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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: joe4joe
Sad to hear tht u r ending it soon...
Hmmm...im waiting to see arnav supporting her in studies.
Hw they move forward in their relationship?
Update was perfect.
Love it a lot.

Sorry Joe, I have few more parts planned and I must say this is the way I had imagined from the beginning itself. Dragging this would only ruin the storyline. I hope you understand.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: latersbaby.
Beautiful update JJi
Love the way u potrayed arshi's emotions..one who for love of his life ready to leave all her past insecurities nd wanted to take der relationship to nxt level while the other wanted to give his life his wife some space to b comfotable with him...to b comfotable in thier little intimacy..nd nit to rush it which may scare her...beautifully written ji..just amazing..loved it👏👏

One song for khushi for her arnav😃

Tujhe dekh dekh sona..Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
Maine yeh zindagani..Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
Jiya dhadak dhadak ..jiya dhadak dhadak Jaayen

Aww Sush baby I just realized that how much I missed your comments especially when you come up with amazing songs to relate to the chapters I write.

Thanks a hell lot for always being there and being you.

Love, Hameshaa!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: RizArshi
CHAPTER 42

My My! I am mesmerized beyond imagination. It was surreal, it was sensuous, it was beautiful. I am still in a daze. You just made my day. This chapter was beyond beautiful ❤️

Thank you Riz Raz, a comment from you is always a treat to read. I am super glad that you loved the chapter, one of the most awaited ones of Hameshaa, ya?

Very happy to have you back here.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: aashi7
"Promise me that you will never ever leave me, Arnav. I would not be able to live without you! I would die; it scares the life out of me when I think about it. I would never recover if that happens!"
my eyes welled up while reading this dialoge dida u have magic in your writing it was so beautiful i was literaly in my sapoon ki duniya 😊
waiting eagely for next chapter love u lots for your pms🤗

Aashi, my baby 🤗

I hate to make you cry, but I guess it was Khushi ke aansoo, right?

Love you too for being the cutest thing ever and being my lil sis.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

What a beautiful chapter it is. It has always been a pleasure to read Hamesha expect for a few chapters where their troubled and horrible past overwhelmed me. I am sad to know that Hamesha will be ending soon. But this Arnav and Khushi will have a special place in my heart, Hameshaa and always. Loved the update Jiji 😊

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Varsha Sudhakar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Nice update.. Please continue soon...

Wish you and your family a Very Happy And Prosperous Onam!!!

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sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Amazing.. Loved their morning after.. Arnav is such a sweetheart. . Always taking care of Khushi's need and comfort before him.. And khushi is so innocent.. Love them..❤️

Loved the update. .

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: RizArshi
What a beautiful chapter it is. It has always been a pleasure to read Hamesha expect for a few chapters where their troubled and horrible past overwhelmed me. I am sad to know that Hamesha will be ending soon. But this Arnav and Khushi will have a special place in my heart, Hameshaa and always. Loved the update Jiji 😊

Thank you Riz, thank you for sticking with this story even after 2years and 3 months of absence of updates.

I am really lucky to have a reader like you. Yes Hameshaa, and LRF will be close to my heart because I found you during those days. 😳

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

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I am so very very glad that I get to be the first one for this wonderful and closely my heart tale.. and you are doing a wonderful job of providing the closure for this story. A slow progressive closure.. and I love you for allowing us to slowly relish and soak in the feel of Hamesha.

Wow and wow. Oh the luncheon looks very very grand. I want to taste the dishes too.. next time I will give them a splendid south Indian lunch. You can come kal too. Krishna Jayanthi feast :D are we going to get more of Shyam and Sakhi romance?

Oh the butterflies fly again.. aww Khushi bechari.. I loved the cotton candy proposal.. is there a blue one? I haven't had it. I have had that color. I have had the pink and white only. And I do that with my sister and mother. Color color what color! I want a candy now. Please get me one chechi. Please please please. I love it.

Oh the cabinet wala scene was truly romantic and passionate. I enjoyed and blushed too. I want more. Oh the scars of Khushi run deep. I hope Arnav wipes them off slowly and steadily with his pure love for her.

I am waiting for Mount Abu :D sad that we are waving bye to Kodaikanal. But new places, New romance and new hotness waiting I guess.. update soon!!!

P.S: I love you ❤️

Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago