Ishra ss-manchala mann chala teri ore pt 8 on pg 121 added on Nov 12 - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago




Will update soon
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Originally posted by: -RKB-

Beautiful update

Lyked ishra in it
Ishita n mihir bonding is cute
Ishra enjoying in rain was nice
Happy dat now ishita knows raman loves her




Thanks Rexie
Glad u loved it.
Will continue soon
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Originally posted by: prayosha

Oh My God ...Di...

It is so beautiful story...
Nice concept ...

I love this Raman...So loving... so caring...& Ishita ...Bade baap ki Bigdi hui aulad...but very innocent ...like a small child..who wants everyone's attention ...

I love the rain scene...bike ride...long drive...


Raman's Insecurities...Thank God He shared them with Mihir & Ishita heard that...now Ishita knew Raman loved her...now we will see what she will do...to make him secure ...


Raman thaught he always took care of everyone...but none took care of him...so please make him fell sick & Ishita will take care of him...

Continue soon...




Thanks prayosha
Glad u loved the concept
Yes he is caring and loving
And she is very innocent
Will surely make ur wish come true
Will continue soon
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Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Lines I luv from dis update...

Ishita broke the hug and said-aap do minute ke liye chup nahi rah sakte(can't u be silent for sometimes)

Ishita smiled and said-i am in my home only.

Ishita-u don't eat ,who will take care of me ,if u also fall sick.saying so she took his ice cream too




Thanks nidu
Glad u specially quoted ur favourite line
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kimty1230

update de do
ek romantic wala





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PART 7


Raman was looking at her,she was eating very innocently. He look at her,she was soft like a cotton and pure like a dew drop.she is so innocent ,all she want is some attention and lots of love.she was shivering, he cover her with his jacket and get up.he came out in the rain and getting wet.he was loving this feeling of love ,to have her with him.he ruffled his hair and look at her.she was just too busy,he smiled and called,ishita.

She look at him and asked,what u r doing in rain.

Raman- enjoying rain.he forwarded his hand and called her.she look at him and smiled.she stands up and goes to him.she hold his hand and he pulled her to himself.she crushed on his chest.he wound his hand around her waist and start dancing.

Mohabbat barsa dena tu
Saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere Milne ka mausam aaya hai
Sabse chupa ke tujhe seene se lagana hai
Pyaar mein tere had se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyaar kisipe pehli baar aaya hai

They were dancing when she turned around and he back hugged her.he kissed her shoulders.she shivered with his touch.he was moving in rythem with the rain having ishita in his arms.she turned and hugged him tight.she look at him ,he look at her lips ,who were like pleading him to capture them.

Bheege bheege tere honth
Mujhe kuch kahte hai
Dil hai khush mera ke
Khayal ek jaise hai
Roko naa ab khud ko aaj
Sun lo dil ki baat ko
Dhal jaane do shaam aur aa Jane do raat ko
Kitna suhana yeh lamhaa hai
Kismat se humne paya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu saawan aaya hai.

He pulled her to himself and cover themselves with his jacket.he was looking at her and so was she.he touched her lips and she close her eyes.soon his fingers were replaced by his lips.he captured her lips and start kissing her pouring all his desires.she couldn't resist his assault and starts responding to him.both were kissing each other hungrily.they were so lost in each other that they forget where they were.they were kissing senselessly when they heard whistles.they broke the kiss only to see boys were whistling on them and saying,see ashique 2 scene is taking place.ishra were too embarrassed. They broke the kiss and within no time they were gone without looking back at the people.soon they were on the bike heading towards home.Ishita was hugging him tight as it was too cold.the jacket was fully drenched in rain not helping them in saving them from cold.

Ishita- I am so happy today.I never had so much fun in my life.it is one of the best day of my life.I will not forget this day ever in my life.

Raman- me too.

Ishita-i loved it totally.

Raman-and I love u.

Ishita-did u say something.

Raman-no I didn't. Little he knows that she had listen his words.she blushed and hugged him more tightly. Soon they reached the house.they went shivering in their room.

Raman-u go and change first or u may caught cold.

Ishita nodded and went inside the washroom.Raman sat on the couch and turned on the ac but forget to change the setting.after ten minutes when she came out the room was too cold and Raman was sleeping shivering due to cold.she immediately switch off the ac and goes to him.he was shivering due to cold.she bring a blanket and covers him
Then she wake him up and asked him to change.

Raman- I am very tired ,let me sleep.

Ishita-no please change or else u will fall sick.

Raman goes to washroom, but soon he feel like collapsing.he said,Ishita please help me.she was waiting for him on the door.hearing his voice she couldn't stop herself from going inside.she saw he has changed into trouser but still in that wet shirt.she goes to him and asked-r u OK.

Raman-my head is spinning.I am not able to unbutton my shirt.saying so he was about to collapse when she hugged him tight.she take him to their bed and start unbuttoning his shirt.she was feeling goosebumps in unbuttoning his shirt but then she kept all her shyness aside and remove his shirt.she can see his milky skin.

Ishita thought to herself ,that he is not only very good at heart but very handsome also.she bring a fresh shirt and make him wear.she saw that he has fallen asleep,she make him sleep comfortably on the bed and covered him with duvet.she sleeps beside him and was caressing his hair when he came closer and hug her.at first she was shocked but then she smiles seeing him sleeping like a small baby in her embrace.she caressed his hair and kissed his forehead lovingly.she also closed her eyes being tired of the events of the day.

About at 3.30am in night ,she felt his hot breath over her chest.she open her eyes to see he was sleeping cuddling to her .his hair was all hustle bustle and he was almost kissing the crook of her neck.she smiled at him and touch his forehead lovingly.and that's when she noticed he has high fever and cuddled to her coz he is feeling cold.she immediately wake up and check his forehead.he has a high fever.she immediately get up and called amma.amma came in sometime and called the doctor.ishita was sitting beside his head and caressing his forehead repeatedly. She was hell worried for him.she called mihir also.mihir came immediately hearing about Raman's condition.doctor came and check him.

Doctor-itz normal fever.I think he got wet in rain.don't worry its seasonal.

Amma and mihir was listening to him when Ishita told-how can u say us to relax.he has so high fever.he is shivering with cold.he is in so much pain.how can we relax.just treat him well,so that he can be better by tomorrow.

Amma and mihir smiled at her concern and doctor was shocked.he sat down again to check him all over again.he checked him thoroughly and said- its mild cold and fever Mrs bhalla.he will be OK by tomorrow. I can give him injection if he will not be OK by tomorrow.

Ishita- he will be OK naa.she asked almost crying.

Mihir came forward and said- don't worry bhabhi,bhai will be OK soon.

Doctor-he is correct Mrs bhalla.he will be OK soon.

Mihir goes to see off the doctor. Amma comes to her and assure her-dont worry ishita beta,he will be fine.my raman is very strong.

She look at amma and said- I know my Raman is very strong.she said stressing on my.

Amma understood her point and said- yes ur Raman is very strong.saying so she started walking.

Ishita- where r u going amma.I didn't mean to hurt u.

Amma-u can never hurt me beta.I will be the happiest if u consider Raman as urs because he truly belongs to u dear.I am going to bring cold water to keep cold strips on his head.it will help to lower down the temperature.

Ishita- OK.

Amma goes to the kitchen and ishita goes and sit beside him.he was sleeping,but she can feel his pain.she slowly touch his forehead and caress it softly.it was very hot.a tear fell off her eyes and she said- jaldi se thik ho jayiye Raman.main aapko takleef mein nahi dekh sakti.(please be OK .I can't see u in pain)

Bhabhi,mihir put his hand on her shoulder. She look at him and cried-dekho naa mihir,tumhare bhai ko kya ho gaya.woh mujhe baat bhi nahi kar rahe.sirf so rahe hai.please unko kaho naa jaldi se thik ho jaaye.(see mihir,what happened to him.he is just sleeping,not talking to me.tell him to be fine soon)

Mihir-dont worry bhabhi,it's seasonal fever,he will be fine soon.

Ishita put her head on mihir's shoulder.

Ishita-u know mihir.he is very special to me.he is the first person in my life, who loved me without expecting anything from me.even my appa use to love me only to show it to the world.abhi loved me because I am Mr vishwanathan iyer's daughter,what u think I don't know that he don't love me but my property.I knew it very well but I don't have any other option.I was so alone and was craving for love.and the person who showed a little concern to me,even if it is fake,I felt that I started loving him but when I met Raman and come to knew him inside out I came to know what being loved means.how u feel when someone cares for u ,when someone want u near him.for the whole world I was just Mr iyer's daughter but he made me realised that I am a girl named ishita who is as normal as any other girl.everyone treated me like a possession but Raman made me feel that I am a treasure.his treasure.he is very special to me.I can't loose him mihir.I can't loose him.

Mihir patted her head and said- bhai will be fine bhabhi.trust me.

Ishita close her eyes and tears flowed from her eyes.amma came with the bowl and said- ishita beta u sleep I will keep the strips on his forehead.

Ishita- why.

Amma-because u must be tired naa.

Ishita- no I am not.I will be with him.I will keep the cold strips.u can go and sleep.

Amma-but ishita,

Mihir-amma let bhabhi do it.she can't sleep when bhai is in such condition.

Ishita- yes after all he is my Raman.she said slowly but amma and mihir hears that and smiled looking at each other.

Mihir-amma let's go ,bhabhi will look after bhai.bhabhi I am downstairs only ,call me if u want any assistance.

Ishita nodded and they went outside the room.

In amma's room.

Amma-did u see she was so worried for Raman.

Mihir-yes amma even she shared with me,how special bhai is for him.in just ten days bhai make her fall in love .today only bhai was worried that how will he survive if bhabhi will leave him after this month.but now I am sure that she will never leave him.tomorrow I will tell bhai what bhabhi was telling about him.

Amma-dont u dare to say anything to Raman.

Mihir-but why amma.bhai will be very happy.

Amma-but he will be happiest if ishita tell him herself. Every love story needs only two people.they r enough for each other.we should not interfere.let them confess their love themselves.

Mihir-ok.

In ishra room

Ishita was keeping cold strip on his forehead,she stands up to go .he stir in his sleep and said softly holding her hand-ishita please don't go.

Ishita- I am here only Raman.I will always be with u.get well soon Raman.I love u.she kissed his forehead lovingly.he smiled in his sleep as if listening to her talk.


That's all for now.will wait for ur responses.

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Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Luv dis line alot

but he made me realised that I am a girl named ishita who is as normal as any other girl.everyone treated me like a possession but Raman made me feel that I am a treasure.his treasure.he is very special to me.I can't loose him mihir.I can't loose him

they😆😆😆 broke the kiss only to see boys were whistling on them and saying,see ashique 2 scene is taking place.
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 10 years ago
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I have been waiting fr da update fr real long but I really wished even dat I want to read dis one n my wish granted as i saw dis one so waited fr it alot
So fr da update
Raman being over whelmed as his luv was with him n so enjoying n soo happy
N seeing her happy he was also happy
Dancing over da song in rain soo romantic
But da best part ashique 2 scene so luv it
Dy kissed
Finally ishra headed home
On bike raman confessed his luv fr her
N naughty pretended she didn't listened
But she did n Hugged him more tightly
Raman slept in da room without changing
Aww so ishu covred him dn asked him to chnge
Finally helped him even
Handsome cant resist really.
Sleeping cuddling to her
Raman getting high fever
Ishu scolding da dr
Awww so cute
My raman she stressed on my as to tell amma DAT belongs to her only
Jealous of amma even
Heart talk vd mihir really luv it
Amma telling mihir nt to tell raman n e thing as luv story mai haddi na ho
Wow smart amma
Kissing his forehead telling him DAT she luvs him a lot n can't see him in pain
Update soon

Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 10 years ago
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what can i say
beautiful update
first part was hot... ishra romance...
latter one was emotional...
Edited by ishrasoul - 10 years ago
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Wow Superb Update...

Thanks for Fulfilling my Wish...

I am glad you granted my wish by adding the scene requested by me...Thank You...

Now Ishita also admitted ...that She loves him...

How innocent she is...too Cute...& The Aashiqi 2 scene...Wonderful...

Now when Raman will wake up...& will see Ishita's concern & love.. ...How happy he will be!!!!!



Edited by prayosha - 10 years ago

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