Nibir FF- Daastan-e-Ishq(Updatd-Ch 10 on Pg17) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Prachi such an interesting update. Prerna ne suicide karne ki koshish ki!! I'm very eager 2 know k NIBIR ko ek dusre se pyar kaise hoga. Kahi aisa to nahi k Nishu ki family zabardasti uski shaadi Kabiraa se kara degi. N NIBIR ko shaadi k baad dheere dheere ek dusre se pyar hoga n tab hi Nishu ko samajh ayega k Kabiraa kitna achha hai?? Update soon & thanx for the pm.


Arey thoda thum...
Abi to hum parivar walo se mile nhi h... Nibir ki kahani cousins k bgair ho Hi nhi skti... Pehle unse milte h aur phir jante h ki nibir ki zindagi mein pyar kaise aya... Aur present mm kabir itna dukhi kyu h
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Loved it yaar unique concept hai but I'm loving it
And plz pm me whenever you update plz it's request tum update karti ho aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chalta ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it yaar 😳
Poor prerna felt bad for her
Omg nisha hates kabirc 😲
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Samaira81

Loved it yaar unique concept hai but I'm loving it

And plz pm me whenever you update plz it's request tum update karti ho aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chalta ...

Thnxxx n sorry... Aage se will pm u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: star.angel

Loved it yaar 😳

Poor prerna felt bad for her
Omg nisha hates kabirc 😲
Update soon

Thnxxx😊😊
Will update very very soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Chapter 6

Ab ayie... Milte h inke parivar walo se...

KUMAR MANSION

Ghar k bade- Dadaji and dadi.. Jo apni age ko aur baki bachi zindagi ko enjoy kar k jeena chahte h. Isi liye unhone apni sari zimmedari apne bachho ko de di h.. Wo ab bhagwan ki bhakti, apne friends k sath park mein walk krna aur apne grand children ko bade hote hue dekh k hi bhut khush h... Unhe ye pura vishwas h ki jo pyar unhone apne sabhi bacho ko dia h wo unn sbko saath rehne mein madad krega...

Dadi- Suno!!Agar tumhara FM sunna ho gya ho, to chale pooja ka waqt ho gya h. Panditji kb k aaye hue h..

Dadaji- Chalte h.. par kya kabir aa gya??

Dadi- Maine abi tak nhi dekha...

Dadaji- Aaj phir!!!!!!!!!!!

Voice- Ab ayie milte h inke bachho se... Sbse pehle chota Ramesh...

Ramesh- "Laxmi... Chalo bhabhi kbse pooja m baithi h... Hme bhi chalna chaie... "

Laxmi-"Ramesh, par kabir abhi tak nhi aya.. tum kuch karo nahi toh"

Ramesh-" M dekhta hun... iska to phn bhi nhi lag rha..."

Laxmi-" tm dekh lo.. agar aj bhabhi ne kabir ko kuch kaha.. to m ye (pointing towards bundle of notes) sb karch kar aungi..."

Ramesh-" Nahi..!!!! Kuch nhi hoga. Tum Chandu ko le kr jao. M aata hu"

Voice- Ye h Ramesh, Laxmi aur chandu... Jitna pyar ramesh kabir aur chandu se krta h utna hi pyar wo paiso se bhi krta h... Matlab ye ki apni anjus aadat se. Tabhi to wo Kumar khandaan k business ka Financial Head h...

Chaliye ab milte h Ramesh ki behan Roopan se. Jo h to shaadi shuda par apne parivar k saath yhi rehti h... Unke pati Mohan--, jo ki ek ache insaan h par shayad ek aise pati aur pita nhi ban paye jo apne bachho ko sambhal nhi sake... Unke parivar m pyar to bhut h par wo kuch kaam nhi krna chahte.. Islie Roopan apne parivaar ko sambhalti h, office jati h... Unke do bacche, Suketu and Dolly... Dolly to ghar ki jaan h... jiski shaadi ki chinta ab roopan ko hone lagi h... dusri taraf suketu... behno ka bodyguard aur swabhav se thoda jada hi shaant...

Roopan-" aaj bhi pooja k din.. sb pooja ki tayyari krne ki jagah, ye soch rhe h ki kabir kaha h..."

Mohan-" tumhe pta to h ki wo hamesha hi aisa karta h"

Roopan-" lekin tb tk jaan to hmari such jati h naa"

Voice- ye h Roopan ka parivaar. Ab ayie milte h Virendra Kumar se..

Virendra-" Umesh!! Jao Saurav se pta karo kabir kaha h... kb tk hm kamre m rhenge.. Bhabhi kbse niche h... Acha nhi lgta"

Umesh-papa, saurav ka b phn nhi lg rha... AAp chalo hum h naa.. kabir ko late h abhi... aap mummy aur kirti ko le kr jao...

Voice- Ye sabhi parivaar k log sirf ek hi baat se pareshan ho jate h ki kabir ko kabhi koi pareshani na ho... chahe uski maa se daant hi pdna kyu naa ho... Pta nhi ye kabir kaha reh gya... Uski maa Vasu apne bte ka intezaar kr rhi h... Ye h Vasu... Iss ghar ki badi bahu jo apne ek bete kabir and beti jwala k saath yha rehti h...

Virendra- " Vasu! Wo kabir..."

Vasu-" Bhaiya! Kabir ka phone aa gya ta... Use late ho jaega"

Virendra-" Chalo Chalo s baa jao.. Pooja k liye der ho rhi"

Monologue- Everyone comes feeling relaxed... Aur pooja ache se puri ho jati h... Dadi in vasu room and both were tlking..

Dadi-" Vasu... Jaha tak m kabir ko janti hu... mjhe pta h ki usne phn nhi kia hoga.. Aisa hi h naa??"

Vasu-" Maa, Apko to pta h naa ki kabir ko inn sb pe vishwas nhi h... islie wo pooja m nhi aata. Aur islie wo mjhe kbhi phn nhi krta"

Dadi-" To phir jo tumne niche bola!!"

Vasu-" Taki sb aaram se pooja kar sake. Aur itna hi nhi... Umesh, Jwala, Kirti, Suketu, aur dolly sbki wajah se mjhe ye jhuth bolna pda.. Ye sb cousins ek dusre se itna pyar krte h ki... sbne mjhe bola ki kabir ne unhe phn kia h... Aur sbne ek nayi kahani sunai... Unke liye mjhe ye sb bolna hi ta..."

Monologue- Kabir ghar wapas aata h aur sabhi cousin ki masti ko dur se dekhti hui vasu and dadi.. Tabhi ye gaana bajta h..

Aasman ke taare hai hamare liye
Hai din bhi hai saare hai hamare liye
Ho saara jahan pyaare hai humare liye
Apni toh zindagi hai firduasiyana
Kabhi thode khush toh thode khafa
O jeene ki apni ada hai juda
Masti mai rehte hai jahan se juda
Apni toh zindagi hai firduasiyana
O o o
Zindagi ki pyali hai
Ye baari hai ye khali hai ye
Badi lafdo wali complicated saali hai ye
Hum sab se hi coloured hai ye
Hum se black and white hai ye
Ho aasman ke taare hai humare liye
Hai din bhi hai saare hai humare liye
Masti mai rehte hai jahan se juda
Apni toh zindagi hai ye Firduasiyana
O o o

Edited by Chi_prachi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
credit: for d lyrics- Aha121...
just read her post on d lyrics and copy paste d same.. Thnx dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
nice narrative with voice over 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Very nice update Prachi. U gave the intro very nicely. Luved it. Update nxt part soon. Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

nice narrative with voice over 😊

Thnkuu so much...
Kabir ka parivaar pasand krne k liye😉

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