SS- Puzzled Love Epilogue on pg 49 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start...loved the plot...sweet part 1...adore the friendship of Rishbala puzzled about their respective loves
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Posted: 10 years ago
how sweet par 2...except Raishbala ever1 else in the world realizes that they r soul mates..hope dips n trishna play cupid in making them know that...cute couple's slow realization of love is always interesting..
Edited by memad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very funny n super delightful part 3...loved the way how quickly n easily solved madhu's dilemma over not speaking to sultan...later after sending her with sultan, he is reminded of the hard-core reality of madhu won't be with him forever..kudos to trish😳
Edited by memad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
cute part 4...rk's craving for food is totally funny..n madhu serving all his demands...wow so sikky too joins club with trish in drilling the fact in rk's head about madhu...haha..loving this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continue soon, Dii. 😃
Eagerly awaiting d update ! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 5

Almost a month had passed now. And life had been going the same way. Madhu and RK were with their respective partners and neither of the two was able to accept them whole heartedly.

It was new year's eve and as always the orphanage had a party. But this year they had decided to have the function in a nearby banquet instead of the orphanage's lawn to let the children have some change.

Dipali and Sultan had come to attend the party too as they wanted to stay with the respective loves of their lives.

RK was playing with the kids. One of the kid had a large hammer and he beat the hammer hard on the plate. All the children jumped in joy seeing the metre rise up. Even RK danced with them while Dipali gave each of them fancy caps as a reward.

Madhu was dancing with the kids on the small dance floor as Sultan watched her lovingly. RK was unknowingly noticing them every few minutes. He would smile nervously seeing them. He could clearly see the love in Sultan's eyes for Madhu and even though he was satisfied seeing that his decision was proving correct but still he would get this strange nervousness on seeing them together. Suddenly one time he noticed Madhu absent from the dance floor. He quickly started scanning the whole place restlessly when he found her sitting at the food counter. But she seemed more worried than hungry.

On the other hand Madhu was panicking as she cleared the sweat from her forehead.

"Are you fine Madhu?" Sultan asked her worriedly seeing the sudden change in her attitude.

"Yes.." she smiled nervously at him.

"Please tell me if there is some problem" he said holding her hand.

"No Sultan.. I am fine.." she said smiling assuredly.

She kept on smiling and trying to enjoy for sometime. RK noticed Madhu was feeling uneasy. He excused himself from the kids and Dipali and came to Madhu.

"Is everything fine Madhu..?" He asked worriedly.

"Yes Rishu.. I am okay.." Madhu replied as she eyed Sultan slightly.

" I asked her too.. she doesn't seem fine.. but she is not ready to tell.." Sultan said worried too.

"Madhu... what is it?" RK demanded as wrinkles formed on his nose bridge.

Madhu held RK's hand and squeezed it. "Its nothing that serious.. I am just a bit uneasy.." Madhu said staring at him.

RK stared at her enquiringly. Then he gestured through his eyes as if confirming something. Madhu faked a smile at Sultan and nodded her head slightly at RK.

"Come we need to go then.." RK said to her.

"What happened?" Sultan asked thoroughly confused and now even scandalized that his girlfriend was to go with someone else.

"Madhu has forgotten her room open.." RK said to him very seriously.

"So.. Let it be.." he said confused.

"No sultan.. Madhu keeps the important documents of the orphanage in her locker. If by chance someone breaks into those.. then she would be the one responsible.. we cant take a chance.. you are a close friend that's why I trust you." RK said utterly seriously. "Dont tell anyone else" he whispered so that the excuse seems authentic enough.

"Okay.. will you come back?" He asked them both hopefully.

"I will tell you that later on Sultan.. Right now all I can think of is locking my room and checking if something has been messed up or not.." Madhu said disappointed.

"Should I take you?" Sultan asked.

"No.. Rishu would take me.. You enjoy here.. the kids are lovely.." she said patting his shoulder and they both went away.

"Man you are so good at making instant excuses.." Madhu said laughing as she sat at the back of his bike and Rk grinned cheekily.

"I had to think of something.. we couldn't have stayed there any longer for now.." RK replied back.

"And you said that i left my room unlocked and i have to lock it" Madhu burst out lauging. "What a similie.."

"You should have locked it beforehand if you had an idea.." RK said getting serious.

"No Rishu.. its not my date.. its like 4 days earlier.. i wasnt expecting it to be this early.." she clarified herself.

"Ohh.. do you need to see a doctor?" RK asked worriedly.

"No.. it happens sometimes.. not a big deal.." she said assuring him.

"Are you sure?"

"Yes I am.." Madhu said to him patting his back. "But you are awesome.. i was so tensed how i would spend another 3 hours after this stupid period started.."

"I am awesome.. that I know.." RK said boastfully.

"Love you Mr. Awesome" Madhu said hugging him slightly.

"Ahh..thank you thank you.." RK said laughing.

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Sorry if the update is short.. i will try to post next part earlier then...
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Posted: 10 years ago
😲 😲 omg!! "You should have locked it beforehand if you had an idea.." Did Rk really said that to madhu?? How mean...??😲😲 U have a way with words dear... I really like ur naughty double meaning dialogues... Its cheesy but not vulgar...
Hehe... Poor sultan couldnt catch the hint properly... Like a dumb head he really thought Madhu's room was open...😆
When Rk wrinkled his nose bridge i thought he was smelling her & thats how he got to know abt her periods...😆 did he really sniffed & found out or just by seeing her uneasiness he guessed it?? Anyways this guy is smart..😉
I m feeling sorry for both Dips & Sullu...
Rishbala r leading them on... This is bad...🥱🥱 They shld be clear on their feelings... If they dont know to name the relationship they share they can just be frnds till they discover their day of love...but why fool sultan & dips?? See sultan is head over heels in love with madhu... He will be heart broken when he realises madhu loves Rk & not him... Why rishbala r not valuing others feelings?? I just wish they both stay clear that they can not move close with anyone... So they shld not lead anyone... They can easily reject sullu & dips love proposals instead of fooling them by flaunting with them just to talk abt Rk (madhu) or just to concentrate on god damn tasty foods (Rk)...😳😳 well i really feel what rishbala doing is wrong... U made me feel pity for villian sullu & vampy dips...😆😆
In their puzzling game of love unknowing they r playing with others feelings...
Nice update...👏 It was fun to read...😛
Thanks yammy...😊
(Sorry if my comment hurts u)

FIRST TO COMMENT...😛

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG ! How the hell did he find out about her period..😲 What a wave length these two r in.😲😲😲. I'm speechless. Poor sultan. He believed them. RK never bothered to inform dips that he's taking madhu back to the orphanage. That's bad. I feel dips n sultan r going to fall in love.😉
RK n madhu r really dumb. When r they going to realise they love each other. The whole orphanage can see these two r in love except them.

Nice update. Loved it.
I love the way u write.
Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha rk is too smart what an excuse but how he come to know that madhu got her periods
Superb update dear
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG ! I'm still wondering how did Rishabh come to know about her menses ? 😲
Never seen a better form of non verbal communication, I guess. 😆
Poor Sullu n Dips ! 😆
Now only God n u know, when will these lovebirds realise that they're in love !
I think Sultan n Dips will realise d fact earlier...lol
Thnx for d pm, Di

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