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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-15
geet did right by asking him about their relation rather than giving into his demands.

Part-16
geet is doing a fantastic job, now whole of maan's family knew what she really doing.

Part-17
🤣
maan was in horror to see geet wants to tie him rakhi! geet is too good!

Part-18
so this is what she will do. serves maan right for leaving geet at the time when she needed him the most
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tammana.m

Fab 😊
Geet tie friendship band
Bt maan understand as rakhi
Nnget angry
Ohh to soon maan dill get hurted
Waiting for nxt


thnks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
such a lovely update
waiting for next update
hope MAAN realises his mistake
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the story very much maan hurts geet is love is not true he backout from marriage he dont want a imperfect lifepartner but geet is taking revenge she is making maan fall in love with her the do same with her that he done in past
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Part-15

geet did right by asking him about their relation rather than giving into his demands.

Part-16
geet is doing a fantastic job, now whole of maan's family knew what she really doing.

Part-17
🤣
maan was in horror to see geet wants to tie him rakhi! geet is too good!

Part-18
so this is what she will do. serves maan right for leaving geet at the time when she needed him the most


thnks dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SWEETY9167

such a lovely update
waiting for next update
hope MAAN realises his mistake


sure he realize one day
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Posted: 9 years ago


Part 19

He lays on bed & remembering the today day...oh god

How he thinks, geet tied the rakhi to him...

Maan shi kaha geet ne

You behaving like school kid

.

Pata you behaving like school kids

Jb unhe kissi pe first crushes hota hai

Aur wo ladki unhe apna bhaiya bna leti hai

.

Us waqt unka face

Aur aapka

Face bilkul same to same tha

.

Cute

Angry man

He laughs on her answer...

Geet tumne kya kr diya hai mujhe

.

Starting mein

Mein tumse durr bhagta tha

Aur aaj bs tumhe hi apne pass chahta hu

.

.

How I get angry on you today

Darr gya tha ek pal k e liye

Khi tumhe mein kho na du

.

Wo sb tumhare liye bs ek mjak tha na

.

Mere yu karib aana

.

mujhe I like you khehna

.

Wo kiss us din

.

Sb khel tha na tumhara

.

Why you do this with me geet

.

Geet sch mein meri zindagi ko ab tumhari adaat ho gyi hai


Mein tumhe apni zindagi mein humesha ke liye shamil krna

chahta hu

.

.

maan ydi aapne jaldi hi apne dil ki baat mujhse nhi khi

na

.

Liking se koi rishta aange nhi bdta hai

.

Aap mujhe kiss kr sakte hai

Par commitment nhi kr sakte

.

I want security in this relation maan

.

I love you

.

Jbse pyaar ko jaana hai

Aapse pyaar kiya hai

.

But am not weak maan

Jaroori nhi hai

You also say I love you too

But I want commitment

Nhi toh

Forget geet

.

Bhool jaana koi geet kbhi aapki zindagi mein aayi thi

.

Aur waise bhi

Sayad ye aapke liye asaan hi honga

.

Aur ek baat

Aapke pass aaj aur bs kal ka waqt hai

.

Achi tarah apni feelings ko jaan lijiye

Smjh lijiye

.

.

Gautami : maan bete

Maan : mom aap waha kyun khadi hai

Andher aaiye na

Gautami come and sit near him, he placed his head on her lap...

Gautami : kya soch rhe ho maan

Maan : mom

I like geet

.

Usse apni zindagi mein shamil krna chahta hu

.

Jb aaj usne rakhi baandi na

Jo actually

Mein friendship band tha

I feel

Maine usse kho diya

.

.

Mom

Geet ne jaane se phle

Mujhse ek swal pucha

Gautami : hmm

.

Bete

Kya aap bs geet ko pasand krte hai

Ya sirf aapko yhi lagta hai

She is compatible or says she fir perfect in your perfect partner

list

Ya fir isse jyada kuch aur mahsoos krte hai geet ke liye

.

Ye aapko jaanana honga beta

Khi der na ho jaaye

.

Maan : mom

She wants commitment in this relation

.

And she loves me too

Gautami : maan kya aap geet se pyaar nhi krte

Maan : don't know mom

Gautami : bete

Is confusion ko durr kr lijiye

Whi aap dono ke rishte ke liye thik rahenga

.

Maan kya aap usse kissi aur ke sath dekh sakte hai

.

Kya wo aapke saamne

Aapse jyada kissi aur ko importance de

Toh chalenga aapko

.

Maan jaha bs liking hoti hai

Aur ek sath hota hai

Waha possessiveness nhi hoti

.

Chliye ab so jaaiye

Maan : hmm

Good night mom

Gautami : good night

***********

Next day, maan go office and don't see geet anywhere...

Ye abhi tak aayi kyun nhi

He calls on her mobile, but that's going switch off...

.

Ye geet ka phone bnd kyun hai

.

Uske ghar pe call krke puchta hai

But

Mere pass toh hai hi nhi uska number

.

.

Late ho gyi hongi

Bs thodi der mein aa jaayengi

.

He tries to get busy in work, but his heart or mind today not in

control of him...every minute he see towards geet cabin...

He stands from sit and tries to find out about her...

Sayad adi ko pata honga

He call adi in cabin.

Adi : sir aapne bulaya

Maan : wo adi

Maine kal ek letter geet ko mail krne ko diya tha

Any idea

Waha se kya reply aaya

Adi : sir wo toh geet ko hi pata honga

Maan : toh geet kaha hai adi

Mein ussi se puchta na

Ydi

Wo apne cabin mein hoti

Adi : oh yes sir

Mein usse call krke pata krta hu

Maan : adi

I already try this

Now I want to know about client reply

Tum wo pata kro

Kaise bhi

Adi : sir

Mein kaise

Maan : uske ghar pe call kro

Ya uske gahr jaayo

Adi : sorry sir

Inme se kuch nhi ho sakta

Maan : why

Adi : wo mein geet ke ghar ka address nhi jaanta

Aur na hi house address

Maan : great

Tum kaise friend hai uske

.

Out

.

********

Now how I find about geet

Aapke pass aaj aur bs kal ka waqt hai

.

Achi tarah apni feelings ko jaan lijiye

Smjh lijiye

.

Wo aaj hi kaise jaa sakti hai

Aaj ka din hai na mere pass

.

Ye geet bhi na

.

Yes

******

He drove towards raman house...

Maan : maan tu yaha toh aa gya

Par raman se kahenga kya

.

He presses the bell and someone unknown face open the door...

Aapko kisse milna hai

Maan : ji

Wo mujhe raman se milna hai

Ishita : raman

Ne btaya nhi aapke baare mein

Aap kaun hai

Maan : ji

Wo mein maan hu

Mujhe raman se kuch jaroori kaam hai

Ishita : wo toh ghar pe nhi hai

Why you not go to his office

Maan : office

.

Romy honga ghar pe

Ishita : abhi aapne kaha

Aapko raman se kaam hai

Ab romy

Mr.

Baat kya hai

Maan : madam

Aap please unhe bulaiye

Ishita : phle mujhe bataiye

Baat kya hai

Maan : uff

(mummer : ye geet ne mujhe kaha fsa diya)

Ishita : kya kha aapne

Maan : ji kuch nhi

Ishita : nhi kuch kha aapne

Geet ka naam liya na aapne

Usse kaise jaante hai aap

.

Ab aapne saaf- saaf jwab nhi diya na

Toh mein sbko yaha bulayungi

Aur wo aapki achi khatir daari karenge

Maan (mummer : sbhi pagal hai ye

Geet ki tarah )

Ishita : mr

Jo aap mann mein humari tariff kr rhe hai na

Sb smjh aa rha hai

.

Papa

Maan : madam

Geet meri hi company mein kaam krti hai

Am his boss

Mujhe raman se

Aur romy se ussi ke baare mein puchna tha

Ishita : jo puchna hai mujhse puchiye

Mein uski bhabhi hu

Maan : aaj wo office nhi aayi hai

Uska phone bhi switch off hai

Aur meri ek bhut jaroori meeting hai

Aur us project ke pe ussi ne kaam kiya hai

Aur aaj achanak se gayab ho gyi hai

Ishita : oh

Actually

Geet aaj toh yaha aayi nhi hai

Maan : toh wo kya milengi

Ishita : ho sakta hai

Wo aaj apne ghar pe hi ho

Maan : kya aap mujhe uske ghar ka address de sakti hai

.

Ya fir phone mumber

Ishita give phone number to him...

******

He call on this number and enquire about geet , and know about

she left to hometown...any further information not provided to

him...

Wo ase kaise jaa sakti hai

Home town

Mujhe chodke

.

Tum khi bhi chali jaayo geet

Tumhe mere pass aana hi honga

**********

Precap : maan confession and geet come back...


Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 19
nice update...
ye maan bada confuse banda hai...khud ki feelings se abhi bhi confuse hai...
he is remembering his feelings during geet's raki prank...n his reaction too...
waiting for his confession..tabhi to geet apna next step legi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice update
maan is confuse about his feeling for geet but don't want geet go away from him

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