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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

👏👏👏👏👏Dear Sush, 👏👏👏 What a fantastic update!!!! 👏👏👏

Perhaps one of the best updates in this forum. Extremely positive, forward looking one. Raji is studying further! The conversation between K's parents and her, KR, KVRL - brilliant is the word. I am super impressed with your story line. Raji's fears, thinking process, submissive attitude etc. etc. have been beautifully portrayed. Karthik positive thinking, confidence and the support of his parents are lovely too.

Thank you very much for such a positive update.

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Hi Sushk, nice update! Karthik's parents are very welcoming towards Raji, that's nice of them and Karthik is being a gentleman too. I really like the way Karthik is handling things so far. I also like how Vishnu and Lakshmi are introduced in this part, now we can see KVRL all together. I want you to extend the story yes yes!

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Again very sorry for d late comment sush 😆

Thank u for giving back to back update sush gud girl 👏

Part 3 B

Atlast they got married 😛.. It was like seeing an action movie.. rombe fast a poguthu un story..

Dis Manoj and his mother grrr 😡

So they got der marriage registered 👍🏼 and nice to see K parent's are so supportive to him and like d way they accepted R 😛..

Inthe madiri update kuduthitu ur telling dat its atleast readable haan..Great sush 👍🏼

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Another surpeise from u so soon sush 😛

Wow such a wonderful update 👏 superb.. Me very surprised reading dis update.. ippadi ellam thnk panni ezhuthirke superb 👏👏

Nice welcome for R by K parents and hope she is surprised to see d house and d life which she got.. Its really nice to see K parents so loving and caring to R 👍🏼.. So der are many surprises waiting for R 😛

Its really nice to see dat K calling Wifey and R calling Mr.Husband 😛.. Avangaluku kulla bonding started pola..

Oh R is going to continue her studies is it..so K R college life interesting a irukum la.. Me waiting to read der col life

Der cums d entry for next lovely couples V L and nice to see all d frnds together now 😃

R u joking sush by using d word Boring haan .. No way its really superb ur story is moving perfectly 👍🏼

Ithu yena ques sush it wil be really nice if u extend d story and ippo vere K R college poirukange so wanted to knw abt dat right so for that u need to extend d story 😃

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Progressive sweet and a quick update...

Love his parents for asking her to study further :)

Do update as quickly as this :)

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Super Sush... Loved this update...

Raji now got a lovely family... I am very happy for her...

Wow... Vishnu n Lakshmi, here... Good

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Nice part teddy really a good social thought to give woman in business and about career building of girl.

Waiting for your next part

Thank you for the PM

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Hey Guys 😃

I am here with a teaser for the upcoming tracks in the story... 😉 I am not sure if I would be able to update within the next couple of days... So I think this would suffice for the time being... 😛

Also keep in mind that not every part of the teaser will be in the next part itself... (It might, but not for sure...) It is just sort of like an overview of the tracks I had planned for... 😃

Teaser -

She walked in the room to see a package left for her on the bed. "Yaar ah irukkum?" she wondered to herself and walked up to see a note with it as well.

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Her eyes were wide open seeing that, it was sure to have fallen out if she had been shocked any more. He turned to look at her reaction and started cracking up. "Before you ask... Yes, what you are thinking is true..." he said in between more laughing.

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She stood there seeing the scene in front of her. Tears brimmed in her eyes, she felt nostalgic. He came behind her to only see her face filled with nothing but pain. His heart constricted to see her like that. Why did this girl have to suffer so much? If time couldn't heal the wounds then what will? "You will" an inner voice uttered to him.

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She gasped as he pulled her into the car with force. It did not get to her, until she looked in the direction he was looking. She was appalled at the sight in front of them and out of instinct she placed her hand over his tight fist, knowing very well of what would happen if she did not.

Coming Soon... Stay Tuned...

I am really grateful to every one of your comments, as it is what that keeps me going... You Guys are truly the best... ⭐️ Thank You...

I promise to update ASAP... And I will reply to all of your comments then as well... 😛

Thanks a bunch again Guys!! 😃

-- Sush 😉

Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago