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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fabulous Update

Maan did not want to marry in the first place and when on his engagement day was asked by Geet he told her that his mother likes her so she choose her but now Geet was saying that Maan killed their unborn baby and he raped her continuously so what actually happened after they got married did Maan still not accept Geet and why is he so heartless towards her
waiting for next update


thanks dear


try to write next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t

Awesome story...read all d three parts...

Loved them...
Eagerly waiting for d next...


😃

thnks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating! awesome update! well written! Past well incorporated! Maan never had time 4 her! Geet left him! she lost her baby cos of him! Maan treated her badly! Now he misses her! Geet hates anything associated with love! Poor Geet! Maan nw realises! update soon




thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pinku04

part 3
past is very painful...
maan aisa kaise kar sakta hai geet ke saath...😡
i hope geet use kabhi maaf na kare..
thanks for pm 😊


ok dear

no mafi 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago



Part 4


Karan : geet tum abhi tak soyi nhi

Geet : soye toh tum bhi nhi ho

Karan : kha khoyi huyi hu

Maine tumhe aaj tumhare asli naam se bulaya

Aur tumne kuch kaha nhi

Geet : karan naam toh maine badal liya

Par uska saya aaj bhi hai

.

Karan : par ab wo tumhe chu bhi nhi sakta hai geet

Mein hu na tumhare sath

.

Now sleep

*********

One week passed after book launch...

Karan : drashti ye dekho

Tumahri book ko kitne ache review mile hai

Drashti : hmm

Karan : tum khush nhi ho

Drashti : am happy karan

Karan : drashti

2 saal bit gye un sb baato ko

Tum aaj bhi waha kyun khadi ho

Drashti : karan mein bhut aange bd chuki hu

.

Now am thinking about my new book

Karan : really

Drashti : of course

Karan : good

********

Flashback in

Jai : maan

See this

.

Maan

He is busy in replying emails... jai snatch his phone...

Maan : jaaiii

Jai : I know

I am jai

Maan here am asking your choice

Maan : jai

If you want I go to meet her

So you do your work

And am doing my

He takes phone back to him...

Jai : maan

Mein toh geet se mila bhi nhi hu

Dekha tk nhi hai

How I know

What like good on her?

So can u choose?

Maan sees all around in shop and choose one pearl necklace for her...

photo pearl-necklaces-2013-women-bridal-jewelry_zpsfo8ggejx.jpg

Pack this

.

Jai : not bad

Achi choice hai

Maan : humesha se

********

Jeevika : geet you sit here

Bs maan aate hi honge

Mein aur shahil bs pass ke mall mein jaa rhe hai

You need anything

Call kr diyo

Geet : ji di

********

Jai : all the best buddy for your first date

Maan : it's not a date

Bs ek meeting hai

Jai : meeting nhi hai

Bs tu yaad rakh liyo

.

Ab ja

Geet wait kr rhi hongi

.

Aur ha

Ye flower aur gift de diyo

Maan : flower bhi

Jai : ladkiyo ko ache lagte hai

Tu ja

Swal mt puch

*******

Both stands in front of each other, she try to say or he waiting she says firstly...

Maan : you want to meet me

Geet : aap nhi chahte the milna mujhse

She sweetly asked from him...

Maan : this is for you

He hand over necklace or flower to her...

Geet : thank you

.

Maan : hmm

.

Both sits in front of each other from past 10 minutes, but both not saying any word, he get busy on mobile, and she try to start conversation...

Maan : you have 20 minutes

Geet : ji

Mein smjhi nhi

Maan : I have no full day for you

If you not interested in talking any word

Geet : ji

Wo mein

Maan : geet

Ab tum kuch kahongi

Ya

I go from here

Geet : please rukiye

Wo mein aapse milna chahti thi

Aapko jaanana chahti hu

Smjhana chahti hu

.

Maan : can this one meeting before marriage is enough for you

Knowing about me

Geet : nhi

Kyi baar ek pal hi kafi hota hai

Kissi ko jaanane ke liye

Aur kyi baar puri umar km pd jaati hai

Maan : hmm

So what you want to know

Geet : anything

Which you want to share with me

Maan : if I ask same question from you

Then which part you want to share with me

Geet : maan ji

For me my family is everything

My di

Whi meri best friend hai

Maan : what your expectation from this marriage

Geet : small - small things hai maan ji

Maan : like

Before she says, his phone disturbs the meeting...

.

Am coming now

Geet : aap jaa rhe ho

Maan : hmm

My work needs my attention

Geet : hmm

Maan : geet

I want to share only one thing with you know

For me my work come first

Then my mom

Then any other relation

.

After marriage I want you remember this thing...

Geet : ji

Mein kbhi aapke kaam mein dakhl nhi dungi

Maan : hmm

Bye

*********

Jeevika : date kaisi rhi

Geet : thik thi di

Sahil : are jeevika

Ye hume thode na abs b kuch batayengi

Phli meeting mein

Do -do gift

Mil gye

Jeevika : woise is box mein kya hai

Geet : maine khud nhi dekha hai

Jeevika : toh ab dekh leta hai

Geet open the box and sees the beautiful necklace of pearls...

Jeevika : wow

Choice toh bhut achi hai

Sahil : pata nhi isse choose krne mein kaise galati kr di

Geet : jijuuu

Dekha di aapne

Jeevika : sahil

Mt pareshan kro na

*********

Maan ji

Mein aapse khehna toh bhut kuch chahti thi

Aur bhut kuch sunana bhi

.

She opens her dairy and writes some lines:-

From this day forward,
you shall not walk alone.
My heart will be your shelter...
And my arms will be your home...

.

Flashback out

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update

Seem like maan did not even words called emotions

Poor geet she dreaming about her married life

And for him it just deal
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Not like those maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan heartily didn't select gift for her maaneet meet
geet seeing maan behaviour she was more expectation from him
but he leave the place for reason phone calls
he told her he giving important more his business
he was right its'nt date ,its meeting with her
nice update

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