Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago
The update is awesome
I just love your story please update soon
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Nice update
fab 5 performance and
niyonika shocked to see manbir haha
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For your love and support



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Thank you for your comments.yaar tum log to kal Manik k Nandini k ghar jane pe surprise hi ho gaye .Arey jab sub kuch sahi ho raha hai tu Nandini ki family wali side pe line bhi sedhi honi chaheye na.Agar aisa nahi ho ga to Manik Nandini ko pick and drop kaise kare ga. bolo bolo tell tell.

so here we go with the new update

Sorry in advance in case of error or mistakes









In Car


Nandini in excitement: Manik tumhe pata hai Chachi tumhe dekh k na bohat bohat bohat khush ho jaein gi.


Manik with a smile nodded on this.


Nandini now with a lil teasing smile: Aur kya pata isi khushi mein Chachi tumhare liye koi special dish bana dein.

Manik: No plz! Special dish No way.

Nandini Started Laughing on this and then said: Don't worry Chachi ki cooking ab bht improve ho gaye hai. Unho ne last month cooking classes join ki thi kuch new dishes sekhne k liye so ab kafi change a gya hai.


Manik with a sigh: Thank God


When they reached Nandini rang the bell and Chanchi Opened the door .


She saw Nandini and with out thinking for a mint she said : Arey Nandu ! Tu Iss waqt sub thek to hai na. Tu thek hai na? Kahen kuch hoa to nahi na tujhe ?


Nandini held her by her shoulders and said: Chachi Chachi Chachi relax! Kuch nahi hoa mujhe main thek hoon .wo na kya hai na mujhe kisi ko milwana tha app se.


Chachi asked in surprise: Kis se?


Nandini moved on a side and Chachi Saw Manik coming in their direction.


Chachi with unbelievable voice: Nandu... Manik ?


Nandini nodded with teary eyes.

Chachi s this shocked condition changes when Manik said: Namastey Chachi.


Chachi placed her hand on Manik's Cheek to check whether it is a dream or reality.


Manik immediately hugged Chachi and said : Chachi I am real. Main wapis a gya hoon app logon k pass.Now chachi's tears started flowing from her eyes and she said while broking that hug: Manik ! Mera sohna munda! Tu Thek hai na beta.


Manik answered her: Haan Chachi main bilkul thek hoon ab .


Nandini on this broke this emotional scene and said: Chachi ! Arey ose undar to aney do.


Chachi: Arey haan haan Ao na.


Then they all entered in and settle down there.


Chachi: Manik beta ! tum the kahan itna time . tumhe pata hai hum sub ki kya halat ho gayi thi aur yeh Nandu ... iss ka to waise hi bht bura haal ho gya tha.


Nandini tried to stopped Chachi: Chachi plz rehne do na.


Manik looked on Nandini's face and understand that she wants to avoid this topic so He said.


Manik leave his seat and sat infront of chachi on his knees and said to comfort her: Arey Chachi ab app bilkul tension nahi lo ... Ab app ka yeh sohna munda a gya hai na ... Ab yeh sub kuch thek kar de ga ... (Now pointing towards nandini ) app ki iss nanduu ko bhi. ... with this he himself remove tears from chachi's eyes and hugged her once again.


Nandini on seeing this feels emotional so she left from their towards her room while saying: Chachi main abhi ati hoon.

Chachi and Manik both saw this and sighed on it.


Chachi after some time: Manik tumhe pata hai tumhare baad ... Nandu na sub k samney khud ko bohat strong show karti rahe hai but main janti hoon rooz raat ko kaise tumhare tasveer se baat karti thi wo.hum sub k samne smile karti thi aur apney room mein tumhari yadoon k sath har raat roti thi.Main ne aur murty g ne kitni koshish ki ise sambhalne ki lykin Nandu...

(Manik and Chachi both are now in emotional state)


Mujhe pata hai abhi bhi Nandu apney room mein ro rahe ho gi.


Manik tum os k pass jao na plz.Os se baat karo.


Manik nodded on this and leave from there towards Nandini's room.


He opened Her room door and saw the condition of Nandini . Chachi was right .He saw all his pics are scattered on bed and she was so engrossed in seeing those pics.


He moved inside the Room and then locked its door.


He moved towards nandini and stand near her bed and then called her.


"Nandini"


And here Nandini's trace broke with this voice and she immediately removed her tears and started collecting those pics and said : wo Manik dekho na subha se yeh pics yahan pare haan main jane se pahle chachi ko bata k gayi thi k yeh pics yahan se utha lena but I think chachi ko yaad nahi raha.


After collecting those pics she started moving towards her Almirah from the side of Manik but Manik hold her hand and hugged her from backside and said: Nandini! Why r u doing this to yourself?


Nandini on finding this love and care started crying .Manik turned her to face her and on seeing her condition he embraced her in his arms and placed a soft kiss on her head.


After sometime Nandini controlled herself and Manik after seeing this broke their hug and removed her tears from her eyes.He hold her hand and made her sit on bed and said: Nandini ! I am here na ... share your pain with me .Dont hold it back.


Nandini looked at Manik with teary eyes and he nodded his head to assure her that now he is there to share her pain.She placed her head on his chest while crying.

After some silence Nandini called Manik and he looked in her eyes when Nandini said in emotional voice.

Nandini: I love you.I love you more than my life.You know the time I spent without u while listening that u will never ever come back to me( tears started flowing from her eyes) I died with each passing mint in those days .Every thing goes wrong when u left. U were not there for me ,Fab5 broke, Nyonika ...she was making our life hell by her evil plannings,Harshad also tried his evil games on us,and then wo Mady.


U know os ne very first day college mein a k tumhara song gaya... (with crying)... we were at that time in Fab 5's jamming room . You know I thought at that time k tum... Tum wapis a gaye ... Mere pass... But ( again crying) and after that He ... He broke your guitar strings... She showed him his that guitar ... See ... At that time I again died ( and started crying).You know os ne mujhe kaha k tum mar chuke ho kabhi wapis nahi ao gey... sub ne mujh se kaha k tum kabhi wapis nahi ao gey but (pointing towards her heart) mera dil... mera dil mujh se kahta raha k tum wapis ao gey ... Merey pass... Apni Nandini k pass. ( she kissed on his forehead while crying)


Aur tumhe pata hai jab mujhe yeh pata laga k yeh sub jo kuch tumhare aur cabir k sath hoa yeh meri wajha se hoa... Yeh ... yeh sub mere liye plan kiya gya tha aur meri jagha tum dono...( left her sentence and again started crying) I thought at time k kash Manik tum ne wo car mujhe lene k liye hi bhej di hoti.


Now on this Manik cant control himself and he shushed her by placing his finger on her lips and said: Don't you ever say or think something like this not even in your dreams.Main kabhi tumhe kuch nahi hone doon ga...Never... Ever... U r my life ... Tumhare bina main zinda kaise rahon ga haan... Bolo... Aur phir tum to meri Fav star ho na... to is star k bina meri life shine kaise kare gi haan... and he placed a kiss on her forehead. After that he hold her hand.


You know na I was a monster It was you who changed me ,who changed my life,my thoughts... It was you who completed me and I love you with all my heart, body and soul for this change. I love you and I want you to be the part of my life forever.


Now to lighten the atmosphere he again said : Waise main to yeh bhi soch raha tha k apni is life ko ( and while saying this he hold her by her waist and pull her towards himself) wife bananey k bare mein Dad se baat kar leta hoon. You know tension hi khatam ho jae gi.After that na tum mujhe kahen jane do gi aur na main tumhain... Wat say haan?

Nandini: (with a lil shy) Manikkk.


Manik now in naughty mood: What Manik ! Tumhein mere door jane se problem hai na to Dad se baat karta hoon ... Sub problem 1 mint me solve ho jae gi.( while saying this he decrease the distance between them ) His face was near her neck and she held his Arm .

Nandini: Manik acha na bus karo meri tang khinchna.

Manik : Arey I am serious bolo Baat karon Dad se.

Nandini: Manik plz na bus karo.


Manik: Ok tum kahti ho to ... but meri 1 condition hai.


Nandini: What?


Manik: He bent his head a lil and placed his hand infront of her and said " Shall I have the honor of dancing with my Lady Love? "

And she in answer placed her hands on his.


He started a song on his phone.



Yun toh zindagi se,
Hoti thi mulaqatein,
Pehli baar ki hai,
Zindagi ne mujhse baatein,

Ajnabi sa ehsaas hai,
Har pal ab to khaas hai,
Tum kar gaye jo,
Sathiya..sathiya..,

Khwahishon mein phir se,
Beetabiyan jagi hain,
Haste haste hain,
Ankhon mein nami,

Hasratein bhi meri,
Karne lagi thaggiyan,
Paeron ke niche se,
Nikli zamee,

Ajnabi sa ehsaas hai,
Har pal ab to khaas hai,
Tum kar gaye jo,
Sathiya..sathya.

After that Dance nandini placed her head on his chest and Manik hugged her in that position with love.


Nandini: Manik tum ab kabhi mujh se dore nahi jao ge na.


Manik: Na ... Tum kaho gi tab bhi nahi.


Nandini broke this hug and saw in his eyes on this statement.


Manik hold her by her waist and lowered his head slowly and then placed his lips on hers.and finally he kissed her. The kiss which shows their longing for each other, their love, their care towards each other.He kissed her like he wanted to remove all her pain , her agony,her sorrow which she felt in last 3 months and she responded with equal intensity.



Manik broke the kiss and placed his forhead on hers and then hug her again.

After sometime Manik's received a msg .He broke that hug and saw who sent him that msg.


He saw Cabir's Name and with a bad face while muttereing: Iss Salee ki timing Hamesha se hi kharab hai.Har time kabab me haddi banta hai. Iss ko to main choron ga nahi.


Nandini listened some of these voices and asked: Kya hoa? Kis ka msg hai.


Manik then read that msg and told her: Cabir ka hai He was saying Dad ne hum sub ko bulaya hai to sub kuch time me Malhotra Mansion ikatha ho rahe haan. So hamein bhi wahan jana pare ga.


Nandini : ok to chalo chalte haan.


Manik: Hmmm Chalo


With this they both went downstairs. Rishab saw Manik and he said in excitement: JEE ... JU


Manik threaded his hairs and said: Arey Champ ! Wow yaar tu to bolne laga. And gave a brotherly hug to him.


Chachi saw both of them and said: Arey Manik betho na main khana lagati hoon.


Manik: Nahi Chachi ... Wo actually Dad ne hum sub ko bulaya hai tu mujhe aur Nandini ko abhi jana pare ga.Agar app ki permission ho to main Nandini ko apney sath le jaon.raat ko drop bhi kar doon ga.


Chachi pinched his cheeks with love and said : Arey mera sohna munda kahe aur main na mano yeh pahle kabhi hoa hai.Jao tum log but raat ko Nandini ko time se drop kar dena OK


Manik hugged Chachi in excitement and said: Chachi u r great.


Chachi : haan haan pata hai pata hai.


Manik : Ok then Chachi hum chalte haan.


Chachi : Ok Jao tum log .Murty g aein ge to main unhe bata doon gi.


Now Chachi to Nandu: Nandu time se a jana haan.


Nandini nodded on this and left from there after saying bye.

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To yeh tha jnb ajj ka update . I hope app sub ko pasand aye.

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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome!!
chachi ka reaction I can imagene..
n the way hr console her love that part n kiss ...
isse wage ka romance shadi k baad I like romance after marriage n cabir ki timing always wrong but I miss rishabh n maniks bond ek to bechare me bola bhi to jee ju but isse sage jab bole ga?
song kaun sa hain? ya koi poetry hain I love it...
update soon
n ab jaldi she ek or story start kardo..
Edited by paarsaa - 9 years ago
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yey yey u r the 1st one
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Finally...
a manan update...
luved it...
manan dance...
the kiss...
every was wow...
luved it...
update soon...
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Originally posted by: cute-aly



yey yey u r the 1st one


I'll always b awesome!!
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Originally posted by: paarsaa

awesome!!
chachi ka reaction I can imagene..
n the way hr console her love that part n kiss ...
isse wage ka romance shadi k baad I like romance after marriage n cabir ki timing always wrong but I miss rishabh n maniks bond ek to bechare me bola bhi to jee ju but isse sage jab bole ga?
song kaun sa hain? ya koi poetry hain I love it...
update soon
n ab jaldi she ek or story start kardo..



yaara silli silly upcoming movie ka hai song

and rahe baat rishab ki to yaar Manan or family drama 1 hi cheez pe focus ho sakta tha.so ajj manan pe focus kiya. coz sub ki demand thi.

and next story to dear sis is k bare mein baad mein sochein ge . itney time mein yehi manage ho jae to bht hai. tum socho apni story k bare mein update do os ka

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Originally posted by: cute-aly



<font color="#990000" size="3">yaara silli silly upcoming movie ka hai song

and rahe baat rishab ki to yaar Manan or family drama 1 hi cheez pe focus ho sakta tha.so ajj manan pe focus kiya. coz sub ki demand thi.

and next story to dear sis is k bare mein baad mein sochein ge . itney time mein yehi manage ho jae to bht hai. tum socho apni story k bare mein update do os ka</font>



kal doongi ya aaj raat
waist thanks for calling Mr sweat coz pm pe only sweat friend that friends nhi or mere alawa WO kaun ho Santa hain?
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