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seshatree

@seshatree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

You are a fantastic writer...please keep updating...

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Res!

Will read tomorrow and update my comment! EDT :)

Edited:

I apologize for editing my comment so late. I loved this chapter, it was a correct blend of past and present. I find it very interesting to read. I will mention this thing that I have never seen in this forum, this character of Lavanya! I am so glad she did not talk to him. In every other story I have ever read here, Lavanya would never stand for herself. I do no blame any writer for this, in the show itself, she was portrayed this way. I loved this improved Lavanya very much<3

Coming to ArHi, it was brilliant. I found there first encounter very adorable. She was so scared of him :P But there was some attraction between them since the beginning😳 I think you did very well and I really loved reading this chapter very much.

In present, Khushi is strong and I am glad she didn't take sh*t from Arnav and replied him in the best possible way. As I had said, I would decide on Khushi's character later after reading few more chapters. I think I have made my mind and I liked her characterization very much.

I would like to know more about Nalini and what she is going to do about her kids and husband.

Continue soon! :D

Also, I find you very easy to approach. My sister is a writer and I feel writers are really cool :D

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Lovely chapter!!

So Arnav and Khushi were classmates and their first meeting was interesting and funny.But then they didn't have to wait for a long time for the sparks to begin...

Looks like there is some big misunderstanding which happened way back and even now both of them are holding on to it.

Khushi blaming Arnav for Nandan's tragedy was unfortunate.Its was not because of Arnav that the accident happened ...That was very bad blow from her..

Lavanya knows that Arnav does not love her but is marrying only because of her father..then why is she becoming obsessive and wants enter into a loveless marriage

I hope Nalini does something before its too late.

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Ecrivain

@Ecrivain

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Res ..off to read ..

Omg it's long n I m happy 😛

Btw I may take two places just in case I have questions to ask

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What a wonderful update👏

I have said this before and I will say it again ...you are a fantastic writer 👏

The way you Understand Arnav and khushi as if it's no one 's business ..is stupendous 😛

So it's clear that Arnav is totally into khushi but can't the same abt Khushi although she is attracted n affected we Know 😉

The question is wht went wrong in the past n I will wait to read ..

PS lavanya had a heartbreak twice 😲

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Awesome chapter
Loved it
Loved past and present scenes...
Well written..

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Shilpi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Loved the chapter! 👍🏼

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Lot of fireworks between arnav and kushi. .. arnav and kushi were classmates and the love story started in the college... but after reading the present day encounter, it makes me feel that there was huge MU in the past and neither of them have ever tried to clear it till date..

Kushi has hurt arnav deeply with her words about nandan... she shouldn't have done that..

So nalini had seen what had happened between arnav and la.. that means now kashyaps know what is going on with la and arnav and both of them are planning to fix it.. but why are they not understanding that arnav is not interested in la.. hope atleast nalini will realise this..

This story is getting interesting with every update. .. Waiting now for the next..