Asya FF True Love Never dies IV Part 29-38 link to #5 pg 1 - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam Asyaians😊 sorry I am late... I know usually I do the same but I am being very honest and telling you guuz that i am standing on the most complicated path of life and just come here to fresh my minds by reading some emotional stories or making congratulation threads for friends nothing else...please scroll down for update..hope you will like it


PART 36

she stood rotted there with all her hopes died and she prayed silently for Allah's help to stop him from killing both of them while he walked away from the altar and everyone else in the stood helpless not knowing whom to support, asad for accepting the punishment he deserve or zoya who after so long wants her life, her happiness back

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everyone reached at Khan Mansion thinking to talk to asad and take a decision... asad to reached at the same time but ignored there presence and walked in the house...the house was dark and silent 'I will go and turn on the lights' najma said as she made her way to switch board but before she could turn on the lights, the t.v in the room and a video started to play

...at first they were confused but as the video continued it made everyone shocked...it was the video of that night, the video which was played in front of them was about asad and how he saved tanveer ... it paused 'this is how it happened...jammy saved me from the goons but then...I am sorry jammy' they looked around for tanveer recognizing her voice but she was nowhere to be seen

The same moment zoya closed her eyes as tears rolled down her cheeks...she didn't knew what to do? How to feel? Should she be happy that now asad will be aware about his innocence or she should be sad that all will know about tanveer wrong deeds and she have to face the consequence of it which will surely not at all good...

She too turned her eyes at the t.v where the video was playing and the thing which played next shook all of them to core...asad eyes moistened knowing that it was his best friend who betrayed...it was his tannu only who ruined his life..because of whom zoya left him ...it was all her doing ...the person he considered to be his best friend...was his enemy only..from past one and a half yeaf he is suffering not because of anyone else but because of his own best friend

'This is the truth..truth of my intentions..truth of asad's innocence..truth of that broken marriage of asad and zoya...I am the reason life of all of you turned this much complicated...I am sorry, i know it's such a small word for my grave sin but I don't have anything to justify my actions or to say that whatever I did was somehow right..no it wasn't and I am aware of it since always but was bounded by the love of a mother...I wanted to do everything for my unborn child...I wanted to give him a good life and for this I wanted a father for my child...I know you all think that how cheap I am and deserve such words..

but I am very selfish to even ask for forgiveness...please forgive me asad, please zoya forgive me I promise that I will go away from your lives to not to return ever..I promise to not to create any hurdle in your ways anymore

I am sorry...I am so sorry for all this, I am sorry asad, I am sorry zoya for spoiling your live, for making you two and everyone around you to go through all this, for not telling you all this because even after doing all this I call myself a coward as I didn't had the courage to confess about my wrong deeds...I am so sorry' she broke down in tears and what was heard was her sobs in the hall

Asad fisted his hand as he tried to take in every thing she said ...there were tears in his eyes but not of acceptance but of anguish, he was not able to take in the fact that the person he once trusted more than zoya was the same person who ruined his life...she deserved punishment his heart and mind screamed in a sync as she pleaded for forgiveness...controlling his tears he looked around 'where are you tannu?' He called and it echoed in the hall because of his high tune and the silence around him 'come out...prove us that you aren't a coward' he was now shouting looking every where for her

Just then the lights turned on and here she appeared from the stairs along with adil.. So it was him who helped her he thought with which anger reaching to another notch ..controlling himself he walked upto them and zoya too silently followed him 'thank you so much tanveer for teaching me this lesson..that we shouldn't trust a person more than it deserve...thank you for making me realize that what a mistake I committed by taking you as a friend...by trusting you blindly...how could you do this to me?' He shouted shaking her through her shoulders while she stood silent not even looking at him

'Why the hell are you silent...answer me...tell me the punishment I deserve by trusting you...tell me that I am a fool that I believed you ..tell me that I deserve a huge punishment... answer me tanveer answer me damn it..tell me that I am idiot...a fool..a fool to trust his best friend' he shouted and pushed her away 'you are not worthy to be called as someone's friend..you don't deserve any family...you don't deserve anyone...you want to go away from our lives..then get lost...get lost and never ever show this face of yours to us...go away' he said...zoya came close to him and took him in a soothing hug calming him down in her loving embrace

Adil ran forward to hold tanveer as she stumbled and would had fallen any moment, seeing this dilshaad came forward 'wow...what a friend you are' she taunted looking at both of them, tanveer closed her eyes sensing dilshaad's hatred in her voice while smiled sadly 'I am sorry aunty ji for breaking your trust but what to do, I had fallen in love and I couldn't leave her alone...I know aunty ji you all hate her for doing all this with you and trust me i too had hated her for her committing such sin but unfortunately my love was strong then my hatred I have to return to her...

Today I won't justify her actions because there is no justification for such crime but still I want to tell you that today whatever happened is because of us, we took asad to that factory and called zoya too but we didn't had any wrong intentions, we did after I discussed it with the senior that how onr painful and hidden memory can make her remember herself so thus I did it' he explained

'take her away from here' they heard 'but asa..' adil started 'I said take her from here...she was right...she shouldn't be here with us..zoya...ami tell her to go away from our lives and never return as I don't wanna see her face' he said without any emotion

Tanveer ran and held hands in front of her 'asad please...please tell me that you forgive me...plz tell oncs I promise to leave forever...please' shd cried 'sorry Miss.Tanveer Baig, after whatever you did with me, with zoya and with our family you don't deserve any forgiveness for that...now leave' he said sharply...adil came forward and holding her shoulders supporting her he literally dragged her out of the house while she kept requesting for forgiveness

Throwing the vase in his way he went in his room closing the door behind him 'bhaijan' ayaan called out as he started to follow him only to be stopped by zoya 'wait ayaan!! Please let me handle this' she requested and he nodded understanding her situation


So that is it...at first if you find it short then I would wanna tell you that this update have more than 1300 number of words and secondly I wanted to write more but a question arised in my mind and I stopped..the question is do you guyz want asad to forgive tanveer? To share your views in comments
And do leave back your reviews. ..

P.S sorry if you find me rude in any way...I don't wanna sound route but situation doesn't allow..so sorry

P.P.S scroll down if you are a silent or new reader and need pm's
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Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res for kadoo..shona..yoyo..yash...apple...mumma..gowtu...amu api..badi ami...choco api...aseelah api...shano...mayur bhai...abi bhai
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Posted: 10 years ago
mine...
unres

arooo such a wonderful update 👏
loved it
pehli baar i love tannu bcox she herself told the truth
asad ka gussa is M.A 😳
awww zoe hugged him
jo shyd koi notic nahi kiya mere siwa 😆
i think tannu deserve a chance
update soon arshu
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mera ek aur comment on forum... 😛
aroo read last few updates together...
loved them all...
finally zoya remembers everything...
and that too bcz of tanveer...
n nw she herself revealed her truth in front of all..
asad ka gussa is jayaz ...
and fr tanveer i dont want her to b forgiven...
lov u aroo
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
tanveer doesent deserve forgiveness at all...
loved the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovley update
finally zoya got her memory back n tanveer truth is out
I think asad should forgive tanveer if she is really sorry for wht she did
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Posted: 10 years ago
woah
i loved it
i don't know what should i say
i don't think what billi has done is forgivable
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Res for kadoo..shona..yoyo..yash...apple...mumma..gowtu...amu api..badi ami...choco api...aseelah api...shano...mayur bhai...abi bhai


Salaam Aroo..
Finally we got an update from U on AsYa also...thank you for that..
Coming to the Update...it was an emotional and well written part..
Asad's innocence came out..and Tannu's betrayal and her ill intentiona AT THAT TIME..also was witnessed by them...
And about forgiving her or not...I am confused...because after that also they have been living together since over a yr right...so I guess..not immediate forgiveness but yes..I think she should be forgiven and left alone for her peace of soul.
Rest a very good part..
Thanx for The Res* also..
Continue soonish..
*## And Aroo I wish..whatever difficulties U are facing...right now..I hope that is over soon..Insha"Allah.. and U take care..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice...
Loved it...
I don't knew but I wanna say we should give second chance who repent badly for wrong deeds...
Plz update soon

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