I Found You, Almost! -Thread Two- *NTL PG1 & 134 - Page 50

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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update. Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Now this update was totally worth spending our time.. chechi am telling you, your talent is very neatly shown or rather unearthed only in this story.. it so brings your talents out.. and I am very very glad I am reading this..

In fact this story has increased my respect to the writer chechi :) yeah my admiration has increased two folds..

You so beautifully written how Arnav wants to set things right..and how Khushi is trying to move on, yet the strings of her heart hold her.back.. after all life is all about forgiving and letting it go..

Both of them are holding things still which is why the peace they felt has left them ..

Lavanya is paying for her karma.. well I guess she at least gets rid of her guilt by confessing the truth to Khushi..

Well the interlude gave us a very good insight on Khushi's thoughts and feelings.. life has a very tricky way of Playing and all we can do is HOPE..that it doesn't mess up things..

Well kudos to you <3 I loved this update and this story..running to hamesha now :P


Thank you Sadh, for all those wonderful things you have to say about me. It truly means a lot. I am glad you are enjoying this story and since this is my first attempt on something very serious I am lovign all these encouraging comments and criticism. It only helps me improve as a writer.

I hope I wont disappoint you.

Love
J
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlini

thank you so much for the note to clear my head. Excited for the next part. Keep frying, waiting for the delicious meal in the next update. You make us so emotional for arshi through your great piece of writing. Splendid job so far.


Thanks a lot Sharlini. Will try to update this tomorrow.

Love
J
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay even if Lavanya tells Khushi everything, will it be easy to forgive Arnav! For god sake e kissed Lavanya in front of his WIFE!

But lets see how Khushi takes it!
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Friedriceji thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey lovies,

I am leaving for my Sasuraal tomorrow.

Onam celebrations heck yeah!!

Will be back on 31st August, if I am still alive.

Do miss me, okay?

I love you all fried people.

Loads of love

J

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Didn expect them to closer! That was awesome! Do come soon! Kay??!
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Posted: 10 years ago
if they were so close to talk then something drastic must have happen to them as they finish being divorced ...waiting for revelation
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
jiji i can't wait to story unfold...
may lavanya ruined their moments or
she misguided khushi about arnav, isn't it?
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am now always on your story! Well am not complaining

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This was awesome chechi.. as you had told I seriously didn't expect you too give us a peek into their closeness.. Well if they had become close, then what made them turn sour again? Argghh..the couples these days.. *Well I am not old enough to say that, but I heard a lady remark this today, so added it here :D*

Ha all thanks to Arnav's mom..things have turned good from worst.. she has definitely been a guiding light in their faltering life..

Oh definitely pretending is very difficult..especially if it concerns your loved ones.. in spite of hearing her children arguing, Arnav's mom's health has improved..she is a fighter, isn't she?

Wow a beautiful saree.. a necklace clasp.. whoa what is happening? Well that was too romantic and joyous and light hearted to read..

They have decided to give this a shot.. I am glad.. I hope things turn better.. and btw I loved their dance..

I am telling this time and again, your true ability as a writer is coming out now.. this story is testing your limits and creativity and portrayal ability totally.. and you are doing full justice to it.. trust me.on this chechi.. you do know that I don't lie in these things :)
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