Ishra ss-tune dil mera toda#3 epilogue added on pg 39 on Jan 15- Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

dii
what a thrilling update it was...
loved it a lot
loved d scene where ishita was sleeping on
raman's lap and he was caressing her hairs 😳
param 😡😡😡
d way he was trying to harm ishita,it was so scary di
but liked it that ishita was determined to save herself and
her unborn child from that scoundrel...
poor raman... he was so scared for his wife and unborn baby...
loved d scene when ishita put d bluetooth on her tummy and raman
was talking with ruhi and ruhi slowly kicked hearing raman's voice 😊
ishita clutched d knife when param came to stab in her tummy 😲
it was a horrible scene di
raman came at d right time 😃
liked d way ansh was consoling raman that both his mom and ruhi will
be fine although he himself was scared about d situation
yaay!! finally ruhi comes 😃😃
and ishita is also out of danger 😃😃
now eagerly waiting for d next part di
update it soon 😊





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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tiara9198

Heart wrenching update.

It made me cry yaar.
Superb update😭




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

OMG. Lucky Ishu and Ruhi are save. Parma he really a Demon no heart how dare he harm pregnant women we shoul hang him in jail . Ansh was great fighter like Ishu he handle his dad emotional bravely beside himself also very for his mom. If Raman little bit late I can't even imagine how bad Parma going to finish her. I like the part that Raman ask Ishu to put Bluetooth to her tummy for Ruhi to hear dad voice and she response too his voice.👏👏 At the end is good Raman reach hospital on time and can save both Mother and his daughter. Thank you for the update and pm dear.🤗🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Devyani.Bagla

Now dats watt RAMAN'S JANSI KI RANI Emotional one but ttuely luvd d trust she was havin on her love dat he will cum nd save her no matter wat

UPDATE SOON!!👏👏




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..ishra..

Nice update..raman was having bad feeling about leaving ishita alone so he asked her to be on line all the time...param disgusting person how can he attack a pregnent lady..for a moment i was so worried if anything happen to ruhi but then ruhi kicked and i was relaxed...i really felt ishu's pain..feel bad for raman but ansh is very brave just like her mother..i am glad that ruhi and ishita both are fine...continue soon




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Di I literally cried reading this update

Can't even imagine what ishitha has gone through
She is really an amazing fighter
Now I really want Raman to go back to jail and beat param in such a way that only his life should be left out
How can a person behave like this with a pregnant women
Without having even a bit of humanity he is ready to stab her on the stomach such a🤬
I really want him to taste the hell through Raman for making his little family to go through this
Ishitha is really a brave women atlast she saved not only her life But the other three lives which is dependent only on her
Ansh-Raman scene was absolutely amazing di
I really didn't expect this child to manage his dad when he himself is very scared about the whole problem
Really loved ansh the most in this update
And it was very very emotional when ruhi was not responding to ishitha but glad that atlast she responded to her father
Truly awesome and very emotional update di
Can't wait for the next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpa2323

Awesome update👏

Kya yar giving only teasers of urs stories update kab karoge😛plz cont soon...




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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 45


Raman goes to her cabin.everyone goes behind him.he entered to room to see ishita was laying on the bed.she had bandage on her head,hands and tummy.her eyes were close but he can feel the pain she is going through.he goes near her and pecked her forehead very softly.a tears escape his eyes and fell on her hand.she felt him near her and open her eyes. She saw the pain on his face and asked worriedly-ruhi.

He press her hand to assure her and said-she is fine.our ruhi is fine.u know why ,because she has a brave mother like u.I love u so much babu.thanks alot.

Ishita couldn't speak.she said with great difficulty-why.

Raman-for keeping urself safe.if something happens to u,how I would be survived .I just can't live without u.thanks for protecting urself from that moron.

Ishita-i have to keep myself safe Raman because I know,I have to look after my three children.ansh,ruhi and u.

Ishita was about to get up when Raman stops her .ansh saw her OK and cams to her.he hugged his mom and cried bitterly.

Ishita caressed his hair and said- why r u crying bachche. See mom is alright. Had u seen ur little sister yet.

Ansh-no mom.thank god u r safe ,I was so scared mom.that I will loose u forever but I didn't cry mom.I took care of dad ,I kept my promise that even if u r not there I will take care of him.he is very special naa.I didn't cry a bit mom.u can ask dad.Ishita look at Raman.he nodded crying.

Everyone standing there was crying to see the courage of this little boy,who kept his promise in such a bad situation. Raman hugged both of them and cried,unable to control his emotions.

Ishita took them in her embrace ,they were careful enough not to hurt her.they were embracing each other when they heard a cry.all look at the direction,and found that the nurse came having little ruhi in her hand.she goes to ishita and was about to give her,when ishita told her to give it to Raman.Raman look at her.

Ishita- dad deserves to have a look of her princess firstly.

He took the little bundle of joy in his hands.she was too small and too fragile.he was in an awe to see her.she was soft like a cotton ball and pink like a rose.he hold her very gently yet softly.she stops crying after coming in his arms.he kissed her forehead very softly and hugged her saying ,our ruhi.

A tear fell from ishita's eyes seeing the scene in front of her.she always wanted to give her Raman this happiness.happiness of becoming a father,happiness of feeling his child ,happiness of seeing the feeling of content in his eyes.today she was living her dream to become mother of his child.

Everyone present there was feeling very happy seeing ishra so happy.Raman was hugging ruhi till she slept .it was being difficult for him to observe the happiness he was feeling right now.he cried hugging ruhi.

Ishita-what happened Raman.

He didn't say anything but hugged ishita and ansh too.he take all three of them and said-i will never let anyone touch my family.I promise babu,I will protect u three always.

Ishita and ansh also hugged him.

Rahul said wiping his tears-arey Hume bhi dikha do ruhi(let us also see her)

Raman smiled and give ruhi to rahul.everyone came to see the new little member of their big family.Raman kissed ishita's forehead and said-i am just coming babu.

He said to ansh-bachche take care of ur mom.dad is just coming.

Saying so he leave the room.everyone was busy in admiring ruhi but ishita was worried for Raman because she knows very well where he goes.

He entered the police station angrily.param was sitting in one of the barrack. He smiled seeing Raman.

Param-mar gayi Teri ishita(ur Ishita died)saying so he laughed.

Raman ordered the inspector to open the barrack.

Cop-sir we can't .

Raman open his watch and give him.the cop took the diamond studded Rolex watch and open the barrack.Raman goes inside and starts beating him.

Raman-why u did this.

Param-because I hate u and ur happiness.u always won over me.i wanna defeat u this time.I wanna ruin u and today I ruined ur family by killing ur wife and ur unborn child.he laughed like a maniac.

Raman beat him harder and harder. When he was about to loose his conscious Raman said-my wife and daughter is safe param. U lost this time also and I won again.I will make ur life a living hell.saying so he kicked on his backbone making him winced in pain.

Param-please forgive me Raman.it's paining too much.

Raman-its paining.being a man u can't handle the pain and wanted to kill my pregnant wife.he kicked in his stomach.

Raman- wanted to stab in her stomach.wanted to kill my unborn child,and begging for ur life.I told u naa,leave my family or else I will make u beg for ur dear life.u know what I just want kill u but can't because I am a husband ,a father but not a killer.saying so Raman leave param.he fall on the floor .

Raman goes to the cop and give him some money-take him to the nearby hospital and make sure he stay away from my family.


He goes back to the hospital,only to see everyone was back to the mansion.only ishita was sleeping on the bed.simmi was sitting on the couch and trying to make ruhi sleep but she was being cranky.

Raman-what happened is she hungry.

Simmi-no bhai.ishita just fed her but she is a chotu drama queen.didn't wanna sleep.

Raman-dont say anything to my princess.give her to me.Raman took her in his arms and patted her .

He started singing for her

Mere dil ka tere dil se
Rishta purana hai
Inn aankhon se har aansu
Mujhko churaana hai

Kaise yeh bataaun main
Tera iss tarah Rona
Dekha nahi jaata hai
Shaam jab dhalti
Subah muskurati hai

Uddasi ke lamhon mein Hume muskurana hai
Mere dil ka tere dil se rishta purana
Inn aankhon se har aansu mujhko churaana hai.

Soon they saw that ruhi fell asleep hugging her father with her tiny hands.Raman kissed her and said- see my princess is so simple.she slept naa.don't say anything to her ever.

Simmi hold her ears and said- never. Raman make ruhi sleep beside ishita. Raman goes to simmi and simmi hugged him crying.

Raman-what happened, now why u r crying bachche.

Simmi-i love u bhai.I too hurt u alot.Raman console her and kissed her forehead.

Raman-where is ansh.

Simmi-mihir take him home.he was famished.must be resting.

Raman was also very hungry.after sometimes rahul bring food for them.they had their food and Raman said rahul to take simmi along with him.Raman settled beside ishita .

Raman-how r u feeling babu.

Ishita -I am fine Raman.

Raman-i can't say how much scared I was,when I saw u in so much blood.I thought I lost u forever ,but my wife and my son is a real fighter. They fight for my happiness. I feel blessed u have u guys in my life .I love u a lot.

Ishita-but not more then me Raman.he nodded and they sleep together having their little ruhi with them.

Next morning doctors discharged her.he pick ishita in his arms ,ruhi was in simmi's arms.rahul's mom came with aarti and do the aarti of the mother-daughter duo.

Everyone was very happy but the happiest was ishra.they have their two little angels in their life.rahul called a photographer to take pics of this new addition to the family.

The photographer took pics of all then just ishra and their two kids.ishra look at each other and smiled.Raman hug his family and the photographer click the snap.they were together for always.

Here I stop my writing but can't say that the story is ended because there is no end to true love.and ishra loves each other unconditionally. Feeling sad ,very sad that my very first story came to end but happy that the journey was so beautiful.I made many good friends just because of this very first story of mine.feel like crying but its perfectly alright.love u guys.

Love
Raksha

Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res😳
Unres

Story khatam ho gaye 😭
But as they say every end is a start for a whole new start 😉
So waiting for a new story 😉
Now comming back to the update
It was super diii
Ishu is indead a fighter the photo sesion was very cute
I like simmi also in this one
And as u said true love has no end 😉
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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