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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
maan ka dimag dadi se tez ..good hai
hope he soon find out truth

thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double uopdates! well written! js read Part 26 n Part 27 nw! Hate dadi! she is so evil! Vicky reveals 2 Maan wt shd did! Maan stunned! he decides 2 test her! Bt dadi clever! Maan doubts her n asks Geet n Vicky 2 b careful! Geet asks Maan if it was deal! he says it was bt he truly loves her! Maan assures Geet to can study n wrk! she says Ayesha does love them! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...loving Maan and his strong mind of thoughts abt Dadi...
Loved trio talks...
Update soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...loving Maan and his strong mind of thoughts abt Dadi...
Loved trio talks...
Update soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late reply

I am shifting to new home so couldnt able to read updates

Now i am starting again

I will comment chap wise

Chap-16

Full of romance 😳

Loved the update

Geet needs to talk to Maan

If they wont talk there will unnecessary misunderstandings

Maan atleast should have talked to her or geet

Thanks for PM 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-17

Nice part

good that Geet talked to Meera

Such a romantic update

Nice they are going out of country for some days

Maybe they come closer

Geet is in fear if she may lose Maan

Maan loves Geet but just staying away for her

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap-18

Cunning dadi

Should i feel sorry about Ayesha for what happened to her or should i be angry on her for trying to separate Maneet

Hope Dadi gets severe punishment

yup Geet is innocent but she is strong you are very wrong dadi you cant do anything

I know Geet can tackle any situation

This twist is shocking

Thanks for PM



Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
A Long update as i cant update for almost 20 days. I'll get lot of time after this. 😊
Part 28

Two days have passed after all this mess. Maan came back early today.
Maan laid on his bed to relax for sometime.Though Maan was calm he had to find the
answers of why dadi is doing this. Its very difficult to suspect to suspect someone whom
you love and consider family. he has to find the truth and protect Vicky and Geet too.
Both can easily get trapped. he has to play the cards well to trap the main culprit.
And the plan was all ready in his mind. May be dadi is innocent or not in either way
it would be a loss for him. Either way he will lose his trust on dadi or Ayesha.
Maan was in a delimma to really workout this plan. But his first priority
would be Ayesha. to bring her back to normal. Maan relaxed laying on bed.
he felt his personal life totally a mess.
Maan the sound itself was soothing his mind. he didnt open his eyes. geet touched his hand.
Maan kept his other hand on hers. when geet sat near him he kept his head on her lap.
please dont worry...hmm..geet leaned back on the rim. Maaneet slept in that position.

Vicky and Meera were close friends. Vicky shared his problems with Meera except dadi's.
It was a family secret which he couldnt share with anyone. Now Vicky everyday used to
have BF with her. he used to drop Meera home at evening. spend somemore time with
meera and then go to KM. Vicky and Meera now became a gossip for the office staff.
Only Khuranas and Meera was unaware of this.

It was the D day for Priya and Ayesha. Today they would land back to Delhi.
Arun and Priya were tensed. Ayesha had a fight in her mind between good and bad.
her hatered for Maan and Vicky reduced but Dadi she hated her to the core.
Arun and Ayesha entered Shergil house. It was totally rennovated with Ayesha and Arun's
choices. Both were surprised. thats when Maan and Vicky came front.
Did you loved it? Maan asked. Ayesha stared at Maan for a while then at Vicky.
when no answer came Vicky became emotional. Vicky hugged ayesha.
you missed us or not...we missed you. we really love you di..
Priya's fingers were crossed. Ayesha didnt hug him back.After sometime
which looked like ages Vicky losened his hug when Ayesha hugged him tight.
you are my brother...i cant hate you. tears came out from her eyes. she hugged
vicky more tight and looked at Maan. her eyes spoke for her. she was looking
longingly at Maan. asking sorry and a chance thousands and thousand times.
Maan went for a group hug. Arun and Priya were the happiest. Priya in excitement
hugged Arun. Ayesha left Vicky and Maan at once.
I saw my brothers after so many days. what about you?
Priya left Arun at once.
I dont have a brother na so i hugged Arun. Priya was scared while others giggled.
Ayesha gave a smile to her. Thank you..Priya looked confused.
To give my family back. Priya smiled.
Your family has one more person. This idea was hers.
Ayesha looked at Maan and Vicky. Arun brought geet near Ayesha.
Ayesha stared at geet for a while then stood near geet folding her hands.
You are my bhabhi but i will call you only geet. Is it OK for you?
Ayesha looked serious. we dont have a bond but we can work it out. right?
geet said yes nodding many times.
Ayesha gave a smile and hugged her. geet too reciprocated.
Will you all stay here for today. I want to spend time with all of you.
offcourse di.. Vicky said happily.
Maan was thoughtful. he cant leave dadi alone. seeing Ayesha's pleading eyes he said yes.

Maan informed dadi that he is taking geet for date. Vicky called dadi telling he is going
with friends for camp. the trio had happy time with ayesha. At night Ayesha went to sleep.
Priya discussed her next move with others.
we have to make Ayesha live in KM for few days.
But she hates dadi?
we cant keep her away from dadi for whole life. she have to face her. only then
the actual truth can be out.
can you guarantee us di will remain same as she is now.
No
Maan glared at Priya.
I am not scared of you big eyes. can you guarantee 100% profit in shares?
no... then let me do my work in my way. she gave emphasis on her last words.
I dont play with someones life.
Priya looked at geet really!
Maan understood Priya's taunt.
he never ignored his responsibility and moreover it was a deal of trust.
Maan looked at geet in awe. geet caught maan's hand.
Priya admired there bond.
OK if you want we can postpone this ''dadi poti'' meeting for sometime. but it has to
be done fast before that lady makes any new plan.
how can you be so sure dadi is the main culprit?
None in this world is a perfect angle. If someone makes us feel in that way you
can make sure it will be a devil in disguise.
what we have to do?
find why Ayesha's mom was kicked out of KM. And also about your grand father too.
why that?
because i feel somewhere Rajesh Singh Khurana has to do something with all this.
Maan was going to call a detective.
priya caught his hand. geet didnt like it. Maan was confused why she did that.
he felt a stare from back. he looked back only to find a fuming pair of eyes.
Maan took his hand off. Priya smirked at Maan.
geet was going to leave. I caught his hand to stop him. but am happy to see you jealous. you look cute.
geet frowned. Priya looked at Maan.
detectives come to know from news paper cuttings and outside people.
We dont want that. We have to find RSK's right hand. who knew everything
about him.
Maan called detective again . Priya frowned.
I want details of one jaswant who worked in KM by tomorrow.
you are not that fool i thought of you.
Maan was fuming while Arun understood his misery.
Vicky giggled but stopped seeing Lady MSK ready to kill him.

All went to sleep except Maaneet. geet i cant understand what i did?
that priya caught your hand and you kept quite. only when i saw you, you took your hands.
So you were jealous.
No
then why this cribbing. Maan started caressing her right hand from back.
Maan stop this.
No. Maan slowly started moving to her shoulder and then to collarbone.
geet was already turned jelly that was Maan's effect on her.
Maan she moaned.
Maan lifted geet and took her to bed.
geet's hand embraced his neck.
Only you have this right to touch me like this. Only your touch is
reciprocated by my body. geet shied and pulled Maan more to her.
Maan took geet to their world of passion marking an end for today
and a start for tomorrow.
Morning Maaneet left first to KM. Vicky stayed with Ayesha.
Maan got details of jaswant. their first step of mission was completed.



Next update after two weeks. there will be maaneet romance, sister's love and
off course our dadi's past and punishment😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
mission dadi started . going great .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Suuuperb yaaar... Maan babu is in full mission mode.. Cont sooon hun..

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