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It was two day after Geet's discharge still Maan didt get a single sec too be with his Misty..even though staying in same room he cant go near here,its not like tat he is restricted but everyone surrounds her always..He was frowning at Geet who was giggling silently sensing his restless as she too missed him so much but wat can she do wen their family is in mission to gain her weight..


It was morning boys were in gym.. Anand and Karti was giggling..Dinesh was busy in imitating Maan and his moves who was working severly in his frustration..
Dinesh saw them giggling: why u both laughing
Anand: becoz some one is boiling tats why
Hearing his words Maan stopped his moves and glare at him

Dinesh : but Maan maama said he have fire alarm

Anand : tis fire cant cool by any alarm ,with a giggle

Maan glare at him
Anand: don't glare me machan ( brother in law or saala) now only u enter into tis phase u have a long way to go..i have faced so much,being near we cant have anything
Dinesh was confused with his code words: wat u cant have anything
Karthi: u head he tap on his head u go enough of u work today
Dinesh: i know u all want to talk so pushing me
Anand : sari daa periyamanusha ( ok big man) now go before I give u kick
Dinesh pout and run away seeing Anand try to chase him
Anand: maama i know u were carving to see ur Misty naa
Maan: Misty
Anand: we know she is ur MISTY, we all know everything abt ur love story so don't hide anything from us
Maan sighed and node yes as he too want someone know his annoy

Anand: tis things i faced before my marriage,u know maama being under same roof still I cant even see her,then romance word wont exist, see how much I struggle
Karti giggled
Anand: wait ur turn will cum naa tat time we will have our chance
Karti: i wont be like u all, if they fix me any girl tat day itself I will kidnap her from our family
Both gapping at him


Maan: karti i thought u r very innocent baby
Karti smiled sheepisly: maama pls dont say to tat devil she will make my life hell pls pls
Maan: i will try if u both help me to meet my MISTY
Anand: but its very hard our family not leave her for a sec too
Karti: who said its tough both look at him u didt try tat is it
Maan: wat
Karti: maama today wat day
Anand: wednesday
Karti glared at him: i know Wednesday i mean wat special,both look at him, today Geet's appointment
Maan: yaa I know today Geet's checkup
Karti: haan take her to check up after tat spend some time with her so easy
Both gapping at him..Maan lips wide and hugged him kissing his cheeks
Maan: thanku karti
Karti: see u need ur machan's help often so dont forget me wen I need u have to do
Maan: sure u don't have to kidnap u finc i will arrange a date for u with my sister
Anand: sister
Maan: yes who ever going to marry karti she will be my sister naa
Anand: but karti i thought u r still a baby eating lolly pop but now only i know u eating chicken lolly pop omg i have to inform chittpaa abt u and ask him to search a girl for u..if u go in tis speed ur wife will be pregnant before ur marriage
Karthi: anand anna wat u talking tat too in front our maama wat he will think abt me dont spoil my reputation with baby face
Maan: i will think karti is not a small boy anymore and wat Anand said is correct
Karti: maama i gave idea but u teasing me haan
Maan: ok ok for tat im leaving u


All were teasing and pulling each other..Maan just staring at them who so soon stick to him and made him feel comfortable like his own brothers..te word brother made him to think abt his Vicky,his heart winched thinking how is he and where is he now , did he have good life,he hate himself being a big shot but cant even find his own blood who hiding from him, wat use of tis money and name nothing he is ashamed of himself..Both saw Maan who look lost in thinking some thing

Anand touch his shoulder: machan
Maan trance broke : haan
Karti: wat happen maama
Anand: i think he is planning some thing for, before he complete they heard some voice
Ram: who is planning wat
Trio startled and look at te entrance wen Ram Venkat Ganesh and Prabhu enter te gym.except Prabhu all were in tracks.
Maan: appa u all here
Ram: we came to exercise
Maan stare at them
Venkat: wat dont think we became old, in tis age too we can face ten peoples
Trio boys chuckled
Ganesh: dont underestimate us except Prabhu anna we all do exercise daily
Prabhu: why u dragging me in ur game
Ganesh: anna he is thinking we became old, so we have to clarify naa..u r mumma's boy from small u wont do work out
Karti : dido like Geet
Anand: Geet is like him,both are cheese ball
Venkat: u both teasing my brother haan with stern face
Anand: then wat see u brothers and sisters combination


Karti: Venkat periypaa ( tajji, uncle,father's elder brother) is taller appa is short and fat and see Ganesh chittpaa ( chachu, father's younger brother) still look young, Ganesh raised his invisible collar.
Anand: then one mouse like sister
Ram: why u dragging my wife
Anand: u too look like a military man, u sisters look like round cheese balls
Karti giggled
Ram: wat Maan he is teasing ur maa u r standing silently
Maan too glare at him
Anand : Maama i thought u always in truth side
Maan node and grin..
Ram: ok then we both will keep a challenging elders vise youngers ok
Maan: paa he is just teasing its ok
Venkat: we have too im with my son, Ram with his son and Ganesh with Karti
Maan: why Prabhu paa can also participate
Venkat : no Maan he is very soft person..in small we will go out with our father but he will be with amma ..he wont participate in any fight he wont even talk loudly..caressing Prabhu's hair..using his softness many will take advantage
Prabhu: anna its not like tat
Ram : then wat maama u know tat suresh got money from u and after months he said he didt and u too left him saying u dont have any proof
Prabhu: anna wat i can do if he betrayed he will get punishment from god


Ganesh: but Ram maama gave him nicely and made him accept it naa
Anand: tats why now he is suffering without one leg
Prabhu: Anand u should not say like tat
Anand : sory chittpaa
Prabhu: we sow wat we seed
Venkat: we can be good Prabhu but at te same not be fools if u get caught in something
Prabhi: nothing will happen to me till my family is there to look after me, looking at everyone
Maan know and seen his nature,in their family he is te only one very sensitive and soft kind person..he was touched with his words and fumed hearing some one try to cheat him,now on he wont let any harm touch his family..
Ganesh: ok ok now we continue te game
Ram: hmm ready
Venkat: one more no sentiments tat we are elders and u try to sacrifice so it should be genuine
Maan Anand Karti : deal..
Maan- Ram, Venkat - Anand, Ganesh- karti..prabhu became refree
Prabhu : start..all shake their hands and sat on te chair and hold both hands..first Venkat-Anand sat for te challenge..at once Prabhu whistle they started te game they were staring at each other and trying to win them..as per rule no sacrifice..


In Venkat - Anand Anand won and jumped in joy
Anand: appa now u accept u became old
Venkat sighed and look at other two couples..Then it was turn for Karti - Ganesh,Karthi was trying hard but his bad luck Ganesh won


Karti pushed his hand
Anand: wat karti
Ganesh : i said dont underestimate..u need more energy son,tapping his shoulder
Karti pout,now all gaze turn to Ram - Maan,they sat giving a look to each other,all were satring at them thinking now who will win to increase te point to elders team or youngers..both are not less than each other..

Maan can see so much strength in Ram in tis age too, his hands were very hard his muscles stretch ,first time he was struggling to face some one who is older than him,he know he will lose and look at Ram who smiling at him and suddenly loosened and Maan hold was strong so In sudden withdraw of Ram he knocked Ram's hand so easily, Maan stare at him who was smiling at him..Maan know he did it intentionally

Anand and karti jumped in joy tat youngers got extra one point
Anand : now youngers are more stronger than u
Elders glare at Ram
Maan : no elders are more stronger than us
All look at him..Ram know wat he meant and try to change te topic

Ram : its ok
Maan cut him: stronger than us not only in strength but in they heart and in showering they love for us
Anand: wat machan
Maan hold Ram's hands:paa why u did tis
Ram smile: coz i cant see my son losing even to his father my son should always be winner in everything,side hugging him
Maan smile and touched with his words: appa u love me so much wat i did to get u r love..tis game can be silly but ur love for me is ocean
Ram: u don't know Maan wat u given me.. we didt have babies for ages as ur maa got two miscarriage after years we got Saranya and u r maa cant concieve again..u don't know we both carved for a boy..u know in cities its not a matter but still in village how many girls we have but if a couples don't have a single boy we have to face so much taunt..all will say u dont have a son for my last rituals
All shouted: appa maama Ram
Ram smiles at them: wen i hear their words it really pricks,his eyes welled up,Maan hold him,now i can say with pride i have my son to hold me till my last breath wat Maan
Maan hugged him and node yes..Ram too got emotional,all felt sad and emotional and hugged them

( im using him as dinesh, his name is gautam karti tamil actor)


Dinesh: omg wat is tis he suddenly captured they hug in Anand's cell, now i will show to everyone tat u all crying he he

Anand: Dinesh kutty shaitan i wont leave u he run behind him
Venkat: ok now no sad vad cum lets do some work out after our Maan have so many equipments we have to use it naa
Ram: sure
All started to work out..
Maan was staring at te scene before him, he was standing like a kid who snatched his fav toy,he dont know wat to do,he look at Anand and karti who was giggling and enjoying his plight..
He thought to take Geet for check up and have some time with her,he came out to take te car but shock to see his whole family was standing all ready to accompany them to check up..he want to pull his hair..his face was worth watching..Geet saw him and Anand and Karti and know something is fishy

.
Dadi already arranged 4 limo for them to travel
Maan cleared his throat : we both are going for check up
Sp: we know tats why we all ready
Maan: but they wont allow more people
Dadi: Maan its our hospital and i called to shilpa morning and booked whole floor so no disturbance for us
Maan : but
Ram : we want to check once how is Geet and we want to talk with dr
Dadi and Geet sense his turmoil and giggling silently..
Venkat: can we go
Maan: haan why not he gave look to Anand and Karti
Venkat : elders in one we gents in one, girls in one.u boys in one..
Maan thought to try for his luck once: Geet
Ram: Geet will cum with ladies ok Geet Geet node obedently smiling inwardly..
Maan glare at te boys who pretend like they don't know anything all settled

Inside te car..
Maan : u both are good for nothing
Karti : wat we did i gave idea but how i know our family will flop it
Anand: in tis whole world why we got tis wired family..if we go in tis range naa i think karti idea is better kidnapping His finc


Suddenly something strick Maan 's mind hearing his words and smirk at boys who sense something is running in tis mind and smile at him giving thumbs up
They reached te hospital..dr and nurses was gapping at peoples who came with Geet,in their service they never seen like tis crowd accompany a patient for check up.
Dr to dadi : maaji staring at everyone who giving looks to dr
Dadi smile: they are Geet no our family
Dr smiles and know who are there: how r u Geet
Geet : fine aunty
Dr: wat Geet i think u gained weight
Geet: wat to do all their love made me like tis, all give a look to her, dr one doubt

Dr : say Geet

Geet : can I eat normal foods naa
Dr : sure why not
Geet: see listen to her from now on i wont eat bland foods see my tongue showing her tongue out..how pale it became..
Dr chuckled,all rolled their eyes..
Dr smiled : any pain
Geet look at everyone whose gaze was struck at her mouth waiting for her reply
Meena: hmm she said she had slight pain in her waist
Prabhu: wat pain
Geet gave a baby face
Dr: no its normal have to worry i will check
Dr took Geet asking everyone to wait..inside she checked..outside everyone are tensed and looking at each other.. who see them can think silly but that was they unconditional love for their kids
Dr came out ,all look at her : everything is fine,her wounds also healing, now nothing to worry,i dress her wound till then u all wait outside and have to check her hb level hmm it will take time if u want u can go home let Maan be here
Venkat: no no we dont have any work we will wait u do it
Dr gave a sad look to Maan who was pouting and left..Maan seek dr's help but it too flopped he stood like fuse less light

Geet Dr checked her wound and nurse did te dressing,after she finished te dressing, nurse asked her to wait little more as Dr will cum and check once..she felt bored waiting for Dr and she is hungry too..she saw te cell in her hand and thank god tat Rajji gave her phone asking if she need she can call them as they were waiting other side of te wing
She called to swetha's cell
Swetha: Geeta wat happen u need something
Geet: im hungry
Swetha giggled Rajji gesture her to on te speaker
Geet: im hungry where are u all if u leave me and go to canteen naa i will kill u all..in tis hospital dosas will be yummy tat too ghee roast so better get me also
Rajji: Geet u came for check but thinking abt ghee roast haan

Swetha : if she didt think only it will be shocking for us
Geet: im hungry naa with baby face
Anand: Geet ur habit still didt change, u know which hotel is famous for wat food
Geet: u shut up and better get my ghee roast
Karti: no way u were restricted to eat from outside and mainly oil foods
Geet pout : Dr gave permission
Anand : but we didt
Geet : i hate u all
Suddenly she heard some sound..
Geet: wait
She kept te phone on te bed without cutting te call and went to see te door..suddenly she jumped un shock wen she felt some one behind tapped her..she look at te person and took a deep sigh..she smack his cheeks


Geet : Maan u scared me,holding her heart
Maan pout ,holding his cheeks : tis is te gift i get for planning to spend some time with my gf haan
Geet: tis is te way to cum haan..why u came
Maan put his hands on her either shoulders : to romance with myMISTY rubbing his nose with her
Geet turned his face right and left : u became mad
Maan frowned : why
Geet : then tis is hospital our family is waiting outside and Dr will cum anytime..
Maan : she wont cum
Geet gave a look : mean
Maan : Ur Maan is so smart
Then it clicked Geet : oh so MR MAJNU SINGH KHURANA ki mission to meet his MISTY haan
Maan : haan how is my plan
Geet twisted her lips : smart
Maan : im
Geet : but little bit tis is not enough
Maan : i did these much to spend time with u, u taunting me do u know how much im carving to hold u in my arms pulling her more close to him holding her waist


Geet felt happy hearing his words and hugged him she kept her face on his chest feeling him: not only u Mr Khurana im also carving to hug u
Maan hugged her tightly both stood feeling each other
Maan kissed her hair : i missed my MISTY
Geet kissed his heart : i too miss u so much
Maan : u r correct i should have listen to ur words
Geet broke te hug and look at him confusely
Maan : u said once u discharge and go to km u bgs wont allow me near u, u r correct
Geet : yes tats why im saying u have to listen to me always
Maan : have to agreed hitting her forehead with his
Geet pushed him and pulled herself from te hug and sat in te bed
Maan frowned : wat happen
Geet : u have to get punishment
Maan sat beside her : for wat
Geet : for making me restless and carve for u
Maan : im also in te same condition ok
Geet : i don't know tat if i was a boy i would have kidnapped u in sec
Maan chuckled hearing her and remember Karti's words and thought both are same
Geet : don't laugh u ashamed to call mein MSK hoon
Maan : Geet i would done tat but they are our family how i will snatch they rights


Geet : ha ha dont give excuse and our family for name only they are elders but still they didt grow up
Maan : wat
Geet : they have to know we are in love we need some time alone but no they always behind us
Maan : its they love for us
Geet : no its they jealous
Maan : why they are jealous on us
Geet sat on te bed folding her legs like explaining to him,Maan know she started her nautanki, he look at his watch, he know he have little time but at te same time he know his MISTY wont stop now so rather to stop her and start another argument he just thought to listen to her, if he listen she will end it soon..

Geet : u see our paas and maas got married in childhood
Maan sighed : childhood
Geet : haan buddhu, tapping his head, he frowned ,yes before 20 its infant marriage and before 25 child marriage (tis is my logic) so automatic they could have missed our age romance so seeing us they got jealous
Maan : if they cum to know tis will it will be our last day and put so many restrictions to us
Geet : i wont sit quitely like u i will hold ur hand and stand in front of them boldly and ask for u r hand
Maan : Geet tis should be my lines
Geet : wen u r behaving like a girl i should be a man
Maan : wat im girl wait I will show wat a man.is,he frowned
He lean on her and she move back soon she lye on te bed pressing te cell and Maan on her


Geet : Maan lets us go all are waiting came as whisper
Maan : let them wait before tat i have to show abt my maniliness..before she protest Maan captured her lower lips to shut her..Maan was nibbling her lower lips and Geet got his upper lip

Maan chuckled : not bad

Geet smiled and both nibbling each other's lips, Maan was lying on her without putting any weight on her,both were kissing and tasting each other..Maan was not getting enough of her as he missed her so much..he was tasting her sweetness, they kiss was passionate but Maan slowly increase te pace and claiming her mouth by entering his tongue deep inside her mouth shuddering her

Geet's hands encircled around his neck and pulling him more on her holding his hair in her fist..te kiss turned into wild making them to lose they sense..soon they both were struggling for breath..Maan left her lips and look at her flushed face, Geet was smiling at him..Maan kissed her forehead and slowly descend down kissing her eyes lids one by one and again pecked her lips

Geet clenched his collar to control her erotic heart beat..Maan descend down and started to kiss her neck moving from one side to another , Geet was twisting herself and digging her nails on his biceps..Maan was lost in his licking sessions tasting her skin..his hands was busy in tracing her skin over te dress, when it get access to enter into her waist thru te slit, it shamlessly roamed inside her waist feeling her bare skin..

His lips was doing magic on her neck and his fingers on her waist making her to feel electric current thru out her whole body..she was just moaning his name and both lost in their chupke chupke love away from their family..


PRECAP : FAMILY'S DECISION..

NEXT PART:THREAD - 11



Edited by Desigirls12 - 9 years ago
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SORY FOR TE DELAY FRIENDS BUT TILL NOV I WILL BE LITTLE BIT DELAY IN POSTING SORY BUT BEAR ME..I WILL TRY TO GIVE UPDATES BUT IT WILL BE SLOW..


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Superb fantastic update
loved it
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YIPEEE ME FIRST 🥳🥳🥳
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Originally posted by: Desigirls12



SORY FOR TE DELAY FRIENDS BUT TILL NOV I WILL BE LITTLE BIT DELAY IN POSTING SORY BUT BEAR ME..I WILL TRY TO GIVE UPDATES BUT IT WILL BE SLOW..




its okay dear
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really wonderfull update😊
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part 167
awesome lovely update...
awww poor maan is not able to spend time with his mishty...n geet is enjoying his restlessness 😆
geet's family is so sweet all are really pampering her n all the khurana's...😛
anand n karthi are too much teasing maan n poor dinesh he is not able to understand their talks 😆
oh atleast maan have someone who understands his plight anand
their teasing remind maan about vicky...
geet's family n their bonding n teasing eachother loved it very much...
geet's family flops maan's plan about his spending time with mishty..but maan is maan..he managed to chory sometime with his mishty that too under their family's nose 😆

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