he said and got busy in his phone.



"Kya kar rahe ho Raman?" I asked impatiently.



"Ek minute" he said.


My phone notified me of a Video from Ravan Kumar. I quirked my eyebrows and he signalled me to check the video.


From the thumbnail I could guess that it was a video of mine. The dress and the hairstyle told me that the video was taken today. But when? I wondered.

I hit the download button and looked at him questioningly. By the time the video downloaded he was sitting by my side and then he hit the play button.


"Awww...So so beautiful! Such a stress buster absolutely marvellous.

Mihika Ishita convo was the most relatable thing in this update and i loved every bit of it...totally real and original types

ishita ko laga ki raman ne nahin pehchana. .Han!
Aaisa kabhi hosakta hai koi RKB ko thappad mare aur
usse uss ka chehra bhi yaad na rahe. ...
...par shukar hai phir se jhagda nahin kiya. ..

The way he kept rubbing his left cheek!
Ishu ne toh chief guest ko thappad maara.. lol! Hope we get a scene in the future where usi cheek pe Ishu usko kissy de de, as compensationWink

Ab dono partners to ban hi gaye hai...jald hi friends bhi ban jayenge...

Ishu tu bhi na...ab khud hi gun gaati rahegi ya Raman ko bhi batayegi ke chapter kaisa laga..."


"Ab samjhi ya aur achhe se samjhaun" he asked with a mischievous glint in his eyes.

I was caught red handed. "Aapne meri video li chori chupe" I accused him.


"Ab kya karein biwi baat baat pe jhoot bole to apne defense me saboot to ikhatta karna padta hai."


"Chor kahin ke"


"Jhooti kahin ki"


"Jaisi bhi hoon aap se to achhi hi hoon"


"Yes. You are right" he agreed without further argument and hugged me sideways.



"No you are wrong" I argued and got out of his hold.



"Arrey ye ulti baazi kaisi? Maine to tumhe hi achha kaha tha"



"Nahi Raman. Mai aapse achhi nahi hoon. Achhayi me mai apka muqabla kabhi nahi kar sakti. You are the best and I mean it" I admitted sincerely as tears welled up my eyes with gratitude for having him in my life.


I could see his eyes filling up too. We lost ourselves in each others eyes until the tears flooded and rushed out of their boundaries and grazed our cheeks.


He wiped his tear quickly and chided "Tum bhi na. Bekar me emotional kar diya. Ab tareef se hi pet bharogi ya khana bhi khilaogi" changing the topic.


"Oops...Sorry...Dhyan hi nahi raha. Mai to novel me itna gum hogayi ke khana pakana bhi bhool gayi" I remembered.



"Pata tha aisa hi hoga. Isiliye khana sath hi laya hoon. Kitchen me rakh diya hai" he informed.



"You are so sweet Raman. I LOVVVE you" I said kissing him soundly on the cheek.


"I love you ke baad ye cheekwala kiss kuch jama nahi" he winked naughtily.


"Khane se pehle bhi desert de diya to aapka laya hua khana waste ho jayega" I gave back.


"I don't mind" he said leaning towards me.


I placed my palm on his mouth and said "I do. Kyunki mujhe bhook lagi hai aur Ansha aur Ruhi mere pet me circus kar rahe hain. Isliye ab chalo" I ordered.


"Yes sir" he saluted like a police officer.



"Ab aap jayiye neeche. Mai do minute me ati hoon"



"Jo hukm mere aqa" he said and followed my commands like the genie from the lamp.



Aap log kahan jaa rahe hain?
Abhi mat jayiyega.
Mai aaungi wapas apko IKNMP ki aage ki kahani sunane.
Abhi to hubby time hai.
So please excuse me.😳


Bye😃



----------To be continued-----------


Note: IKNMP updt will come after Part 4 of this story.
Till then enjoy IshRa













Edited by maanvir - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
the first line made me go red 😳

meri kripa se update 😆

next time update mein delay hua na toh log aapki jagah mujhpe joote chappal barsayenge but chalo thik hai...aapke liye har zulm seh lenge hum 😆😆😆


ur PS and PSS 🤣

now you know why i have tough time commenting on certain things 😉😉😉

but ur idea to use readers comments was just out of the world...koi readers ko special feel karwana aapse seekhe...totally in awe of ur thought and uske liye 🤗 (Get them cashed from your cashier)



coming to update now

oh shit my comment already looks so lengthy jabki ab tak update shuru bhi nahi hua...sorry teacher 😆😆😆


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comments filled starting is just beautiful di ❤️...loved it completely

Raavan Kumar ko bahut sataya hai aaj...Abhi thoda khush bhi kar doon
ahem ahem 😉


lo ji is se pehle woh kuch kare yeh impatient maharaj ghar hi aa gaye 😆😆😆

but surprises are so special na...loved it totally Ishita ke saath saath hum bhi surprise ho gaye

BTW forgot to mention...his ringtone 😊


Strange that it sent shivers down my spine even today. I blushed and then squirmed and then composed myself and then interroagted him
i know where this comes from 😉


"Kyunki mai apni Ishita me khoya hua tha"
eeeshhh such a simple yet beautiful line...loved it 👏...this goes straight into my diary obviously edit hoke thodi si

"Is kucch bhi keliye kuch bhi"
another one ❤️

"Kasam Khuda ki qayamat lage tera ye sharmana" he quoted the lines of his shayri that he had sung in my praise on my Mission Payback date.
yeh samajh nahi aaya as i haven't read CK but will read soon but the first few words are beautiful...i am sure something great waits for me in CK's part


"Dosh mera nahi hai. Biwi itni lajwab mili hai to jazbaat khud hi umad kar bahar aa jate hain"
full on flirting chalu hai 😆 par thik hai na khud ki biwi se nahi karega toh kis se karega


awww the kiss 😳

i am in love with this story more than IKNMP at this point bas
don't blame me

and do you remember once i told you ki di aapne abhi tak kuch bhi complete happiness wali story nahi likhi as in no twists and stuff...i guess my that wish is coming true with Chaar Kadam Safar Ab Jaari Hai and if i am right thank you so muchhh and if not then intezaar rahega


"Hawww Ravan Kumar. Khud romance pe break lagate ho aur mujhe kehte rehte ho ke mai Romance ko samajhti hi nahi" I folded my hands around the chest in mock anger. Well that was my trick to escape the embarrassment of misunderstanding his question.
as i say smart behna 😉


lo ab inka alag competition shuru ho gaya...yeh couple log bhi na yeh nahi ki seedhe seedhe accept kar le...bas satayenge ek dusre ko 😆


wah wah Raman toh kya nikla bosss...maza aa gaya...biwi jyada shaan patti jhaad rahi thi toh pati ne ek video se chaaro khaane chitt kar diya 👏 loved it loved it loved it...loved it like anything kya bolun bas...words nahi hai...so creative behna

"Ab kya karein biwi baat baat pe jhoot bole to apne defense me saboot to ikhatta karna padta hai."
lolll lawyer effect 😆


and then followed the best part of the update i guess

emotional conversation...kaisa hota hai na pyaar pal mein hasata hai pal mein rula bhi deta hai even though tears are of happiness but phir bhi aa toh jaate hi hain na

you wrote that section just beautifully...so heartfelt...i felt totally connected

"Nahi Raman. Mai aapse achhi nahi hoon. Achhayi me mai apka muqabla kabhi nahi kar sakti. You are the best and I mean it" I admitted sincerely as tears welled up my eyes with gratitude for having him in my life.
another beautiful line ❤️

"You are so sweet Raman. I LOVVVE you" I said kissing him soundly on the cheek.


"I love you ke baad ye cheekwala kiss kuch jama nahi" he winked naughtily.


"Khane se pehle bhi desert de diya to aapka laya hua khana waste ho jayega" I gave back.


"I don't mind" he said leaning towards me.


I placed my palm on his mouth and said "I do. Kyunki mujhe bhook lagi hai aur Ansha aur Ruhi mere pet me circus kar rahe hain. Isliye ab chalo" I ordered.


"Yes sir" he saluted like a police officer.
such beautiful conversation...totally miyan biwi types...and all i could feel was unconditional love

you know mere ek OS pe kisi ne comment kiya tha ki she felt as if she was living my OS

yeh wala part or rather i would say update or better puri story hi keh deti hoon ab tak ki...i feel as if i am living it

sachi mein just beautiful beyond words ❤️

"Jo hukm mere aqa" he said and followed my commands like the genie from the lamp.
this is the best feeling of the world when ur hubby does this 😆 if you know what i mean


Aap log kahan jaa rahe hain?
Abhi mat jayiyega.
Mai aaungi wapas apko IKNMP ki aage ki kahani sunane.
Abhi to hubby time hai.
So please excuse me.😳

Bye😃
like always loved the ending

Ishita aur author dono ka hubby time hai islie ENJOYYY


phew done with the comment but yet so much left to say


i am just falling in love with this story more and even more with every update

so yah a big thank you for deciding to continue it

words are less but i hope my feelings reach you

just loved it

brilliantly written, beautifully presented and perfectly executed 👏

ab intezaar rahega IKNMP aur iske part 4 ka

jaldi se update karo bas that''s an order as well as request


PS sorry for the length...it looks almost like a mini update 😆 but thats how I blabber when i am happy and you know it so please bear with me the torture of my words

Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
this is called luck by chance..bina res ke bhi i got to comment first...feel like winning a battle
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Di...

Thank God You gave update so soon...I read all parts of CK...all over again ...Because I was badly missing you...

I missed you so much...

Haaye my IshRa are sooo cute...They are just adorable ...

& yeh CC wala Idea achcha hai...

"Aap kab aye?"



"Tabhi jab tum novel ke Raman aur Ishita me khoyi hui thi"



"To mujhe bataya kyun nahi?" I accused.



"Kyunki mai apni Ishita me khoya hua tha" he smiled dreamily.


It was realy cute...

Kaisa Rishta hai yeh IshRa ka...ek pal me Romantic...& dusre hi pal mai emotional ...
& This made your story unique ...& ho bhi kyo na...aap bho to unique hi ho sab se...Love you di...missed you so much...

Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heee
Enjoy jiju time diii
Super update
Totally love it
I am waiting for thum mere khawabo se ja na sake😉

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