New ishra ss-raanjhana hua main tera pt 7 on pg 128 added on Nov 29 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Superb start di

This update is too filmy but it was awesome
Raman's character is just brilliant
Really ishitha will be so lucky to be loved by Raman
This story is totally different but it's too good
Raman's friends gang in college was too lovely
Ishra first hug and meeting was awesome
Loved the way he wiped her tears
Y did ishu ran away before thanking him?
Raman is attacked by the disease once he never wanted called love
He is totally lost in her in single meeting
The way he blushed when mihir asked about the girl was so adorable
Their gang is awesome
I'm sure they will surely find their bhabhi
Raman is totally a lost case
Very eager to know how he is going to find her
Continue soon di
Thanks for the pm




Thanks for liking it reena
Yes the update was filmy but Raman's character is bit different
Yes she will be lucky
Yes Raman and his gang is just too good
Glad u like ishra hug and first meeting
Yes he is a lost case now
Now his gang will search for their bhabhi
Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

First impression... Gunda mawali

Second impression... Brother India
Third impression... Trust was broken
Fourth and final impression... Kishan kanhaiya searching for Radha

Awesome
Superb
Loved it
Mind blowing
Fabulous
Fantastic

Mehbooba aa mehbooba




Thanks Sonal glad u like it
Yes ur all impressions r correct
Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13

Wow this is so lively man. Felt like I was watching a beautiful movie. Film dikha diya raskha . So what's Mr.Raman's profession other than saving girls from morons??? .. Heroine introduction was awesome and library scene too good Abba. Raman and his buddhu gang 😆 busy with mission #FindingBhabhi 😛 . Really nice job Raksha dear 🤗




Thanks for liking it greesh
Glad u loved this movie dear
Soon u will know his profession
Glad u like ishu's entry
Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Nice start

raman saved ishita
interesting




Thanks heema glad u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

What a prologue... Lafanga parindaa ;)




Thanks sukky glad u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Raman s like Radhe of Tere Naam...
Miss anklet se pehli mulaakaat was awesome




Yes u can say that but its a bit different
Thanks sukky glad u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 2


Raman was lost in thinking about that unknown girl with whom he has fallen in love.his gang came to him and said.

Mihir-ok bhai now enough of dreaming.answer some of our question so that we can find her easily.

Raman- ask

Mihir-is she beautiful.

Raman said with a dreamy look,very

Abhi-very,kah to aise rahe hai jaise dekha ho.let me ask(talking as if u have seen her)

Bala-haan haan yeh hawaldaar jarur khoj nikalenga(yes yes this constable will surely search her)

Raman- what u guys r telling her her,she is ur bhabhi.talk with respect.

Romi-abhi milli bhi nahi bhabhi akkadan dekho bhai ki.jaise suhaagraat manaane jaa rahe hai(we can't find her yet and see bhai's attitude.as if going to have first night.)

Raman- saale laat khayega kya(wanna have some kick)

All burst out laughing.

Mihir-ok let's be serious.abhi u ask.

Abhi-ok bhai what bhabhi was wearing.

Raman said ,clothes very innocently.

Abhi-ofcourse we know that.I mean what clothes.jeans top,skirt,minis.

Raman-she was wearing salwar kurta.her long hairs were open and her voice was so sweet.he said lost.

Abhi-he started again.bhai come back to reality.now tell me where u saw her.

Bala-if she wears salwar kurta we can search her easily.very less girls wear that.

Raman-and she is so beautiful also.

Bala-koi isko chup karao yaar.jaan kha gaya hai.(somebody make him quiet, eaten much of our brain)

Raman- what's my fault.she is just so beautiful.

All his friends hit their head in frustration. Raman look at them and said- OK will not tell it again.ask.

Abhi-where u have seen her.

Raman-near that road,what's its name.

Abhi-uff in university.

Raman- in library.her long hairs was open and her sweet voice.omg she was so


Beautiful, all his friends said in unison and laughed out harder.

Raman blushed listening to them.

Abhi -bhai be serious. Now tell me where u saw her .I mean to ask which part of library.OK we can go to library and see what kind of books bhabhi was taking.

Mihir-damn good idea.let's go.

All five ran towards the library.

Raman-see she was standing at that side.

They all go and start having a look on the books.

Mihir-bhai psychology.

Abhi-economics.

Bala-philosophy.

Romi-socialogy.

Raman-that means she is a arts student.

Mihir-first year student bhai.these all books r for first year only.

Abhi-lets go and check the register.may be she had issued some books.

They all go and check the register.there were around thirty girls of first year.they see the register and go silently.

They all r back to their adda.they have got nothing.

Raman- now I should go.I have to go somewhere.

Mihir-bye bhai.

Raman went from there.

Romi-where bhai go every Friday.

Mihir-thats his personal life.forget it.guys u have got any idea.

Abhi-i have one.see there was thirty girls but one thing was common.

What,all asked in unison.

Their hostel,said abhi.

Mihir-u mean to say.

Abhi-yes I exactly mean that.

They all share a group hug and goes to their respective classes.

Next day they called Raman.he picked the phone.

Raman-good morning.

Mihir-bhai, we r going inside the girls hostel.we will be connected on conference call.if u hear her voice ,please tell us.

Raman-but how u people can go inside the girls hostel.outsiders r not allowed naa.

Abhi-we r dressed as kaam wali bai.

Raman-what .

Bala-yez we r wearing saree. Now going inside.we have bribe the maids and taken their saree.listen every voice carefully.

Raman got up from the bed and start listening it carefully.

Girl-yaar that Raman bhalla is so handsome but he never look at anyone.

Girl2-yes yaar I love him so much.he looks so dashing and hot in that kurta.

Girl3-and not to forget his dimples.

Mihir-bhai all r latoo(crazy) on u .

Abhi-leave them and concentrate on the work.

Raman was listening this and said-u guys r just starting it naa.I just go and freshen up in five minutes.don't go anywhere.

They were waiting there and listening to their conversation when they heard a voice.

Don't u have any work .just go to ur respective rooms and stop ur chant about that Raman bhalla.

They were angry seeing someone talking about their bhai so rudely but before they turn and see her,she was gone.she was wearing a baby pink colour night suit.her hair was braided in two braids.

Girl 1-here she came jkr.don't know what problem she has with him.let's go.

She goes to her room.she open her wardrobe and pick her diary.it has a pic of Raman wearing a yellow kurta with blue denim and smiling showing his dimples.

She said to his pic-u know naa,I hate it when someone drool on u.u r mine naa.but u didn't even know about me.but what to do I love u like an idiot .but I know we can never be together because amma will never agree for our marriage. U know why because she wants a earning person for me.u know what amma marry appa .he was just a nobody.a gunda like u and when she was pregnant he ran away leaving me and amma alone.he was a coward and amma has to suffer a lot just because of him.so she wants a rich man for me.I am not blaming her,she is correct in her place but what to do I love u Raman.may be u will never notice me.may be we will never be together but I can't stop loving u .I think its my destiny.I never get love in my life.appa leave me before my birth.amma was not there to take care of me.and now I have fallen hopelessly in love with u.I know u cant love me but still I will always love u.even if amma make me marry that moron subbu then also,I will love only u.
A lone tear escape her eyes.

Mihika entered the room with vandu.

Mihika-see this crazy girl is crying again.

Ishita wiped her tears and said-no I am not.

Vandu-ishu if u love him so much.then why u don't go infront of him.

Ishita-i am scared.

Mihika-of him.

Ishita- no of his rejection.moreover this relationship has no future.amma will never agree for him.

Vandu-but this is not the way ishu.yesterday also u thanked him and literally ran from there.I thought he was searching for u and u r hiding from him.

Ishita- I am bit of nervous when he is around me.

Sarika came inside and said after hearing the convo-see ishu day before yesterday when u r in trouble, he saved u .that means destiny wants u guys together. Just be a little brave dear.

Ishita-whats new in this.he saves every girl. He is a masiha for everyone.

Surabhi comes inside and asked -and for u.

Ishita-i don't know. Saying so she goes to her favourite place ,terrace to think about Raman.

Ishita ,mihika,surabhi,vandu and Sarika were best friends studying in first year .their rooms are nearby.they all know ishita's love for Raman from the day she saw him first time.but were sad because she don't have guts to face Raman.she always literally ran from the place where he come.all she had a pic of him fallen from his pocket when she saw him for the first time.

Ishita was sitting in the terrace and thinking-how u tell everyone what u mean to me.I love u from the day I saw u ,when u saved me for the first time from those boys.

Flashback

The ragging was going on the university. Ishita and her friends were new.so they were in target.all were ogling at ishita's curves with lusty eyes.she was wrapping her dupatta around her but those scoundrels told her to remove her duppata and walk towards them.she was crying like anything.a boy came and snatched her duppata. That's when Raman came with his gang and beat them black and blue.all girls ran from there but ishita was standing folding her hands to herself protecting her dignity.that's when he came with her duppata and wrap it around her covering her head.she look at him but he was not looking at her.he was busy in ordering all his gang members to beat those guys into pulp.

She was looking at him as if the whole world disappeared.a boy through a beer can on ishita ,he came in front of her to save her.

Raman asked ,r u OK,without looking at her or without touching her.he was protecting her but didn't touch her a bit.she felt so safe and secure near him.she was in his embrace but still he was not touching her.without listening her answer ,he goes when all boys were gone.

Ishita was still standing in that place and closed her eyes to feel his fragrance. Vandu shake her and was dragging her when she saw his photo and picked it up.

Flashback ends.

Ishita- from that day I always steal glances of u but never have guts to go in front of u.I really wish someday u urself come to me and say I love u.


That's all for now.will wait for ur response.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooo silent love 😆
Par agg tho dono taraf se lagi hai 😉
Hmmm us kya patha ki man hi mammai us ne ishu se shadi bhi kar li 😆
Sooo sweet 😆
Poor amma
Is khani mai kya villen amma hogi 😕
Well lets wait and watch 😉
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
jaldi update doo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys updated part 2 above,enjoy and don't forget to leave ur lovely comments .will wait for it.

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