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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

Apologies for long comment in advance ... But I "re-read" chapter 1-26 and read upto chapter 46,
Mentally I divided them into part 1 and part 2. upto chapter 40 was Part 1, which ended with "I Love You" from both ended. However chapter 1 to about 20 is common for both parts... i.e. till accident.

Part 1:

Loved those sweet moments of Raghav-Kalpana, and the fact that Raghav had actually done wrong to begun with, was given plenty of punishment, and her ignorance and anger, which was valid. Loved how she came around, in office to be faced by avantika, whom she thought had replaced her and her worries, while Raghav enjoyed her tinge of jealousy. Kamla for change wasn't as bad when she told the truth to Kalpana, about her past and rationalized reasons, indirectly helping Raghav or say mending their "Marriage".
Maya was too sweet when she indirectly convinced Kalpana to share her room and Kalpana in turn went ahead to even share the bed 😆😆😆 inspite of knowing his feelings for her...

Ok and one of the best part of the whole of part 1 was Justified anger of Kalpana towards Raghav:

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Shaking her head, Kalpi says softly, "what if you had not fallen for me? What if when you fall out of love? I am to forgive you because you fell in love... I am to forget everything because you fell in love... What of my aai and baba... Should they forgive you because you... The pain... The hurt... The sleepless night... Should they forget everything too..." Releasing one of her hands from his hold, she caresses his cheek... Needing to touch him one last time... She whispers brokenly, "you know what I feel? I hate you for making me fall in love with you... I hate myself for loving you... Goodbye." She gets up and leaves.

Chapter 32

I too had wondered, WHAT IF he had not fallen for her ..???? Her every question towards him sounded too true, too real to be ignored, had he not actually fallen in love with her, she would have actually been in a mess... for all that he did to her...

and all of those reasoning is somewhere missing in part 2... is there in Part 1... I am glad she had questioned him.., which of course are something to be thought about.

Part 2...

Both of them so far feel that other one has rejected them and are devastated at the thought of being rejected by the other... and all they need to do is speak it out to sort out everything as it seems for now...
So, has Kalpana already forgiven him for using her.?
Last decently good moment of her with Raghav was in chapter 15:

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Ragav caresses her cheek, his eyes filled with warmth and love... Kisses her, thanking God deep down that his atrocious behaviour had not turned her against him... Making love to her slowly and gently... Erasing away the harshness and coldness he showed her moments ago. Humbling himself by requesting and pleading permission before joining with her... Something he had aimed to do to her moments ago... Whispering the words as he looks into her eyes, "please take me inside you", patiently waiting for her to decide.

And the very next moment, it was all destroyed:

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Needing to unleash his fury he calls the last number recieved on Kalpi's phone, lashing out at Kamla maa... promising to avenge his father through Kalpi... that he will never forget that she is Kamla maa's daughter... and that she will always remain Kamla maa's daughter. He hangs up on a crying Kamla maa, pleading him to not play with her daughter... to not hurt her. Ragav turns after disconnecting the call, standing before him is Kalpi, her expression cold, detached, dead, her hand stretched out.

After which she had met accident and had not met Raghav at all... right? Has she forgiven him for all that he done to her, with aim of destroying her..?
His anger had even back then taken over everything, himself had destroyed everything between him and Kalpana..
and now Kamla here is still the main devilish... who had lied to Kalpana, and made sure she wouldn't even speak up about Raghav... to Vitthal unlike part 1, where she had admitted her mistake and told Kalpana about it..
Would Raghav not react to Kamla's action?

pheww... That's all for Questions...

Now what I enjoyed in Part 2,

I enjoy jealous and possessive Raghav, over weaker one, for we already had dose of Majboor Raghav.

Originally posted by: angelpureness

With relish he plans out his strategy on what tune he is going to make her body sing as he thinks, "does not want to sleep with me, but will sleep with somebody else... Like hell!" His heart in turmoil that she would think of allowing anyone but him to see her let go of herself like that, not realising that the other person would be her husband, HIM. Ragav thinks, "nobody has rejected me and she will not."

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Chapter 45

Originally posted by: angelpureness

As he descends the stairs, he sees Kalpi seated on the sofa, still in her bridal attire. A reminder that she agreed to marry another... To belong to another... Seeing red he angrily strides over... Grabs her by the shoulders... Forcing her to stand. Inches apart he roars one word, "change!"

😳 Loved it when he is so possessive and demanding... 😆😆😆

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Conclusion:
I am enjoying the story and looking forward to reading it more and more...

Edited by shahsb_26 - 9 years ago

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Sorry fuzz for not commenting on earlier updates..
wow, i m loving this new side of the story.
kalpi trying to understand what exactly raghav us upto and also about her fear that raghav tried to kill her and still want to kill her by hurting her.. Though she loves him but her fear is not letting her accept the fact that raghav can't betray her.
on the other side, the possessiveness for kalpi is showing in raghav's anger and behind his harsh behaviour towards kalpi.

keep going with this track..i m enjoying it.😆

Thanks Hun... Ragna are so complicated here...

Fingers crossed I don't mess it up.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: jabilli
Angel it's very gripping story, when we think happily ever after we will get a new twist, first revenge, love, again accident, amnesia, starting work again, ... Now again mistress, you rock Angel, I reread this story so many times,
Thanks darling for bringing such a lovely story

Thank you sweety... Gear up for a new twist... You shall find out in the next epi tor two. :)

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: ragnafavour
Nice upadate dear...
Both r thinking about each other ... But both misunderstood each other also..

So it will take time them to comes in normal way.. Hope both don't do anything regretfull...

Both of them are stupid... Scared to show their vulnerability.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@shahsb_26

Thank you... Your feedback has told me one thing... I need to read this ff from the start... There is a lot I have forgotten.

The characters emotional state is very clear in my mind... But a lot I have forgotten.

I am glad you are liking it... I was quite stressed when I had changed the plot and you were iffy about it. Writing this ff has a lot of responsibilities... This journey of ours has been a long one and I would be heart broken... If I ruined it for any of my readers... And esp you... Since this was one of your first ffs to read.

Glad your enjoying it... Mwah

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Chapter 47

Ragav gently places Kalpi on to the left side of the bed. Ignoring her anxious gaze, says, "go to sleep." Kalpi watches him with confusion as he walks away to the washroom. With a sigh of relief, she thinks, "I thought he was going to jump me... Phew... Kalpi beta, quickly go to sleep... Before he comes." With that thought she quickly turns to her side and shuts her eyes.

Changing into his track pants, Ragav debates on wearing a t-shirt or not. Through the mirror, his gaze falls on his scar... A bullet hole just above his heart. "T-shirt it is," he mutters. Taking a step towards the door, he stops... His mind races to the last time Kalpi was here... Images of a pregnant Kalpi surfaces... Laughing... Sulking... Demanding to be pampered... Shaking his head, he whispers, "no. No. No. It wasn't real." Skimming through his memories, he realises that the last time Kalpi was here was the day she found out about the revenge... That she was nothing but a pawn.

A niggling doubt arises... Maybe she doesn't know we are married... Dismissing it, he says, "nah! She would have definitely found out at the hospital."

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Eyes red rimmed with tears, filled with accusations, Kamla says, "how could you... How could you betray me... You promised... Did you hear what he said... He called her his mistress...," she ends screaming.

Without a hint of regret, Vithal felt a calmness he had not felt in long time, says calmly, "I did not break any promises. I promised I would not tell Kalpi she is married and I have not. As for Ragav. What did you expect... The man just saw his wife about to marry another... It is nothing but an over reaction. I wouldn't worry about it."

"You are forgetting something," Kamla lashes out, "I killed his father." Shaking his head, Vithal replies, "for the hundredth time, you did not kill his father." "I was responsible," Kamla screams. "You got played... Trust me Kamla, I have seen love in his eyes for Kalpi. Don't you remember how worried he was at the hospital," Vithal says. "You don't know everything," Kamla mutters. Her thoughts racing to the events earlier that day. Ragav claiming to have slept with Kalpi so that he could hurt Kamla. Confused over her stricken expression, Vithal says, "Kamla what did you say. I didn't hear you." Shaking her head, she thinks, "how can I ever tell you..." "Nothing," she says aloud.

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Ragav stares at kalpi's backside, which is clearly illuminated by the moonlight, and thinks, "turn... Please turn." Kalpi turns, it was as if she had heard his silent plea. Thirsty, his gaze drinks in her features, memorising the new changes as she sleeps on. His heart content to see her sleep by his said, purring away, "this is where you belong... By my side."

Unable to resist, he whispers to sleeping wife, "why did you leave me? I know I did wrong... Why did you not stay and fight me? I thought you knew me better. I thought I knew you... I never expected you would leave me. I knew you were angry... I was prepared to deal with your anger... I just never imagined you would leave... And that too, by faking your death! Was being married to me such a horrible thing... That the first thing you did was leave me forever."

Adds complainingly, "did I not mean anything to you? Did you never care for me? You never came to see me... I lay in coma for months... You never came... You never cared."

Clearing his throat, he continues with an amused expression, "look at the irony... I the seducer, fell in love... You touched my heart... No, you made my heart your home... And I, was not even able to get you to care for me... Your heart remained the same... Untouched."

Recollecting the events after her fake death... the void he felt then and again after he came out of coma... Ragav raises his hand towards her, stops inches away from her face, his hand trembling with the need to caress her... He clenches his fist to stop himself, whispers, "please don't leave me. Hate me all you want, but please don't leave me. I love you too much. I cannot bear it if you leave. This time surely I will die."

His eyes filled with determination, he promises, "I will never let you leave me. I rather have you hate me, but with me, then not have you at all."

Kalpi wakes up to find half her body on Ragav. Frowing, she lifts her head off his chest, mentally scolding herself for reaching out for him in her sleep. Slowly she tries to easy away from him, but to her surprise, she is unable to move... In his sleep Ragav tightens his hold around her waist.

Sleep gone due to his nearness, Kalpi looks at a sleeping Ragav... Her hungry eyes, feasting... Unable to resist, she traces his features with trembling fingers... Slowly... Lightly... Her heart soaring, for she never thought she would ever caress him again. Her gaze filled with love... With longing... She thinks, "if only you loved me..."

Realising where her thought are heading, she snatches her hand away. Without opening his eyes, Ragav says softly, "why did you stop?" Startled, Kalpi exclaims, "you are awake." Opening his eyes, Ragav smiles, reverses their position such that he is partly on her. Linking his fingers with hers, he raises her hands above her head, looks into her eyes, whispering, "my turn", and proceeds to give her feather light kisses as he traces her features with his lips.

Heart racing, wanting more, Kalpi arches her back. Ragav stops. Stares into eyes mirroring the same passionate intensity he felt. His eyes asking... Hers answering. He kisses her passionately... His kisses no longer teasing... No longer exploring... No longer memorising.

Forcing himself to stop, he buries is face on to the crook of her neck. Breathing deeply, he says... His breath tickling her skin... "Damn I don't have protection." Kalpi whispers, "I am safe." Surprised, Ragav looks up, his gaze searching as he asks, "pill?" Shaking her head, Kalpi whispers, "I can't get pregnant." Ragav stares at her shocked, his mind tries to comprehend what she is saying.

Uncomfortable with the silence, Kalpi tries to elaborate, "the accident..." Ragav jerks away from her, his gaze filled with horror as the words sink in... In his mind's eye, he sees Kalpi as he had envisaged whilst in coma... Pregnant... Holding their daughter... His fantasy... His dreams would never become reality... His soul cries out... Suffocating... Needing space... He races out of their room. So focused was he on his own pain, he does not notice the stricken look in Kalpi's eyes.

Kalpi tries to hold herself as she watches Ragav races out of the room, she curls herself into a foetal position, silently crying over his rejection. Berating herself for reminding him of the accident... Of her scars. Her fears realised... That he would find her ugly... That he would no longer want her.

Ragav races up to the terrace, needing fresh air, his mind refusing to stop... Replaying the images of the alternative world he had created in his mind... The devastation he had felt when he came out of coma, on realising that none of it was real, was nothing compared to what he felt now. "It will never be real," he whispers brokenly.

Staring out into the darkness, unaware of the tears running down his cheeks, he screams out his pain, "aarrrggghhh..."

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Edited by angelpureness - 9 years ago

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: angelpureness
@shahsb_26
Thank you... Your feedback has told me one thing... I need to read this ff from the start... There is a lot I have forgotten.

The characters emotional state is very clear in my mind... But a lot I have forgotten.

I am glad you are liking it... I was quite stressed when I had changed the plot and you were iffy about it. Writing this ff has a lot of responsibilities... This journey of ours has been a long one and I would be heart broken... If I ruined it for any of my readers... And esp you... Since this was one of your first ffs to read.

Glad your enjoying it... Mwah

Ohh yes... I will always enjoy it... and it is my fav. Story too... and Chapter 7 to 15 are all time fav... that I do keep on readiny over n over. .

Angry Arrogant and The one full of attitude raghav is the kind I like too...and hence I was indeed looking forward to read new track as well... and new Track is very interesting. . Except.for some questions that rises in my mind.. his words about Kalpana were bitter.. even if that was just to instigate Kamla...and might not be true at heart.. and ... Kalpana findiny out and accident night was just matter of just few hours.. but those few hours were painful.. unforgettable for any woman. . To realize..that she was just being used...

However... once again repeating. .. flow of new track isn't absurd and very much linked. I am loving the track!!!

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#658

Omg 😲 Angel what a shock 😭 kalpi can't get pregnant? Omg so unfair 😭 will rags leave her for this and y does she feel ugly what other scars does she have? How will this impact their relationship? Y Angel y did this happen to this poor girl and rags is only focusing on his pain. 😭

Edited by sunyy - 9 years ago

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#659

Woh angel 😳
This is soo soo so emotional and beautiful. I pity this raghav. Please make him realise the truth. I can for once bear a sad and lonely kalpi... But raghav in this state is unbearable. I cannot see him like this. Just make kalpi get up frm her sleep and hug him tightly.
At least this for now 😭
M not a crying kind of personality
but this story is so beautiful that it is now making me cry 😭

GET UP KALPI..

GET Up 😡 raghav is confessing 😭
Update sooonnn

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angelpureness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: dragonok
Woh angel 😳
This is soo soo so emotional and beautiful. I pity this raghav. Please make him realise the truth. I can for once bear a sad and lonely kalpi... But raghav in this state is unbearable. I cannot see him like this. Just make kalpi get up frm her sleep and hug him tightly.
At least this for now 😭
M not a crying kind of personality
but this story is so beautiful that it is now making me cry 😭

GET UP KALPI..

GET Up 😡 raghav is confessing 😭
Update sooonnn

I am updating another story... But when I stop to think... This story comes to mind... I think I need to complete this chapter... So that I can focus on another couple!

Glad ur enjoying it... Be prepared for a new bang... Poor ragav... His world is gonna crash.

Edited by angelpureness - 9 years ago