Originally posted by: taahir004
<font color="#660099">Superb Update
Jannat sleeping ways are different from both Maan and Preety
now Preety's family after throwing her out and does not have any idea about her is all sad and broken but now they know that Maan
owns Khurana Construction and lives in London</font>
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
<font color="#9900cc">hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! superbly written! Maan misses Preety! Maan emotional! he talks 2 her pic! Jannat is so cute! Mohinder tells his mom abt Maan! he is nw a big businessman! she says Preety's choice was never wrong! she reveals Preety called 2 n half years ago! Mohinder n Rano shocked! update soon! </font>
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Maan and jannat reached airport. RV is waiting for them there. They passed security check and went to take their seat in plane.
Jannat: wow, dadda. Yeh car kitni bwig hain. Aur kitne sare log bhi ek sath baith sakte hain.
Maan chuckled listening her again addressing plane as car.
Bt RV interrupted in between.
Rv: bt GF it's plane, not car. Yeh plane fly karta hain. Kya aapki car fly karti hain?
Listening Rv jannat just twisted her lips and looked at Maan.
Bt Maan give her "I TOLD U" look.
Jannat: tohh kwya hwya... Huh... Dadda mere liye ek fwlying car ki owder de denge. Hain na dadda??
Jannat looked at maan with so much hope. Maan didn't want to break her little heart.
Maan: ok mera bachcha. I'll get one for u. Now happy.
Jannat: yayyy...
Jannat showed her tongue to Rv. Rv also chuckled.
Bt seeing jannat like this Maan remembered past.
*PAST*
Preety is now 8 months pregnent. And today she is sooo happy. Today is her Maan's
birthday. She want to make this birthday special for him. Because this is the
last birthday they'll will celebrate alone. From Next year their baby will be
with them.
In morning preety woke up early. She is having some pain in her
tummy.
But she thought because of pregnency this is happening. She lovingly cares her baby bump.
Preety:good morning baby. bachcha, aise tang maat karo na. Dekho, aaj kal mumma kitni tired ho jati hain. Tumhari dadda ka khayal bhi nehi rakh pati. Aaj unka birthday hain na. Chalo unhe wish karo.
Immediately preety felt a kick in her tummy. She smiled delightfuly. Bt she again got a kick. Like baby is asking her, "mumma, u also wish na."
preety: no baby. Aise nehi. Aapke dadda bohot special hain. Aur unhe kuch special tarike se wish karna hoga. Unhone hume kitni sari khushiya di. Aab humari bari. Chalo chalo. Abhi hume bohot kaam karna hain.
Preety went to kitchen and prepare maan's favourite Kheer. Garnished it with almonds maan's favourite pista 😉
She gave a satisfied look to kheer and took it to their room. She chuckled looking at maan. Maan is sleeping like a baby. She thought, "kaun kahega ki yeh baap banne wala hain."😆 preety went near maan and try to woke
him up.
First she lighty kissed Maan's lips and whispers "HAPPY BIRTHDAY JAAN". Maan smiled in his sleep.
Preety: maan... Maan... Uthiye na. Dekhiye subha ho gayi hain.
Maan:toh kya hua. Mujhe neend aa rahi hain aaj. Aao tum bhi mere sath so jao.
Preety: aisa thodi na hota hain. Aaj aapka birthday hain. Aur aapko sona hain. Hadd ho gayi.
Maan: kya karu. Aaj mujhe meri morning dose nehi mili na, Isiliye uthne ka dil nehi hain.
Preety just smiled at his nautanki. She tried to peck his lips.
Bt maan just grabbed her lips and start kissing her passionately. Preety moaned in kiss. After some breathless moments Maan left her.
He wiped his lips with her saree pallo. And said to her, "Thanks for the lovely wish".
Preety just blused a scarlet red.
Maan: arey maine tumhe thanx kaha. Aur tum sharma rahi ho. Kyun aisa kiya galat kiya maine.😉 Preety whined like a child.
Preety:maan, plz stop teasing me na.
Maan:jaan, abhi maine tumhe tease hi kaha kiya hain. Ek baar mere Jannat ko aane do. Phir tumhe tease ka matlab samjhaungi.
Preety just wacked his arm. She grabbed the kheer bowl from side table and give it to him.
Preety:aab badmashi bandh kijiye. Aur yeh kheer taste kijiye. Bataiye kaisa bani hain.
Maan took a spoonful kheer in his mouth. Bt he starts making faces.
Preety:kya hua, maan? Kheer achchi nehi bani kya?
Maan:kheer achchi toh bani hain. Par sugar bohot kaam hain.
Preety:par maine toh check kia tha, sugar ekdum theek hain.
Maan:lo tum khud hi chakhke dekh lo.
Maan fed her a spoonful kheer.
Preety:maan iski sugar toh theek hain.
Maan:wait let me check again.
Heagain took a spoonful kheer.
Maan:arey haan aab toh sugar bilkul theek hain. Mere jaan ne joh taste kia hain.
Preety hugged him dearly. Bt suddenly start sobbing. And maan is like, "Not again. 😆Damn her pregnency hormones. Mere jaan ko kitna emotional kar deta hain."
Maan: kya hua, jaan? Tum ro kyun rahe ho?
Preety: bohot darr lag rahi hain Maan. Itni sari khushiyaan mere kismat ko sehen hoga kya? Aap ne mujhe har khushi di, ek patni hone ki khushi, ek complete aurat hone ki khushi, ek maa banne ka ehsaas. Sab kuch. Bt darr lagta hain, agar meri khushi kismat ko bardasht nehi hui toh.
Maan got shocked listening her. He cupped her face and asked her, "tum aise kyun bol rahe ho jaan."
Preety: toh main aur kya bolu maan? Main jab bhi khush hoti hu, meri kismaat ko yeh
bardast nehi hota. Mujhse kuch na kuch chen hi leti hain. Main aur kuch khona
nehi chahti maan.
Jab aapko paya tab kismat ne mujhe meri family chin liya. Mujhe aaj unki bohot yaad aa rahi hain. Mujhe unn sab se ekbar milna hain.
Maan: jaan, woh sab humse bade hain. Kabhi na kabhi hume jarur apnayenge. Aur rahi baat tum unhe miss kar rahe ho. Toh phone pe baat karlo. Jyada se jyada kya hoga, humpe phir naraz honge. Par kabhi na kabhi mann jayege. Aur tum pregnent ho, yeh baat sunke tumse jyada din gussa nehi reh sakte. Kyunki woh sab tumse bohot jyada pyaar karte hain. Jao aab jake baat karlo. Main fresh hoke ata hu.
Maan didn't realise that he just did the biggest mistake in his life. It'll cost him his everything.
Preety called her parents number, bt they r unreachable. Atlast she called home. After some rings an old lady received the call.
Lady:hello..
Preety:hello dadima.
Preety just cried and other side the woman just froze. She is preety's dadi, savitri devi.
Sd:preety...
Preety:haan dadima. Main preety. Kaisi hain aap?
Listening this question sd got furious.
Sd: tumhe isse kya matlab. Hum jiye ya mare. Tumne toh hume chod kar uss anath ko apnaya. Aab kyun phone kiya hain yaha?
Preety: aisa nehi hain dadima. Main aap sab se bohot pyaar karti hu. Main bas ek bar aap sabse milna chahti hu.
Sd:koi jarurat nehi hain. Tum toh pehle hi humari naakh katwa chuki ho. Aur aab kya baki hain.
Preety: plz dadima.😭 Main pregnent hu. aur aap sabko bas ekbar dekhne ka bohot mann ho rahi hain.
Sd: kya? Tum pregnent ho. Toh tum uss gande khoon ki bachche k liye humse milna chahte ho.
Preety: dadimaaa.
Sd: haan, woh ek ganda khoon hain. Jisne humse humari bachchi se alag kar dia. Aur uss gande khoon ke waris ki shakal bhi nehi dekhna mujhe. Kabhi uska achcha nehi hoga.
Saying this sd just cut the call. Bt preety is in shock.
Preety: ganda khoon... How can they say this about my maan and my baby...
She start crying bitterly. Suddenly she felt pain in her tummy again. Bt this time with full force. She just scremed maan's name, "Maaan".*PAST END*
Maan suddenly got up with a jerk. He looked here and there. A airhostress is standing here.
Ah: sir, we'll be landing in India in sometime. Do u need something?
Maan:no, thanks.
Ah; went away.
Maan looked at his side and saw jannat is sleeping. He kissed her forhead and tucked her closer. He was feeling scared to face some people. He thought in his mind, "just hope ki mera work jald se jald khatam ho. Aur humara amna samna kisise na ho". Bt what fate stored for them, no one knows other than god 😉
Precap: The face off
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