Hey N!
The story has a really different setup- Arnav and NK working in the Air Force and NK and La siblings- wasn't expecting that one. Your characters are wonderfully written with their own shares of misery and unrelenting pasts- Nandan with his injured leg causing a kink in his career, Arnav with his past with Khushi but what truly touched my heart was La's. She went through something that changed her completely and has unknowingly defined her thoughts and actions. One can't predict or avoid such things in life but can definitely learn. She needs to move ahead and pick herself up. Putting up a strong faade for her family does no good if she is suffering in silence. Hope she understands that she is a wonderful person and she needs to live her life, the right man will come her way.
Really excited to see what messed up in Arnav and Khushi's past!
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