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Posted: 10 years ago
Wen will u update dis?? U already wrote next 2 updates of dis na??? Y didn't u post??
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome updated
loved ishra conffestion
but itna small update
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello GaYa not fair you not updte this one yet eagerly waiting and waiting.😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishra_Sona

Res...

Unres...

Di...😭😭ittu chhotu update not fair..
Chal koi na...
At least mere Maaveli se tog better he hai...
Yaad hai na aapko...
Agar nahi... Toh once again reminding you eat almonds..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

But its time to celebrate...
Me first...🄳
Yipee...
Woh bhi no late first...
But simply first...


Coming back to the update...
It wasšŸ‘...
The confession was so sweet...😳
Wanna hug u di...šŸ¤—


Thanks for enjoying it Sonu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties...
I couldn't reply all your comments.
Well coming to the update it's on its way.
Will post in a while.
Glad you liked this story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Hi Kutties...
I couldn't reply all your comments.
Well coming to the update it's on its way.
Will post in a while.
Glad you liked this story.
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OFCOURSE I LOVE ALL YOUR STORY.šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties...😃

Here gors the next part.

Not proofread

Please do not bash at me for the bad and abrupt ending 😳



chapter-5

HOW DEEP IS YOUR LOVE



RAMAN'S POV


"How deep is your love, how deep is your love
How deep is your love?
I really mean to learn
'Cause we're living in a world of fools
Breaking us down when they all should let us be
We belong to you and me"



Falling madly in love with a beautiful witch like Ishita Iyer was like a curse. Because she never had the will in her to love someone. Maybe she does not know what love is !


I, Raman Kumar Bhalla can never bend my head in front of her in any case. You will think how egoistic I am. But it is reasonable. I can't break my heart like anyone else. So I cooked up a story of some random girl.


"Shagun...! She is my best friend and I was the one who get Ashok sir and her married."


I wanted her to fall for me. I did all that in my power to catch her. But she fell for me or realised her love in my vulnerable state. Spat out that she loves me when I am of no use. I wanted to scream out to her how much I love her. But kept calm. Because it is not our moment. Nothing is going to be as I've planned now. I know God is the great planner. Albeit, my wishes are drowned now.


However, I can't believe how much she changed. She resigned her job just for me. What else I need to believe her. I know the whole world is suspecting her. But I know her too much that I can even catch the meaning of her batting eyelids.


I wanted her to rethink. Precisely, to recheck me. She was as adamant as the business empress used to be. She was mad at me for asking her to leave me. But she acted calm and compassionate owing to my sensitive state.


Oh...how much I love this hell of a woman!


"I believe in you
You know the door to my very soul
You're the light in my deepest, darkest hour
You're my saviour when I fall

And you may not think I care for you
When you know down inside that I really do
And it's me you need to show"



BREAKING NEWS

ISHITA IYER TO ISHITA RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA



The epic courtship of three years had come to an end. Ishita Iyer and Raman Kumar Bhalla, the prominent business tycoons tied the knot yesterday in the court. What the whole world wished to watch as a grand wedding ended up as a court marriage. What's next store for us to see is in it's way. The dramatic moments of the Bhalla-Iyer business world is of no end so far we know.


ISHITA AND RAMAN'S WEDDING NIGHT



Ishita made Raman lay down in the bed after his sponge bath. He looked at her with guilty eyes. She smiled faintly caressing his head. Kissing away the guiltiness from his forehead, she laid her head on his chest. He enclosed her in his arms asked after letting out a deep breath.


"Don't you feel it like an award movie?"


"What that means Raman?"


"I mean...it must be the erratic heartbeats and pleasing moans that should be hemmed in this room. But even the soft and silent beating of our heart...the living beats are clear to the ears...!"


"Raman...don't feel bad for yourself."


"I am not feeling bad for me but you. You deserve better."


"But I got the best you see. Then why should I go for a better'?"


"You are an impossible woman...! "


[B]I know your eyes in the morning sun
I feel you touch me in the pouring rain
And the moment that you wander far from me
I want to feel you in my arms again
And you come to me on a summer breeze
Keep me warm in your love, then you softly leave
And it's me you need to show



Isihta...


Hmm...


You know what...


What...?


I'm dead downwards, but still I want to make love to you


Please Raman...You'll be alright


Kiss me


[B]How deep is your love, how deep is your love
I really mean to learn
'Cause we're living in a world of fools
Breaking us down when they all should let us be
We belong to you and me



Ishita looked up at him from his chest. His eyes dark with passion. There heartbeats began to go for a marathon while she shivered under his gaze. He can't move without her help, but still he overpowers her in a different way which she liked to the core.


She laid over him. He could feel her body pressed on his. She cupped his face in her hands and looked deeply in his eyes. Tilting her face a little she kissed his stubble jaw. He gurgled feeling ticklish when she tumbled down to his neck. Teasing his yearning lips for sometimes she came over him again. He looked at her in anticipation. She moved her hand to his wet lips and nibbled it with her thump. He groaned in pleasure and frustration at the same time.


Taking his lips in hers she kissed him to fill her heart. However he was the one in lead once her lips touched his. They savoured each other melting in each other's hands. That was when Raman's left leg moved involuntarily to pull her more in to him. She broke the kiss and looked at his leg which without his own knowledge is mounted up. His eyes popped up seeing it so was hers.


Raman...your leg...it moved


Yeah...but...It's so weak. I'm shivering.


Easy...easy...



She made his leg straight and patted him to relax. His body became rigid and cold at the unexpected outcome. He was not prepared for a sudden change in him. Now it is her duty to make him ready for the better.



And you come to me on a summer breeze
Keep me warm in your love, then you softly leave
And it's me you need to show




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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties... šŸ¤—

Here goes the LAST PART


Chapter-6

I JUST CAN'T STOP LOVING YOU[/B



BREAKING NEWS

RAMAN BHALLA WALKED IN RAMP



The great Mr Bhalla after a lot of terrifying passages WALKED. He is coming to the front after a whole one and a half month. On the launch of his company 's new cool drink he walked in the ramp with his wife Ishita Bhalla. He talked to the press;


"No...for now I'm looking forward to get the Heera Construction contract...done well."


"We are happy. And she doesn't want to work anymore."


"Yeah I take her with me because I don't want her to be a homesick."


"I want her to come on front like before. But she is not ready. As an individual she should take the decisions of her life. Till now she did. I never interfered. It is solely her decision to be a DEPENDENT WOMAN."


AFTER A WEEK

CONFERENCE ON HEERA CONSTRUCTION CONTRACT



Raman walked in with Ishita in toe. The fifteen board members still contained Ishita in it. It was Raman's request that made her stay in the group for his business purpose. But what she doesn't expect was someone is able to use her power against Raman.


As far as I know RKB is capable of handling it other than Mr. Parmeet Khurana.


We need majority's consent for anything.


Mr Khurana had offended the public in the last contract. I think we should not handover this contract to him.



As the debate over Mr Bhalla V/S Mr Khurana went on Raman and Parmeet looked at each other sheepishly. It was Ishita's loud voice that broke their trance.


Mr Bhalla is incapable of handling this project. I suggest Parmeet. Everyone deserve a chance. Why always RKB...!!!


Raman looked at her in shock while the board members supported her suggestion in no time. He didn't utter a word but looked at her without blinking. He couldnt grasp the meaning of her sudden change. The whole room was showering their loud applause and wishes to Parmeet when Ishita stood next to Raman without being able to drink in the lump in her thought.


Lets go Raman...


Blankly staring at her, "Yep...sure"


BREAKING NEWS

ISHITA BHALLA PROVED HERSELF TO BE ISHITA IYER



So far showcasing the unconditional love for her husband, Mrs Bhalla finally proved herself to be the same old business hex; Miss Ishita Iyer. It was a shock for the whole business world to hear that Mrs Bhalla publicly called her husband INCAPALE. The Heera construction contract is now in the hands of Mr Bhalla Jr's business rival Mr Parmeet Khurana. What is the deep rooted meaning of Mrs Bhalla's outburst is yet to be revealed.



IN THE CORRIDOR


Raman excused from Ishita to go washroom. Ishita stood there broken. She was finding it difficult to even breathe. Parmeet followed Raman but Raman feigned ignorance. Both stood beside each other washing their hands. Parmeet was the first to break the silence.


So you're miffed with your wife?


It was one of the clout board members' who took the decision


Nice excuse...


It is not


Well you see, I really dont want to create any problems between you and your wife.


And what in the world you thought that you can create any problem?


Oh common Mr Bhalla If I can make her talk against you, I can do anything...


You...made her?


Yes! It was me.


Hmmm...well played.


You made me a popper. I really needed something to hold on.


You wouldn't have kidnapped me for that.


Oh common...I can't beg you...you see, I love commanding.


That's cool.


I am sorry


For what?


I never wanted to hurt you. It was just to make your wife act exactly the way I wanted.


It was all for this day?


Yes. And the accident...those bast***s threw you in front of her car. I didnt expect that. It was a shock for me also!


Everything is not in our hands.


Do you want to know why she did what I say?


Nope. I better ask her.


Easy with her. She is already tensed.


You don't need to worry. I know how to handle my wife.


Take care.


Well...Mr Khurana...I'm impressed! Impressed by your guts. Not tyat you did all these heroic or villainious things but you courage to say it on my face. I am hoping to see you abreast to me.


A business partnership?


Nope. A friendly battle.


Always ready.



The drive home was deadly. Raman drove the car madly while a terrified Ishita screamed him to go slow. He was giving damn to her pleas. Her each words made him increase the speed making her cry a loud. Finally she fainted exhausted by the drive which made Raman stop the car. He extended his hand to shake her but then getting angry he started the car to reach home and wake her to talk.


Raman entered the Bhalla mansion carrying an unconscious Ishita in his arms. Everyone looked on as he ascended to their bedroom. Tugging her in the bed he looked at her for some times. He caressed her plum cheeks. Biting his lower lip in confusion he took the water jug from the side table. Sprinkling some water on her face, he made her come back to sense.


Worriedly walking up to him from the bed, Raman...I am sorry...I'm so sorry...


Dont talk to me.


Please Raman. I didn't have another choice...I was scared


Of what?


Of...I thought you will believe him...

Believe what?


Those photos of me with my ex. I thought you will believe those..."


What rubbish?


I never did that. Trust me...I never been in a physical affair with anyone other than you. I dont know how that photos came!


Ishita...Ishita...just stop your blabbering. I dont understand why you came in his words when you know how much I trust you...You know how much I LOVE YOU...!


ButI was scared if...what...if you will trust those photographs...! I can't think if losing you. Moreover, you...were hurt so badly.. And I...I hadn't had it me to think further...I wanted you back at any cost. So I promised him...I promised...Because your life worth mine.



"I Hear Your Voice Now
You Are My Choice Now
The Love You Bring
Heaven's In My Heart
At Your Call
I Hear Harps,
And Angels Sing

You Know How I Feel
This Thing Can't Go Wrong
I Can't Live My Life
Without You"



He made her sit on the bed and knelt down in front of her. He held her hands and kissed it to make her relaxed. She kept on hiccupping ensuing to the tension and continuous sobs. He kissed her forehead cupping her face in his palms. She began to cry more vigorously whenever he tried to make her calm down. Without finding any way he crushed her in his arms thereby successfully suppressing her cries near his heart. He softly asked her while trailing kisses on her neckline, Why?


I couldn't think of risking our baby's papa's life.


"I Just Can't Hold On
I Feel We Belong

My Life Ain't Worth Living
If I Can't Be With You

I Just Can't Stop Loving You
I Just Can't Stop Loving You
And If I Stop . . .
Then Tell Me Just What
Will I Do

'Cause I Just Can't Stop
Loving You"




THE END...!!!


Gaya3
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaay...First Reserve
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You ended it ...I am angry...dono update mein sab suoer fast chala di tune...
Chal give us nice epilogue...bada wala...

I loved u made Parmeet little greyish, I mean little human...

Want an epilogue.
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Itni jaldi the end 😲
Ok ok I understand u have too many stories to handle šŸ˜†

But it was like as last as a jet šŸ˜† close ur eyes and open update over. Story over šŸ˜†

Chalo koi Nahi I know u will compensate. For that šŸ˜‰

U want to ask how ??? šŸ˜‰ Baki sab jaldi update karke šŸ˜†

Coming to the story yar I praised u off sooo much now I don't even have words nor energy šŸ˜†

So in shor I will tell super se upar wala update šŸ˜›
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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