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Posted: 9 years ago
maan behnsh hogaya geet ki pregnancy k news sunnke...

lovely teaser...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 38
superb part
darji wanted annie fr ranbir...but ranbir is denying nd planned to trick innocent annie .by bribing her wid ten dairy milk chocolates 🥱


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser dear
Update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
Loved it ... Darji s asking Aniee hand for Ranbir ... But Ranbir s dening the decision and he s feeling frustrated ... Geet s feeling guilty for Aniee and Ranbir ... Aniee s really a kido .. Asking for diary milk and Ranbir s getting mad ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Yet Hilarious Update
Omg I just LOVE RaNi ( hehheheh ranbir - anni = RaNi sounds perfect name lol ) both are just mindblowing jodi n the best dialog when ranbir said - Mujhe ek bachi se shaadi nahi karni and your loving beautiful Annie is a kid ROFL even anni proved him right
when he said main jo kahu ga mann ge she said she - Only if you give me a big dairy milk Cadbury LAMO omg that's to funny poor ranbir she literally killed him by her innocence ...

Coming to update
Wowww Hitler Dadimaa again went to HM for asking geet's hand and said sorry to omg am i dreaming although it was the result of by her beloved own son doing goshh yash threatened dadimaa to accept the wedding and daadima had to agree yupiii yash rockkk she had done damage control so by accepting that maaneet's marriage should happen otherwise
she will loose her family...and cherry on the cake Vicky's supper hilarious description and the way he was describing about there coming back was so funny ( onething I'm sure this story definitely incomplete without Vicky he is such jaanuuu muahhh sooo adorable character humeshaa ek meethi se smile aate h jab eska koi scene ho toh thanksss Di giving us such loveable Vicky muaaahh Di ) but sab ne poor baby ko chup kara deyaa grrr ...

Darji exploding bomb weird condition annie's hand for ranbir !! Everyone was shocked especially poor ranbir amd his reaction to his beloved darji damm funny n when he said to sent darji asylum n all his comments was to hilarious seriously poor ranbir terribly lost his mind by darji's proposal !!! Bcoz he want his safe n secure future so he's taking anni so that his geet won't be troubled by dadimaa in future n his geet will be safe with Khurana's ...

Here ranbir went to trick anni and he actually sealed the deal with annie that she should say no to marry him by giving her
10 dairy milk chocolates n she agree buuhaaa don't worry ranbir baby wo definitely pure plan k raayta fayelaaye gi heehhee your doomed baby ...
Geet anr Pregnant omg what was that ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg what a dhamakedar teaser ...

i don't know what to say Di knew you where right with your POV ...
still your note has just made me sad n it will be really heartbroken if you shut down this story ...
plsss Di don't do that na ... think again plsss and ye mere favorite story h ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for Annie and ranbir's part specially :P
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Posted: 9 years ago





Jaan wats the matter. Maan asked seeing his Jaan pace down the room of his farmhouse. He was very busy in a meeting when he got a call from his Jaan asking him to get here urgently and he was so scared tat he left the meeting midway and rushed to see his Jaan. Jaan..bolo kya baat hain.. why are you so tensed?

Maan. A tear rolled down. Maan sab barbaad ho juka hain... I...

Kya barbaad ho juka hain Jaan. He asked not understanding the seriousness of her words. And please stop pacing like a mad man.

How will I show my face Maan? He frowned and took a step towards her but she inched back. Don't come near.. main kisiko muh dekhne layak nahi rahi.

Kya bokwas kar rahi ho haan. He tried to grab her hand but she stepped back again. Jaan stop doing tat aur batao baat kya hain aur yeh why the hell are you crying? His heart pained seeing tears roll down her cheeks. Jaan..yeh.. don't worry we'll get married.. kuch nahi hoga Jaan... shaadi hogi humari. He tried to assure her about their wedding thinking she was upset coz of the things going on. Shaadi hogi Jaan.

Kaise hogi and now.. how the hell I'm supposed to... Maan hum kya karenge. She suddenly cried louder. Darji and Papa will kill me.. they will kill me Maan.. zinda maar denge mujhe.

Wat. He was getting angry now. Jaan just stop this nonsense and tell me wats the problem and why the hell you asked me to come here.. baat kya hain.

I'm pregnant. He just froze but his eyes stared at her. Maa bane wali hain aapki Jaan.. Pregnant hoon main and thud he was on floor with no life in him. Maan.. Maan Geet rushed to his side. Maan kya hua. Maan please open your eyes Maan please. She shook him but there was no response from his body. Maan please open your eyes.. don't scare me Maan please..please. She cried shaking him trying to wake him up but nothing.

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Geet wiped her cheeks and continued staring at Maan. It was so long and there was no response from him and it scared her. She even tried to call Ranbir but feared tat he may just blast her up on knowing wat was wrong with Maan and her but now she was getting afraid and decided against everything she picked her phone to call Ranbir but then suddenly she saw Maan's fingers move.

Maan.. Maan aap... utt rahe ho Maan. She threw her mobile not caring for it and cupped Maan's face. Maan.. Maan open your eyes baby.. please aur mat dur raho na aise.. please Maan. She shook him but then once again there was no response and she cried leaning back on the chair staring at him when suddenly she heard his murmur.

Pregnant. Maan snapped open his eyes. He shook his head to clear any doubts but still he felt he was far away from real world. Did Jaan just say she's pregnant?

Off course I did Maan. He slowly turned and saw his Jaan give him a small smile but another thing tat he realized was her dress. How are you?

Tum.. you weren't wearing this kurti na? Geet frowned. Wat was he saying. Jaan sach bolna main koi sapna dekh raha hoon kya.

Maan you have been unconscious for about 10 hours now. He just gaped at her as if she was alien and talking rubbish. Kya dekh rahe ho.. aap ne tho mujhe darra hi diya.. I mean meri pregnancy ki baat sunn kar aap tho sach mein ludhak gaye.

Tum sach mein pregnant ho? He asked still not understanding anything. Was I unconscious for 10 hours? Main kausi jagah hoon? Hospital hain kya Jaan. Main zinda hoon ya maar juka hoon. Yeh meri Atma hain kya. He continued to rattle while Geet wiped her tears seeing him safe and talk to her. Jaan bolo na.. m I dead.. m I dreaming this.

Na. She moved and settled on the bed. She had taken help from the farmhouse caretaker and settled him on bed and he had also managed to call the local doctor who said he was under a shock and would take hours to get back and nothing serious. You are very much alive but you almost killed me... 10 hours Maan..how could you just stay unconscious for 10 hours.

When did you change your dress? He ignored everything. Jaan when did you change your dress?

Thodi der pehle... You always keep a spare set for us here but Maan main...

Tum pregnant nahi ho na. He sat looking at her with hope. He was so scared and his body literally shivering with fear. Tat was a joke na Jaan.. humne tho kabhi..

I'm pregnant Maan. He fell back on the bed again and closed his eyes. Maan.. Maan open..

Zinda hoon. He murmured opening his eyes slowly. Still alive but don't know how long?

Don't speak like tat. She cried hugging throwing herself on his body. Don't please...

Are you sure you are pregnant? He asked wrapping his hands around her. Hum.. how can it be Jaan.. I mean humne kabhi sex.. I mean we never made love na..

Kiya tha. His body stilled. Every word from her was forcing his mind to remember his Dadima and her anger. We did make love Maan.. tat day..

Nahi Jaan humne kiya nahi..

So you mean I cheated on you. She yelled pulling herself away. You want to say tat I slept with someone else and this baby isn't yours.

Pagal ho kya. He sat with anger. When did I say tat but trust me Jaan he cupped her face I don't remember making love to you... yaar humne kabhi.. shit I never took your virginity Jaan tho phir baby kaise. Kahi magic se tho baby nahi hua na. He asked with a smile. Haan wahi hoga.. sach mein magic se baby aaya hoga tumare tummy mein.

Tat night Maan..ush raat sab kiya humne.. you were so much passionate and next morning you said everything happens for good. She smiled. Pata hain I did not even know.. doctor ne kaha ki I'm almost 2 and half month pregnant.. abortion bhi nahi kar sakthe hain.

But humne kab kiya baby.. when did we make baby Jaan. He cried. Tears rolled down his cheeks. I can't remember anything... was I drunk..

Nahi Maan... not drunk... and it wasn't your mistake... I forced you.. I still remember you said we should not cross but then I said I wanted you and you could not deny me and then your turned passionate.. we made love for very long..hum na bed se bahar bhi nahi nikale. He just stared.

Kab kiya..kaha kiya..

Yahi Maan.. on this bed.. And he suddenly jumped out of the bed in fear pushing Geet. It was like the bed was coming to eat him coz he did not remember a thing happened on this bed. Kya hua..

Kuch nahi. He gave her a nervous smile and pulled her into his arms. Kuch nahi hua..Jaan.

Wat will we do Maan... shaadi tho nahi ho rahi hain and this.. Darji will kill me Maan.. darji will kill me.

And Dadima will kill me. He growled closing his eyes trying to calm himself. She'll cut me into pieces..

Main... I'm sorry Maan...I'm sorry. She cried hiding her face into him. Yeh sab meri wajah se hain..I..

We'll get married right now. She pulled herself a little and stared at him. Don't look at me like tat... hum shaadi kar lete hain abhi ishi waqt.

Maan..

This is our baby Jaan. He touched her flat tummy. And we will do the best for our baby.. We'll get married even if our family is against.. bahut kuch dekh liye and sunn liya par ab nahi.

But Maan..

No buts and if Jaan. Maan smiled at her sweetly. We are getting married and tats it... You are pregnant with my baby.. our baby..

Pregnant. The room echoed with the lethal voice. Geet you are..

Bir Bhai... Maan hid Geet behind him seeing the way Ranbir Handa looked at her. He would not let anyone harm her now.

How dare you Geet? Tum pregnant ho... Yeh..

It's not her mistake Ranbir. Maan cuts Ranbir. It's our baby and you don't have a right to shout at Geet... I would not..

And let her play with our family haan? Ranbir was angry while Vicky and Pooja just stood helpless staring at Maan and Geet. There was no news about Geet and Maan and after a long wait Vicky suggested tat they look at them in farmhouse after Geet and Maan refused to attend a single call. Tum jaanthe bhi ho Maan wat you both did.. damn man she is pregnant.. my little sister is pregnant without getting married and you say I don't have a right to say a word.

Bhai woh..

Shut up... He glared and then suddenly he stormed inside and grabbed Geet and hugged her tight. God Geet.. tum preggy ho.. yaar meri gudiya abhi gudiya hain and you pregnant. His anger vanished and now he was somewhat shocked and surprised and worried too. Maan wat did you do? Yaar yeh tho abhi khud bachi hain..

Agar pata hota tho khud ko answer deta. Maan grumbled. Dekh kyu rahe ho.. sachi mein Ranbir I still don't understand when I made a baby.. yaar kab hua kaha hua khud ko pata nahi.

Wat do you mean? Ranbir glared at him but then softened his eyes. Ab.. shit come on lets go. He held Geet tight in his arms and walked out of the room asking others to follow. None said a word. Pooja and the usual joker Vicky was all silent while Maan he was still trying to digest the truth of his Jaan being pregnant while Ranbir he made few calls and rushed them towards HH.

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Now you must be very happy. Right old man. Dushyant grinned from ear to ear. His happiness had no boundaries and for a change and to celebrate his win he jumped and danced hugging Ranbir the moment he declared his decision of marrying Annie. Now stop tat monkey dance.

Kyu bandh karu haan. Darji asked still dancing with happiness while Savitri Devi watched him like a hawk watching her prey. Yash ne tho subah hi haan bol di thi bas tumari baari thi.

Wat. Everyone was shocked and Maan he could not believe. He was getting shock after shock. When did Dad se yes? Dad you did not tell me about this?

I tried Maan but tum tho subah jaldi nikal gaye aur phir tumara phone hi nahi lag raha tha. Maan looked at Geet and the moment he did he shook a little. I know this must be a shock but jo Darji ne kaha woh theek tha. Annie will be inside the family only and why should we look for a groom outside when we have such a handsome and successful man in front of us.

But Dad aapne Annie se poocha? Vicky asked. He was finally out of his shock. You do know how nave and innocent Annie is and this Ranbir Handa.. don't mind haan Ranbir he mocked at Ranbir seeing him glare at him tum tho bull dog se bhi khatranak ho aur meri bachi se pyari si sister.. god you might crush her with your weight.

Wat do you mean?

I mean when you and Annie...

Shut up. Ranbir hissed at him. Shaadi hui nahi tum waha tak chale gaye.. sach kheti hain Pooja tat Khuranna's are the weirdest species on the earth.

Kab kaha. Vicky growled at Pooja. Oye Handa ki bachi kab kaha.. zara phir se kaho..

Kyu achaar dalna hain kya. Vicky narrowed his eyes. Waise sach hi tho hain.. dekho waha tumari Hitler Dadima kaise dekh rahi hain mere Darji ko.

Monkey dance karega tho aise hi looks milenge. Pooja made a growling sound but seeing Geet look at her she kept quite. Bolti bandh kyu hogayi..

Don't worry time aanepar bol dungi kyu bandh hogayi. And she moved from there leaving him alone with Ranbir.

Dad.. I asked something..

Annie says no. Vicky grinned and looked at Annie who sat smiling next to her Dadima eating a chocolate unaware about the real matters. She said she does not want to marry Ranbir Handa.

Sahi tho kaha meri bachi ne. Dadima patted and gave her another chocolate. For once someone from her own family did the right thing and the moment Annie refused to marry Ranbir she had rewarded her with dairy milk Cadbury's. Ab na yeh Geet- Maan ki shaadi hogi na Ranbir-Annie.. hogaya Handa se jutkara Khuranna's ka.

Yash ne tho haan keh di na Savitri, Annie bhi keh degi. Darji taunted. Ab tumari marzi tho nahi chalti tumare ghar mein so..

Annie ne na kaha Dushyant babu. She cut him in between. And na ka matlab na hota hain.. do you get. Hain na beta. Annie smiled. Repeat wat you said to your Dad when he asked you about getting married to Ranbir.

I don't want to get married to the bull dog Ranbir Handa. Dadima smiled. He does not like me and I don't like him.. he has big eyes and they look like bhoot's. Dadima grinned much wider.

But I want to marry you Annie. Ranbir suddenly said. And whatever it costs I will marry you.

But you asked me to say NO na. And she once again proved tat she was an innocent and stupid. You said if I say NO for the marriage you'll give me chocolates na.. so I said no and now you are saying yes... Aap mujhe pagal kar rahe hain Ranbir.

Tum pagal hi ho Annie, pagal banana I zarrurat nahi.

Ranbir Handa. Dheeraj, his father growled in anger. Do not forget she is a sister to someone just like you have.. mind tat tongue of yours.

But maine tho sach kaha and I did not deny tat I asked her to say no but now I want to marry her. He was direct in his words. Aur rahi baat uski haan kehne ki chocolate do haan kahegi.

You think my Annie is some sort of doll? Dadima asked. And she has already said no so there is no way she'll say yes.

Ok..but Geet aur Maan ki shaadi hogi. Ranbir turned back to his Hitler Handa mode. Engagement ho juki hain and I would not like you to make a mockery about my sister and neither would I like you two he eyed even his Darji to play with her life. Yeh shaadi hogi and wahi date pe hogi.

But...

Do not think I can't do anything. He threatened Savitri directly. If you do not get them married then I swear I'll forcibly marry your sweet innocent Annie and then leave her.. phir dhamake karte rehna aap.

How dare you..

Don't you dare me Maan. Ranbir had lost his cool now and he would go to any extent to get his sister married to Maan now when she was pregnant. You Dadima thinks my sister is some doll.. jab chaho khel do so why can't I play with your sister's life haan.. tumari behan, behan hain aur meri nahi.

Ranbir you are taking...

No Maan. Ranbir wasn't letting anyone say a word not even his own family. I know I'm not the best for Annie and I myself don't want to marry soon but I do know Annie is a good girl and anyone would love to make her wife and trust me I do not make empty promises when I make one... Shayad mein ideal ladka nahi hoon Annie ke liye but still I do have some good qualities in me Maan.. I love my family and respect relations just like you do and can go to any extent to keep them safe.. haan galati karta hoon but every man does so why this unnecessary talks Maan... why just try to get each other down when all we want is Geet and Annie to be happy and as darji said Annie ghar mein hi rahegi and don't you think tat we would think hundred times before we hurt Annie coz meri bhi behan tumare hi ghar jaa rahi hain.

Sahi kaha Ranbir ne Maan. Yash smiled. He really loved wat he said now and he wasn't in any doubt tat Ranbir was the right man for his daughter. And I want him to marry Annie.. not coz for you and Geet but I will never ever be able to find a boy like him for my daughter and I know he will keep her happy.. hain na Ranbir.

I promise Mr. Khuranna. Ranbir gave him his assurance. Your daughter will be loved and cared just like Geet and Pooja in my home.

Then its final yeh shaadi hogi. Darji suddenly jumped again and laughed but then smirked at Savitri. I knew meri baat sab maan lenge aur hua bhi.. ab dekho dono shaadi kaise dhoom dhaam se hote hain.

Meri aur Annie ki shaadi abhi nahi hogi. Yash looked at Ranbir. Na don't think I would back out but I want Annie to get used to me and my way of living... We need to know and understand each other so a month or two after Geet and Maan wedding, we can get married.

Tats sounds good. Yash said while others just listened. I too agree.

Tho hum aaj rokha kar sakthe hain na. Sudha suddenly said from her place taking everyone's attention. Dekhiye jaanthi hoon yeh time sahi nahi hain but I have waited since the moment Darji said about this and I want to give Annie something to makes sure this isn't a dream.. chota sa rokha karte hain na.. please Darji.

Ok.. Sudha smiled and both she and Rano walked inside to prepare for the little ceremony. Dheeraj, Sudha and Ranbir had already shifted back to HH after Darji had given them a dead line while Savitri Devi was fuming in anger. Everything was going against her and Geet she was in dilemma not knowing wat she should do while Maan, he was genuinely happy for his sister coz he knew Ranbir was a nice guy and would love his sister soon.


Precap: Baby bani mushibat..

Will update next part tomorrow and only after I get 230+ likes for both update, I will update the next part but if no likes and comments then sorry this ff will be discontinued forever without any further notice.

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NEXT : PART 40

Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 37
superb part .

dadimaa is making plans to stop maaneet's marriage
ufff dadimaa is too much
ranbir ws trying to be calm bt he couldn't tolerate a world against his family nd dadimaa
hmm vicky is hillarious he can make any situation funny with his non stop.talks .
dadimaa ws blaming ranbir non stop bt annie came at the right time nd she told daimaa the whole

loved it when.daarji said tht maan is the bestest for geet .
good thy hitlers main ek ko toh akal aayi
will wait for the day
when.dadimaa will say tht geet is tge bestest for maan .
thnx for pm di .
Edited by mskfan - 9 years ago
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Superb shocking& exiciting update yaar ya kya tha geet tension ma maan ko call karka bula lia geet kab pragnet ho gayi pata hi nahi chala aur maan ko vi pata nahi ya kya ho raha hai geet 2 month ki pragnet ya sunta hi maan to behosh ho gaya wo vi 10 hours omg hosh ma ana ka baad vi usa ya sapna lag raha hai aur jab yakeen hota hai to wo decide karta hai ki wo shadi kar lenga chaha unki family kaisa react kare lekin ranvir ko pata chala laga ki wo gussa karega lekin surprisw wo nrmal situation ko sambhal kar react kia usna aur ranver na shadi ka liya yes kehdia aur darji to bahut khus lekin savitri devi ki band bajgayi aur vicky &pooja is super intresting character aur hamare nave annie na no kehdia kyun ki usa ranver na choco jo dia tha lekin ranver na situation sambhal liya hai sach kaha hai ranver na geet ka barema aur sab agree vi karlia hai uska baato ma aur roka vi karlia hai...dekhta hai kya hota hai future ma hitlers ka karta hai ya shadi thik sa ho jati hai...precap is intresting...waiting fr next...
Edited by Mona_90 - 9 years ago

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