Obsession Or Love ?? A Virika FF - Page 78

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Posted: 9 years ago
It is such a bliss to read your favourite story after so long...
Oh Gosh from where do I start?
"It was intense, it was beautiful, it was wonderful."
Just how you used it in this update.
Beggining from last day of honeymoon to series of surprises this update couldn't have been any better.
The way you have moulded Viren from headstrong businessman to obsessed lover to loving husband and caring father. The growth of your writing is immense and I love it as much as I love Virenji.
It melted my heart to see him taking such good care of her wife. Fulfilling every need from emotional to physical.
How he was a doctor for her swollen feet to a event manager when it came to welcome his baby.
This was my most favorite update of OOL till now. You gave us a experience of varried emotions in a single page you beauty.
And as for your decision of ending the story, I'll never say a yes as it's not just a story for me but a beautiful experience. OOL is my life.
Thank you for the long and amazing update. And a huge sorry for late feedback. Love you so much Millee baby :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww!!!!! it was the most cute,lovely,outstanding,adorable,marvelous & fabulous update ever that i have read yet.thanks a lot Shubhi for this lovely update.i m just speeechless to describe my emotions now.Being unwell u have updated it yar hats off to u for this.now dear plsss if possible then try to update it soon.i m very much impatience u know.plezzz update it dear.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
After so long you updated Ool!
Was carving for an update
Loved the update so much and would have loved it even more if you would have described that scene. You must be knowing what I'm talking about. 😉😳
But We can hope for that in the next update. Can we? 😆
And please don't end the story...I understand what you feel when don't get enough feedback but if you want to end it then plz write a new story soon.
Update soon!

Ps~ Sorry for commenting late, was busy with exams.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly I'm Sorry! 🤢 😛
I Loved The Update To Bits. I Just Love The Way You Write. You're A Fabulous Writer! ❤️

Now, The Parts I Loved! 😆

I Don't Know How Do I Describe This Part As? Cute? Sexy? Hot But Still Over Powered By There Cuteness? I Don't Know. I Doubt I Even Make Sense! 😕

He rose and then unexpectedly he reached down, slid his arms beneath her and lifted her up, cradling her against his chest.

"put me down. I'm too heavy!"

He silenced her with a kiss. "A"you're still a little bit of a thing. And B"are you suggesting I'm not manly enough to carry my woman around?"

She laughed. "Forget I said anything. Carry on then."

This One Was Just... 😳 Beautiful. Viren Caring For His Wife Is Something That I Always Love To See.

He studied her for a long moment, his fingers idly caressing hers. "Yeah, it was." He lifted her hand and brought it to his mouth where he proceeded to kiss each fingertip before turning her hand over and nuzzling into her palm. "I thought maybe tomorrow we could get out and see some of the sights as long as you're feeling up to it. I don't want you walking, but I've arranged for a convertible so we can drive where we like. Top down, wind-in-our-hair sort of thing."

"It sounds fun." And it had been a long time since she'd simply had fun. She smiled, feeling her chest grow lighter with each passing second.

Impulsively she squeezed his hand.

As they finished, Viren suggested she go to bed; but she wasn't tired. She was quite rested actually and felt an eagerness to explore their secluded cove. When she reminded him to take a walk along the beach, Viren hesitated at first, but agreed when she was adamant about going.

Beach Is Just Love! I Practically Love Ever Beach Scene! 😆 If You Noticed In My Stories I Might Have Mentioned Beaches So Many Times! 😆


Jeevika breathed deeply of the salty air as the ocean breeze whipped at her long hair, lifting it from her waist. She slipped her sandals off and bent awkwardly to pick them up. Viren quickly gathered them for her and tucked them under his arm. Digging her toes into the damp sand, she ventured into the bubbling surf, letting the foam wash over her feet.

Viren removed his shoes and joined her after he rolled up the cuffs of his jeans. He slipped an arm around her as they made their way down the beach.

"We shouldn't go far," he cautioned. "You aren't supposed to be on your feet for this long. I promised the doctor this would be a restful trip for you."

"This is a lot more restful than being on my feet twelve hours a day," she said lightly.

He frowned and his hand tightened around her waist. "That won't happen again."

She didn't respond, but turned back toward their suite. Viren's hand slipped from her waist as she walked ahead of him. When they walked back inside the patio doors, Jeevika sank onto the plush couch.

I Just Love, Love This SIde Of Viren! 😃 😳

"Why don't you recline your seat," he said, reaching over to help her.

When she was tilted back he nudged her over. "Turn on your side and I'll rub your back."

she faced the window and settled on her side.

Strong, tender fingers began a slow exploration of her back, rubbing and kneading. She sighed in contentment and relief as the tension faded in her muscles. Yawning widely, she snuggled deeper into the seat, enjoying the delicious sensations his touch was bringing.

She went to sleep with a smile on her face.

Okay I'll Probably End Up Posting Your Whole Update! 😆 😆 So This One I'll Post As My LasT Fav. But I Actually Love Your Entire Update! 😳 ❤️

He glanced at her propped-up feet and then frowned. "Your feet are pretty swollen."

She lifted one and sighed. "Yeah. Apparently I'm a water-retaining cow."

"Are they hurting? Want me to rub them?"

"No, I'm fine. They ache a little but right now I don't want anyone touching them. I'll just sit like this for the rest of the evening and drink lots of water. The potassium in the OJ will help."

He leaned over and kissed her forehead just as the buzzer sounded.

Okay, Well, Scratch That! 😆 🤣 I Totally Am In Love With This One Though! Best In Whole Chapter! 😳

He cupped his hand just above her pelvis and caressed the round, firm bulge of her abdomen.

"Our baby," he said hoarsely.

Then he hovered over her and lowered his head so that his mouth pressed to the center of her belly in a tender kiss.

The gesture brought tears to her eyes, stinging the lids, and she swallowed against the quick knot that formed in her throat.

I Love You Millee! Just Update Soon! 😆 Kidding. Take Your Time! 😛
Take Care! ❤️
Edited by RiddhiShetye - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Where Are You? 😭

UPDATE!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Res ❤️
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this is one of my most favorite favorite favoriteee chapters ever!!
well firstly I've read this a while ago 😆 and overtime i miss Virika I keep going back to this chapter!
there's just something so sexy, yet beautiful to their relationship that you portrayed
first the part when Jeevika falls asleep and Viren takes her to the bedroom 😳
that was beyond adorable!
her cries seeing his scars and hm assuring her everything would be okay was so romantic!
thats the most perfect guy ever!!
The way Viren felt their baby and her moving was so so so beautiful!
i can read those lines again and again and again and never get bored of it!
amazing as always!!

and the apart where he requests her to wear the dress even though she feels conscious, that was just ahhh so adorable!!
the whole picnic was so cute like the way the Vadhera brothers are so possessive of their gals!
anyways thank you for this beautiful update!!!

Edited by Kays94 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

👏👏👏👏

Edited by Kays94 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by Kays94 - 9 years ago

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