Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: avika444
Superb update as usual dear
Arnav was so worried about khushi after shouting on her
He drove like a mad person and found peace only after seeing her safe
At one moment I thought her car crashed with that truck .
Arnav is so angry on khushi and threaten her to come with him
U have described arnav's pain perfectly .he was very upset coz of his parents death anniversary .
Anjali is so loving and caring sis
She knows about her brother and came to comfort him.
Aww khushi is missing arnav and was enquiring about him from aman
Loved the chopper ride .arnav understood her fear of height and tried to divert her by arguing with her
What happened to khushi ??
Waiting for next part
Update soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

Thnx avika😊

awww, I made you feel she was crashed...tht was teh fear in him and he drove like maniac

Both are connected through pain and that will bring them closer than ever

BOTH are in denial yet miss each other every second and that is our ARSHI...cute Tom and Jerry

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
Loved it...
My only guess for the precap is him or her is dreaming...

U r so cute Siren with ur guess😊

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: Teddybear_doll
nice update. .
arre waah ..adr was scared for khushi'd safety. ..he drove like man...just for khushi. .hayee ...yeh munda bada kamal hai !!!!!!!!!!!
wow she was missing arnav ... chupke chupke pyar ki nasha cha rahiye !!!!!!!!
heheehe...i think aman trying to hook up khushi with arnav ...Thnx for the pm. .

Thnx Teddybear😊

yes yeh mudda kamal hai

both are felling hard for each other and aman is bringing them closer

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: Lazyblazy
I so want him or her to come forward and hug this new over whelming and brewing feelings without hesitance.

😆 I love this thought

Shot of truth

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Thnx to ALL of you who came forward and shared their feelings and POV with me here.This chapter was very hard for me to pen down for many many reasons and for some it wasBORING , hell...yes...Who wants to read emotional stuff after a long day or busy life BUT this will help you to understand the intensity of his what he holds for Sheesh Mahal later .The pain through which they both are connected is what will bring them closer again after separation.AFTER all she is already making him distracted during Anniversary.BIG step.Now as their denial is done...From CHAPTER 6 to upcoming ones ...RABBA VE ...Enjoy ladies... so looking for ur feedback...muahhh🤗

>>>A NOTE >>>

I am reading some comments and scraps and PMs...and answering all of you accordingly,but I do feel something which I am going to clear here today.Most of you know me since last couple of years and my style of writing and displaying things and emotions so couple of things need clarifications.

I am not a big writer and I would never call myself ever in my life either.We have many many brilliant writers here.I salute them and have a big regards for them as writing is not an easy task...I write what I feel through my heart and as a fun to relive IPK my way.I am very busy person at the same time in my life.If I don't interact with you back and forth over Pms, scraps and all and even on thread it doesn't mean I am ignoring you or think of myself something.Def not my intention...whatever the time I have ...I want to read you and respond you back ...and update mine on time is my intention...It really takes a good amount of time to put things together and that is why I treasure each word of yours here because you take ur time and come forward to put a smile on my face and give me some intriguing moments...I truly respect from the bottom of my heart.Please never ever think of me a egoistic or anything like that.I am nothing in this world.If I can bring a smile or a thought in your brain through words...I am really honoured with that .Period !!!

If I am disappointing you , I am sorry...as this is not my intention, but not all chapters can be lovemaking or kissing without connecting facts...But that phase is done and now their passionate moments will be here to move on...

So Cheer up! and ohh...how can I forget...I can't leave you without giving you all my tight bone crushing punjabi jhuppy...😆 I am imagining you All crying over it😳 😆 and making all sorts of faces. Thnx for reading my blah blah boring Note...

Muahhs and hugs for All

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Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

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Roop_P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

am I first ...Yipeee😊

MIND BLOWING

I have no words for this update.

you have weaved such an ambience in between all the characters and the thread of connection is tugging us towards it,Take a bow dear.⭐️👏

Only Khushi has such power to tame this beast and she nailed it.She knew he can understand and feel it while he didn't know at the first place .Now He knows she has been suffered for so long.Your description is like made my heart so heavy here.She was just 6 and she witnessed all of this while sobbing silently aside hiding some corner as her father tok promise from her not to scream or do any movement .That father and his helplessness is roaming in front of my eyes.How horrific that scene is seeing his child with fear that what will happen to her if he is not any more and she will never come back from this nightmare.She is right .

Today she let it out in his embrace feeling that he is the only one who can understand her pain.That is BIG.BUt why his father was killed?

Their first passionate kiss 😳 I am on cloud 9😉

Her feeling his prickly subtle and digging her nose in to kiss him.I am dead😳

His keeping her in his embrace making sure she is alright till feeling her relaxed muscles just to hear her giggles .So beautifully written .It felt so real.

Before that her admiring him in his suave loo and his gazing at her in her simple and elegant beauty😳👏 Mr. Raizada couldn't take his eyes off all the time.

Helicopter ride, he really wanted her to feel out of all of her fears...but her raising fingers , counting all of his mistakes making sure of hearing all sorries 😆 that is so our Sanka Devi 👏 I loved it.

So Aadi knows it ,but I am touched by his promise, his worries for her at the same time.He is a man and knows how difficult ASR could be.He is right, she is one heck of a crazy girl

Payal - Aadi scene is light and funny😃 so engagement is coming soon

Now the dangerous part, so Shyam is out and ready .

Nani is warning him without knowing that he is one step ahead in this game.

Finally Akash is coming to the picture.

YOUR Precap last time

so she was feeling dizzy because of Sushi 🤣 I could never had that in my wildest dream Lady👏

PRE-CAP now

OK don't give us pre caps like that , pura week issi intezar main betega ab😉

NOTE ABOVE

Thank you for being such a humble person and thnx for writing such amazing stuff Ms. No Writerji😉

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Thnx DarkBeauty😊

if u have felt all of the above ...then I am honored.

He is akhdoo and she is sanka...rab ne bana di jodi

🤣 🤣 🤣 well said

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Thank u for 4replying ..

I ts the best feeling to get frnd In husband..thats the thing which u like ..helping ur love ones but not make it obvious but alas our loved ones not notice it:-(

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: MrMrsChiping.
Thank u for 4replying ..
I ts the best feeling to get frnd In husband..thats the thing which u like ..helping ur love ones but not make it obvious but alas our loved ones not notice it:-(

So So true...idk why ppl make it such a big deal...where this relation is a bliss