#3:ArshiSS/Inciting Desires2~llCOMPLETED/ CH 8-10 - Page 66

Originally posted by: .anjali.

Ahhh...atlast read the whole story...OMG...it was one amazing story i have ever read...really..enjoyed the arshi ride through this...
Wanted to comment on each and every chap but that would take too long so will just keep my comment short and simple...

That is a really big compliment dear.I am humbled

First of all you are an amazing writer...while reading i literally was transferred to another world and it felt like i was watching a movie...each and every scene explained soo beautifully the surrounding described to every detail...felt like i was in that place at that time...

😊 I am honored if u felt that way and that is my purpose, because I like the story which can tke me with it and I can fly with it forgetting where I am

It was a beautiful journey till now...from the initial attraction to hatred from khushis side to the lovely nickname that she kept for Arnav...Mr law and order😆and of course not to forget the hilarious Mr arrogant stale piece of raisins...😆😆...to Arnavs possessiveness for khushi...to their opening their heart out to each other...sharing their pains...them understanding the other without speaking much...Ahmazing...had a fun ride...

😆 Khushi always have million names for him before LaadGovernor and that thought was in my mind...Karela, neem chada, magarmach, khadoos...😆 So just tried some more for him and Everyone loved it so far, phew...joote nahin pade

His possessiveness and her spunky actions are always my fav

Not only arshi...all the other characters are amazing as well...payal-adis love story too cuute...to arun-anjalis story...well written all over...
But my favorite character is Mojo...his one liner songs...i must say all of them were apt for the scenes and lifted the scene to another level...and your choice of songs were superb...
Ahh atlast finished off...hoping i did not miss anything...waiting for the further parts of the story to unfold..until then will be reading your other stories...
Thanx for the PM
Keep Smiling..
Anjali😃

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Wonderful update dear

Originally posted by: ZANADI

Ok. I try it again. I hope my comment will be posted this time.

Faiqa you rock👏

Once again you proved that you are our details queen.

There were so many details in the last update where you portrayed through small things how closer and closer they came to each other.

aww, thnx dear for liking the detail😊

It wasn't this direct in sentence "I love you" but more "I love you in this color".

yep

To be honest I didn't await something else. In fact it was just how ASR would say to someone he loves him.

true

I know Aadi and Payal's engagement should be the highlight but for me it were more Arnav's and Khushi's kisses.

😳

I am now curious what future will bring. Waiting for the storm and dark times. I think I am right that dark times are comming. We will see.

Thank you Faiqa and my big sorry for late reply.

Big hug

Originally posted by: swapno

Khushi may not be connected with his past...but Thakur can !
So I am thinking her past was entwined with his...which will make the revenge drama more powerful! well was only thinking this way while reading!
Waiting for next chapter.
All is well but I am just in a rush schedule...! 😳😳

Originally posted by: Itsflora

wow...
all those arrangement & lovey dobey eye locks!! loved it

Originally posted by: awaheed

Brilliant update
U r one hell of a writer
Love ur story or may I say ur BABY very much
N last but not least thanks for d invitation 😊

Originally posted by: arshi_sarun

Superb update... Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! Awesome update...loved it dear... sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 23 days...