SwaSan SS - Forever Yours! Part10 Pg47 04.01.16 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Wow Manasi 👏
The story is lovely and very interesting. I read both the parts in one go and at first a i got a shock when i read that Laksh ran away from the mandap and Sanskar had to marry Ragini 😲
But glad that on the other hand Swara replaced her sister 😳
Both loved each other so why did they separate? And they also have a daughter. Eesa kya hua ki dono alag hogaye ? 😲
I have many questions right now 😆
Update soon 😳
Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Well written update
Thank you for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Its amaizing updt.
Somethng hapen b/w swasan thts why thy got separatd.bt wht?
Sanskriti is swasan's daughter.
Luking 4wd 2 nxt chp.its intigruing.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Oh so Laksh and Ragini ended up marrying each other😛
And swara and sanskriti is staying with them😃
story is getting interesting..i am still wondering why she left poor Sanskaar..😭
Nice update dear👏
Edited by hp_2006 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Lovely update dear. . what made swara to leave sanskar? aisa kya huva? swara is staying with raglak.. you created a lot of suspence dear.. continue soon. . it is very interesting ff..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Totally different back drop...
Loved it so much dear...
Sanskar as a rude man...
The past and present ur are differentiating so well dear...
Wt happened in past...mystery...will wait to reveal...
It was a fantastic start and story progress to...
Am so sorry for the late reply dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

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Thank you all for liking the second part. Sorry busy times are going on so cant reply to everyone individually but I have read all the comments and they are too much valuable for me!😳 Thank You all once again &also I am turning this FF into an SS because frankly I have a track record of not finishing my FF's😆 so I'll shorten this one so that I can give it a perfect end.😉


Forever Yours!

Part3


FlashBack

Everyone was quitely having their breakfast at the table when suddenly Sanskaar interrupted breaking the silence "Bade Papa, Maa, Papa, Mom I think ab mujhe apne flat waapas shift ho jana chahiye bahot din huye yaha reh ke" Sujata interrupted him "Beta tu itne jaldi chala javega?! Mhare ko mhari bahu ke saath thoda aur wakhat bitana hai" "Par Mom abh toh saari rasme bhi ho chuki hai na!" Durga Prasad understanding a mother's delimna stated "Sanskaar beta ek akhri riwaz baaki hai, humare parivar ke saare Shadi shuda joode humari kul devi ki puja karne liye gao jaate hai toh hum sab kal niklenge waapas aane ke baad you can return to your flat""Okay Bade Papa" Sanskaar replied which seemed to be the converation ender.


In the evening Swara starting packing for both her and Sanskaar when Sanskaar entered his room he saw Swara touching his cupboard and a photoframe fell out from his drawer. Swara bent down to pick up the frame it was a photo of Sanskaar smiling cutely at a young girl around his own age his arms around her shoulders they looked soo much in love Swara felt an unknown anger bursting inside she couldnt understand why would she feel angry it was not like she and Sanskaar had married out of love. He could very well have a girlfriend she might not know of.


The shuffling sound Sanskaar made made Swara glance up she tried to come up with a reason but Sanskaar marched towards her in anger and snatched the photo out of the grasp and kept it inside his drawer effectively closing his cupboard and locking it. He faced Swara a look of pure anger was flashing in his face. "Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri cheezo ko haath lagane ki?!" He took a step towards her with a look of predator waiting to pounce on his prey. The intensity in his eyes made her take a step back. He kept on taking a step towards her and she kept backing when her back touched the wall. He grabbed her aggressively by grabbing her arms, his hold too tight to break free from and pulled her towards him. Their faces mere inches from each other Swara could feel his hard breathing on her face which send shivers down her spine her reaction to him was unfathomable to her. Here he was angry on her and she could not understand her own reaction to it, instead of being scared she wasnt sure what she was feeling.


He shook her harshly once again "Batao Swara tumne meri cheezo ko haath kyu lagaya?" "Woh main... main woh... you are hurting me Sanskaar" realising the position they were standing in Sanskaar let go of her and turned around unable to face her. He knew very well that he had crossed his limit. That photo did not mean anything to him anymore after Kavita's relevation on his wedding day but the way Swara was warming her way into his heart was scaring him he did not want this feeling it was just too soon. He was about to leave when Swara muttered "Main toh bas aapke kapde pack kar rahi thi" "I am sorry Swara for my behaviour but ainda meri cheezo ko haath mat lagana I can do my own packing" he was about leave again when she another question at him "Sanskaar agar voh apki girlfriend hai toh koi problem nai I don't expect you love me you can very well continue your relationship with her balki main try karungi 6 months ke baad divorce file karne ki so that you can be with her" Swara said the whole thing in breath smiling but her insides were breaking she never used to believe in divorces but she could not let him stay in an umwanted marriage if he wanted one she would give him. Sanskaar did not reply he just left from there not noticing her tears that had started to flow from her eyes.


'How can she even think about divorce and all main yaha soch raha hoon iss shaadi ko ek mauka dene ki and she' he banged his fist to the wall and left the house to cool off.
Next day everyone left for the kul devi puja, the four elders in one car and the four youngsters in another. Swara and Sanskaar had taken the front seat whereas Pari and Adarsh were romancing on the backseat. There were a very few moments when they could spend quality time together. Though Annapoorna did not like this arrangement made by Swara ,DP had agreed so she could not oppose. Sanskaar and Swara were passing awkward glances to one another their hands brushed accidentally when they both tried to change the radio channel. "Rehno do na Swara kitna romantic song hai" Pari said smiling happily.


"Dont touch my radio" Sanskaar sulked. 'Gussa toh iski naak pe rehta hai' Swara muttered. "Kya kaha tumne?!, kuch kaha na" "Nai kuch nai" "Gussa meri naak pe rehta hai" he repeated the sentence which made Swara gulp but she put on a false bravado. "Haan toh kya juth kaha maine! Jab dekho tab chillate rehte ho." Sanskaar was going to make a reply when Adarsh interrupted him "Pari you know iss type ke jagde ko kyakehte hai?!" "Kya Adarshji?!" "Pent up sexual frustr..." "Aisa kuch nahi hai bhaiya" Sanskaar interrupted him before Adarsh could complete his sentence. Both Adarsh and Pari laughed at them and both Swara and Sanskaar's face had turned tomato red due to blushing. The rest of the ride went smoothly with Swara and Sanskaar stealing glances when the other was not looking. The whole family reached the mandir and kul devi pooja was done by Sanskaar and Swara.


Present


Sanskaar read the note he received today for the hundredth time 'Agar tum sach janana chahte ho toh aaj shaam ko Durga Maa ke Mandir ke piche aa jana' nothing else was written on the note. He decided to analyse the note later first he had to go pick up Preeti from her school he had promised Pari bhabhi to so normally he wouldn't have agreed but today he was missing Preeti and so decided to go anyway. He quickly drove to Ryans International School where preeti had just recently taken admission. He picked up Preeti from her class when he remembered he had wanted to give some donation to the school so they both went to the Principal's cabin. He was about to knock when the door opened from inside and the same girl he had met yesterday was coming out of the cabin. "Bye Preeti" she said and went outside skipping as usual 'that girl has too much energy to be skipping everytime' Sanskaar muttered.


"Have a seat Mr. Maheshwari, How may I help you?" the principal said. "Who was that girl?" Sanskaar inquired he was totally confused by that masi incident. "Ohh that girl! She is a new admission Sanskriti Maheshwari, her mother has recently shifted to Kolkata they are from New York. Ohh by the way what a coincidence even her surname is Maheshwari maybe thats why Preeti and her have become close friends" Sanskaar did not pay attention to the rest of the conversation his mind was still reeling with the facts he just had come to know about. He quickly handed over the donation cheque to the principal and left.
It was evening time, Sanskaar finally decided to go to the mandir. When he went to the backside of the mandir he saw Ragini over there waiting for him.


"Tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya?" "Aapko sach batane ke liye! Main janti hoon ki apke maan me bahot saare questions honge unke jawaab dene"


Accha toh batao yeh Sanskriti koun hai?" He finally asked the question he was dreading. Ragini smiled and stated "Apki aur Swara ki beti" Sanskaar had guessed that much but Ragini stating it out so clearly made his eyes pop out in shock "beti.. meri beti but kaise?! Swara ne kabhi kuch bataya kyu nahi? Kyu chali gayi voh?" Tears were flowing out of his eyes he could not believe he had a daughter. His daughter he wanted to laugh. He wanted to talk to her, know her likes dislikes he had missed 4 years of her precious life thinking about that made him sad once again. Ragini could very easily guess the train of his thoughts so she stated.


"Dekhiye usne kabhi mujhe bataya nahi why she left but I know she still loves you agar aap phir uske aur apni beti ke saath rishta jodna chahte hai toh main apki help karungi"


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Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update, Manasi. Both the past and the present was woven seamlessly, and did justice to your plot. Liked it a lot! 😊

I am having a niggling suspicion that somehow Kavita was responsible for Swara leaving Sanskaar? Did Kavita try to instigate a doubt in Swara's mind that Sanskaar still loves her, and wants to get together with her? I wonder...😛 Anyway, that's for your readers to ask and for you to answer in your upcoming chapters!

Eagerly looking forward to the next one!
Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Lovely update, Manasi. Both the past and the present was woven seamlessly, and did justice to your plot. Liked it a lot! 😊

I am having a niggling suspicion that somehow Kavita was responsible for Swara leaving Sanskaar? Did Kavita try to instigate a doubt in Swara's mind that Sanskaar still loves her, and wants to get together with her? I wonder...😛 Anyway, that's for your readers to ask and for you to answer in your upcoming chapters!

Eagerly looking forward to the next one!

Thank you!
Yes you got it! I left a big hint in this plot for people to guess... but how and what she does is a suspense!😳 and also there's another big jhatka😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mannu it's superb❤️

Thank you Deep!😳

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