Beauty and a Dusht Danav (3) MG, *** Ch 16 pg 112, TEASER pg 127 *****

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: tabby999

taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere..

LOcket wala Maan yaad aa gaya😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: tabby999

abhi tak nahi dekh payi😕

am dying to see it..

wanna jump in aur ye bachi ko boht kisses deni hai😃

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

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TEASER

"Yashoda, ye kaisi ladki dekhne aa gayi hai tere Dev ke liye? Uske face pe toh scar heal bhi nahi hue hai. Aur ye kya? Wo anaath hai? Chal yaha se. Iss se kahi zyaada khubsoorat ladkiya mil sakti hai humare Dev ke liye", Maya urged Dev's mother.

Geet who had gone in to check on the refreshments stood shocked at her words, her mind rebellious in anger.

The two ladies were standing outside the bathroom, having come there on the pretext of washing their hands and Geet was coming back to the living room. Dev had an emergency patient so he had not come yet.

While Yashoda aunty had seemed serene, Maya aunty was a typical Delhi socialite with her latest phone and parlor beauty.

Har baar ladki ki galti kyu hai? Jisne scar diya uss se toh duniya wale bacha nahi sakte aur jo wo seh ke khadi rehna chahti hai uss ke saamne aissi judgement kyu?

Before she could say anything, Maan's words rang out forcefully, "Meera akeli nahi hai. Hum sab uske saath hai! Rahi uske scars ki baat toh wo jaldi heal ho jaayege".

Maya aunty was undeterred and questioned back, "Maaf karna Maan bete. Ye sab kehna aasaan hai. Agar tum iss position pe hote toh kya tum Meera se shaadi karte?"

Maya aunty watched Maan's eyes flare and said triumphantly, "Nahi na?"

A/N: So Geet at KM. Hope you guys are liking it.

Kabhi kabhi yaha milne bhi aaya karo.. likhne ka mood banta hai if I know someone is waiting.

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anum fahim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Chapter 11: Nice update.. Dadimaa faint due to high bp and geet was horrified she calls maan who check b.p and tells geet to call the dr. When geet reaches KF she was effected deeply by days event and when meera ask her she couldnt help and tell her past to meera which was quiet tragic... Due to dadimaa illness maneet had to work together on projectand geet said sorry to him for slap... Whcih makes maan babu heart melt...

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anum fahim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Chapter 12:
as maan goes home to check on dadima.. He hears dadima talking about some rishta and thinks dadima is talking about his marriage.. But when he heear geet name he's happy.. Though his happiness is short lived when dadi start talking about dev dadi me have enjoyed enough tells him about dev n meera... When maan reach office and saw geet working he thinks about his lunch talk with dadi and calls geet loudly.. Geet get afraid and panicked and maan is shocked seeing her getting scared.. Finally aftr lot of heart n mind battle maan finally realise his love for geet..waiting for more.. Thnks for pm..:)
P.S: keep story pace slow... As i love seeing characters development slowly..

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anum fahim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

nice teaser.. Just loved the way our maan hero takes stand for meera... Waiting for it...

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libros

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: dqno1

A/N: So Geet at KM. Hope you guys are liking it.

Kabhi kabhi yaha milne bhi aaya karo.. likhne ka mood banta hai if I know someone is waiting.

Interesting teaser...

😲liking it... Its McDonalds burger I'm lovin it😆

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cutekanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Omg maan got so happy when he thought dadima was talking about his and geets marriage 😉
dadima also was talking full advantage of maan reaction 😆
nice amazing update
hope geet also has feelings for maan