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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks


Whew
That was just what I had been waiting 4
Hamesha appka cmmnt padhke itti motivated ho jati hu k ideas a jate h
Thanx
Ab update milegi
Najane kitne llogon ko maine bolll di thi k keya di comment kare tabtak yeh fiction hold pr h

OMG!! I seriously never knew k koi mere reply ka bhi wait kar sakta hai... You really make me feel special. I'm sorry behna! Agar mujhe pata hota that my review really motivates you so much toh fir I would have come earlier...
I'm really speechless yaar. Thank you so much for loving me this much sweet sister.
You must be knowing k moi IF pe zyaada active nahi rehti. So next time update karne k 1 day pehle just scrap me so that I'll get to know about it.
Thank you so so so very much.
Love you loads sis<33

Ab apun ko update mangta hai!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

OMG!! I seriously never knew k koi mere reply ka bhi wait kar sakta hai... You really make me feel special. I'm sorry behna! Agar mujhe pata hota that my review really motivates you so much toh fir I would have come earlier...
I'm really speechless yaar. Thank you so much for loving me this much sweet sister.
You must be knowing k moi IF pe zyaada active nahi rehti. So next time update karne k 1 day pehle just scrap me so that I'll get to know about it.
Thank you so so so very much.
Love you loads sis<33

Ab apun ko update mangta hai!😆

Milenga milenga



19th k baad
Meri xams h 10th tak
N uskk4 baad spell bee nationals

Jo, I think main apki works n comments padhke hu clear kar lungi

No need of xtra study
Bcoz of ur itti awesum blllossom wali vocab jispe moi fidaa


*tries 2 learnfrm dii*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Chapter 3

Guys here's the continuation of the ff we started at least a month ago. Here is a short recap of it: Sanyu n Randhir hav cum to a theatre to watch a movie . While watching the movie suddenly Sanyu fells unconscious in the theatre. Randhir gets panicky n takes her to the hospital at once. . Recap ends .


It starts with sanyu is taken to the ward in the hospital. The doctor is called n the doctor examines sanyu n after a while tells Randhir to go out of the room . Randhir goes. N inside the ward now , the doctor is examining her n comes to know that she is pregnant , n he also does the sonography of her stomach n comes to know there's a girl ' child ' in her stomach without talking to Randhir. The doctor comes out of the room. N Randhir asks him what happened. The doctor tells Randhir to come to his cabin. Randhir goes. Takes a seat ' in the doctors cabin. The doctor tells Randhir that his wife is pregnant. Randhir is relieved n absolutely happy happy . The doctor tells Randhir that there's a girl child in her stomach. N asks him if u want to do an abortion. Randhir is in shock , being a doctor he is saying like this . Randhir says why the hell r u saying like this. Now here's a bad past abt the doctor the doctor was actually not a bad ' person. But whenever he attempted such cases of pregnancy , n whenever a girl child used to b der he was forced to do abortion by the families . He was absolutely against this . He complained to the police but the police also refused to help. Many such cases came n he did abortion. He started thinking if all think like dat why should I be good if no other person in the world is . ) He tells his past to Randhir. Randhir feels sorry. N tells the doctor I m absolutely happy with the girl child. I m ok with everything I get . No need of any abortion . I will accept it readily. The doctor is shocked n surprised as no one in his life said like this . He is extremely happy. Randhir aasks the doctor when sanyu will be conscious n when can he take her home . The doctor says lets see . She must hav cum to consciousness. U can take her home today itself. They both go to Sanyu s hospital ward . Sanyu is sitting on the bed . She sees Randhir n doctor coming in . Randhir runs to her n takes her hand in his . He asks r u feeling u gud now ? She says yes n asks whaat had happened to her . Randhir says lets go home there's a surprise waiting for u at home. Randhir n doctor smile at each other. N Sanyu is taken home.

N now guys u hav to wait for the .


Posted by harshu , sanyus frnd ( SADDAHAQFAB N MISHTYKAURA . NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED BY SANYU AS COLLABORATED )
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Ok
Res
UNRESS

Ok...Nona...awesum job...first tym k liye not bad AT ALL...

Try 2 b a little more descriptive if u knw wht I mean..
Ah...chuck it...I'll tell u l8er

M sooo happy k finally u have written thus on ur own...



Proud of u
*gives u flying kiss*
Sanyu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Read all the chapters together
And one for this is AMAZING

Really loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Its awsome update Nona
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Sounds fairly good. It's a tad bit hard to believe that this is your first time writing this cause it was awesome and too amazing to be a first try.
Ah! So the doctor did had a bad past with all this. His past was one of despair but that doesn't means that he'll turn out to be like the common mass... Anyways, I'm glad that Randhir's actions and reactions after learning that he's gonna be the father of a little angel had evoked the suppressed human within the doctor.
Aww... Randhir is so cute and I'm so glad that he's elated with the news of having a daughter. I can't wait to know how Sanyukta is gonna respond to all this.
A wonderful chapter with a thought-provoking instance and and equally well executed write-up... Fantastic!
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Do update it pretty soonish!!

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

<font color="#0066ff">Hellow ji!!Me, sanyu, aka the laziest updater ever, is back with an update!!
</div>Plus, today, i have some dedications! *rubs hands in glee*Owkaie, sothis chapter is dedicated to VRINDA DII( vrinda65) and @ Ishq2015 ( u didnt tell me ur name!)And thats coz their so excellent brains threw up such a wonderful guess tht i dont even need 2 updatr nowDUHbut i will anywayz!
sorry 4 d delay, and to make up, here i am with a LAMBA UPDATE!!!
so here goesCHAPTER#2:</font><font color="#6600ff">RECAP: Sandhir go for a movie. Sanyu faints. Rd takes her to a very down-market doc. Nurse says that she has bad news.AB, AAGEY-</font><font color="#9933cc">"Aapko doc saab bataenge".Randhir, by now, was very scared. Scared of the so called bad news. He followed the nurse inyo the cabin, in a trance-like state. Inside the shabby cabin lay sanyu on the examining bed, still asleep. The doc sat at the table and signalled rd 2 take the chair opposite to him."Mr. Randhir singh shekhavat" he spoke. "Aapke liye ek buri khabar hain" Randhir stared at the doc, the fear in his eyes quite evident. Finally, after what seemed an eon, the doc continued."Mr Shekhavat, aapki wife pregnant hain."Randbir's face lit up with an inexplicable joy. He pinched himself to make sure he wasnt dreaming. But why, then, did he say 'bad news'?? Was ...was it a complicated pregnancy?? Was there any chance that Sanyu might get hurt?? Numerous such questions ran through his mind, and he looked at the doc, just as blankly as before.The doc,by then, was trying to read his face and decide whether to tell himthat blank look introduced itself as sadness to the doc, and he continued" Buri khabar toh yeh hain, ki aapki patni ke kokh(womb) mein ek ladki hain.[DIV]
Now rd was on the 7th heaven of delight. He nearly couldnt believe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: SADDAHAQFAB

Oh nona ji!!!

Yeh aapne kya post kari h zara batane ka kasht karenge??
Chuck it... Aaj recess me mil tu mujhe😡

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

[A/N]:Hello every1!!!

As u guyz can well see, I will be writing and updating this fic simultaneously with my other one. But there is one small change- this fic will now be written me only. It used to be a collab but harshu backed out, so, yeah! Its me now.

Also, I am aware that this chap has not come out very nice. I am sorry guyz and I assure u that further chapters will be more preferable to read. I also promise to update ahead very soon.So without much ado now, here's the next part.

[Recap- sandhir in the clinic. Sanyu is pregnant but doesn't knw yet. Doc suggested abortion, rd beats him]

Ab, aagey:

"Plz come out with me for a second" The doc said to randhir. He then went out of the room. Randhir patted Sanyukta's hand and followed the doc.

"What is it...plz be fast. I stopped hitting u only because my wife said so otherwise I would have certainly beaten u black and blue." An angry Randhir said.

"Calm down, child. I am not as demonous as u think I am. There was a reason I suggested an abortion, knowing that it is illegal." Randhir raised his eyebrows in curiosity as the doc continued. "As u know, this area is not such a good area. Owning a clinic in this area brings u all sorts of patients-educated, uneducated, illiterate. They would get to know the gender of the baby sumhow and most of the patients, when the learnt that they were gonna give birth to a girl child, requested an abortion. When I refused, they threatened. Once I nearly lost my life due to this. When in rome, do as rome does' , I thought. Slowly, over the years, this became routine.

Today, when u came in with ur wife, I recogonized u. U and ur wife are nearly always in the papers. And why not? Achieving so much at this young age is not easy. For a moment, I was startled. I thought, why have such educated people come to this shabby clinic?? But then I thought, ofcourse-u must have also come for an abortion. My heart sank. But when I told u the news, that ur wife has a girl child, I could see the happiness in ur face. I did not want to suggest abortion. But old habits die hard. The words escaped my mouth before I could stop them. But child, I am really happy that u did not turn out to be the way I had thought. In the half hour I have spent with you, I have got to know u. I could see the happiness for ur child, ur concern for ur wife, all in ur eyes. I can say only one thing to u, child, that u will be a great father, and a very good human being. My blessings are with you".

Randhir was stunned at this. He had not expected the doctor to turn out like this at all! He thanked the doctor and took his blessings. Both of them entered the clinic once more.

Once inside, the sight that Randhir saw made him fall in love with Sanyu once again. He saw Sanyu sitting up on the examining bed, repairing the remote of the AC. There was a nurse beside her, looking at her in awe as she put the cover back onto the remote and successfully switched on the AC. She looked up at Randhir and smiled. He smiled back and went to the bed, lifting her up and gently putting her back down on her feet. "Where were you, Randhir? See! Meet her. She is the nurse here. Her name is priyanka. She was trying to put on the ac for the doc but was near tears when it stopped working! Maine thik kar di. See! "She said and held up the remote for him to see. He just smiled at her, and told her to get her bag. He thanked the doc, grasped sanyukta's hand and left the clinic.

PRECAP: Cute sandhir moments.

IMP- Guyz m taking vanvaas for a few days...may b totally inactive till Tuesday. Nxt update on wed or thurs. Adeiu!!
Like n comment guyz😉
love,
-Sanyu
Edited by -MysticAura- - 9 years ago

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