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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey N!

The story has a really different setup- Arnav and NK working in the Air Force and NK and La siblings- wasn't expecting that one. Your characters are wonderfully written with their own shares of misery and unrelenting pasts- Nandan with his injured leg causing a kink in his career, Arnav with his past with Khushi but what truly touched my heart was La's. She went through something that changed her completely and has unknowingly defined her thoughts and actions. One can't predict or avoid such things in life but can definitely learn. She needs to move ahead and pick herself up. Putting up a strong faade for her family does no good if she is suffering in silence. Hope she understands that she is a wonderful person and she needs to live her life, the right man will come her way.

Really excited to see what messed up in Arnav and Khushi's past!

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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
UnRes :-)
Awesome update N :-)
You gave us nandan's pov in this chapter. .but i didn't understand why aman encouraged nandan to propose kushi.. is it because he thought everything ended between arshi and kushi is depressed because of the heartbreak???
You are keeping the characters very realistic dear.. that's amazing :-)
What is nalini planning now.. she wants to speak to arnav.. about what???
Waiting to read kushi's pov..
Story is becoming very interesting and so leaving me with so many questions at the end of every update..
Waiting eagerly for the next update N
Edited by pravallika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


RES😛

Thank you N 😳

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N this was BEYOND BEAUTIFUL ...👏

DUDE U SURE ROCK WITH THIS GENRE 😃

U know it's very tough to strike a balance n generate emotions with words ..ur sure a gifted writer 😳

I think khushi is NOT in love with Nandan n she really cares for him but she does love Arnav n it's pretty Obvious 😳

I don't know if anyone has picked this up or not but the way u have written this is remarkable 👏

The song is my fave n I love it 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
N, thanks for the heads up for this chapter.
Seems like they are entangled in a web.

Firstly, the parents don't see eye to eye. Although in Chapter 6, you do write that Nalini is trying to make amends... but she unfortunately chooses Arnav as her target... not sure if it spells good or bad luck for him.

Secondly, Lavanya most probably kept on with Sahil because her mom told her not to... and she had to get hurt the hard way. Her run-in with Arnav was definitely rebound. The poor girl just needs someone to love her.

Thirdly, Arnav seems to have had it bad for Khushi during their earlier days, but what or who actually caused both of them to misunderstand each other?

Fourthly, Nandan has seen the lost look in Khushi, but did he not see it in Arnav as well?

And lastly, what is with this family to change the names of the people they associate with? Arnav to Andy and Khushi to Kashish?



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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update.

The more you unfold the more juicy it becomes. Though I m bit confused with this chapter, I guess the coming chapters will clear my confusion. So many questions???????

I thought Aman new How Arnav feels about Khushi. Y did he encouraged Nandan to confess to Khushi? Was he trying to help Khushi to get back her normal cheerful life back. Or was he hoping that Nandna would be perfect healer for Khushi, to get over with Arnav?

What is Nilani's secret? Lav wasn't her love? Did she loved someone else? Her and marriage to Lav was to get over with her love? You left us hanging in there...

I have A feeling Nilani is going to make some sense into Arnav. As, she has already witnessed a scene between Arnav and Khushi. So, before her Nandan get hurts again, she wanted to clear what is going on between these two.

From Nandan past, it's obvious Khushi does not share same feelings with Nandan. Are you going to let Nandan be the giver again? Don't you think he has done enough. But, in reality the giver always give no matter what? And they never get tied of giving.

I hope you would let Nandan meet someone who is willing to give as much as he gives. I know Khushi is same as him in that area, but she will not be able to give her heart to Nandan. As, it doesn't belong to her anymore. Some, blue uniform guy has already possessed it way way back. And he is not willing to give it back.

What really happened between Khushi and Arnav? It seems he hurt her badly.

Waiting to reveal more...

Thank you so much for being considerate and including the translations, otherwise I wouldn't understand a thing from the song. 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh such a nice chapter poor Nandan i really feel sorry for him but as a true fan of arhi i want them together, so what nalini wants to discuss with arnav abt lavanya or their guru had told her something that she want to share with him, hopefully the guru told her that their marriage is not possible hahhaha a crazy fans imagination.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter
NK is obeservant
He saw that arnav dont love lavarnya and khushi is not at all happy

Nalini '' why did she chose arnav to talk

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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked the quote a lot. First and last..

In fictions these quote works...I real life does it work?..in real ,problems unless ought and practically resolved the dull days are to be gloomy only..

Wat if there was no ray of hope at all..


Can a special disabled child who cannot walk ..think of fly in ...

Can a person who struggles to sit ..but cannot stop running ...cannot stop thinking abt wat I want to do next ...a persons mind is totally blank ...with no matter in brain ..


Can all these people hv red roses life.


The parents of them can they sleep peacefully...


Some where ,with a small hope the parents sleep daily ..

But the parents in real make a lovely family around for the disabled to feel happy..


Roses with thorns we say..


Mommy has sad feeling but still plays happy to keep the baby happy..


Worries are there,but still we work to bring happiness in all faces..



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Posted: 11 years ago
very interesting and intense one
what was that mu that caused arshi separation

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