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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am not sure if it's the concept tht would or would not appeal or the fact tht I opened with a different backdrop, BUT trust me when I say this, I have this story all planned out already and INFACT I will look at finishing this story by end of this month 😳

I just wanted to ask everyone or anyone whose reading this story tht

1. There will be 2 sets of past and 1 present in the story. Would you want me to entwine the past n the present , like giving bits of past in each update or put them as separate chapters?
2. I can also look at giving POV of Important characters in the story.
3. The characters will be NORMAL , n close to reality.
4. Essentially a love story but I would Keep it sensuous ( as n when need be ) but not erotic or vulgar...I always weigh a story in terms of words n concept 😛

Lastly I see a lot of readers have read it n some have commented n PMed...n thanks a lot for the encouraging words and appreciation ...means a LOT..as a writer I know tht I m rewarded when people comment n like my work ..PLS anyone n everyone do take time out n just drop in a line here...I could do with a bit of encouragement considering this is my first fiction venture 😛If u guys feel upto it , pls send buddy request and PM ..I will let u guys know once I post the chapter...provided IF allows tht ...either way ..I may try and scrap too ...😳

N chapter 1 on its way ..here is a teaser

Warmth spread though their bodies, something akin to being home, FINALLY. An old feeling forgotten knocked back on the closed doors to their hearts. What was happening they didn't Know but they were just waiting for the destiny to unleash what it has in store for them.

Edited by Fe-en-Dios - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
More than prologue I loved ur straight forwards attitude..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios


A/ N


I am not sure if it's the concept tht would or would not appeal or the fact tht I opened with a different backdrop, BUT trust me when I say this, I have this story all planned out already and INFACT I will look at finishing this story by end of this month😳

I just wanted to ask everyone or anyone whose reading this story tht

1. There will be 2 sets of past and 1 present in the story. Would you want me to entwine the past n the present , like giving bits of past in each update or put them as separate chapters?
2. I can also look at giving POV of Important characters in the story.
3. The characters will be NORMAL , n close to reality.
4. Essentially a love story but I would Keep it sensuous ( as n when need be ) but not erotic or vulgar...I always weigh a story in terms of words n concept😛

<font color="#cc3333">Lastly I see a lot of readers have read it n some have commented n PMed...n thanks a lot for the encouraging words and appreciation ...means a LOT..as a writer I know tht I m rewarded when people comment n like my work ..PLS anyone n everyone do take time out n just drop in a line here...I could do with a bit of encouragement considering this is my first fiction venture😛If u guys feel upto it , pls send buddy request and PM ..I will let u guys know once I post the chapter...provided IF allows tht ...either way ..I may try and scrap too ...😳</font>

N chapter 1 on its way ..here is a teaser

Warmth spread though their bodies, something akin to being home, FINALLY. An old feeling forgotten knocked back on the closed doors to their hearts. What was happening they didn't Know but they were just waiting for the destiny to unleash what it has in store for them.



good note..but I suck at giving options..

Also I believe in a writer to write her fantasy..not take or tilt stories for trp like cvs..


I firmly believe in that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Seems like dffrnt story... Bring it on...
Would love to read..
Loved d prologue...

Continue soon and notify me when u updt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
looks inetresting...make it in your own way...just update on regular times ...only one suggestion hehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Just read your note in IPKKND forum. As I said before, this story sounds interesting and I would love to read more. Read the teaser, waiting for the chapter.
As far as siggestions are concerned, I am okay with anything. Past and present going on together or seperately. As you wish :D

About your doubt, newbies are allowed to have 10 posts in 24 hours and as soon as you reach at 50 posts you will be promoted to groupbie and then you can send links to everyone.

Keep writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserved for my comments on new chapter :)

Edited:

It was great.
So, Arnav had made some mistakes in pasts, I liked that, very much real. I like flawed characters not ultra clean or good ones because that just too superficial. This cannot be true, right?


Poor NK but I am glad he has got Khushi/Kashish but then again, this story is about ArHi. I am liking this story very much. I would like to read more about Arnav's past :D

Keep writing :D
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Hhmmm very intrstng... Loved it..
Felt sad fr nk...
Dis s a compromise fr arnav... He has no feelings fr lav..
Phew gud to knw...
Khashish r khushi.. How she met nk ! Did she knw about lav and arnav !
Want to knw their past...


Well written part..
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabolous chapter, arnav n khusi had a past but is it bitter or they just seperated by some unfortunate circumstances, looking forward to read more.

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