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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#741

Firstly,
A big sorry, for being late in commenting! Sorry!
Secondly,
The update was
Outstanding
Mindblowing
Superb
Sweet
Lovely
Awesome
Cute
Romantic
Adorable
Splendid
Phenomenal
Update!!!
I just love how you write this story, its just so amazing! The romantic viren, while he is suffering so much pain but yet he wanna love his lady love jeevika! And the way jeevika is tense, how cutely she take care of viren is just superb! The way they romance with each other has now words to describe.
cant wait to read the next updateee!!!
Waiting eagerly,
Thank u for the update and pm!!
Loveee yaaa n sorry

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Rj_Kryanite

@Rj_Kryanite

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Loved loved loved d demanding jeevika to d care...That line -"I don't care stay " was my fav... Awesome as always milliee u bring out the best everytimeee... Congo for such a amazing update to us

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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

and here is my 25,000th post!!

i want an update now 😆 ❤️

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Done Reading It Finally!

Took A Lot Lesser Time Then I Had Estimated.

Coming To the Update I had Missed!?!?

What Do I Say? I'm Fascinated. They Way You Write Is Simply Out Standing! You Portray Them Exceptionally And Fabulously.

The Characters Are Phenomenal. Their Past Is Excruciating. They Put Each-other Out Of Their Miseries. They Share Bond Like It's Out Of The World. Each Sentence Is Excellent. Each Emotion Is Deeply Felt By A Reader. It All Feel So Real And Sensible. With Every Chapter, The Story Takes A Deep Curve, Turn, And It's Astonishing. Love Each Shade Of Every Character. All I Can Say I That The Story Is Truly Phenomenal And Fabulous!

Keep Writing, Keep Growing.

Love You Buddy! ❤️

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#745

awesome update...

i loved the whole update...

jeevs were tensed cuz viren were in pain but he"s still trying romancing ith her...like seriously only viren can do this...

the way viren trying to clam down jeevs just fabulous...

i loved that way..

i seriously love docter docter game :p :P u often write those thing plzz..

last part just fabulous...seriously the way u wrote last part i was like wowww...

sorry for late cmnt...but i read like 3-4 times before cmnting on this...

i have an request...as we haven't see jeevs mode swing..can we get alteast one scene??? it would be hilarious...

update sooonnn...

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millee18

@millee18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#746

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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#747

❤️

loved so much of this update!

firstly beginning with the talk between jeevika and manvi was rather funny and adorable!

the way jeevika tells manvi that he really loves her was so cute, she's so happy for her closest friend!

also loved the way she said she and the baby were eating too much and Viren just growled!

so typical Viren!!!!! ❤️

honestly so much of Viren and Virat are the same... the both know how to pamper their girls to the core

love the concern both of them have for their lady-love!!

i absolutely loved the part where Viren gave Jeevika the heart shape ringed with words engraved on it!

that was such a romantic and beautiful gesture... one that jeevika couldn't even fight back and say to stop pampering her with all the expensive jewelry.

the way both of them fight over a girl and boy is so cute!!

and then began the convincing 😆

so adorably he carried her and she just relished being in his arms as always!

absolutely amazing update!

cannot wait to read more 😊

Edited by Kays94 - 10 years ago

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Priya

@Priya_ashvik

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Amazing amazing update...
Loved it..
Would love to see some side of the virat manvi story as well..
And virika are as ever breathtaking..😊
Thank you soo much for the pm..❤️

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#749

Thank you so much for updating! :*
Ahhh Viren... He'll do anything...and I mean anything to prove how much he loves Jeevs
The fact that he cant even wait to tell her proves as much as the ring
His adamancy on the baby's gender is actually so adorable
You don't normally think of OOL Viren as adorable ;) but that's just what he is when it comes to their baby
Hopefully Virat tells Manvi he loves her before she starts overthinking it
Virman' s story has always been an intriguing part of OOL, I'm glad you mentioned them a bit
Reading this story thru Jeevs' POV is the best, especially during parts like that ending
"Sensual persuasion" even tho she's ready to tell him what he wants to hear ;)
Continue soon & lots of love!

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#750

Awesome update
Love this side of viren
He's so determined that it's a girl
N jeevika at the end tho
Loved the update
Continue really soon
Can't wait for the next update
😊

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