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vrinda mishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

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CHAPTER 13

Sanyu returned home smiling whereas the scene was same at Randhir's house.

RD' ROOM:

"I cannot beleive it Sanyukta ne khud mujhe friendship offer ki? Wah beta teri toh nikal padi...

Finally sanyu ne tujhe dost toh maan liya. But now make sure that u don't hurt her idiot. I have got an oppurtunity to memd her heart n I should make full use of it." N with this he went to bed.

SANYUKTA'S HOME:

Sanyukta entered the house in all smiley mood. Anju n priti were happy n shocked to see their daughter in all happy mood that to all of sudden.

Anju-"kya baat hai... aaj badii khush lag rhi hai?"

S-"nhi kuch bhi toh nhi bus aise hi..."

Priti-"tu humse kuch zyada nhi chupa rhi hai aaj kal... phle subh jaldi nikalna fir 5 bjw evening mei kahi jana... mamla kya hai sanyu bata toh sahi..."

S-"hmmm sahi kaha masi apne. Vo kya hai maine na RAW join kar liya hai. So now I' m on my secret mission." She said forming a gun vid her hand n moving around like a agent. N doing this she ran into her room.

Anju-"piya tujhe kuch pata hai...????"

Pi-"nhi ma main toh khud shocked hoon."

Vids-"ha college mei toh aaj iska mood bada kharab tha but suddenly aise kaise?"

Suddenly vidushi received a call, "ummm vo main abhi aayi"

She went into a corner in balcony.

Vids-"hi parth !"

P-"hi... kaisi ho?"

Vids-"vaisi hi jaisi colleg mei thi... bus sanyu ka behaviour dkh k hapked hu..."

P-"hapked?"

Vids-"offo happy+shocked=hapked !" She said sounding obvious.

P-"ohh kyu?"

Vids-"sanyu was smiling today i meam mujhe acha laga ye dekh k but suddenly aise vo smile ki achanak so thoda shocked bhi hu..."

P-"hmmm aaj rd bhi ajeeb behave kar rha hai... khana bhi nhi khaya buss kamra bandh kar k baitha hai..."

Vids-"hmmm sanyu ka bhi same condition hai..."

N the love birds continued with their night talks.

NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE

The other day brought something new for them.

The Dream team reached college as usual the girls came without Sanyu,as sanyu was out on her secret.

They were sitting in canteen when Sanyu came running in.

She was huffing n puffing loudly.

S-"arre tumlog yaha kyu baithe ho? Pkc sir ka lecture start ho gya hoga. Chalo."

As-"aaj ka lecture has been cancelled."

S-"what???? Bht aaj ka toh important lecture tha. How can he cancel it?"

Ar-"ye sab hmare yoyo paji ka karnaama hai!"

S-"yoyo?"

Yo-"arre vo anarkali hua kya na k aaj motu ka 3 lagatar class tha. Maine socha bechare bacho ki kya galti jo vo torture ho. Toh maine thodi samaj seva kar di."

S-"samaj seva?"

Yo-"oji kuch khaas nhi bus saadde golu sir ki chai mei jamalghota(a medicine for triggering loose motion) mila dia aur ab vo bechare apne cabin k washroom mei h." N with this everybody bursted into fits of laughter.

S-"yoyo how can u do this. Poor pkc sir. Main bhi bhagte bhagte aayi n tu ne ye sab kand kar dia?"

Rd-"oye miss hitler kyu over react kar rhi ho? Sach sach batana tum kya khush nhi ho ye sun k?" He saifld eyeing her.

S-"main ... main kyu khush hone lagi?"

Rd-"acha ji... toh thik hai main ye medicine de deta hu pkc sir ko unka haal thik ho jaega. Ok?" N with this he started going towards pkc's cabin.

S-"oye ruko..." she ran towards him, "maine aisa bola kya?"

Rd-"nhi tujhe toh padhna h na?"

S-"arre zabardasti h kya?"

Rd-"toh phir vaha hitler giri kyu kar rhi h?"

S-"vo main...vo..."

Rd-"dkho sanyukta i know you wanna sound mature n responsible but iske matlab ye nhi hai you will kill your innocense. Dkho college life is also about fun n enjoyment n not only studies, so apne upar s ye bojh utaro n try jollying up..."

S-"par Rd I need to supoort my family..."

Rd-"ha toh kari na kaun mana kar rha hai... but uske liye khud ko ghut ghut k jeene oar majboor karna is not an option. So chill out. N vaise bhi itni zyada hitlergiri karogi toh hitler jaisi bann jaogi"

S-"main hitler jaisi?"

Rd-"ha toh...??"

S-"tumko toh main chodungi nhi..." n they ran around sanyu trying to beat him n Rd running away from her. Whereas, the whole group were seeing them with open mouths.

Soon they came n settled down on the same table where the group was sitting.

S-"uff kitna thaka diya mujh bereham insaan."

Rd-"beraham main kyu?"

S-"aur nhi toh kya subh s bhooki thaki ladki ko bhagaya sharam nhi aati?"

Rd-"haha sharam, tujhe aayi ek abla jawan ko bhaagate hue. Mujh bechare sidhe sadhe ladke ko maarr rhi thi?" Saying this he got up from his chair

S-"tu aur sidha kaunse angle se? Itna bhi jhoot mat bol!"

Meanwhile Rd came back with a coffee n cheese sandwich, "ye le bhukkad kha!"

S-"main bhukkad huh..."

Rd-"thik hai toh mainkha leta hu tujhe bhook nhi hai par mujhe toh bhook hai." Saying so he was about to have a bite of sandwich but Sanyu snatched it from his handa.

S-"nhi nhi ab tum itna bol rhe ho toh kha leti hu..."

Rd-"oh please m not asking u to hv it. I can hv it."

S-"nhi ye main hi khaungi" n she took a bite.

The whole team was looking at them to be precise staring at them. Sanyukta who just turned her face towards them, saw their shocked face.

S-"aise kya dekh rhe ho. Mere khane pe nazar lagana band karo. M not gonna share."

As-"you are fine?"

S-"yup. Kyu mujhe kuch hona tha kya?"

As-"nope."

P-"yaar ye vardhan sir kab lautege apni conference se ? Kitna time ho gya koi task kiya h?"

SOMEWHERE IN NORTH INDIA

VD-"Mujhe puri information chahiye"

Person-"vo yehi station pe dkha gya tha."

Vd-"tab toh kisi ne usse dkha hoga? "

Person-"ha puchne pe pata chala k vo jis car mei yaha s gya vo kisi badi haweli ki car hai. Ye haweli yaha s kuch kilometres hi durr hai."

Vd-"uss haweli ki kuch info?"

Person-"zyada nhi hai but aaj vaha puja hai n bhandaara bhi hai. Hum asaani s vaha jaa skte h"

Vd-"toh phir kis baat ki der h? Chalo."

Soon vd sir n that person arrived at the haweli.

They were standing in the queue of beggars. Vd was constantly looking around n suddenly his eyes got stuck on someone.

Vd-"ye yaha?"

Vd's companion too saw that person.

Vd-"ye toh mittal ki maa hai."

Soon the old lady came towards them.

Old lady-"arre khub mithai bato aaj mata ki puja ki h. Ye lo tum bhi lo." Ahe said firwarding a sweet box towards vardhan.

Vardhan took it n said , "maaji sahi sabdh mei toh mata ki puja tab safal hoti hai jab bitoya ki bhi puja ho."

Old lady-"ab kya kare jab mata ne hume koi beti di hi nhi" she said trying to act sad.

Vd-"par humne toh suna hai apki ek badi sundar poti h?" He tried to sound unknown.

Listening this the expression of the old lady changed drastically. She was fuming with anger.

Old lady-"humari koi poti nhi hai sirf pote hai. Hai ek kul nashni aayi thi par jald hi ab uska nash ho jayega." She smiled evily.

Vd-"matlab" he was alrmed.

Old lady-"ab tumhe kya bataye bhaiya, ladki k naam pe kalank thi kalank. Par kehte hai na yaha ka kiya yaha bhugtna hota hai. Usse bhi bhugtna hi hoga. Khair ab tum jao." She was trying to avoid the topic now. Vd who was fuming with anger slowly moved away from there.

OUTSIDE HAWELI

Vd-"ye log kuch bara plan kar rhe hai. Agar iss barr innlogi ne kuch kiya na toh..." he was gritting his teeth.

Person-"dont wory we will nit let this happen. Aisa karte hai main inn pe nazar rakhta hu n kuch aur information nikalne ki koshish karta hu."

Vd-"hmmm ab mujhe lautna chahiye. Keep updating me"

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vrinda mishra

@vrinda65

Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

CHAPTER 14

AFTER ONE MONTH

As soon as Vardhan returned he threw the Dream Team into pool of tasks.

M along with it they were having their classtests hence they were not even getting time to eat.

ONE DAY AFTER LAB

J-"uff thaki gayo main bhi. Ye sab parth bhai k vajah se hua hai."

P-"maine kya kiya jiggy mujhe kyu blame kar rha hai?"

J-"yaad karo aap hi the jisse vardhan sir ki itni yaad aa rhi thi aur unke tasks ko miss kar rhe the. Ab bhugto" n he pointed the tool in his hand.

P-"arre toh ab main sach mei uss samay Vardhan Sir ko miss kar rha tha. Aur sirf main kya puri team kar rhi thi. Aur ab tu ye tool hata mere samne se agar kahi lag gyi na toh shaadi k phle andha ya kana bann jaunga."

Av-"arre baba shaadi ? Ye kaha se aayi bich mei pehle propose toh kar le vidushi ko!" He teased him.

Vids-"main... ha..." she was blushing.

P-"lo neki aur puch puch abi lo." He knelt down before Sanyukta.

Rd panicked seeing him kneeling before Sanyukta, "oye ye kya kar rha hai? Ye vidushi na hai. Andha ho gya h kya? Ye Sanyukta hai Vidushi nhi h "

P-"tu chup kar. Mujhe mere dil ki baat bolne de. Ha toh hum kaha the ha yaad aaya proposing."

Rd was feeling like the world was coming upside down for him, whereas Sanyukta was just looking at Parth unable to decipher anything.

P(to Sanyukta)-"hmmm so Miss Sanyukta Agarwal humare relation starting se kuch zyada acha nhi rha. Khaata meetha toh chorro humara toh kadwa kadwa rha hai. But ab time aa gya hai to change it to meetha meetha. Ya phir khata meetha. But we need to improve. They say saali adhi gharwali hoti hai so madam aap kya humari aadhi gharwali banke apki dearest friend vidushi ko meri puri gharwali aka girlfriend banane ki izzazat degi? " sanyu glared at him, "acha tumhe adhi gharwali banana is risky. Kisi din gussa aaya toh mera murder hi ho jayega, so tum meri behen bann jai aise vidushi bhi safe h aur main bhi. But Vidushi meri puri gharwali hi banegi usme no copmromise k? I promise to protect her n not to hurt her ever"

Everybody's mouth was opened. None of them had ever thought even in their wildest dreams that this was what Parth was gonna do.

Yo-"ye toh gaya ab. Isse idea nhi hai isne sherni se panga liya hai."

S-"parth ye sab tum mujhse..." she was cut in mid by parth.

P-"dkho Sanyu you are concern for vidushi main bhi concerned hoon. That means humara aim ek hi hai to protect n love vidu" sanyu coacked up her eye brow on hearing 'Vidu'.

Parth continued, "vo i mean Vidushi. Yaar toh plz mann jao."

S-"how can I trust you that you will keep her happy?"

P-"vo kya hai na mujhe apni jaan bahot pyaari hai. N mujhe abhi itni jaldi upar nhi jana hai, abi toh vidu... i mean vidushi se shaadi karni hai phir ek cricket team banani hai phir uss cricket team ki team bamte hue dekhna hai, isliye main apki dost ko kast pahuchakar khud maut ko invitation nhi dunga. So..." vidushi was blushing.

J-"arre parth bhai pehle ladki toh milne do abhi kaha cricket team"

P-"tu chup kar... sanyukta tum bolo"

S-"mujhe sochne k liye time chahiye. " saying this she was moving away, when vidushi said, "sanyu... " n she looked at her with pleading eyes.

S-"ha? Kya muh s bol. I don't understand such sign language."

Vidushi-"sanyu u know everything so now stop playing around. Ha bolna hai toh ha bol aur agar na..."

S-"na bolna hai toh na bol du kya?"

Vids-"jo teri marzi hai vo kar but drama mat kar." Sanyu giggled n turned around towards Parth, "hmmm so Mr. Parth since you are being quite chavelirious n truthful I'm trusting my friend's hand in yours. But mind it one wrong step n u are gone. Do u get that."

Parth got up excitedly n hugged her immedietly, "I LOVE U SANYU . I LUV U" Everybody looked at him like mads, "kya arre behen wala pyaar. Huhh... dirty minds!"

Arusi-"wah ji wah sirf sanyu s permission li n humara kya?"

Piya-"ha ab hum toh naraaz ho gye. We won't agree now. Hum iss riste k khilaf hai." They crossed theur arms around their chest.

Parth was now flabbgasterd, "ye kya re ek ko sambhala n baaki bigad gyi. Matao maaf karo"

Piya n arusi together, "NO" sanyu was trying to control his laughter looking at vidushi n parth's face n piya n arusi's antics.

Suddenly something struck Parth's mind.

P-"u r right mujhe tumlog se bhi permission le leni chahiye thi. So koi na now we can do the needful. So my dear respected girls I'm very sure that you will allow ur friend to become my girlfriend."

Piya n arushi were going to reply but Parth cut them off.

P-"n vaise bhi BHABHI-YAN apne DEVAR ka ghar kaise nhi basne dengi?" He winked first at them then at Arav n arush. Piya n arushi were just blushing badly whereas Sanyu n others bursted out laughing.

P-"so aap ki kya decision h?" He cocked up his eye-brows.

Piya n arushi-"ha ha ok ok... but u better keep our friend happy." They pointed their fingers at them.

P-"pakka acha but humara rishta kya hoga bhabhi-devar ka ya jija-saali? Hmm"

Piya-"u..."

S-"parth vo kya hai na we all are equal isliye they will also be like ur sister."

J-"arre parth bhai ab main dulhan ko toh propose karo."

K-"ha aur dilwale dulhaniya le jaenge poora karo."

Parth now knelt before Vidushi, "Vidushi dkho tumhari sab friends se poori respect se maine permission le li h. N sab k aage kneel down karke my knees are aching now so plz zyada time na lagaye plz say yes. Plz..."

Everybody were looking at vidushi. The trio girls nkdded at her.

Vids-"since u have respected my family,my friends n u are goid at heart so its a yes."

P-"I LOVE YOU."

VIDS-"I LOVE U TOO"

Now it was turn for everyone to congratulate them. First it was Rd who came up.

Rd-"congrats yaar" he hugged him, "saale darra diya tumne mujhe"

P-"main kamina hoon par itna bhi nhi k bhabhi pe nazar daloon."

Rd-"dhire bol be warna bhabhi toh durr ki baat h dost bhi chali jayegi" he whispered.

Yo-"arre paaji ab durr bhi hato hum bhi hai line mei.."

Rd stepped aside n after thay Jiggy came up to hug him.

J-"arre wah bhai bole toh congrayulations. Humne to sirf baat boli n apne toh sidha propose kar dala. Bole toh maza aavi gayo."

Yo-"oji iss tarah toh hum sab line mei hi reh jayenge. Hum se toh aur wait nhi hota ji. Bhai log dkh kya rhe ho tut padho." N with this yoyo,arush,arav,randhir all came up n hugged parth or should I say jumped on him making him land on floor.

P-"arre yaar kamino maroge kya. Utho utho."

As-"ruk oye thik s congratulate toh karne de."

P-"uth ja mere liye nhi vidusi k liye hi toh sahi! Shaadi k pehle hi usse vidhwa banoge kya? Hatho"

N he pushed all of them n they all landed on floor. They were laughing like maniacs.

P-"uff jaan nikal di thi tumlogo ne"

Arav-"arre ye toh sirf proposing ka hug tha shaadi wale din socho tere sang kya kya karenge." He said moving towards him.

P-"hatt yaha s" he looked at vidushi who was being congratulated by her friends n was also laughing looking at the boys, 'tum waha khade khade kya hass rhi ho yaha aake meri help nhi kar skti. Tumhari bf ki izzat khatre mei h" ge said crossing his arms around his chest as if trying to protect himself.

Vids-"itni body kis liye banayi hai? Apni help khid karo. Tum s better meri sany7,piya n aatu hai they can always protect themselves n me" she said proudly.

N all bursted into laughter.

Piya-"guys it calls for celebration lets go out for dinner. What say?"

Everybody agreed to it.

S-"tumlog chalo main abhi aayi." N she went away frim there.

Rd could feel something different, "guys main bhi aata hu" he too ran behind sanyu.

IN CORRIDOR

"Sanyukta" Rd called from back.

Sanyukta turned around.

Rd-"thnx"

S-"thnx? Kis liye?"

Rd-"for giving Parth n Vidushi their love"

S-"maine unhe kuch nhi diya Rd. It is their love which has bloomed with their own efforts."

Rd-"still I know it must have been difficult for you,looking at the way you are possessive for your friends."

S-"m not possessive about them,m just protective about them. U know maine bahot kuch dekha hai isliye I try to protect them from that pain. But something which I have learnt living with you is let your friend fly like an open kite. Let them fly but protect them when thay are about to fall. So thats my new mantra." She winked , "n waise bhi main toh yahi hoon agar Parth ne kuch bhi kiya toh I will teach him lesson" she laughed.

Rd-"u know Sanyu this girl is stronger. You know y? Because u r learning to accept."

S-"thnx to u if u had not helped me that night then I don't think I would've opened so much. N waise bhi iss love story ko yaha tak pahuchane mei tumhara bht bada haath hai."

Rd-"vo its getting late chalo chalte h others must be waiting.

S-"kyu darr gaye?"

Rd-"darna kaisa jaan? Abi toh 1 hi story start ki hai I have more3 so get ready" He winked

S-"3 ? Two toh I know arush n arav right? Third kaun hai?"

Rd-"sirf doosron ki setting thodi karwaunga khud ji bhi toh karni h. " he murmered.

S-"kya bola?"

Rd-"Third will be ... a surprise for lady bheem" n he walked towards others followed by Sanyu.

Precap:- Dream Team at restuarant.

time for some action ;)

N someone from past.

A/N:- now plz like n comment guys

Edited by vrinda65 - 8 years ago

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Loved the double dhamaka
Superb
Very entertaining

Sandhir smiling and happy everybody shocked

All r shocked to see sandhir so friendly
Vd sir cares for sanyu a lot
He's roaming around for sanyi only

I'm excited to know what's the mystery

Wow why a proposal

Very entertaining
Excited for next
Update soon

Keep smiling

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Asmu

@sakura_otaku

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Fabulous👏👏

Loved Sandhir bonding😳😳

Aww they r so cute😃

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ritika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

loved the double dhamaka😃
superb updates😊
thanks alot for pm

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sweta

@simaj

Groupbie

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

hope randhir and sanyu ki love story bhi jaldi set ho.

awesome update dear👏

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vrinda mishra

@vrinda65

Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

CHAPTER 15

Recap:- Parth proposes vidushi. The DT foes for party.

Parth was driving the car while Vidushi was in passenger seat. Yoyo n Sahil were near the window in backseat n Randhir n Sanyukta were sandwiched in middle. Arus,arav,piya n aushi were in backseat while Jiggy n Kaustuki were in kaustuki's scotty, following them.

Soon they reached FOOD PALACE restuarant.

They took a table n settled themselves.

P-"guys lets order something."

Soon the waiter arrived with menu card.

Yo-"oji I'm gonna feed myself with chole bhature."

Sahil-" I' m gonna go for nan n kaali dal"

P-"same here"

J-"I want sev tatar sabji n ramali roti"

K-"I think I will have chole bhature too"

Yo-"oji for sure. I gurantee you will love it"

Arus-"well I go for south Indian. Masala uttapam is for me"

Arav-"masala naan with extra butter n mix veg."

Rd-"masala dosa. I hv heard that they serve the yummiest."

Vids-"soup for me followed by noodles n manchurian"

Arushi-"same soup followed by fried rice-manchurian"

Piya-"crispy chilli babycorn n chilly pasta for me n sanyu. Right?"

S-"right. U hv never been wrong about my taste in anything till now."

Piya(mumurs slowly)-"that is why I know Randhir is best for u."

S-"u said something?"

Piya-"ya how can I be wrong after all we are bestie"

S-"no we are not besties. We are soul sisters" n duo hugged.

Vids n arushi(pouting)-"n we."

Piya-"come drama queens" n the girls shared a hug.

Yo-"oji after seeing ur sisterly love I'm feeling brotherly love. Come buys jhappie pao"

N the boys too shared a big hug.

Soon the time passed chit-chattin

N the food too arrived by then.

They were having food when they heard some noise. After looking around they found a couple who was having an arguement or to specify the boy was shouting on the girl while the girl was keeping her head low and listening .

Boy-"what do you think of urself ha... neither u have manner nor etiquette ha?"

Girl-"but what did i do? I just said I don't likevchinese so I ordered indian."

Boy-"ya right but you could have said that to me instead of telling that waiter. U wanted to insult me infront of him right? By showing I don't know ur taste. U could have atleast ate it for me."

Girl-"but I don't like it"

Boy-"now u are answeting me back wow(claps). Better u wanted to talk to a man right? U wanted to attract him n..."

Girl-"there is nothing as such" n she started crying badly.

Soon the manager interrupted them.

Manager-"excuse me sir can u plz lower ur voice others are getting disturbed" n provided the girl with tissue.

Boy-"oh wow look u have a new man for urself. N u(to manager) just stay out. U don't know me"

Girl-"there is nothing as such"

Boy-"shut-up u characterless bitch" n he was about to slap him when his hand was stopped by someone,who is npne other than our Sanyu.

S-"I feel u have forgotten how to deal with girls."

Boy-"stay out of it u girl"

S-"if u want me stay out then leave the girl n get lost."

Boy-"who the hell are you to stop me? I'm her bf n I can handle her in my way."

S-"yes u ofcourse have every right to handle her but no right to MAN-HANDLE her. N if u continue to do so then u have to face me"

Boy-"oh wow so another bi**h helping this characterless girl" n before he could do anything T.H.A.P. T.H.A.P two voice echoed.

The man was standing tgere with printa of five fingers on his cheek.

Yes our very own Sanyu slapped the man.

S-"one more word n " she pointed her fingers at him, "now get lost".

Boy-"u will have to pay for this. Just wait n watch" n he left.

Girl-"thank you... thnx so very much"

S-"its fine. Come join us."

Girl-"no its ok. I should leave"

Sahil-"I don't think u should leave now coz he might be waiting for u outside. So till then join us."

The girl joined them.

Kaustuki-"u fine?"

Girl-"hmmm yes."

Piya-"whats ur name n who was that man?"

Girl-"I'm priyali. That man is my so-called bf, Chetan"

Vids-"so-called, means?"

Priyali-"actually he is the son of local MLA. My dad had taken loan from him n now as my dad is no more, we are unable to pay him the amount. They have already taken over my house. Now he is forcing himself on me. He even tries hitting my small sister. I cannot help it. If I don't agree with him, he will harm my family."

S-"its fine relax. He won't be able to do anything now."

They resumed their food n chatted.

After having their time of day, they came out of the restuarant. They were moving towards the parking when they heard a voice.

"Where are u goin madam? Lemme give u lift."

They turned to find the same boy from restuarant sitting on top of his jeep.

Priyali-"chetan!" She was afraid now.

Chetan-"oh u remember me good, good for u. Now if u want ur family n these newly found friends safe then come here n sit in my jeep, orelse..." he said in a threatning tone.

Priyali loomed here n there n then hung her head low. She was about to take her step towards him but Sanyu held her hand. She looked at Sanyu with pleading eyes as if indicating her to let her go back to her pathetic destiny,in return Sanyu shaked her head in NO.

Chetan-"oh so the sl*t has found the company of a bi**h. Come gere I said" he shouted.

Sanyu looked at Priyali with assuring eyes n gestured her to hide behind her back. Priyali followed her n Vids,Piya n Arsuhi came n stood beside Sanyu.

Rd(whispers)-"girls go back we boys will handle him. He is not safe for u all."

P&Arus-"ye he is right. Go back"

S-"no"

Arav-"but Sanyukta..."

S-"I said NO. IF ANYONE OF U BOYS CAME FORWARD TO HELP ME OR ANY OF US THEN CONSIDER IT AS A ENFLD OF OUR FRIENDSHIP."

YO-"but anarkali.."

S-"I M SERIOUS. ITS MY FIGHT N I KNOW HOW TO DEAL IT. IF U WANNA HELP THEN KEEP AWAY." She said with a serious face.

Chetan-"so u won't come, ha?" He jumped of the jeep's bonete n marched towards them only to be blocked by Sanyu. She stood infront of him like a strong pillar.

Chetan-"aye girl, move from my way... orelse"

S-"orelse what ha?" She looked straight into his eyes n started taking steps towards him, unknowningly Chetan started taking steps back.

S-"do what u can. I am standing here only."

Chetan-"u don't know me..."

S(raising her voice)-"I know u very well. U r a coward who is enjoying on his father's money n is mis-using his powers. U know I m better than u atleast I am not depended on anyone."

Chetan-"oh so u can fight independantly? Than fight them." He pointed towards the goons who has just surrounded Sanyu.

PRECAP:- WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW????

ACTUALLY I HAVE ALREADY WRITTEN NEXT CHAPTER HALF DO IF U ALL COMMENT N LIKE THEN NEXT UPADATE WILL BE TOMMORROW OR DAY AFTER TOMMORROW.

SO NOW ITS ON U ALL WHEN U WANT THE UPDATE...

N HA "HAPPY DIWALI !!"

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Jalpa

@kadia717

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

wow so many delicious dishes

muh me paani aaa gaya yaar

n yeah nice update

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Awsme update
Loved it

Awww loved girls bond
They've really soul sisters
Knows each other so well

Sanyu is superb
She stood for that girl

She cnt stand anybody misbehaving with gas

Omg cliffhanger
Update soon
Wtng

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Alaukik

@Alaukik

IF-Stunnerz

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Awesome update

Sandhir's equation changed

rest of the group is shocked by their bonding

Parth's proposal is unique

aadi garwali ko propose kiya

Vardhan came across a lady referring as Mittal's maa

who is she and what they are planning

excited for the next update

update soon

love u

n happy diwali

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