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Chapter 9

Monologue- Function se wapas aane k baad prerna, sumit aur leela apne ghar mein baatein kar rahe h

Prerna-" Bhaiya! Aap ne ye galat kia h... Aapne bhi to kisi ki behan ka dil dukhaya h"

Sumit-" par main uss ladki se shadi kaise kar skta hu jiske bhai ne!!!!"

Monoloue- Itne mein kabir waha aata h. aur sumit use dekh kr aag babula ho jata h...

Kabir-" Dekho sumit! Jo Prerna aur mere sath hua h tum uski saza Dolly ko mat do. Wo tumse shadi krna chahti h.. aur iske liye mjhe jo krna pdega wo m krunga.."

Sumit-" kabir, tum insaan kaise ho mjhe nhi pta lekin shayad ek ache bhai ho... to jab tum apni behan ka dukh nhi dekh skte to socho ki m kaise dekhu.."

Monologue- Itne mein Nisha aura man waha aa jate h..

kabir-" Agar mai ye dukh dur kr du toh... (everyone shocked especially nisha)!!! Mera matlab h agar mai Prerna se shaadi kr lun toh??? Main Prerna se shaadi krne ko tayyar hu.. m use apna jeevansaathi banaunga.. par tum dolly se shaadi k liye hank r do..."

Sumit-"(apni behan ko dekhta h).. Main use shaadi krne ko tayyar hu..."

Everyone gets happy except Nisha as usual..

Kabir-" Thankss Sumit.. Thanks Prerna.."

Then he turnaround and sees Nisha...

Kabir-" Nisha! Tumne meri behan k saath ye acha nhi kiya tha... Ab mai tumhe btaunga ki dil tutna kise kehte h.."... After saying this kabir left..

Nisha-" Sumit! Ye tumne kya kia.. Sab kuch jante hue bhi tumne..."

Sumit-" par usne apni galti maan li h.."

Nisha-" kyunki usne shaadi k liye majburi mein han ki h.. wo b apni behan k liye... tumhe kya lagta h Prerna se shaadi kr k wo use wo pyar aur izzat de paega.. kabi nhi.. tab tum kya kroge... ye tumne acha nhi kia.. ye to ek sauda h... abi bhi soch lo.."

Monologue- Kabir ghar par aa kr sbko khush khabar sonata h ki sumit shaadi k liye ready h... aur sb kabir ki tareef kr rhe hote h.. itne mein Dolly and Virendra kumar waha aate h..

Virendra-" Par Dolly abi ye shaadi nhi krna chahti..."

Roopan-" Dolly??? Nahi bhaiya.. shayad wo ghabra gai hogi... Use isse acha rishta nhi milega.."

Virendra-" Dolly.. jo thodi der pehle tumne mjhe bola tha wo apni maa aur sbhi ghar walo ko bta do... Daro mat.. yaha sb apne hi h..."

Dolly-(pehle usne kabir ko dekha kyunki wo sumit se ye jaan chuki ti ki kabir jo shaadi se nafrat krta h usne dolly ki khatir prerna se shaadi k liye han kr di h.. aur ab uski bari h)" Maa! M ye shaadi nhi krna chahti.. M abi aur panda chahti hu... Mujhe iss parivaar se juda mat karo... "

kabir-" wat z dis Dolly?? Ab jb sumit ne hank r di h to tumne naa.."

Dolly-" Problem koi nhi h bhaiya.. Actually mein aage pdna chahti hu.. kuch banna chahti hu.. m janti hu mere iss faisle se aap sb ko bahut dukh hoga.. lekin mein ye bhi janti hu ki aap sb mjhe khush dekhna chahte ho.. aur isi mein meri khushi h.."

Ramesh-" Lekin Dolly.. ye faisla lene mein hmne der nhi kr di.."

Virendra-" Mante h der ho gyi h.. lekin itni bhi nhi... agar beti ek bar ghar se bida ho jati h to maa baap hmesha ye sochte h ki beti shayad kuch din aur rukh jati.. kuch sapne aur pure kr jati.. itni jaldi kya ti hme use bida krne ki... Aur jab hme ye mauka mila h uske sapne pure krne ka to hm piche nhi honge.. m Leela se baat kr lunga.. Dolly wahi kregi jo wo chahti h..."

Dadaji- " M iss baat se bilkul sehmat hu... Dolly aage pdegi.."

Suketu-" lekin jo ye shadi ki tayyari hmne ki h uska kia.."

Chandu-" Bhaiyuuu!!! Jo hmare yha hmesha hota... Party..."

Monologue- Ghar k sbhi roopan samet dance krne lagte h.. ab next day kabir in his car (gehri chinta mein) waha saurav aata h

Saurav-" kya hua kabir??"

kabir- " kuch nhi saurav..."

Saurav-" Dekh kabir! Jo dolly k saath hua uske liye tu khud ko doshi mat maan.."

kabir-" M Dolly k bare mein nhi.. Nisha k bare mein soch rha hu...Wo chahti to uss waqt chup bhi reh skti ti.. Magar!!!"

Saurav-" chod na kabir... abs b thk h naa.."

kabir-" nahi saurav.. M iss baat ko nhi bhul skta.. m use maaf nhi krunga.. Iska bdla to m use le kr hi rhunga..."

Monologue- Scene shifts to gangawal house

Bunty-" Didi! Please aap ye saree pehan lo naa.. ache lgoge"

Nisha-" nahi ! maine mna kia naa... mjhe ye color pasand nhi h..."

Bunty-" Aman didi samjhao na nishu di ko... aaj unhe dekhne ladke wale aa rhe h.."

Nisha-" mujhe dekhne aa rhe h ya mere kapdo ko..." Main roz jaise dress-up hoti hu aj bhi waise hi hongi.. ab tum jao yha se... m chati hu m jaisi hu waise hi unse milu.. kyunki m roz aise kapde gehne pehan kr nhi reh skti.."

ITNE MEIN ENTERS A VERY HANDOME GUY... DRESSED IN PROPER PROFESSIONAL SUIT...

Now guess guysss. Who z he???

Edited by Chi_prachi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
read till chap 5😊

comment baad me krungi plz do pm me frm nxt timeπŸ˜‰
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aakhir kaun kaun kaun aaya h 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome πŸ‘
kon aaya?? 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wo kaun hai
Nice update par chotu...
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

read till chap 5😊

comment baad me krungi plz do pm me frm nxt timeπŸ˜‰

will do it... but once u read.. plz give ur feedback
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Thanx dear..😊
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

aakhir kaun kaun kaun aaya h 😲

wahi... jo ab tak aa jana chahie ta...πŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

awesome πŸ‘
kon aaya?? 😲

Dekho.. Dekho... wo aa gya...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 10

A handsome guy dressed in professional suit wih his parents enter...

Unmukt Gangawal- "Aiye aiye!! Namaste.. Beta ye h Rathore sahab, unki misses and inka beta"

Mrs. Rathore-" Beti! Tumhari seerat chod k baki cheezo se to hm wakif te... Aaj wo bhi jaan li.. Sirat aur surat se tum bilkul chand ka tukda ho.."

Mr. Gangwal-" Chand ka nhi ye mere jigar ka tukda h behenji..."

Mr Rathore-" Hame ye rishta manjur h... hm khush naseeb h ki Nisha hamare ghar ki bahu banegi.."

Gayatri-" Ye to hmari khush nasibi h ki hme Viraj jaisa damad milega.."

Mrs. Rathore-" Viraj beta.. tumhe koi aitraaz to nhi...????..."

Viraj (itna handsome and magnetic personality jise dekh kr koi bhi ladki flat ho jaye..)- " Nahi.. koi aitraz nhi.. Lekin!!!(pause).. M ek bar Nisha se baat krna chahta hu agar aap log ijazat de toh??."

Gayatri-" Han kyu nhi viraj... Aman! Nisha aur viraj ko Dusre roo mein le jao.."

Monologue- Nisha aur Viraj dusre room mai aate h baat krne like a perfect arrange marriage situation.

Viraj-" Maa ne aapko chand ka tukda kaha aur kuch galat nhi kaha kyunki aap bahut sundar ho..dekhiye jo baat mai apse kehna chahtu hu wo ye h ki mjhe shuru se aisi hi ladki ki talaash thi jo sirf meri patni ban kr nhi balki meri dost ban kr rahe. Jo mujhe samjhe, mere parivar ko apna samjhe. Mere kaam ko samjhe. M ek engineer hu.. bhut chota sa parivar h mera. M chahta hu ki meri patni mere parivar ko apna parivar samjhe.

Aap mujhe orthodox mat samjhiyega. M apna faisla kisi pe thopne pe vishwas nhi rakhta. Balki dusre k saath mil kar faisla lene mein vishwas rakhta hu... m jaan ta hu ki jo m aap se expect kr rha hu wo mujh par bhi lagu hota h... Aur m ye bhi janta hu ki abhi aap ke liye koi bhi faisla lena bhut mushkil h kyunki abhi aap pad rahi h... Aap chahe to hum aapki padai puri hone k baad shaadi krenge aur aap chahe to shaadi k baad bhi padai jari rakh sakti h.. M chahta hu ki meri patni wo sab kuch kare jo wo chahti h but not at the cost of my parent's will.. aap samajh rhi h naa??"

Monologue- Nisha itni der bade hi shant mann se Viraj ki baatein sunti rahi.. Jo use hichkichahat thi wo sab dur ho gayi.. ek ladka jo dikhne mein handsome.. jiske vichar itne ache te ki nisha kho gayi...

Nisha-" Ye acha h ki hmare vichaar itne milte h.. mera bhi yahi manna h ki jo ladki apne ghar ko nahi sambhal skti kyunki wo bahar kaam kr rahi h wo galat hoti h... Pehle hamesha family aani chahie... mujhe to iski importance ka pta h.. chacha chichi ne mjhe aise hi pala h jaise m unki beti hu.. Mere liye family pehle aur baki sb baad mein...

Main ek aur baat bolna chahungi.. apse milne se pehle m ye sochti ti ki jisse bhi meri shadi hogi wo bhut khush naseeb hoga.. par aapse milne k baad mujhe aisa lagta h ki jo ladki aapse shaadi kregi wo bhut naseeb hogi.. aur main bhut khush naseeb hu ki mjhe aap mil gaye..."

Bunty and Aman- "matlab rishta pakka... "

Monologue- Nisha aur viraj ka rishta pakka ho jata h.. ab college mein nisha sabko chocolate distribute kr rahi hoti h.. Chocolate yani ferro roscher kyunki chocolate uski favorite h aur apna rishta pakka hone ki khushi mein wo sbko shamil krna chahti ti... Itne mein kabir waha aa jata h..

kabir-" Mujhe apni khushi mein shamil nhi kregi.."

Nisha-" Ye unn logo k liye h jinko mai janti hu... jo meri khushi mein shamil hnge... tum jaise logo k liye nahi.."

Kabir-" kuch bhi Nisha aaj to m ye chocolate kha k rahunga.. Ek baar soch lo.."

Nisha-" tum mujhe dhamki de rhe ho.."

Monologue- Itne mein saurav waha aa jata h.. aur aisa natak karta h ki uske stomachache ho rha h..

Saurav-" Arey ye chocolate khrab h... Mera chocolate khate hi pet dard shuru ho gya.."

Monologue- sabhi log chocolate fek kr chale jate h... aur kabir ab Nisha k haath mein rakhe chocolate uthata h aur kha jata h..

Kabir- " ye students bhi naa.. kitne pagal hote h... Dekha main bola ta naa... Anywas Congratulations Nisha..."

Nisha-" Ab tum dekhna kabir m kya karti hu... Iska jawab jald hi dungi..."

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