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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Nisha is a good gir
I want more rk madhu scene
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update yaar ya madhu itni innocent kyun hai thank god ki rk ka apne gussa ko control kar dia aur nisha koi vamp nahi hai thanks aur nisha aur rk ki friend ship is good yaar hope ki madhu rk ki feelings jaldi samjh jaya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super cute update but I feel really bad for rkπŸ˜†
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lvely update...
feel very sorry for rk..
bt i will always lve my previous rk in LSAM...
WILL WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE

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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update.
He controlled his anger so much.πŸ‘
Madhu cleaned his wound during the night.😊

So finally madhu is joining college.

Nisha and Rk met at a shopping mall.
Is this the same one madhu gone for shopping?πŸ˜•
Nisha is impressed with Rk's love.But the one who have to be is not interested.😭
sullu is getting protective towards his sis.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

So no vamps in this story.
there is no need here as madhu is there to irritate Rk.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
What if madhu really falls in love with another guy?😲😲

Less rishbala in this part.πŸ˜’

I can understand it will be hard for u to type and update through mobile.πŸ‘πŸΌ
continue soon.


If possible update broken hearts too.

Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Kudos to rk for his reaction! Loved this chapter and yaaay no vamps!πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
I couldnt reply to ur lovely comments last time & i felt so bad for that... So this time i managed to reply... I m overwhelmed with joy reading ur comments... It means a lot to me... Thanks all...

Replies to your comments :

@ anish17 - congrats for coming first akka. Thanks for liking this update & not finding it bored. Hehe... enaku therila akka enga irundhu indha loose ah pudichenu LOL. But all my madhu's are sweet & crazies. Idhu koncham over dosage aagiduchu LOL... haha... if Rk had screamed at her she would have welled up the whole party hall or the car or their apartment. LOL. He knows she is baby so handle with care... LOL. Yeah, right, she is torturing him but she didnt realise what she is doing. Hope she grows once she goes to colg. Thanks for liking nisha & Rk's convo. Yep, she is not a vamp. Hehe, sultan is a funny guy in this story. Welcome & thanks for giving such an hilarious comment. As ever enjoyed it.

@ silverfire - congrats dear for coming second. Well u were the first one to comment. I loved ur comment. Haha... glad u felt relieved when Rk lost his temper. After all he is also an human. How long he will tolerate her bull shits nah? Yep, he got a nice friend in Nisha. U guessed it right. Yeah madhu will see them in mall but as u said no effect will be there. In fact she will irritate Rk more LOL... she will wake up from her slumber so so later. Yeah, I loved that scene too, madhu tending his wounds, she do care for him. Glad u liked rk nisha's convo & more than that Rk losing his temper. Thank dear for ur lovely comment.

@ rishbala4eva - even I m glad nisha is not a vamp like u LOL... I don't when madhu will get in to her thick skull that Rk is not interested on anyone but her. Glad u loved the nursing scene. Yes baby she really cares for her pal & wants him happy as u said. Haha... yeah he will have to suffer still she gets matured. LOL she will take her sweet time to realise her feelings for him. Haha.. your wild guess turns out right. Yeah madhu will witness the scene btn Rk & nisha in the mall. You will know her reaction when u read this update. Thanks for ur amazing comment. I loved it.

@ v.p.joshi - thanks dear. Glad u find the update not boring. Even I love nisha. Yep. She is sweet & caring & will remain the same forever.

@ veni7842 - glad u liked the convo btn rk & nisha dear. Yes, nisha is matured & understanding unlike madhu. Haha... your wish is granted. They will take up a trip. So enjoy. Hey girl, u r getting it all right. Sultan will meet nisha but he won't threaten. LOL. Thanks! U will get more of rishbala moments soon.

@ -Fairytale- - thanks dear

@ sss333 - thanks dear. Oh oh. Yeah she is spoiled rotten brat but please don't hate her pretty. Glad u liked Rk & nisha's convo. Madhu will realize her mistake one day.

@ karamjeet - thanks dear. Glad u liked nisha & rk's bond. Dont worry she will not turn a vamp. I wont do that. Uff... at least you love our innocent madhu. Yeah she do care for rk after all he is her bestie. Haha... yeah sultan treats madhu like his own sister & both are so dumb. Thanks for not hating madhu. Yeah even I feel sorry for Rk but she is not realising what she is doing. Loved ur comment.

@ shweta300 - thanks dear. Oh wow. U read all the 4 parts in a go? Great. Glad u liked this story. Awe... I m so touched hearing that u r my stories fan. I m honoured. Yep. Rk is a sweet guy here. & surely madhu will melt soon. Thanks dear. I will continue soon as u all r liking this story so much.

@ parimaniya - awe... that one word 'fabulous' which came to u mind is more than enough for me dear. Glad u loved this story so much. Haha... I too love the way he said my baby brat. Hmm... madhu will suffer for her mistakes dear. Then only she will realise it. Glad u loved nisha & sullu. Both are nice characters. Thanks dear.

@ vishti4eva - thanks dear

@ madhumeandyou - thanks dear. Glad u find the update cute.

@ vivian.drashti - thanks dear. Glad u liked Rk & nisha's friendship.

@ ..TooLazy.. - thanks dear. Glad u liked their friendships. Yes, nisha is so understanding unlike madhu. LOL

@ -ChitraRocking- - Thanks dear. Glad u loved it & felt it was well written.

@ .Zoya. - thanks dear. Yeah, Poor Rk can't able to control his temper but only express it though he didnt hurt her much I guess. Yep! Nisha is a nice friend to Rk. She will stay like that forever. Yeah, she will get busy & things will change drastically when she joins college.

@ harini_ - Thanks dear. Glad u loved the update & nisha rk's convo & also not finding the update boring.

@ rima4ever - thanks dear

@ Insaneniyu - Thanks dear. Yep, nisha is a nice girl. Haha, sultan is really possessive for madhu which is actually the influence of Rk. He was so possessive for madhu & so his friends LOL. Hmm... madhu will get brain really later & understand the importance of marriage then.

@ lathaprasad - thanks dear.

@ ashabanerjee - Asha baby, I love your comments which I want to say firstly before replying to ur comments. Hehe, I really want to clear things btn rk & nisha. Glad u don't hate madhu & understand her character well. Yep! Rk is such an adorable character here. Yeah he felt contented when she tends his wound. Don't worry, madhu will not fall in love with anyone but Rk. I m promising u that now itself. Haha... yep, many more antics of madhu are on the way. They are going for a trip soon & hope u will enjoy that part, which will be after this part. Haha.. I don't know why I m giving super quick updates which I have never done before. May be all ur eagerness is the reason.

@ Supervampire - thanks dear. Glad u love nisha's role. Yep, Rk is awesome, cant deny that.

@ vasavi_sri - thanks dear. Haha.. true she is a baby. Yes rk really didnt want to hurt her with his words so he tried his best to control his temper. Hehe... sultan might be funny but very caring for madhu. Yes, nisha do truly love rk so she can read his face. Yeah rk cleared things so he don't want to lead nisha on in a wrong path.

@ ananya2010 - Thanks dear. Glad u loved the updte.

@ Jyoraj - thanks dear. Haha.. true, nisha is sensible unlike madhu & thats becos she is matured enough than madhu. Glad u loved their convo. I m happy.

@ BurnThemAll - miss. Burny, u read two update together & unres together tonight. I m on updatin spree LOL.

@ Nithunavi - thanks nithu. Glad u loved it. Hehe... I should join ur team. Even his love for madhu is making me jealous & even I want an hubby like Rk & even I wish my hubby is few yrs older than me so that he can love care & pamper me. LOL. Hope we both get such husbands in future LOL

@ Kanwal4salman - thanks dear. Yes, I really want to clear everything btn Rk & nisha as there is nthing wrong going btn them.

@ heemasomani - thanks dear. Yep! Nisha is sweet.

@ shibanipamini - thanks dear. Yes, nisha is good girl. Okay, u will get more for Rsihbala scenes soon.

@ sharu1109 - thanks dear.

@ Mona_90 - Thanks dear. Hehe... I don't know why this madhu is so innocent. But we can't find so pure & innocent people nowadays nah? Yeah he some how controlled his temper. Yeah, I don't ike negativity so I didnt want to make nisha a vamp. Hmm... madhu will realize her feeling one day but it will take time. Thanks for ur sweet comment.

@ muzikk93 - thanks dear. Do u really feel bad for Rk? Then why u put laughing emo? It makes me laugh too LOL.

@ sanju1205 - thanks dear. Yeah, Rk is a poor soul here. LOL. I agree... even I love my doctor Rk of LSAM season 1 more than this Rk. My doc Rk is the best. LOL I m glad u still remember him.

@ ratna232 - thanks dear. Yeah poor guy trying hard to control his anger but she is testing his patience. LOL. Yep! Thats so sweet of her to clean his wound. Yeah finally she is joining colg & things will change drastically in future. So right yaar. Nisha is impressed of Rk's love but not madhu... may Rk didnt express it well to madhu so much. Haha... sullu is a funny guy but so possessive for madhu, may be Rk's influence. Haha... u r damn right. There is no need for vamp becos madhu is there to mess things. LOL okay, I m telling u in advance madhu will NOT fall in love with anyone but Rk, my heart will not stand madhu romancing any other idiot LOL. I agree, less rishbala scene. I will try to give more rishbala moments. May be next update will be fully of Rishbala scenes as they are going for a trip. Thanks for understanding my typing issues from mobile. I will really try hard to update Broken Hearts soon for u but I m not getting interest to write that story dont know why? Thanks dear for suck a lovely comment.

@ muzikk93 - thanks for commenting twice. Haha... Rk's reactions is not over the top. He didnt burst out but handled the situation calmly I guess. Thanks for loving this chapter. & yeah no vamps so enjoy!

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks dearies for your likes & comments. Your interest for this story really makes me write further & give quick updates. So keep encouraging me with your lovely comments.

Few things to clear:

Sultan is not Madhu's own brother. He just treats her as his sister. Both Rk & Madhu are only child for their parents.

Nisha will never turn a vamp so don't worry. She will be a good trusting friend to Rk forever.

Glad to hear that you are not hating Madhu. She really things what she is doing is for the best for her bestie Rk but she is unaware that her actions are hurting him. She will realize her mistake later.

You all want Madhu to fall in love with Rk soon, but love is something not in her radar at the moment so she will take time.

I understand u all want to see more of Rishbala moments. I'll give u, may be in next update as they will be going for a holiday trip.

Hope things are clear now! Okay, lets proceed with the story! :)

Part 5 - Gun - Toting!

Rk's POV

"I demand an explanation, Mr. Rishab Kundra" Idiot Sultan barges into my cabin with a gun. f**k! Am i dreaming? I imagined him pointing a gun at my head & now he is with a gun. Will he really shoot me if I ever try to cheat Madhu? Is he my friend or Madhu's?
"Hey, drop the gun & stop your filmy dialogue" this guy can be over dramatic.
"Okay" he agrees & places the gun on my table which is pointing towards me so I just turn it to face Sultan so by any mistake it fires this stupid annoying infuriating guy can die & go to hell.
"So what gives?" He asks.
"Sultan, it's not what u think. There is nothing between me & Nisha. I agree we dated each other but that's all over the moment i got married"
"Oh really? Then why she is here now?" He asks me staring at the gun.
"Why u need a pistol when u come to meet your friend?"
"Why do u think?" He asks me back. To kill me obviously if I step out of my line. Gosh! This is an extreme move by him. Even I never tried to protect my Madhu like this way.
"Do u think I will get scared seeing this silly gun? Then u r mistaken. I know u don't have the guts to really shoot someone mainly when he is your friend." I say with a smirk.
"Just answer me Rk... Why Nisha is here? She appeared so suddenly from out of the blue?" He asks. Nisha's entry is a shocker to me too. But she is not gonna play any evil role here... She is my nice trusted friend.
"Nisha is participating in a fashion show in Mumbai, which is tomorrow so she came here from Singapore. We accidentally met yesterday in your party... Well i could even blame u for our meet. You indeed gave me a shocking surprise along with your engagement news by making me encounter with my Ex. Well, She wanted to see me for herself to know i m happy. I told her I am... & I asked her to forget me & move on in her life as I m married to Madhu I can never ever think of other women. Okay?"
"Okay. I believe u that you won't cheat Madhu."
"Never"
"Okay. Tomorrow u r coming with me" Sultan tells me. Why the hell I should go with him? & where the hell he wants to take me?
"Where ever it is I wont come with u. I m not an useless idiot like u. I have a business to run & a wife to look after at home. So I m not gonna waste my time with u. Go spend it with dips."
"I cant take her to this place. She will kill me" where the hell he is planning to take me?
"Where u wanna take me?" I ask as I cant take the suspense.
"To Your ex-girlfriend's modeling show. So many colorful chicks. We both can have fun by feasting our eyes. I got two passes." He beams at me.
"How the hell u managed to get the entry passes? I thought it's all sold off" I ask shocked.
"Nisha gave me. She is a darling. When I asked if I could get 2 entry passes for her show promising I will bring u, she readily gave me. One for u & one for me" he grins.
"What?" I jump from my seat.
"Yeah. I saw u two in the cafe"
"What the hell u were doing there? Are u spying us?" I ask pissed.
"Doh! I m not spying u both. When I called u I was in that mall only. I came with dips as she wanted to do some shopping & there I saw u with Nisha & then only I called u to check whether u r telling me the truth or hiding something. But u answered me honestly."
"I never lie, sultan & u know that" I tell him rubbing my forehead.
"Yeah, i know... But still testing you know"
"Testing? f**k!" I growl at him.
"Then after you both ended your conversation & once u left I thanked Nisha for being so understanding & not being a vamp. She is a sweetheart, Rk." Sultan says coolly with a ridiculous smile plastered on his face.
"What?" I m beyond shocked. From where the hell he appeared the moment I left? Was he stalking us for long?
"Cool dude. U might wonder about my timing of entry. It's easy because I was sitting right behind your seat & over hearing your conversation" this is gross. Bloody f**ker... He was sitting behind me & eavesdropping & now he came barging with a gun, he even threatened me over the phone.
"But neither I nor Nisha noticed u?" how could he possibly escaped from our view when she was sitting so close to us?
"That's all Sultan's special talent dude" he laughs.
"Stalking is not special talent. It's creepy" I tell him but he ignores it.
"You were sitting right behind me & called me huh?"
"Don't be a fool. Of course I went to a distance to collect my coffee & called u while standing near the counter" from where he got the brain? I thought he has clay in place of brain? But he proved me wrong.
"So u & madhu have problems?" God! He heard that too? The shit has really hit the fan.
"U said u came with dipali right? Was she too hearing us?" I ask him to distract.
"Nope. She kicked me out when i demanded to choose sexy lingerie for her so I told her I will wait in coffee shop till she finish her shopping & there I saw nisha coming towards u & u two hugging which irked me so I stealthily sat behind u & over heard everything." He should become a detective. He is not a f**king fool as i thought.
"Since u heard everything u should be knowing what's the problem going between madhu & me so i m not going to repeat it to u." I tell him warily.
"Hmm... Okay. I m not going to force u because I got the clear picture of your marital issues." He says. I just nod thanking my stars that i dont want to tell everything from start. I m really tired.
"Rk, Madhu cares for you" Sultan tell me which is not something I don't know.
"I know" I smile & look at my bandaged hand. I remember her tears while dressing my wound, she was crying for me, she could feel my pain.
"She is young & immature, so don't go hard on her, Rk." Sultan pleads me.
"Sultan, you really don't have to tell me all this. I love my baby brat & I know her better than you" I tell him politely. I m so happy my friends really care for my wife, I can rely on them to look after her when I m away from her.
"I know Rk. But I want to make sure u won't lose your temper & hurt her with your harsh words because I know she is unknowingly hurting u badly so might feel the urge to hurt her back." that's true. I m tempted to spit venomous words at her for hurting me but I can't do that to my baby.
"I'm really finding it hard to hold my temper after hearing her bullshits but I'm trying"
"I understand. But try hard"
"yeah I will" Hurting Madhu will be the last thing I ever want to do.
"And Rk..." Sultan drags.
"What?"
"Don't leave her yaar."
"I won't." I say but I have doubts in my own words. I have this gut instinct that I can't hold the last string of our life for long. I never want to leave Madhu, she is my very life, my oxygen to breathe but I can never force Madhu to stay with me if she doesn't want.
"Good" Sultan smiles. I smile back.
"Rk, I like Nisha's idea actually. Why don't u go for it?" Sultan says showing excitement.
"What idea?" I m clueless.
"That trip idea." I glare at him as if he is mad.
"Oh come on. Don't go for honeymoon trip... U just tell Madhu... um... its just a holiday trip... Like u know in two weeks her college will start & then she wont get anytime for outing & all so u can take her now right? That will help her to keep her mind free from all this mess & she might also get romantic with u... try to keep her happy... What say?"
"I will think about it Sultan" I actually like this idea of taking Madhu out. Now Malik uncle is also getting better so nothing to worry about. we can take up a short trip. But where?
"Okay. My work is done here. So I will take my leave & don't forget about Nisha's show, okay?" He says & stood on his heels & turns to walk.
"Hey! Take your gun" I remind him.
"Give it to your little baby biwi" he says grinning. Why should I give this dangerous weapon to my baby brat? She might mess with it & harm herself. I look at him wide eyed.
"Chillax dude. I got that gun from the mall. As we know Madhu is crazy for gun toys & gun key chains so I got it specially for her. You know its a laser gun, she can switch off her bedroom lights & shoot the gun at the ceiling then she will see colorful stars, flowers & some cartoon characters. She will love it" shit! Its a toy? This bas***d scared the shit out of me! But yeah, Madhu likes guns. When she was a kid she was so obsessed for soft toys, guns & remote cars, that's why her room is filled with soft toys even now but she is not playing with guns & remote cars anymore. She is not that much of a baby.

When I return home in the evening, Madhu is sitting on the couch & watching discovery channel. Man vs wild. She favorite show & she is f**king crazy for that guy, Bare grill.
"Hi. How was your day?" she asks me with a smile. This one smile is enough to make my day.
"Hi. Good. Thank u" I smile & sit beside her on the couch.
"How was your shopping? Did you got all your necessary stuffs."
"It was fun. I had a great time with Trishna. I got few jeans & tops & dresses & others stuffs. I will show you later" she says. I nod.
"I saw you & Nisha in the mall" Madhu starts. Oh shit! What all are doing in the same mall today? Was it the only mall in Mumbai to shop?
"Yeah, we had a chat & she invited me for her fashion show"
"You are going?" Madhu asks excitedly.
"I don't know. I have work to do. I have a crucial project to finalize by the end of this month"
"Oh"
"But Sultan is pestering me to go to the show with him. But I'm not sure if I could find time or not"
"Hmm... okay" then we remain silent for few minutes before she starts. "It was so nice to see u both so close, hugging each other, smiling & laughing" oh oh! She took our friendly gesture in a different sense I guess.
"Nisha is leaving back to Singapore after the show ends, so I met her as a friend. That's it"
"My friend Trishna was also with me & she was shocked seeing you both so close, she asked me am I not feeling jealous?" Right question asked by Trishna, she is matured enough than Madhu I guess. This little wife of mine should actually fight with me for seeing my ex-girlfriend, shouldn't she? Wives does that right?
"But I felt happy seeing you both together." Why won't you feel happy? You are ready to get rid of me from your life. I sigh sadly.
"Trishna told me to keep an eye on you so that you won't go behind another woman" Madhu tells & laughs. Do keep an eye on me, baby. I will be only happy if u do so! I guess I should send Madhu to more shopping with Trishna, that girl can seed some brain to my brainless biwi.
"You both looked great. A perfect match" Nisha said Madhu & I are perfect match. Now she is saying Nisha & I are perfect match. So I look good with all pretty women. You have still got it Rk. Even after getting married your charm is working on women. If Madhu is not feeling jealous or possessive for me then it means only one thing... that she didn't love me. Great!
"Madhu, I m hungry, shall we eat" End of discussion, because I could feel my control slipping from my hand.
"Yeah, sure" she says & switch off the TV & walks to the dinning table to set our dinner while go to washroom to freshen up.
I join Madhu on the dinning table five minutes later. She has already started eating.
Oh oh! No rice huh? Madhu has made Rotis & daal. Now only she started learning to make rotis so it's slightly burnt but I don't mind. But how I will eat this rotis with my bandaged hand? I have cuts on my fingers too so I have plastered it. I just sip my orange juice without touching my plate.
"Eat, Rishu"
"Yeah, I will eat" I try to tear the Rotis into small pieces but I find it hard to do not only because my hand is injured but Madhu's Rotis are really so hard, no ghee, nothing.
"Rishu, can I?" Madhu points to the plate asking me if she can feed me.
"No, its okay. I can manage" I tell her & try again. This time madhu moves from her place & stood beside me & takes a piece of roti to feed me. But I stop her.
"Madhu, I'll eat. U just make the rotis into small pieces then it will be easy for me to eat" I don't know why I feel the need to eat on my own. May be I m pissed with Madhu for her earlier talk, that's why I feel the need to avoid her.
"Rishu, please, let me feed. Don't wet your bandage" she says softly.
"Then you should have made Rice & daal" I comment.
"I'm sorry. I forgot about your injured hand. But I'm feeding you nah to rectify my mistake"
'Don't go hard on her, Rishu.' Sultan's words hits me.
"It's okay, Madhu" I smile & let her feed me. I like the feel of her fingers touching my lips. I wish I could kiss each of her fingers.
"Enough"
"Rishu, u just ate on Roti"
"I'm full"
"You didn't like it?"
"No it's fine. Thanks"
"Rishu, why are behaving like a stranger? When you started telling me thanks & all?" she asks with tear brimming eyes. Don't cry, please don't cry.
"Madhu, I'm just tired. Sorry" I tell & walk to my room without looking at her.
I keep tossing & turning on my bed. I couldn't sleep. I felt bad for behaving rudely with Madhu. I should apologize to her. That's when I remember Sultan's gift to Madhu. That stupid gun. I will give that to her, she might feel better & happy. I take the gun from my office bag & walk towards her room & knock the door.
"Rishu, you want something?" Madhu asks opening the door.
"No. Actually I want to give this to you" I hand her the gun. She smiles happily. I could feel the relief rushing through my body.
"You got this for me?" She asks smiling.
"Nope. Sultan got this for you as you like guns"
"You won't believe me Rk, I searched for this gun in all toy shops in the mall today. Trishna even got pissed at me for behaving like a child & searching for gun toy. But you know it's a laser gun. I love it." she kisses the gun. Thanks Sultan. I owe you for putting a smile on my baby brat's face.
"Yeah. Sultan told me it's a laser gun & asked you to shoot it on the ceiling in the dark & see the effects"
"Okay. I will try it" she says excitedly.
"Okay. Good night" I tell & walk back to my room & lock it but I hear a gentle knock on it.
"What?" I ask Madhu.
"I thought we both can see the laser effect of the gun together" she says. I want to say I'm not interested but I didn't want to hurt her again. I don't know why I'm in a foul mood today.
"Come" I invite her in. she quickly jumps on my bed & lies on it.
"Switch off the lights & get on the bed, Rishu" She is so excited. I do as I'm told, I switch off the light & close the window screen to make the room completely dark & then I join her on the bed. She scoots close to me. Our bodies touching. My hearts starts pounding & my breathe quickens.
"Shoot" she giggles & looks up at the ceiling.
"Awe..." she wonders seeing the stars in red laser light. She keeps shooting & the images changes from stars to flowers to dora to mickey & so on. But I didn't pay much attention to the changing effects as I m busy drooling Madhu, even in dark I could see her face clearly, she is a natural beauty, I could see her grinning & laughing like a small child. Her laughter is infectious. she moves even closer in her excitement, her head resting on the croak of my neck, I could inhale her gorgeous unique scent. It's so intoxicating. Her silky glossy hair fans on my face. I just close my eyes & relish the closeness.
"I LOVE YOU" I hear her soft voice. I jerk & shoot my eyes open to look at her but she is staring the ceiling transfixed. Did she say 'I Love U'? then look at me & tell me Madhu, please. But she didn't look at me. I tear my gaze from her & follow her gaze. I look above & it shows 'I love you' on the ceiling. Damnit! It's the gun. She just read what's written on the ceiling. Then she shoots the gun again & the three magical words disappeared leaving an aching feel in my heart & some heart shape balloons appeared. I'm just staring at the ceiling but I didn't see anything, I'm so lost in thoughts. Thoughts of madhu. Then I realize that there is no image on the ceiling. It's all dark. I turn to see Madhu sleeping peacefully holding my arm. I don't know for how long I was looking at her. I want her to let her sleep with me in my arms but I don't want to take advantage. Morning when she wakes up & sees herself in my bed with me, she might not like that so, I gently pick her in my arms & take her to her room & deposit her on her bed covering the duvet & placing a soft kiss on her forehead, I head back to my room & stare at the ceiling, I could see Madhu's beautiful face on it & soon sleep took over me.

Precap - Rishbala Chillaxing in Andaman & Nicobar islands... ;)

@ veni - dear, you liked the idea of Rishbala going on a trip & asked me to show it so I'm showing it specially for u though I have planned it before but now I m sure of keeping that scene in the next update. Hope u will like it!

See guys as I said if u like any scene or want to see any scenes, please do tell me like Veni told in her previous comment & if it fits the story then I will surely show it... :)

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Thanks to all my lovely readers in advance

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P.S - I Will try to update "Broken Hearts" Soon friends. But I don't know why I m not getting interest to write that story. May be you all didn't encourage me more & show your eagerness for that story like u do for this story. LOL
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipeee FIRST IN COMMENT . Its OK Anish next time you can come first after all their is always Next Time πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰



OK coming to the update .I red the 4th & 5th chappy and I am commenting for both the chappy's together in this post . Bear with my Thesis .🀣🀣🀣

So this Madz is really very dumb who is hell bent on hooking her husband to his ex . I fail to understand that now Madz is going to join college but still she must have some BRAINS to analyse the situation and act accordingly . I mean she might not be knowing the importance of this pious relationship but she must be knowing this much that now they are a husband-wife and they cant break this thread according to their whims and fancies .

But I am glad that Nisha is quite a good and a true friend and when RK hurted his hand she understood his gesture and went from there .

Even though Madz is rectifying her mistake of physical hurt she caused to RK by nursing his wounds without disturbing his sleep and crying BUT then what about the emotional and mental pain she gave ?? Its going to take time to heal RKs mental and emotional pain but still has she even thought about it ONCE that how she will nurse RKs emotional and mental wounds ?? Just make sure that she actually works more harder to heal the mental & emotional pain she gave to RK . I know RK will melt down but then still Sudha just make sure that her healing of RKs wound is not through a simple love confession or something . She should realize RKs importance and not only RKs importance but also the value of marriage and a relationship of husband-wife . In short she should earn RKs love .

🀣🀣 So Nisha loves older men . I never knew this theory that older men will pamper there younger wife 🀣🀣 Is this theory true or you just made this up for this story ?? 😲😲


Your Nisha reminded me of Shweta from Neha's story 🀣🀣 They both were partially responsible for playing as a cupid . So she was actually watching RKs expression when Madz was trying to hook her up with RK . Not bad ... Nisha is a true friend who gave RK the advice to make this relationship work by taking Madz on a trip and all . That's what true friends are πŸ‘

OK I hope RK goes to Nisha's fashion show and by the end of this story just show Nisha's married life also 😳😳😳


🀣🀣🀣🀣So Sullu really ended up with a gun in RKs office . Is he for real ?? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† LMAO RK pointed the pistol towards Sullu so that he dies first 🀣🀣 Quit a cunning RK πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



OK when Sullu said to RK to come with him tomorrow and he can't take Dips there I thought that he is taking him to some farmhouse kinda thing with female dancers and all to enjoy 🀣🀣😈😈 OK so its just a fashion show 🀣 Shit !! My imagination 🀣🀣

W*F Sullu was also there in the same mall 😲😲😲 Ahhh and on top of it he heard Risha's talks 😲😲 Well I never knew that Sullu has so much of brains in your story 😈😈🀣🀣 that he actually listened sitting just behind them and then calling up RK when taking his coffee .. Which English detective series Sullu watches that he has got such a sharp brain working in such issues ??😲😲 πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Well whatever it is I am OK with it But I felt that Sullu shouldn't have known about RKs personal issues however much he guided RK of being easy with Madz and to give her time and all .. Agreed Sullu behave maturely here giving RK this idea of not to hurt her bcz she is childish but still I felt that Sullu shouldn't have known about Rishbala's marital issues πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

WHATTT 😲That pistol was a toy 🀣🀣🀣🀣 Sheee that was a very lame and a bad stunt pulled by Sullu 🀣🀣 But I liked this 🀣🀣

Awww so Madz fed RK the food 😳😳 OK just tell me that seriously RK wasn't that hungry thathe ate 1 roti or bcz Madz made hard and burnt roti's that's why ??🀣🀣 I am curious to know this ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Poor RK Madz's is so engrossed in playing with that laser gun that she dint even realize that her close proximity is affecting RK so badly that somehow RK has controlled himself ...

Awww wish that I LOVE YOU was in real for RK than he would have been the happiest man 😳😳 But no worries I hope in future updates Madz realizes her follies and works hard for this relationship .

Ahhh can this RK be more perfect ???? I mean he literally took Madz to her room bcz he dint wanted to take any advantage and neither he wanted to see his Madz crying in the morning that she slept on the same bed with RK . 😳

Overall A very sweet and funny chappy with respect to Sullu's stunt 🀣🀣 Good going .. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

TC πŸ˜›

Edited by BurnThemAll - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww just missed hatrick
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Haha sultan drama is so lovely πŸ˜†
Even I got doubt whether his love(like bro) for Madhu is more than rk sπŸ˜†
But glad he too caring for Madhu 😳
Ellarum ore shopping mall thaan povaangala adjuvum rk nisha vai paakadha aal illai 🀣
Trishna's words ll affect Madhu soon πŸ˜‰ waiting to see madhu's jealousy but I know it ll take time
I'm loving this rk very much ❀️ award kudukalam avan oda patience ku πŸ˜†
Aww gun laser light scene was so cute ❀️ coz me too love laser light I had one but its not gun type
Eagerly waiting for trip 😳
Hope v get atleast one kiss scene 🀣
Show some mercy on us too Sudha πŸ˜† no romance scenes in sudha 's story is shocking for me 🀣
But I know, need to wait to get such scenes in this story πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
Lovely update Sudha ❀️ thank you so much for super fast updates and pls try to update broken hearts too 😳 really miss that story
Thanks for the pm πŸ€—


Edited by anish17 - 9 years ago

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