MG FF - Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi..... THREAD2 link posted - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da awesome update! well written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet toh hospital mai chupi thi na
then how come she in the crowd?
Lovely update
maan when did u notice geet's eyes closly
hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
abb kya hoga...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sam worried for geet
Maan saying geet as pagal
N irritating sam more
Both went in search of her
Geet is hidding in sanjeevni na
How she came out
I think sam saw someone else
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 11

Maan is not interested...

He doesn't want to waste his time...

But he had to respond to Sam...he has to help Sam get to her so called friend...

Though Maan thinks that he had come here only for Sam, he is also a little worried ...

That silly girl had somehow become a part of his life now...

So Maan couldn't avoid her now...

Maan: kahan?

Sam: yahi

Maan: are you kidding? Sam ye toh Mumbai ka busy bazaar hai, yahan toh hazaaron log aathe jaathe hai

Sam: meine usko yahi dekha tha

Maan: Sam, woh toh itne dhoor nahi aa sakthi, uske paas gadhi bhi nahi hai, aur akhele aaise jagah nahi aayegi

Sam: tum mere saath aarahe ho ya nahi

Maan hates crowd...

He has never stepped into such a place before...

Maan hesitates...

Sam gets down...

Maan: wait, mein bhi aatha hoon, warna Geet ko chodkke tumme dhoondhna padega

They go around the place amongst the people and search Geet...

It's such a chaos around there...

Maan is not used to this, nor Sam is used to this...

Maan gets angry that it's all b'coz of that stupid girl...

After a couple of hours...

It's already 6 pm...and it's getting dark...

Maan: that's it, I'm going home

Sam: what?

Maan: itne raat ko yahan hum kuch nahi kar sakthe, tum aao, hum kal aakke dhoondhthe hai

Sam: what do you mean?

Maan: Sam, hum yahan kissi ko bhi nahi jaanthe, aur hummare paas uska photo bhi nahi hai, we can't continue this blind search

Sam: Maan, itne raat ko Geet akhele kya karegi?

Maan: par humme kya patha woh iss waqt kahan hai?

Sam: mujhe kuch nahi patha, mein Geet ke bina ghar nahi jaa sakthi, how could I sleep? Nahi, this is all my fault

Maan: no no, what can you do if she wants only this?

Sam: I promised to help her

Maan: tumne ussko apne sar pe rakha toh dekho usne kya kiya hai? Usne tujhe kaise madat ki?

Maan gets angry...

Sam: Geeet, Geeet tum kahan ho?

Maan: lagthe hai ki ab tum bhi pagal ho jayegi

Sam breaks down...

Sam: MK, ab kya hoga?

Maan: kuch nahi hoga, chalo, mein yahan ek aadmi ko jaantha hoon

Sam: what?

Maan: hare, construction line mein rehna hai toh aaise gundon ko bhi pehchaana padtha, mein kay karoon?

Sam: kam se kam tummare business se ek faida toh hai, gundon ki dhosti

Sam teases him...

Maan: nahi nahi, ye log jaanthe hai ki mein kaisa hoon, ye log mujhse darthe hai

Sam laughs...

Maan calls someone...

After a while a man comes ...

Sam is surprised to see him scared ...

Gunda: ji sab, humne koi galthi nahi ki

Maan: ye koi aur mamla hai

Gunda looks at him and is surprised...

Ye kissi ladhki ke saath itne raat ko kya kar raha hai?

Maan gets offended...

He stares him...

Gunda: ji sab, kya problem hai?

Maan: aaj koi nayi item aayi hai kya?

Gunda: nahi sab

Maan raises his voice...

Maan: sach sach bolo

Maan raises his fist...

Gunda: haan sab, haan sab

Maan: Sam, tum ghar jao

He gives her the car key...

Sam: nahi

Maan: meine kaha tum yahan se jao, you take the car, I'll manage

Sam: are you sure?

Maan: I said just leave sam

Maan didn't like that Gunda staring Sam...

Sam leaves...

Maan goes with that man...

He just hopes that stupid girl is fine...

Maybe she is here...

Maan hates coming to such places...

He is steping into this place for the first time in his life...

It's some kind of a party going on...

And the stage is set for a dance...

The music starts...

" mein nayak nahi kal nayak hoon"

Some dancers start dancing...

And the hero(?) of today's party is chotta bhai...

Yahan ka boss, seems like he has struck a big deal...

Some of his clients too were present...

The whole place is intoxicated and that's where business begins...

Those girls dance around the clients and entertain them...

They mistake Maan as one among them and corner him...

Maan pushes them aside and looks for Geet in that crowd...

The man who came with Maan informs chotta bhai about Maan's presence...

Chotta bhai panics...ye yahan kya kar raha hai?

He knows very well that Maan is vey honest and never uses illegal means even when his construction sights have some problems, Maan has always maintained a clean hand...

He actually pays these goons a hefty amount to keep them away from his business...

So these people are scared of him and they never trouble him...

Chotta bhai: hare, khurana sab, aap yahan?

Maan stares...

Chotta bhai: hare mein bas aapki madat karna chahatha hoon, kahiye kya kaam hai?

Maan: mein yahan kissi ladhki ki talash mein aaya hoon

Chotta bhai: ladhki? Aap bahut lucky ho sab, aaj hi ek taaza item aayi hai

He winks...

Maan gets irritated...

Maan: kahan hai?

Maan: kya? Aaise nahi ho saktha

Chotta bhai: kya?

Maan: usko rokho, abhi

Chotta bhai: sab. Ye teek nahi hai, ye hummara jagah hai

Maan kicks off the table and stares st the dancers...

They get scared and move aside making way for him...

Bhai's clients are not happy and they start leaving...

Bhai: khurana, ye tumne teek nahi kiya

Maan: kahan hai woh?

Some men try to stop Maan...

Maan punches them and they all fall on the ground...

Bhai doesn't like this at all...

He takes his gun and points towards Maan...

Maan just ignores him and rushes up to find Geet...

Bhai shoots and misses...

Maan kicks the door and breaks into the room...

he finds a girl getting ready...

Maan runs and turns her...

" haye...mere jaan"

She hugs Maan...

It's not Geet...

Maan pushes her...

She clings to him...

Maan struggles to get rid of her...

Geet yahan nahi hai...

Maan starts to panic...

Maan hurries down...

Part12

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh no abb geet kahan gayi...

scary update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg!! Now where is this geet
bechara MSK have tocome to such place
Nice update di
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Posted: 10 years ago

wonderful update! Well written! where is Geet? Maan n Sam looking 4 her! update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
geet to store room mein bandh this to ...lekin maan use kothe pe dhudhne gaya ab kya hoga sach mein kya hua hai,aur geet bto maan ko krish kahe rahi thi kya maan apni memory bhool chuka hai?get ko kanhan aur kaise mila tha?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10 - Nice part .. Geet gayab and instead of helping sam in finding her , Maan is irritating her .. finally they started finding Geet but fighing in the car .. sam saw her in crowd .. hope they find her soon

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