|Our Little Smile| SwaLak FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hie Buddies🤗

I'm Vibhuti😳

This is my first SwaLak FF

Has written one on KriYansh and NiBir❤️

It starts with current plot and goes in on from there.

Angst/Romance/Love/Family

Will try to update once in a week or two :P

Hope I get response. Will continue as I get reviews :)

Enough of my bak bak😆
Edited by -SparklingVibz- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It starts today!

It was a beautiful day. The sun was shining up. Laksh woke up from his couch. His head was sour from drinking again last night.

He was broken. His heart was aching. He decided that it was enough. No! More than enough! He will die if he lives like this. He had to talk to Swara.

He woke up and took his phone in his hand.

Swara was in the tent reading her favourate book. "Swara Mai office jaa raha hun. Theek hai?" Sankar shouted from outside.

"Haan Sanskar". Just then her phone rang. Laksh had sent her a message. What could it be? Her heart skipped a beat. Hands trembling she opened the message.

Swara Mujhe raatko 9 baje highway ke paas milna. Tum Jaanti ho mujhe naa nahi sunna!

Swara was dreaded. She knew this was an order not a mere request. She knew she had to go.

Swara Parked her car near the Highway. But Laksh was not spotted anywhere nearby. Suddenly she saw him. He was handsome as ever. Like a star. His eyes were as dull as she had ever seen. With no emotions.

"Laksh Mujhe yaha kyu bulaya?" She said her voice trembling.

"Ragini ne tumhe maarne ki koshish ki?" He asked his voice ferce.

"Tum yeh kyu..."

"Answer me Swara?"

"Aaj Kyu Laksh. Kabhi nahi bharosa kiya. Aaaj kaise karoge?" She had began to cry. She had to stop. She had to be strong!

"Mujhe nahi pata. Mai Thak chukka hum Swara. Maine socha tha ki tumhara bharosa koi nahi kar raha. If I trust you toh bhi Ragini koi koi galat nahi samjehega! I had to pretend to hate you. To not trust you. I had to bring the truth out. Par bas ab bahut hua! Bass! I cant be without you I cant! He said tears dripping around his face.

"Tum Jaante they? LAKSH! Tum Pagal ho? Hum yeh saathme karte Laksh! Kyu akele saha?"

"Tumhare liye Swara"

He took a step forward he wanted to pull her into her embrace. But she stepped back.

There were soo many questions in laksh's eyes. The moon was shining. Clouds loud and it started to rain.

"Swara tum theek ho? Lets get somewhere. You get ill in rain"

"Laksh woh hut" She said trembling towards the hut!

They both went in their. Swara sat down Stuck and wet with rain and tears. Laksh gave her his Jacket.

She revolted!

"Laksh tum yeh sab mat karo. Tumhari Shaadi ho chuki hai Laksh" She said visibly Crying now.

"Swara Please Mai pagal tha. Tumhe pata hai mujhe iss shadi me kuch nahi chahye! I hate that Girl!"He shouted. Angry at himself and the situation.

"Laksh Tumhara decision thana" Swara said standing up shouting! "Take responsiblitey" She was angry at him. He did deserve to be shouted at.

"Nahi leni koi responsibily mujhe Swara! Koi responsibility nahi leni mujhe. Mujhe bas tum chahye ho" She was going up to her placing his hand on her cheeks smoothing them with his thumb. Their eyes locked intensely.

"Nahi Laskh Mai..." She had began to melt. She know what his one touch could do to her.

"Bahut tadap liye hum Swara" And with this he captured his lips with hers. He kissed her hard. With soo soo much passion and longing. She couldn't take it. She kissed him back. It seemed like years. They were standing there kissing. With it raining outside. His hands on her waist and hers on his neck

Suddenly Swara pushed him away "Lakshhh..." She shut her eyes. Tears in both.

He Kissed her tears and Said "Shona" "Shona Bas aur nahi"

With that she hugged him hard. Shona! He called her Shona. His shona. His love. Shona!

He kissed her lightly on her forehead. Both their eyes burning in passion.

Swara could feel his hot concentrated breath on her neck. He bend and kissed her neck. Shivers ran through her.

"I want you" Was only the last thing both of them heard. They became one. One that they were supposed to be a long time ago.


Do tell me how it turned out😳
Edited by -SparklingVibz- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Precap: "Momma You plomised!"

"It's promised honey!"

"Yes Wohi Na"

"Wohi Kya Pumpkin?" She bend pulling the nose



Edited by -SparklingVibz- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG ...its so beautiful
I want exactly like in show also but never mind
Keep updating more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Vibhu its masterpiece yaar 👏
Loved it ❤️

OMG Precap SwaLak baby? 😉

update soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start up babes!👏

Swalak kiss, passionate hug☺️

Laksh desperation for his Shona...😳

What a masterpiece! Look forward to your update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Omg...damn passionate nd fab FF...just luved it,...keep continuing...laksh with her shona...awww
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
wow its superb vibhu...😳👏
do continue soon...😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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vibhu sweetheart i loved it 😳😳 beautifully written!👏👏! swalak ❤️
continue and update soon yaar! after reading precap am feeling restless to read next 😃😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow vibhu dis is awesome 👏👏👏 loved it...indeed it was a passionate one 😳
plz update the nxt part soon..i cant wait to se swalak child😳 ..deir pyaar ki nishani 😳

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