Nibir FF- Daastan-e-Ishq(Updatd-Ch 10 on Pg17) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Niha205

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Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Very nice update Prachi. U gave the intro very nicely. Luved it. Update nxt part soon. Thanx for the pm.

Awesome ⭐️
Voice wala idea was fantastic 👏
Lyrics 😳

Originally posted by: Aha121

Awesome ⭐️
Voice wala idea was fantastic 👏
Lyrics 😳

Originally posted by: Chi_prachi

Thnxxx dear for d feedback...

Nd thnxxx for d lyrics...😉

Anytime dear 😉

Chapter 7

Vasu- "Maa, mujhe to kal ki chinta h. Kal dolly ko dekhne ladke wale aa rhe h... Aur apko to pta h ki kabir inn sb pe vishwas nhi rakhta"

Dadi-" Vasu! Tum kuch zada hi sochti ho... Kabir shadi pe vishwas nhi krta... lekin wo apna faisla kisi pe daalta nhi h.. aur use ache se pta h ki dolly shadi krna chahti h... Dolly ki khushi k liye wo kbi aisa kuch nhi krega."

Vasu-" Shayad aap thk keh rhi ho maa... Par roopan ki wajah se mjhe thodi chinta ho jati h..."

Dadi-" Chal lab ja.. so ja... Kal bhut kaam h"

Good Morning

Monologue- sabhi log ghar ko saja rhe h.. Kyunki agar ye rishta pakka ho gya to roka bhi aaj hi ho jaega...

Room mein dolly ro rhi hoti h... Waha pe laxmi aati h aur use rota hua dekh ke samjhati h...

Laxmi-" Dolly! Ye din har ladki k zindagi mein kabhi naa kabhi to aata hi h... par tu chinta mat kar agar tujhe ye shaadi nhi krni hogi to bta dena... hm sb roopan se baat kr lenge. Chal ab ja... sare cousins k pass.."

Monolgue- Saare cousins except kabir, kuch discussion kr rhe hote h wid a photo in dere hand... tabhi dolly aati h..

Suketu-" OMG!!! Ye photo kitni darawani h"

Umesh-" tujhe aisa nhi lgta ki tu aaina dekh rha h..."

Dolly-" wo... wo... Chachi ne mjhe bheja ta ki m bhi photo dekh lun.."

Umesh dolly ko photo deta h n dolly shocked seeing d photo..

Jwala-" don't worry dolly di... ye sirf photo m aisa dikhta h... baki to sb thk h.."

Umesh-" han bs jaise baki log kaala tika lgate h kbi kbi ye safed tika lgata h..."(haste hue)

Kirti-" Actually unhe full length photo leni chahie thi.."

Umesh-" R u mad?? Tujhe pta h na uske pair!!!"

Suketu-" kya!! Unke pair kh...khrab h..."

Dolly-" ye sb tum log kya keh rhe ho"

All oderd in chorus-" shaadi k bare mein mzaak thodi kia jata h"

Monologue-" itne mein kabir aata h aur waha pillow k neeche padi photo uthata h aur dolly ko dikhata h..

Kabir- " Ye sb mzak kar rahe te... ye dekh... wo aisa dikhta h"

Dolly sharmate hue waha se chali jati h..

Aur sbhi phir se chorus mein- " Awww"

Monologue- focus shifts to Roopan and leela... Jaha pe rishta pakka ho jata h and roka sham ko fix ho jata h...kyunki leela ye shaadi jald se jald krna chahti h...

Leela-" Abhi hum chalte h... sham k roke k liye mjhe apni beti ko hostel se laana h... tab tk aap baki tayyari kr lijiye.."

Leela aur sumit waha se chale jate h...

Sham ka waqt aata h...

Sabhi gharwale khub tayyar ho k hasi mak kr rhe h. Aur kabir bada bhai ho kar sb dekh rha h ki sb kaam pure m h naa.

Roopan-" Leela ji! Chaliye roke ki rasam puri krte h"

Leela-" Bs do minute.. meri beti aati hi hogi"

Monologue- Tabhi enters Prerna...

Leela-" Ye meri beti h Prerna, sumit ki chhoti behan and ye uski dost Nisha"

Monologue- Prerna k piche se Nisha enters in Kumar mansion. All are happy and welcome dese guests except Kabir...

Saurav-" Kabir! Prerna and nisha... Yaha!!!!!"

Superb yaar 👏

awesome update prachi 👏
loved it ❤️
continue soon

Woah!!!
Superb update Prachi...
Prerna is Summit's sister !? 😲
Bada sa shock de diya 🤣
I am waiting for the next update 😃

Originally posted by: Niha205

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