~YOU GAVE ME JUST THE PAIN~REV VER A SANDHIR FF PART 4 UPDATED PAGE 22 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yipeee diii i am sooo happpyyy
feeling on cloud nine my wishes are finally granted😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am happy u are posting a revised version of the story...continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shmvr

yipeee diii i am sooo happpyyy

feeling on cloud nine my wishes are finally granted😆



aww..🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wrackspurt

I am happy u are posting a revised version of the story...continue soon 🤗



thanks di🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...thankyou for considering readers request and giving a second thought to this superb concept. I am super excited for the revised FF 🥳. Update first part soon.
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Originally posted by: Supermagical

Wow...thankyou for considering readers request and giving a second thought to this superb concept. I am super excited for the revised FF 🥳. Update first part soon.



thanks ya😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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the previous version was indeed amazing...
waiting for revised to hit us! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting very interesting
sry for late reply
awesome prolongue
continue asap
thanx for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
nice revised version.. bt dont keep a sad endng yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so yes!!! it feels so good am back to writing!!!and yeah i am up with part 1..here it goes..and i wrote this part inspired by the song"my everything"of ariana grande..try to listen to it..
ok another thing i wanna dedicate this part to my friends who wanted me to start it again..suba di aka subashini,shilpa aka shvmr,rahul aka supermagical,shivam aka Adonis...
DIARY ENTRY..
25th june 2015..
11.50pm

i was just like the other normal girls who always wanted to live a happy life and at the same time have a good job in my hand..

and now that i have got it my dream has slowly started coming true..

yes it was my childhood dream to work in a big company and make money and help the poor people out and now i have got a chance to do that..

this gives me the real happiness..

i stay here with the two most important gems of my life..
my mom and my dad who have always been very supportive and more than that they have been like my best friends and have given me unconditional love..

i have never ever in my life gone away from them but i cant stay with them forever too..

the time has come for me to move on and shape up my career and complete my dreams..

and i am sure that i would reach it very soon..

and at the same time i am very happy to have received this golden oppurtunity to just going with my professional life but my personal life apart from my parents is not worthy to listen to..

yes only my diary bears with me as i pour all my happiness and sorrows into it..

it has exactly been a year where everything had ended..

i got ditched by my then boyfriend whom i loved more than anyone to be more precise more than myself..

i gave him all my love my heart my everything but he wasnt ready to be with me..

he told me that we werent "compatible" and wanted me to end the relationship..

that word broke my world into a thousand pieces..

the guy with whom i wanted to spend the rest of my life dint want me..

its been so long that we had kissed but i could still feel his touch on me..

i have still not forgotten any of those memories which i had been associated with him as i feel they are PRECIOUS..

i couldnt get him off my mind..

we had started dating during our high school days and everything was going really well but suddenly i still dont know why he dint want me to be with him..

this really ached me a lot..

i asked him for another chance but he rejected it..
i know that he would have moved on but i havent..

i sill love him and could only love him as he is only my randhir singh shekhawat my first and last love..

signing off
sanyukta agarwal..

a lone taer escaped from her eyes after she completed writing the last line of her diary..

she knew that he wasnt there with her but also that she can love only him..

she knew that she was going to go away from him and there were no chances of her meeting him again once she reaches US..

she wanted to talk to him for one last time but she knew that he wouldnt answer her..

this was indeed very difficult with her..

her mind was only filled about his thoughts their past memories and those beautiful days when they were together..

she was hugging her pillow and crying..

but she knew she on the other hand has got to pursue her dreams..she somehow slept off..

MORNING
"sanyukta beta utt jaa bahut der hogaya"called out her mom..
she dint get any reply..

her mom came inside and looked at her"doll" who was sleeping there very peacefully..

she knew that this was her last day here as she had her flight tonight..

she wanted to enjoy with her today but at the same time dint want to wake her up..

she turned to go out when sanyukta called her out"mumma aapne mujhe uta kyu nahi..itni der hogaya aur aaj mene aapke aur papa k saath time spend karne ka plan kiya tha..chalo ab me hi utt jati hu aur fresh hoke aati hu..aap dono yahi hona.."she said and went..

the trio had enjoyed their time out the whole day and it was time for her to board the flight..

"beta apna khayal rakhna"said her parents and she hugged them for one last time and left the place..

she boarded the plane and it was a long journey..

she finally reached the place of her dreams..

she was very happy and she had made arrangements preponed regarding her stay and all..

she reached her house and opened the door and went inside..

it took her a while to get settled down..

she saw the clock which showed 11:00 PM and as usual she picked up her diary and wrote her entries and slept off..

MORNING
"aaj mera pehla din hai and i hope everything goes out well god"she said..
yes she was doing her morning prayers..

she quickly got ready and her office car came and she reached the place..

"THIS IS MY FIRST STEP IN HERE"she said and went inside..

she was actually appointed as the manager of the company and she was introduced to everyone..

suddenly there entered a guy with the typical office suite..

sanyukta could sense something was gonna happen..

the guy walked in and stood there and he too was introduced..

the smell of the perfume was known to her..

she turned around to see who that was but could only see his back..

the only thing which she could hear was even he was newly appointed as the M.D of that company..

she tried hard and wanted to see his face..

then as everyone moved aside she finally saw him..

she was literally shocked at the view she saw..

the person was none other than her ex randhir..

all her painful memories just came flashing before her eyes and tears started flowing out of her eyes and she couldnt control it but made sure no one else saw..

he too saw her and was dumbstruck..

they were just looking at each other..

and finally sanyukta uttered his name out"RANDHIR"..

hehehehe well i have successfully completed my part 1..hope u guys liked it and please comment guys as i want to know whether i am on par with your expectations..and i think so i will be updating the parts every day or alternate days.thanks for reading..

with love
parvathy..

Edited by -ladyninja- - 10 years ago

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