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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW!! fantastic update...loved it dear... sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 15 days...

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Posted: 8 years ago
part 4-6
awesome emotional updates...
ye sab geet ka acha karne ki jagah usse force kar rahe hai...
sagai ho gayi...achanak geet ko kya hua??udas thi naraz thi n suddenly she is behaving happy!!kya chal raha hai iske mann me?!!
maan ne movement ki ??!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part ... movement in Maan...what will Shahid do now??will he say about it to Geet?? Or will he turn in to the villan??
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Posted: 8 years ago


Part 7

next day geet go with shahid and happily take participate in wedding shopping...mostly dresses finalized of main functions...as per his choice she buy many saris too...

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at evening he drop her at home...

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Shilpa : geet kya- kya liya tumne

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geet : deepak

 

coffee aur snacks le aana room mein

am tired

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without giving reply , she left...

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nurse aap jaaiye

now am here...

 

nurse left...

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maan kaise ho tum

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tum kya jwab donge

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mein tumhe meri aur shahid ki wedding ki shopping dikhati hu

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his choice is superb

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she is busy in showing saris to maan, and not notice shahid presence on her back...shahid happy to see change into her...

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shahid : geet

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geet : tum

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bahar kyun khade ho

andher aayo na

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she held his hand and take him inside...

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kya huya

shahid : wo tum

apna phone bul gyi thi

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geet : thanks

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mein tumare liye coffee laati hu

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shahid : tum rhehne do

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geet : aaj bilkul nhi

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geet left...

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shahid : maan 

 

am so happy today

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i get my geet

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i love her so much maan

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aaj se nhi

college se

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but she loves you always

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but now she also want to ready marriage with me

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he bent to his level , and placed the hand on his hand...

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maan mein wadaa krta hu tumse

 

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mein geet ko bhut khush rakhunga

usse bhut pyaar dunga...

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at a minute, he feel something , he take hand back and shocked to see moment in his hand...

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No

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He again come near to him and held his hand...want to know that's true or not...

Maan I love geet

Wo ab sirf meri hai

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He again feels moment, this time he not only feel sensation but see too his finger lightly moving...

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He take two step back, not knows what he do... how he react...

Mujhe geet ko batana chaiye

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Wo khush hongi

.

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Another voice stop him...

Shahid tu asa kaise kr sakta hai

Geet ko ye pata chala

Toh wo kbhi tujhse shaadi nhi karengi

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Tujhse teri geet fir se door ho jaayengi

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Nhi

Mein geet ko ye abhi nhi bta sakta

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I love her

She is mine

Now only mine

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Sorry maan

I know this is wrong in your eyes

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Par mein job hi kr raha hu

Apne pyaar ko pane ke liye

Dekho na ab toh geet bhi mere sath khush hai

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Shahid tu shi hai

Apne pyaar ke itne karib aake

Piche hanta

Kaha ki samajdhari hai

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Geet : shahid

Your coffee

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Shahid : ha

Wo mein chalta hu

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Geet : tum thik ho

Shahid : mujhe kya honga

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Wo geet

Dad ka call tha

Kuch kaam aa gya hai

Geet : ok

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Shahid : khi geet ko khud pata lag gya

Maan thik ho raha hai

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Toh kya honga

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Mujhe kuch sochna honga

.

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Think shahid

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Yes

Ye thik rahenga

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Mujhe kal se kissi bhi tarah geet ko apne sath office laana honga

Taki wo project mein busy rhe

Aur maan pe uska itna dhyan na jaaye

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Yes shahid yhi shi hai

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Time passing out, and geet get busy in office or sia, she spen so less time with maan...

Finally the day come, marriage function going to start from next day...

One side her parents is so happy to see her spent time with shahid...but no one understanding her inner pain, her sadness behind this painful smile...

Muskuraate hai hum

Toh unhe lagta hai

Khush hai hum

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Kambhakt koi parda hatake toh dekhe

Har din is dard se kaise ladte hai hum

.

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Another side, karan is so tensed see her bhabhi ignoring his maan bhai and plus now she not talk with this family too... Shilpa is busy in preparation of marriage, and daadi have own mesries...she is sad, now his maan going to live alone life... this not mean, she is not sad or feel pain for geet... but she can't become selfish ... For geet this marriage is necessary...she doesn't want she spent all life for maan...she has also right for feel happiness ...

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Maan see this dress

Ye meri wedding dress hai

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Nice na

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Jo aapne pasand kiya tha na

Wo bhi acha tha

Par ye dekho

Ye mujhe ab jyada acha lag raha hai

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Nhi bhi lag raha honga

Toh mujhe ye khehna hi honga na maan

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Kyunki aapko toh bs sona

Uthne ka koi irada nhi hai

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You know maan, am feel so fear...

Are maan har ladki ko ye darr hota hai

For wedding night baba

Dekho na humari toh ho nhi paayi

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She closes the door and come near to him & lay beside him... She takes his hand and placed on her heart...

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Maan can you feel my heartbeat

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Maan I want to feel you today

She bends and kissed on his eyes...his both cheek, placing kisses on his all face...

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Maan open your eyes please...

She softly placed her lips on him, she only want to feel him...her hope breaking day by day...now she feel her heart explode at any moment...if he not respond...she slowly increased the pressure on his lips... she shake him by shoulder... Her tears continuously falling, not know when her cry turn into sob...and she slept holding him tightly... His body shakes like thundering cloud or says some vibration passes in his body...she feel something ,she open the eyes and she he sleeping like always...geet again you dreaming...

She slept again... this time its not a dream but its reality...but what she do

She seeing or says living this moment again and again from past five years...now it's become true...but now she can't differentiate between reality or dream...her mind state is not in peace...

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Precap : marriage ritual started...

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww 👏 😊
Lovelyyy sahid being selfishhh not tell abt maan to anyone
N here marriage day to come
One last time geet try n maan to did movement bt she not understood this
Waiting for nxt 😊
Eagerly waiting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
N me firsttt 😛
Yayyy 😃 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg geet getting married to shahid nd maan is also respnsing nd she is thinking its all fake as she is feeling all this year oh god jaldi jaldi maan ko hosh aajaye before she get married to that shahid
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shahid notice movement in Maan . First he thought to tell Geet but then decided not to disclose it bcz he wants to marry with her. Geet also felt movement in Maan but she ignored thinking as her dream.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's sad part. Everyone is happy seeing geet spending time with shahid but no one know how much she is breaking inside. Shahid is such a selfish basterd. He deliberately made geet join office so geet cannot guess maan's improvement. finally wedding day come. Geet intimated.with maan at night for the last time . but again she didn't get any response. Waiting for next.dear