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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry pep just reached home phir se 11 baj gaye🥱
N now if I start to type!!🤢

Kal bhi working day hai n Sunday too😭

So instalments me type kar k will post when ever possible. .
I suggest please don't wait!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing
Lovely concept
Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Amazing
Lovely concept
Can't wait to read more


Yeh Kiski Hai Aahat
Yeh Kiska Hai Saaya
Huvi Dil Mein Dastak Yahan Kaun Aaya😳

Hogaya!!

Welcome to the story! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bahana of the day... reading downpour again😃
Ok so news ye hai k I'm having a off tomorrow so😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nop!!

Free free n free😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb story Sporthy. Just loved it. At last I found your story and this is super interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Superb story Sporthy. Just loved it. At last I found your story and this is super interesting...




I asked you to wait till I complete it didn't I😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part#19



Understanding n compassion are kind of synonyms with being a girl so young n when u know ur friends out there are independent n are stronger than u are... Achieving something which maybe you could too will definitely rise insecurities... but at situations like that I wish there would always be a person by ur side to say what u already have also not that bad!

He hurriedly walked out to look for her early in the morning to see her pale n leaning on to the kitchen counter looking all worn out... still trying to make his breakfast as soon as possible ...

Something in that sight stopped him from getting furious on her... Though he wanted to yell at her of taking stress when she wasn't well herself but a small part of him wanted her to...

How does a girl of her age so much educated feel living this life... like a dutiful wife... when he met Aanchal he was somewhere fascinated with the carefree attitude she carried with herself... how was his wife out side the four walls of their house? He had never heard her talk more than necessary... where were her friends?

Getting ready for the day he made his way to the dining table where he found her resting on the table n all the dishes were placed on it..

She lifted her face sensing his presence n tried to act as she was fine though he caught her expression which was odd... she served his breakfast n went to the kitchen to get his coffee. ..

He by now knew she was hesitating to tell him about something... he quietly had his breakfast looking at her playing with her food. ..

When she was done she pushed the plate aside n rested on the table again... his wife thinks him to be some monster he thought chuckling at her silence when he heard her

Don't wear this shirt it doesn't suit you. ..

He looked down at his shirt it was a brown checks one half sleeved a faint smile started creeping on his face which he tried to suppress but it was getting hard. .. so he quickly made an excuse of forgetting his phone n rushed back to the room... picking up his mobile n wallet he was about to step out when his eyes fell on his reflection in the mirror. ..

She didn't even realise what she said n why as she was too much tired n was feeling ill too... she didn't like him going out in that stupid shirt n she told him so... That's it...

When she heard him walking down the stairs she saw him in a dark blue shirt rushing down folding his sleeves to his elbows. ..

he wanted to rush out not letting her know that he had changed but he forgot that she was still sitting near the dining table which was directed towards the stairs. ..

Maan...

First he thought to ignore n to run away from her but then he remained himself she wasn't well if she needed something. ..

He cleared his throat n walked to her making face like he was in a hurry n to make it quick. . Looking at the time in his mobile impatiently. ..

She gestured him to bend down to her level. .. n when he did... she corrected his collar n before he could realise gave a soft peck on his cheek!

He was too stunned to react she only smiled faintly...

Go...

Did she really kiss him or was he hallucinating things. ..he was driving through the roads towards his fields grinning stupidly n composing himself the very next second for acting so stupidly but what could he do the smile on his face refused to wipe off..

Cleaning up the table she made her way to her room to have a nap...

It was afternoon maybe she heard the door bell ringing continually... she was getting irritated with it tying her hair in to a loose bun she picked her dupatta n rushed down...

Looking at the person in front of her she was too stunned to react. ..

It was meera!!

She was in a messed up state looking all tensed n nervous. ..

Wo... bhabhi bhai??

She allowed her walk in side n kept her luggage in closing the door behind while she found meera sitting on the sofa nervously playing with her fingers looking down lost in thoughts. ..

Meera??

Bhabi wo I'm tired n want to rest for a while

Excuse me... she picked up her bags n moved to the guest room with out making an eye contact!

When she made her way to her room she saw meera already asleep or faking sleep...

something wasn't right she thought it would be better to inform maan...

It was past lunchtime n he just finished his lunch..walking back to the field he felt his mobile ring...

Looking at the caller a deep frown formed on his face. .. he hated getting calls from home when he was out. .. his frown turned into worry thinking of her wellbeing she wasn't well just yesterday night n he left her alone the very next day to work. . Cursing himself he walked away from the workers and received the call...

Hello

Wo.. maan.. meera is here...

What u called me to tell this... geet this is too much what the hell do...

He was angered by by her silly reason but she cut before he could continue blasting

Shhh.. Shut up n listen to me first. .. she was here with a little too much of luggage. .. n was looking tensed n worried too... I tried talking to her but she didn't give me a chance. ..

Maan I think no one from her house know that she is away from home. ..

U mean...

Yes I think she ran away from her house...

GEET!!

u can shout on ur wife all ur life for now call her parents n try to find out if we are right. ..

N for god sake stay calm!


Control of my life slipped of my hands long back thanks to ur smile I realised it a little late...




To be continued. ..


Meera is maan's sister read the initial 3 parts😆
Maybe you can expect another update very soon this time😊
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
U don't have to say... We already are expecting much bigger update this time... Update next part soon as possible ... Samjhii naa... :p
Edited by doll.12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
U write more about the inner feelings... That's ur way of writing which makes it prominent for us...geet was not feeling good and maan was tensed about her but he was noticing and trying to understand her... He had spend some time with aanchal and her carefree attitude had really impressed him.. Something new and something out of our surroundings when came in contact with us it really do make us amaze and make us feel pull towards itself... As maan also feels like that in my view... And he wants to know about these zone of geet... Meera came back.. Hey.. By the way who is meera?? Me bhool gaye... Maam was irritated but geet feed him with the info. Now looking forward to the scenario which meera has put...

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